Sc. 1.
"Yet that the world may witness that my end
Was wrought by Nature, not by vile offence."
It was surely wrought by Fortune rather than by Nature,
and so the poet may have written it. Collier's folio makes
the same correction.
"And by me, had not oür hope been bad."
The editor of 2nd folio read 'me too,' not being aware of
the dissyllabic form of 'our.'
"A poor mean woman was delivered."
The editor of 2nd folio added poor, which was probably
the poet's word.
"Unwilling I agreed. Alas! too soon
We came aboard * * * * * *
A league from Epidamnum had we sail'd."
We might supply 'our ship. Somewhat more than.'
"Which being violently borne upon,
Our helpful ship was splitted in the midst."
It was the mast, not the ship; but the text is probably as
the poet wrote it.
"At length another ship had seiz'd on us."
We should surely read 'the other.'
"That by misfortune was my life prolong'd."
It might be better to read Thus for 'That.'
"That his attendant—for his case was like."
For 'for,' the judicious correction of 2nd folio, the 1st has
so.—See on L. L. L. i. 1; 1 Hen. IV. i. 3.
"To seek thy help by beneficial help."
See Introd. p. 61. For the first 'help,' Pope read life; I
read ransom, a word already used by the Duke. If the error
should be in the second 'help,' we might, with Malone,
read means; which, however, is rather feeble.
"And live, if no thou then art doom'd to die."
For 'no' we should surely, with Rowe, read not.
Sc. 2.
"Who falling there to find his fellow forth."
Mr. Barron Field proposed failing, which may be right.
"Methinks your maw, like mine, should be your clock,
And strike you home without a messenger."
'Clock' is Pope's correction for cook of the folio, which,
however, may be right after all; for the cook used to strike
on the dresser to give notice that the dinner was ready.
Sc. 1.
"Will you come home? quoth I."
Hanmer properly added home, which was plainly omitted.
"I see the jewel best enamelled
Will lose his beauty, yet the gold bides still,
That others touch.—And often touching will
Where gold; and no man that hath a name
By falsehood and corruption doth it shame."
To give sense to this passage I read in the second line bide;
in the fourth, with Warburton, wear, with Heath so a for
'no'; in which two I had thus been anticipated. The
punctuation given here is my own. I am dubious of 'others'
in the third line, for which we might read fingers, or some
other word.
Sc. 2.
"Your sauciness will jest upon."
For 'jest' Mr. Dyce reads jet, referring to Rich. III. ii. 4,
Tit. Andron. ii. 1; and "It is hard when Englishmen's
patience must be thus jetted upon by strangers."—Play of
Sir T. More, p. 2.
"And what he hath scanted them in hair he hath given them in wit."
For the first 'them' Theobald properly read men.
"The one to save the money that he spends in trying."
For 'trying' Pope read tyring by simply transposing, Rowe
trimming. I rather prefer the former, as tyring is attiring,
and 'attire' is head-dress; but whether used of a man or not
I am not certain.—See my note on Milton's On Time, v. 21.
"I live distain'd, thou undishonoured."
Quite the contrary; for she would rather "live an unstain'd
life." R. and J. iv. 1. Theobald read unstain'd, but
I prefer undistain'd. The printer was more likely to omit
un (see on Cymb. i. 7) than to change it to di. There is
also an agreeable effect on the ear produced by the accents
falling on un in both words. In all these plays lines frequently
begin with an anapæst.
"I'll entertain the freed fallacy."
For 'freed,' which can hardly be right, Pope read favour'd,
Capell, much better, offer'd.
"We talk with goblins, owls, and sprites."
To complete the measure, the editor of 2nd folio inserted
elves, and before 'sprites'; from which Rowe made elvish
'sprites.' For 'owls' Theobald read ouphes; but that term
occurs only in The Merry Wives. I read—
"For here we talk with goblins, elves, and sprites."
"I am transformed, master, am not I?"
Theobald also made this obvious and necessary transposition
of 'I not.'
Sc. 1.
"By the wrongs that I suffer, and the blows that I bear."
"Ay, to a niggardly host, and a more sparing guest."
"I thought to have ask'd you * * * *
* * * * * and you said, No."
Malone also saw that something was lost. We might
read—
"I thought to have ask'd you, had you brought a rope.—
I ask'd you to let us in, and you said, No."
"Once this. Your long experience of her wisdom."
'Her' is Rowe's correction of your of the folio.
"And in despite of mirth mean to be merry."
To be merry in spite of mirth is like laughing in spite of
laughter, dying in spite of death, living in spite of life—pure
nonsense. With great confidence I therefore made the correction
my wife, and so gave it in my Edition. Meeting,
however, in the Cambridge Edition with Theobald's correction
wrath—for Editors had ignored it—I saw at once that the
poet must have written my wrath (see Introd. p. 67), which
resembles 'mirth' both in form and sound, and I have therefore
adopted it without hesitation. Like a similar correction
in Twelfth Night, i. 1, I regard it as absolutely certain.
Sc. 2.
"Shall love in building grow so ruinous?"
So Theobald, in accordance with the rime, read for ruinate
of the folio.
"Alas, poor women! make us but believe."
Here again we have Theobald's correction of 'but' for
not.
"Spread o'er the silver-waves thy golden hears,
And as a bed I'll take them and there lie."
I have printed 'hears' for the 'hairs' of the folio, as it
rimes with 'tears,' and was the constant pronunciation of
Chaucer, and frequently of Spenser; and in his early plays
Shakespeare indulged in riming archaisms of this kind occasionally.
We are to recollect that this play was not printed
till thirty years after it had been written, and by that time
hair had been established as the sole orthography. The
matter is, however, put out of dispute by the Poems, in which
Shakespeare himself spells it hear when riming with tear and
ear. 'Bed' is the correction of 2nd folio for bud. Mr.
Dyce proposed bride.
"Call thyself sister, sweet, for I am thee."
For 'am' Capell read, I think rightly, aim, and Singer
quotes "I make my changes aim one certain end."—Drayton
Leg. of Rob. Duke of Normandy.
"Well, sir, but her name and three quarters."
The folio has is for 'and'; the correction is Thirlby's.
Sc. 1.
"Belike you thought our love would last too long
If it were chain'd together."
For 'it' I think we should read we.
Sc. 2.
"First she denied you had in him no right."
This structure seems strange, but it was in use:—
"You may deny that God was not the cause."
Rich. III. i. 3.
"Fortune forbid my outside have not charm'd her."
Twelfth Night, ii. 2.
"Here go. The desk! the purse! Sweet, now make haste."
For 'Sweet,' which is rather free in the mouth of Dromio,
Collier's folio reads Swift; we might also conjecture Speed.
The truth, however, seems to be that mistress has been
omitted after 'Sweet.'
"A devil in an everlasting garment hath him."
There is something evidently lost here, riming with
'steel.' It may have been by the heels, or laid by the heels,
alluding to 'Tartar Limbo'; but still, or at his will, seems
preferable.
"A fiend, a fairy, pitiless and rough."
For 'fairy' Theobald proposed fury, and we have "O,
my good lord, deliver me from these furies" (i.e. bailiffs).—Massinger,
Fatal Dowry, v. 1. "Fiends, fairies, hags that
fight in beds of steel."—Peel, Battle of Aleazar, where Mr.
Dyce reads furies. In Jonson's Poetaster (iii. 1) the Lictors
are termed furies.
Sc. 3.
"Master, if you do, expect spoon-meat, or bespeak a long spoon."
For 'or' we should read and, as usual. Mr. Dyce reads
so.
Sc. 4.
"In verity you did; my bones bear witness
That since have felt the vigour of his rage."
The change of pronouns is so frequent that I think it
would be simpler to read your for 'his' than as is usually
done make 'my bones,' etc. an aside.
Sc. 1.
"And much different from the man he was before."
"In company I often glanced at it."
"But only moody and dull melancholy."
See Introd. p. 55. In my Edit. only is at the end.
"And at her heels a huge infectious troop."
We should probably read his for 'her,' as kinsman is the
antecedent.
"Hath scar'd thy husband from the use of his wits."
As 'his' was probably written 's, it escaped the printer's
eye.
"The place of death and sorry execution."
I would read sore or sour for 'sorry'; Collier's folio proposes
solemn. The 1st folio has depth for 'death.' The
correction was made in the 3rd.
"To scorch your face and to disfigure you."
Mr. Dyce properly reads scotch; for, as he observes, the
very same misprint occurs in Macb. iii. 2, and Knt. of Burning
Pestle, iii. 4.
"On the way we met * * * as we were going along"(?)
"These left me and my man, both bound together."
For 'These' we should perhaps read They.
"Besides her urging of her wreck at sea...."
"And thereupon these Errors are arose."
Editors ought to be ashamed of themselves for not seeing
that 'arose' is the same as 'arisen.' See Introd. p. 70.
"Thirty-three years have I but gone in travail,
Of you, my sons; and till the present hour
My heavy burthen are delivered.
The Duke, my husband, and my children both,
And you, the calendars of their nativity,
Go to a gossip's feast, and go with me,
After so long grief such nativity!"
I read this passage thus:
"Thirty-three years have I been gone in travail
Of you, my sons, until the present hour.
My heavy burthen here delivered,
The Duke, my husband, and my children both,
And you, the calendars of their nativity,
Come to a gossip's feast, and go with me.—
After so long grief such felicity!"
All the corrections here made are my own; and yet in all
but one I had been anticipated! in been by 2nd folio; in
until by Boaden; in here by Grant White; in felicity by
Hanmer. In my Edition of these plays I have printed "Go
... come with me." The difference is unimportant. In the
first line Theobald, followed by succeeding editors, read
twenty-five; but such alterations are not to be allowed.
"Master, shall I fetch your stuff from ship-board now?"
Sc. 1.
"I leave myself, my friends, and all for love."
The folio has 'I love.' Pope made the obvious correction.
"But what said she? did she nod?"
These last words are an addition by Theobald, and the
context shows they had been lost.
Sc. 2.
"Yet he of all the rest I think best loves ye."
'Lov'd ye' would rime better with 'mov'd me.'
"That I might sing it, madam, to a tune."
As time and 'tune' were synonymous, perhaps the poet
used the former, which would accord with 'rime.'
"Let's see your song. Why, how now, minion!"
"You do not like it!—No, madam, it is too sharp."
"I see you have a month's mind to them."
A syllable is wanting. Some read moneth, but that is not
a Shakespearian form. We might also read 'unto' for 'to'
but I prefer 'I see that you'; as I have given it in my
Edition.
Sc. 3.
"And be in the eye of every exercise."
Sc. 1.
"And now you are so metamorphosed with a mistress."
A just and necessary addition of Collier's folio.
"And you, being in love, cannot see to put on your hose."
For 'hose,' apparently suggested by what went before, I
should incline to read, with the Cambridge editors, shoes;
or clothes might be better.
"Nay, take them again—Madam, they are for you."
Sc. 3.
"Oh, that she could speak now like a wood woman!"
For 'she' Blackstone proposed shoe; better the shoe, as I
have given it.
Sc. 4.
"Come, go with me. Once more, new servant, welcome."
"She is alone.—Then let her be alone."
"So the remembrance of my former love
Is, by a newer object, quite forgotten."
It seems to me that the best way to give sense to this
passage is to take 'by' in the sense of beside, near. See Index
s. v.
"It is mine or Valentine's praise?"
So it stands in the original. It need hardly be observed
that the two first words must be transposed. It is also
plain to me that a substantive has been lost after 'mine,'
and none seems so likely to be the right word as eye, the
conjecture of Warburton, and which seems to be omitted in
the same manner in the last line of Son. cxiii.
"As love is full of unbefitting strains
* * * * *
Form'd by the eye, and therefore like the eye."
L. L. L. v. 2.
"I know there is no beauty,
Till our eyes give it 'em, and make 'em handsome."
Fletch. Maid in Mill, i. 2.
See also his Love's Pilgrimage, ii. 3. Steevens and others
read 'her mine,' taking the latter as mien, a term not Shakespearian.
(See on Mer. Wives, i. 3.) As there is still a
syllable wanting, I would read 'Valentinès,' a mode of forming
the genitive not unusual in our author's early plays.
Sc. 5.
"Launee, by mine honesty, welcome to Padua."
That 'Padua' was the poet's word is proved by the
metre, and the editors had no right to change it to Milan.
'By mine honesty' occurs in exactly the same manner in
the play of Damon and Pitheas, with which Shakespeare
was familiar.
"If thou wilt go with me to the ale-house, so; if not."
The 2nd folio added so, which is required both by sense
and metre.
Sc. 7.
"And instances of infinite of love."
The 2nd folio reads 'as infinite,' which may be right, but
'infinite' seems to be made a substantive here.
Sc. 1.
"There is a lady in Verona here."
Here again 'Verona,' the poet's word, has been altered
by the editors. Pope, who is usually followed, read 'sir,
in Milan,' and Mr. Dyce adopts the unheard-of term Milano
of Collier's folio! We have no right to make such changes.
"For 'get you gone,' she doth not mean 'away.'"
Perhaps the poet's word was By not 'For'; or there may
be an omission of by after 'For.'
"I fly not Death, to fly his deadly doom."
For 'his' Singer read is.
"As ending anthem of my endless dolour."
For 'anthem' Singer very plausibly read amen.
"Item, She is not to be kissed fasting on account of her breath."
Rowe added kissed, which, though generally received, is
not absolutely necessary.
"Nor does your nostril
Take in the scent of strong perfumes, to stifle
The sourness of our breaths as we are fasting."
Massinger, Very Woman, i. 1.
"Now will he be swinged for reading of my letter."
Sc. 2.
"But say this weed her love from Valentine."
The context seems to require wind for 'weed,' and I have
so given it.
"That may discover such integrity."
Though in my edition I have made here an aposiopesis, I
think it more probable that a line has been lost.
Sc. 1.
"O sir, we are undone; these are the villains."
So Capell read also.
"An heir, and near-allied unto the Duke."
The folio has "And heir and niece." Theobald made
the corrections.
"Come, go with us; we'll bring thee to our crews."
As in v.1 we have
"Come, I must bring thee to our captain's cave,"
we should probably read here cave or caves for 'crews.'
Sc. 3.
"Vain Thurio whom my very soul abhorred."
'Abhorreth' is probably what the poet wrote.
"Madam, I pity much your grievances,
Which since I know they virtuously are placed."
This is mere nonsense; 'grievance' never had any meaning
but that which it has at present. A line has evidently
been lost; something like this:—"And sympathize with your
affections." The corrector of Collier's folio, who first saw
the loss, added—"And the most true affections that you bear,"
which seems wanting in ease and simplicity.
"When will you go?—This evening coming on."
Sc. 4.
"It seems you loved not her, not leave her token."
For the second 'not' we should read to. See on All's
Well, v. 3. For 'leave,' see Index s. v.
"Why dost thou cry Alas?—I cannot choose
But pity her.—Wherefore should'st thou pity her?"
This is the proper arrangement; that of the editions, my
own included, is wrong.
"Well, give to her that ring, and therewithal."
"From whom?—From Sir Proteus, my master, madam."
So I should have given it in my Edition.
"Aye, but her forehead's low, and mine's as high."
The sense might seem to require 'mine is high,' as Pope
also saw; but her meaning may be, so is mine also. A high
forehead was, however, a part of beauty. See Fletcher,
Woman-hater, iii. 1.
"She hath a freckled face,
A low forehead, and a lumpish eye."
Marston, Ant. and Mel. I. iv.
Sc. 2.
"Which of you saw sir Eglamour of late?"
Sc. 4.
"And I mine too.—A prize! a prize! a prize!"
"Come let us go. We will include all jars
With triumphs, mirth, and rare solemnity."
'Include' here evidently signifies conclude; and as there
is no instance of its use in that sense, it might be better to
read the latter word with Hanmer.
Sc. 1.
"And then grace us in the disgrace of death."
The usual confusion of then and there. We should read
the latter. The contrary occurs in: "In summer where the
ways are fair enough."—M. of Ven. v. 1.
"Why should I joy in any abortive birth?"
A line is certainly lost. It may have been like this:—"Among
the offspring of the teeming earth."
"So you, to study now it is too late ...
That were to climb o'er the house to unlock the gate."
This, except the punctuation, is the reading of the folio;
that of the 4to, 1598, is:
"So you, to study now it is too late,
Climb o'er the house to unlock the little gate."
To which editors have given the preference, not a little, I
think, moved by what seemed to them the metric regularity
of the last line. I prefer the reading of the folio, and explain
it thus:—Berowne had just been showing how he
liked everything in its due time and season; and youth
being the proper time for instituting a course of study, it
was, he thought, as absurd for them who were full-grown
men to set about it, as it would be for a man who wanted
to unlock the gate of his court-yard to climb over the house
to get to it. A couplet, however, may have been lost; for
'So you,' &c., joins but awkwardly with what precedes; but
I believe the true solution of the difficulty is that the poet
wrote 'For you,' &c. We have instances of the confusion
of these words in Com. of Err. i. 1, 1 Hen. IV. i. 3, Macb. i.
2, Son. xliv. 5. I have so given it in my Edition. There
seems to be much more humour in the reading of the folio,
caused by the aposiopesis, than in that of the 4to, where
'the little gate' makes a difficulty; but the meaning may
be, they were giving themselves a deal of labour for a
very trifling result. I think the reading of the 4to may
have arisen thus. In the transcript from which it was
printed "That were to" may have been effaced or omitted,
and then 'little' was added to complete the metre.
"Yet confident I'll keep what I have sworn?"
As it rimes with 'more,' we must, with 2nd folio, read
swore.
"A dangerous law against gentility."
The reading of Collier's folio, garrulity, would agree better
with the context; but it is not a Shakespearian term.
"A high hope for a low heaven."
Theobald's reading having has been generally, and I think
rightly, adopted; but Mr. Dyce adheres to the text.
"To hear or forbear hearing."
Capell read laughing for 'hearing,' which correction the
next speech shows to be right.
"And Don Armado, he shall be your keeper."
Sc. 2.
"For I am sure I shall turn sonnet."
Hanmer, who is generally followed, read 'sonneteer'; but
it is doubtful if that term was then in use. In Hall's
Satires we meet with sonnetist; he also has sonnet-wright;
and in Marston's Fawne (iv.) and in the play of Lingua (ii.
2), we have sonnet-monger, which I have adopted, as we have
'fancy-monger' in As You Like It, iii. 2. Dr. Verplank,
an American critic, proposed 'turnsonnets,' which Mr.
Staunton has adopted.
Sc. 1.
"Lord Longaville is one."
"Well-fitted in arts, glorious in arms."
I read 'In arts well-fitted'; so also Grant White. The
2nd folio has 'in the arts.'
"To the wide fields is too base to be mine."
The metre requires a syllable.
"'Tis deadly sin to keep that oath, my lord,
And sin to break it."
Perhaps something may have been lost. It might be ''tis
no sin.'
"My lips are no common, though several they be."
'Several' is the very opposite of 'common.' "Truth lies
open to all; it is no man's several."—Jonson, Discoveries.
We should therefore, I think, for 'though' read for, which
is proved by the following speeches. The printer might
have taken for for tho', or have supposed that 'be' was the
conjunctive mood.
"Who tendering their own worth, from where they were glass'd,
Did point out to buy them, along as you pass'd."
The 4to reads 'point you'; but neither reading makes
sense. We might read 'prompt you,' or 'tempt you.' I
have adopted the former.
"Come to our pavilion; Boyet is dispos'd."
By 'dispos'd' here we are to understand—like dispos Fr.—cheerful,
or rather gamesome; we have undisposed in Com.
of Err. i. 2. It would seem, however, to be simply inclined
with an ellipsis of the object.
Sc. 1.
"And make them men of note?—Do you note
men?—that most are affected to these."
I agree with the proposed reading of me for the second
'men.'
"No salve in the male, sir."
Tyrwhitt's most happy emendation 'in them all' gives
in my opinion, the true reading.
"And stayed the odds by adding four."
Collier's folio, which Singer follows, reads making, which
may be right, but is not necessary.
"Sirrah Costard, marry, I will enfranchise thee."
Costard's reply shows that marry, added by Collier's folio,
had been omitted.
"I give thee thy liberty, set thee free from durance."
The same folio supplies free. Singer received both corrections.
"Than whom no mortal so magnificent."
'So' should be more, or rather moe; but it may be as the
poet wrote it.
"This senior-junior, giant-dwarf, Dan Cupid."
The original editions have 'This signior Junio's giant-dwarf,'
which possibly may be right, there being an allusion
to some poem or tale now lost. The text is the correction
of Hanmer.
"What, I! I love! I sue! I seek a wife!"
"A whitely wanton with a velvet brow."
Rosaline was dark, so Collier's folio reads witty for
'whitely,' and the Cambridge editors wightly; yet the poet
may have been merely oblivious.
"Well, I will love, will write, sigh, pray, sue, groan."
Sc. 1.
"That more for praise than purpose meant to kill."
The meaning of 'purpose' is not very clear; perhaps it
should be purchase.
"He came, saw ... saw two."
Both 4to and folio read 'see.' Rowe made the obvious
correction.
"A mark marvellous well shot; for they both did hit it."
It was the 4th folio that supplied it.
"An if my hand be out, then, belike, your hand is in.—
Then will she get the upshot by cleaving the pin."
'Pin' is the correction of the 2nd folio; both the 4to and
1st folio have is in, as in preceding line, and possibly so the
poet wrote it; for it makes a kind of sense, and he may have
had his reasons for using it.
"Armado a' the tother side."
So I read, as the 4to has ath toother side, and the folio ath
to the side. The usual reading is "on the one side;" but we
are not to look for rigid consistency in Costard's language.
"To see him kiss his hand! and how sweetly 'a will swear."
A line riming with this seems to be lost.
Sc. 2.
"So were there a patch set on learning to see
him at school."
Misled by Singer, I gave in my Edition, set, the reading
of Collier's folio, for 'see,' which may be right.
"And to humour the ignorant I have call'd the deer," etc.
Rowe was right, I think, in supplying I have. Singer
reads I will call; Collier's folio I call; he Cambridge editors
call I.
"Makes fifty sores, O sore L!"
The reading of the Cambridge editors is one soul.
"Of piercing a hogshead!"
The poet, I suspect, wrote Oh! not 'Of'; and so I have
ventured to give it.
"Celestial, as thou art, oh! pardon Love this wrong,
That he sings heaven's praise with such an earthly tongue."
We might also read, with S. Walker, 'the heaven's; but
I prefer what is in the text. A syllable was undoubtedly
omitted.
"Where if, before repast, it shall please you to gratify
the table with a grace."
For 'before repast' of the 4to, the folio has 'being repast'
in a parenthesis; and it may possibly be right, the school-master,
in his pedantic way, using 'repast' as a participle.
The grace, then, would be after dinner.
Sc. 3.
"The dew of night that on my cheeks down flows."
Both 4to and folio read 'The night of dew,' and so most
editions; but the context requires the transposition. The
same is the case in the last line but one of this sonnet, where
4to and folio read 'dost thou.'
"Thou makest the triumviry, the corner-cap of society,
The shape of Love's Tyburn, that hangs up simplicity."
This is no rime; the poet must have written sobriety in
the second line.
"Disfigure not his shop."
As 'hose' has just occurred, Theobald read slop, which
both Singer and Dyce properly adopt. The usual reading is
shape.
"Oh, most divine Kate!
Oh, most prophane coxcomb!"
Both rime and metre demand pate in the second line (see
Introd. p. 63). The whole dialogue, with this exception, is in
rime.
"By earth, she is not. Corporal, there you lie."
Theobald, who is usually followed, reads "By earth she
is but corporal; there you lie." I think, however, the text
is right. In iii. 1 Berowne, styling Love a "great general,"
adds, "and I to be a corporal of his field!" so he may well
apply that title to Dumain. See Index s. v.
"That shall express my true love's fasting pain."
Capell read lasting.
"Of faith enfringed, which such zeal did swear?"
"To see a king transformed to a gnat."
For 'gnat,' of which it is not very easy to see the meaning,
Mr. Staunton would read quat, the conjecture of Mr. Becket,
and surely not better. We also meet sot and knot, equally
bad. In Pericles (ii. 3), however, princes wanting in liberality
are compared to gnats.
"Not you by me, but I betray'd to you."
Capell transposed 'by' and 'to'; which seems to be right.
Yet 'to' may have been suggested for by, by the preceding
line.
"With men like men of inconstancy."
As something is evidently wanted, the 2nd folio read 'of
strange,' and that is the usual reading; Theobald 'moon-like
men.' I have read, as I find S. Walker had done,
"With men like you, men of inconstancy."
"Is ebony like her? O wood divine!
A wife of such wood were felicity."
The 'wood' of the first line is Rowe's certain correction
of word.
"The hue of dungeons and the school of night."
It is most certain that 'school' cannot have been the
poet's word. The usual reading is that of Warburton, scowl;
but that substantive is not used by Shakespeare, and it
gives but an indifferent sense. Theobald read stole, which
also is not Shakespearian; I myself cloak, as the "cloak of
night" occurs in R. and J. ii. 2, Rich. II. iii. 2. But the
Cambridge editors seem to have hit on the exact word, suit
written, as pronounced, shoot. In the Puritan (ii. 1), we
have a play on suitor and archer, i.e. shooter; we retain
this sound in sure and sugar. In Hamlet we have "suits of
solemn black" and "suits of woe" (i. 2), and "suit of sables"
(iii. 2) for mourning, and in Rom. and Jul. iii. 2,
"Come civil Night,
Thou sober-suited matron all in black!"
"Have at you then, Affection's men at arms."
Capell sagaciously saw that in this speech, from "For
when would you" to "From whence doth spring," and from
"For where is any" to "And in that vow," are passages
which the poet had cancelled in the "corrected and augmented"
play. The same occurs in Rich. III. v. 3, and
on a much smaller scale, however, in Rom. and Jul. iii. 3,
iv. 1.
"Why, universal plodding prisons up."
There can be no doubt of this, the reading of Theobald—prisons
for poisons.
"For where is any author in the world
Teaches such beauty as a woman's eye."
As beauty is not taught, we should perhaps read wisdom.
Perhaps, however, the error may be in 'Teaches.'
"And when Love speaks, the voice of all the gods
Makes heaven drowsy with the harmony."
Though this passage be very obscure, I doubt if it be
corrupt. By 'voice' may be meant the assenting voice, the
voices all sounding in unison, which induces repose over
heaven. Compare the opening of Gray's Progress of Poesy.
The original editions commit the usual error of putting
'make' for 'makes.'
"And plant in tyrants mild humility."
The reading of Griffith and Collier's folio humanity is, I
think, right. I have adopted it in my Edition.
The correction of Theobald for 'Alone, alone!' of the
originals. The poet, however, does not use French words
in this play, and I think we should read All on, all on! or
rather Along, along! (See on Temp. v. 1.) "Along my lords!
Well, Cromwell is half dead."—Thomas Cromwell, iv. 5.
"Or for love's sake, a word that loves all men."
As a word cannot love, Hanmer, for 'loves,' read
moves, Heath joys, Mason leads. I read 'Love's' for 'love's'
and god for 'word.'
Sc. 1.
"Witty without affection."
The 2nd folio reads, and, I think, most properly, 'affectation.'
It is much more likely that a syllable should have
been omitted by the printer, than that Nathaniel, who in
general speaks correctly, should blunder. We have the very
same error in v. 2, where the rime leaves no doubt on the
subject.
"Laus Deo, bone intelligo—Bone! bone for bene;
Priscian a little scratch'd. 'Twill serve." [Aside.
This is Theobald's correction of bene intelligo.'—Boone,
boon for boon prescian, &c.; which has been universally
received. The Cambridge editors, however, partly anticipated
by Capell, read 'Bon, bon fort bon. Priscian! a little
scratcht, twill serve.' Ingenious as this is, I still adhere to
Theobald; for, as I have just observed, French does not
occur in this play; and when those critics say that "Sir
Nathaniel is not represented as an ignoramus who would
be likely to say bone for bene," I may remind them that he
adds, 'Videsne quis venit,' which is nearly as bad. The
printer, in fact, had spoiled the humour by his bene, and
Theobald restored it, as I think, most happily.
"I do beseech thee, remember thy courtesy. I beseech thee, apparel thy head."
Malone read 'remember not' (see Ham. v. 2, M. N. D.
iv. 1). Dyce quotes "Pray you remember your courtesy....
Nay, pray, be covered."—Every Man in his Humour, i. 1.
But the negative may been omitted here also.
"Shall pass for Pompey the Great, the page for Hercules."
These additions, I find, were made by Capell also.
Sc. 2.
Allons! we will employ thee.
Here, again, the original reading is 'Alone!'
"Great reason; for past cure is still past care."
The old editions transpose 'cure' and 'care.' The correction
was by Thirlby. The old reading is retained, I know
not how, in my Edition.
"And shape his service wholly to my device."
The rime proves 'device' to be wrong. See Introd. p. 63.
The 2nd folio read 'all to my behests.' I read, as S. Walker
also had read, 'to my hests.'
"So portent-like would I o'ersway his state."
'Portent' is a correction of pertaunt.
"As Gravity's revolt to wantonness."
So the 2nd folio for 'wanton be.'
"Oh! I am stabb'd with laughter."
Perhaps it should be stuff'd, not 'stabb'd.' We have,
however, "stabs the centre."—W. T. i. 2.
"They do, they do, and are apparell'd thus."
A line has evidently been lost here.
"And every one his love-feat will advance."
For 'feat' Collier's folio, and S. Walker, followed by
Singer and Dyce, read suit, which I also have adopted.
"But while 'tis spoke each turn away her face."
Both 4to and folio read his for 'her.'
"Bero. Beauties no richer than rich taffeta."
It should evidently be Boyet, as in my Edition.
"Yet still she is the moon and I the man."
The line riming with this is lost, as Malone also saw.
"Oh! They were all in lamentable cases."
So also 2nd folio.
"Till this madman show'd thee? and what art thou now?"
The editors omit 'mad,' as it is what they deem a superfluous
syllable. We should perhaps omit 'thou' and retain
'mad.'
"This jest is dry to me. Fair, gentle, sweet."
Fair is an addition of 2nd folio.
"Which of the visors was it that you wore?—
Where? When? What visor? Why demand you this?"
As the whole scene is in rime, there should be a couplet
here. We might then for 'this' read more.
"As precious eye-sight and did value me."
A line riming with this, before, or after, seems lost.
"Nay, my good lord, let me o'er-rule you now;
That sport best pleases, that does least know how,
Where zeal strives to content, and the contents
Dies in the zeal of that which it presents."
The whole difficulty of this place lies in the word 'dies,'
which has two senses, now distinguished by the orthography,
namely, die and dye, but which in Shakespeare's time were
spelt indifferently. In this place editors have invariably taken
it in the former sense; and as they regard 'contents dies'
as a false concord—which, by the way, it is not—they print
'Die,' and then change 'that' to them, and alter the punctuation.
The result, however, is anything but satisfactory.
I, on the contrary—and I believe I have been the first to do
so—take 'Dies' in its second sense of tinging, colouring,
imbruing, making 'zeal' the subject and 'contents' the
object, and regarding this last as being by metonymy—a
figure Shakespeare uses so frequently—the persons contented,
or to be contented, just as in Ant. and Cleop. i. 4. "The
Discontents" are the discontented. All then becomes plain,
and the passage is parallel to one in the speech of Theseus
in M. N. D. v. 1. As to using 'Dyes' of mind, we may
justify it by the employment of tinge and tincture in the
same way in our ordinary language; and the following passages
are very apposite:—
"When my new mind had no infusion known,
Thou gav'st so deep a tincture of thine own,
That ever since I vainly try
To wash away the inherent dye."
Cowley, The Complaint, 122.
"For dye a husband that has wit with an opinion that
thou art honest, and see who dares wash the colour out."
(Killigrew, Parson's Wedding, ii. 3.) "Ma ben di rado
avviene che le parole affermative e sicure d'una persona
autorevole in qualsivoglia genere non tingano dal loro colore la
mente di chi le ascolta." (Manzoni, Prom. Sposi, ch. xx.)
The 'zeal' in the last line may have been produced in the
usual way by that in the preceding line, and the poet's word
have been hue; but a change is not absolutely necessary.
"Keep some state in thy exit, and so vanish."
"Speak on, brave Hector; we are much delighted."
"A heavy heart bears not a humble tongue."
I conjectured nimble, in which I had been preceded, as
usual, by Theobald. "You have a nimble wit." (As You
Like It, iii. 2.) The error, however, may be, and I think
is, in 'not,' for which I read but, as these words are so constantly
confounded. Collier's folio makes the same correction.
"And though the mourning brow of progeny."
For 'And' I incline to read Then. (See on M. N. D. ii. 1.)
"Full of straying shapes, of habits, and of forms."
Coleridge read 'stray,' which seems better.
"Suggested us to make 'em. Therefore, ladies."
"But more devout than this in our respects
Have we not been."
This is the reading of Hanmer generally received. That
of the folio is 'than these are our respects,' where, if we read
'than these our respects are,' we get perhaps as good a
sense. 'Devout' seems to mean devoted, or serious, or in
earnest; 'respects' sc. of you, behaviour respecting you.
"And what to me, my love?... of people sick."
This passage should certainly be omitted as a repetition.
See on iv. 3.
"Call them forth quickly; and we will do so."
Sc. 1.
"It would have made nature immortal."
"Hel. If the living be enemy to the grief, the excess
makes it soon mortal.
Laf. How understand we that?"
In the folio the first of these speeches is given to the
Countess; but Tieck saw rightly that it could only belong
to Helena. I have transposed the next two speeches; for
Lafeu must reply immediately; metrically also his reply is
the complement of the speech of Helena, in which 'living'
and 'grief' should perhaps change places.
"Advise him.—He cannot want the best advice."
"And these great tears grace his remembrance more
Than those I shed for him.... What was he like?"
For 'his' I read this, i.e. that of Bertram, whose departure
has caused her tears to flow. There is an evident aposiopesis
of graced his, arising from the perturbation of her
mind, as is proved by the falling of the metric ictus on 'him,'
and which also proves that 'his' could not have been the
poet's word.
"Carries no favour in it but Bertram's only."
Bertram is always a dissyllable. We might also read 'but
only,' but with less force.
"He that hangs himself is a virgin."
This is sheer nonsense; 'virgin,' suggested by the following
'virginity,' should be self-murderer, as I have given
it in my Edition, or rather perhaps the legal term felo de se;
for what Parolles means is that as suicides were 'buried in
highways,' Virginity being such should be treated in the same
manner.
"Out with it; within ten years it will make itself two."
For 'two' Hanmer read ten, and Steevens for 'ten' two.
The best reading seems to be that of Singer's folio, months
for 'years,' which I have given in my Edition.
This is complementary to the preceding speech, of which
it completes the metre. The emphasis is to be on 'my,' as
her meaning is that her virginity is not yet old and withered.
She stops there, and enters on a new subject, and it is evident
that at least the first line is lost. It may have been
like this, "Monsieur Parolles, you are for the Court," which I
have ventured to insert in my Edition; it seems so essential
to the sense.
"A mother, and a mistress, and a friend."
None of the editors seem to have perceived that in this
and the six following lines Helena is enumerating the titles,
mostly Euphuistic, that lovers at that time used to give
their mistresses (comp. L.L.L. iii. 1 ad fin.), "Christendoms,"
i.e. baptismal names, as she styles them, to which Cupid
stood gossip. As 'mother' could hardly have been one of
these, I feel almost certain that the original word was lover,
which being damaged and only er remaining (see on ii. 1),
the printer made 'mother' of it. There is, however, it
seems a term mauther or mother still in use in the Eastern
counties, and signifying young girl. In Fletcher's Maid in
the Mill (iii. 2), the miller says of his daughter,
"A pretty child she is, although I say it,
A handsome mother."
In the Alchemist (iv. 4) Kastrill says to his sister, "You
talk like a foolish mauther." Tusser has in his Husbandry,
"No sooner a sowing but out by and by,
With mother or (and?) boy that alarum can cry;
And let them be armed with a sling or a bow."
And again,
"A sling for a mother, a bow for a boy."
But surely such a term could not be used of the ladies of the
Court of France. The context shows that it is not mother-in-law
that is meant. 'Captain' in the next line may appear
suspicious; but lovers were in the habit of regarding
their mistresses as commanders, whose orders they were
bound to obey. "She that I spake of our great captain's
captain," Othel. ii. 1. Steevens states that guerrière is a
favourite term for a mistress in Ronsard.
"Use him as he uses thee; and so farewell."
Sc. 2.
"In his youth
He had the wit, which I can well observe," etc.
I doubt if the editors have perfectly understood this passage.
I cannot, for example, see that they have been aware
that the 'tongue' and the 'hand' both belong to the metaphorical
'clock'—the former being the bell which sounds,
when the latter gives the signal by arriving at the point of
twelve, that is, when 'Exception,' i.e. contradiction, 'bids it
speak.'
"In their poor praise he humbled. Such a man."
I would read whose for 'their,' evidently suggested by
'them' in the preceding line; and as the verb 'humble'
rarely, if ever, occurs without its object, we should perhaps
read, as I have done, 'humbled him.'
"Whose judgements are
Mere fathers of their garments."
I incline to suspect that 'fathers' should be children—not
an unusual error. (See Introd. p. 66.) "A parcel of conceited
feather-caps, whose fathers were their garments."—Old
Play quoted by Steevens. "Whose mother was her painting."—Cymb.
iii. 4.
"Believe it, sir,
That clothes do much upon the wit, as weather
Does on the brain; and thence, sir, comes your proverb,
The tailor makes the man."
Jonson, Staple of News, i. 1.
See, however, the character of Piso in Marston's Scourge
of Villainy, Sat. xi.
Sc. 3.
"Fond done, done fond; for only he
Was this King of Priam's joy."
"And here fair Paris comes, the hopeful youth, of Troy,
Queen Hecub's darling son, King Priam's only joy."
Fletch. and Rowl. Maid in Mill, ii. 2.
"I' faith I do; her father bequeathed her to me."
"Extend his might, save only where qualities were level."
"Diana no queen of virgins, that would suffer her
poor knight to be surprised."
The words in Italics, absolutely necessary for the sense,
were supplied by Theobald.
"I care no more for than I do for heaven,
So I were not his sister. Can it be no other?"
I can only make sense here by reading 'I'd care e'en more
for it.' The damp had probably effaced the d, e'e, it, or t,
and be. For a similar omission of 'd, see on King John iv.
2. The 'no,' however, may have been a casual insertion of
the printer's. In my Edition of these plays, unaware of the
rime, I placed be at the end of the line; but I corrected it.
"The mystery of your loneliness."
So Theobald properly corrected the loveliness of the folio,
the n, as was so frequent, having been turned upside down.
"Confess it, th' one to th' other, and thine eyes."
The folio has 'ton tooth to th' other. The 2nd folio made
the necessary correction by rejecting tooth—a mere reduplication
of 'to th'. Knight, it would appear, was the first to
correct 'ton.
"Yet in this captious and intenable sieve
I still pour in the waters of my love,
And lack not to lose still."
For 'captious' we should certainly read, with Farmer,
capacious. It was, in fact, only the omission of a letter.
(See on M. for M. iv. 2.) T and c were often used indifferently
before e and i. Reck might be better than 'lack.'
"And manifest experience had collected."
With Collier's folio I read manifold; "an epithet," says
Mr. Dyce, "which, I apprehend, can hardly be applied to
'experience.'" Why not?
"He and his physicians
Are of a mind; he that they cannot help him,
They that they cannot help him."
One 'help' has evidently been suggested by the other;
for the first I would read cure. (See Introd. p. 65.)
"Embowell'd of their doctrine have left off
The danger to itself?—There's something in't
More than my father's skill."
The best correction of the passage is to supply tells me after
'in it.' This had evidently been effaced, as in Hen. VIII.
i. 2.
"There's something tells me,—but it is not love,—
I would not lose you."—Mer. of Ven. iii. 2.
I arrange the passage thus:
"Embowell'd of their docterine, have left
The danger to itself.—There is something in it tells me."
In the first line I inserted in my Edition all; but it was
needless; for 'doctrine' was no doubt pronounced as a trisyllable.
'Off' was evidently added by the printer to complete
the metre. (See Introd. p. 67.) For 'in't' of the folio
Hanmer read hints.
"And pray God's blessing into thy attempt."
Unto or upon would seem more correct; but no change is
needed.
Sc. 1.
This passage has never been understood, yet it is perhaps
plain enough. By 'higher Italy' is meant the part more
distant from France. "Will you travel higher [i.e. go
further south], or return again to France," iv. 3. In this
place it is Tuscany that is termed 'higher Italy.' "But then
up farther, and as far as Rome," Tam. of Shrew, iv. 2, where
the speaker is at Padua. By 'bated' is meant abated, subdued,
as we abate a nuisance; 'inherit' is, as usual, possess;
and 'the fall of the last monarchy' is the fallen final state
of the Roman Empire, the last monarchy according to the current
interpretation of the Book of Daniel. "The antique ruins
of the Roman Fall."—F. Q. i. 549. "The underseated deities
that circle Saturn's fall."—Chap. II. xv. 208. "Redeem'd
him from his fall and made him mine."—Fletch. Kt. of Burn.
Pest. iv. 3. But perhaps we should read pall, as being still
more contemptuous, indicating that the symbol only and
not the real power had been inherited. By 'Those,' etc., I
think are meant the Ghibelines or Imperial party, to which
Siena belonged, while Florence was usually Guelf, the side
which was always taken by France, out of opposition to the
German Emperor. There is, however, no mention of Guelfs
or Ghibelines either in the story in the Decamerone or in
the Palace of Pleasure; so that Shakespeare must have
gotten his knowledge elsewhere, which is to me one proof,
among many, of the extent of his reading. I regard this as
the only explanation that gives sense to the passage.
"And lustrous, in a word good metals."
"With his cicatrice, an emblem of war,"
The folio reads 'his cicatrice with.' As usual, Theobald
made the correction.
"Pardon, my lord, for me and for my tidings.—
I'll see thee to stand up," etc.
This is the arrangement of the folio, which Malone altered
needlessly. For 'see' Theobald read fee, and in the next
line bought for 'brought.' These corrections most editors
have adopted, but I see no great gain in them. I confess I
do not clearly discern the meaning here of either 'see' or
fee; and Mr. Staunton's sue is not much better, and I suspect
that the poet's word may have been a different one, which
I think I can fix on with something like certainty. He
wrote then 'I beseech thee,' but ch being either blotted or
rubbed out, the transcriber or printer read I be 'Ile,' the
usual form of I'll. In Ham. iii. 4, and Tim. i. 2, we have
a similar effacement of two letters. "Pardon, my lord.—I
pray you all, stand up" (M. N. D. iv. 1), is exactly parallel.
See also Hen. VIII. v. 1.
"Quicken a rock, and make you dance canary."
We should, I apprehend, read it for 'you.' There had
been no allusion yet to the king.
"And write to her a love line."
It would be better to read, with Hanmer, as I have done,
'To write.'
"Than I dare blame my weakness...."
We thus get some appearance of sense; but I still am
suspicious of 'blame.' Task might seem better. "I dare
not task my weakness with any more."—Othel. ii. 3. We
meet, however, in the Faerie Queen with
"Ne blame your honour with so shameful vaunt
Of vile revenge," ii. 8. 16,
where blame seems to signify blemish, or expose to blame.
"With that malignant cause."
We might suspect 'cause'; but it is right.
"Leave us to cure this cause. For 'tis a sore upon us."
Cor. iii. 1.
"Humbly entreating from your royal thoughts
A modest one, to bear me back again."
This would seem to mean that, notwithstanding her boldness,
he would still continue to think her modest. It would
be derogatory to Helena to read sum for 'one.'
"When miracles have by the greatest been denied."
Johnson saw rightly that a line had been lost after this.
"Where hope is coldest and despair most shifts."
For 'shifts' Pope read sits, Theobald fits, which I think
is right; fits occurs in the sense of suits in
"The humble salve which wounded bosoms fits."
Son. cxx.
"Ne worse of worst extended
With vilest tortures let my life be ended."
She means, be racked to death. Malone read, as I do,
Nay, worst of worse. 'Nay' was sometimes spelt ne. "Is't
true? Ne, let him run into the war."—Chapman, All Fools, i.
"Youth, beauty, virtue, wisdom, courage all."
Warburton also supplied virtue, but after 'wisdom.' In
the next scene but one, the King speaks again of her
virtue.
"Ay, by my sceptre and my hopes of heaven."
This is the correction of Thirlby; the folio has help for
'heaven,' regardless of rime.
"What husband in thy power I will command."
The proper word would seem to be 'demand'; but see on
As You Like It, ii. 5.
"With any branch or image of thy state."
For 'image' Warburton, whom Singer follows, read impage,
while Steevens says (and, I believe, truly) there is no
such word. By 'image' may be meant child, offspring,
which is its signification in
"I have bewept a worthy husband's death.
And liv'd by looking on his images."—Rich. III. ii. 2.
In the original tale she expressly excepts the children and
relatives of the King.
Sc. 2.
"An end, sir, to your business. Give Helen this."
For 'An end' I feel almost certain we should read Attend,
or possibly And now. I have, however, made no change
in the text of my Edition. Some point 'An end, sir: to
your business.'
Sc. 3.
"Mort de vinaigre! is not that Helena?"
"And writ as little beard."
For 'writ' we should, I think, read wore or with. Mr.
Dyce, however, says it was "the phraseology of Shakespeare's
time." He should, then, have given us examples of
it; for write man and such like are not such. Perhaps this
and the following speeches of Lafeu should be Asides.
"Do they all deny her? An they were sons of mine," etc.
The folio reads, "Do all they."
"From lowest place, whence virtuous things proceed."
So the folio reads and punctuates. The context shows
that we should read when, with Thirlby. Two lines further
on we have 'additions swell's,' which, reading 'swells,' is
grammatically right; but the 2nd folio read 'addition,' and
Malone, who is usually followed, swell.
"Where dust and damn'd oblivion is the tomb."
For 'damn'd' we might feel inclined to read dim, damp,
or dank. "And in a dark and dankish vault," Com. of Err.
v. 1; or (as in Tr. and Cr. iii. 2) blind. The text, however,
is probably right, for 'damn'd' often merely meant
what is odious, or hateful, was to be condemned or simply
was reprehensible. "Surfeits, impostumes, grief, and damn'd
despair."—Ven. and Adon. (See on Othel. i. 1.)
"My honour's at the stake, which to defeat."
I have read, with Theobald, defend. Farmer's explanation
of 'defeat' is untenable.
"Whose ceremony
Shall seem expedient on the now borne brief,
And be perform'd to-night."
By 'brief' I would understand the marriage-contract; for
brief is used with great latitude. So in v. 3 we have "a
sweet verbal brief," i.e. commission or address. The 'now
borne' of the folio is, I think, now-born, i.e. which has just
come into being, been made. Possibly we might read new-born,
like "things new-born" (W. T. iii. 3), "new-born
gauds" (Tr. and Cr. iii. 3). We have now for new
(M. N. D. i. 1). I read come for 'seem.' (See on Macb. i. 2.)
"Than the commission of your birth and virtue give you heraldry for."
Hanmer transposed 'commission' and 'heraldry'; and
most editors have followed him. They seem to be right,
and I agree with them.
"What, what, what, sweetheart?"
"To the dark house and the detested wife."
The folio reads detected; the correction is Rowe's.
Sc. 5.
"When I should take possession of the bride ...
And ere I do begin."...
For 'And' Mr. Collier found End in MS. in a copy of the
folio.
"Than you have or will deserve at my hand."
So the 2nd folio reads; the 1st has 'to deserve'; and perhaps
a noun may have been omitted after 'have.'
"I think not so.—Why, do you not know him?"
Some would transfer 'not' to the former speech, but I
think it more likely that not was omitted.
Ber. "Where are my other men?—
Hel. Monsieur, farewell."
The folio gives all this to Helena; while Theobald, followed
by the Cambridge editors, reads "Ber. Where are my other
men, monsieur? Farewell."
Sc. 1.
"Upon your Grace's part; black and feärful
Upon the opposer's."
"But I am sure the younger of our nature."
Rowe's reading of nation for 'nature' seems certain.
Sc. 2.
"Who sold a goodly manor for a song."
Both the sense and the metre require this addition. 'Sold'
is the correction of 3rd folio for hold of the 1st.
"Your old ling and your Isbels of the court."
We should, I think, read 'new ling,' as 'old ling' had
just been mentioned.
"If thou engrossest all the griefs are thine,
Thou robbest me of a moiety."
No doubt are gives sense, but I should prefer as. I have,
however, made no change.
"'Tis but the boldness haply of his hand
To which his heart was not consenting to."
The folio reads "of his hand haply."
"The fellow has a deal too much of that,
Which holds him much to have."
The folio reads "of that too much." As yet no one has
made sense of the second line. Perhaps for 'holds' we
should read hurts, foils, or soils. I have adopted the first.
'To have' is, the having. (See Introd. p. 70.)
"Move the still-peering air
That sings with piercing."
No sense in which peer is used will answer here. I once
thought that 'still' might be taken in the sense of quiet,
tranquil; but I have been unable to find an instance of its
being so used in composition. It seems, however, to have
found favour in the eyes of Mr. Dyce. The reading generally
adopted is that of Steevens, piecing; and though the
usual meaning of this verb is, to eke, to add, it is also used
in the sense of closing, filling. Mr. Dyce doubts if "a
poet with a delicate ear would have written piecing ...
piercing," not recollecting that the latter was pronounced
percing. I should, however, prefer fleeting, which I have
given in my Edition. In the Third Part of The Seven
Champions (ch. xiii.), the author of which was more than
once indebted to Shakespeare, or vice versâ, we read,
"Whose feathery arrows outrun the piercing eye, and cut a
passage through the fleetiag air." Spenser, too, has (F. Q.
ii. 8. 2) "the flitting sky (i.e. air)." Elsewhere he says (vii.
7 22) that the air is felt "to flit still," and in The Tempest
(iii. 3) we meet with the "still-closing waters." At the
same time, as 'peering' may have been suggested by
'piercing' in the next line, the poet's word may not have
resembled it.
"I met the ravin lion when he roar'd."
As 'ravin' only occurs as a verb, the poet probably used
here the part. ravening. "As a ravening and a roaring lion"
(Ps. xxii. 13) was evidently in his mind.
Sc. 5.
"Enter old Widow of Florence, her daughter,
Violenta, and Mariana, with other citizens."
This is the original stage-direction, in which Violenta—an
evident mistake for Violante—might appear to be the
name of the daughter, though she is always called Diana.
Helen, however, at the end of the scene, mentions a 'gentle
maid' along with Mariana, whom she invites to supper.
"I write good creature: wheresoe'er she is,
Her heart weights sadly."
Here, as in ii. 3, the verb 'write' makes no sense. The
2nd folio has 'I (ay) right,' which, from the punctuation,
would seem to have been a mere makeshift; the ordinary
reading is that of Malone, 'A right good creature,' which
we may be very sure is not what the poet wrote. As in
Hamlet (ii. 1) the 4to, 1604, has "a fetch of wit" for "a
fetch of warrant" of the folio, my first impulse was to
read I warrant—also that of the editors of the Globe Shakespeare;
but I then fixed on "I wis," and so it stands in my
Edition. I am now convinced that the reading of the 2nd
folio, when properly pointed, is the true one. I point it
thus: "Ay, right.—Good creature! wheresoe'er she is."
The 'Ay, right,' expresses the widow's assent to the truth
of her daughter's observation; she then proceeds to speak of
Helena. To my great surprise and gratification, I found,
after I had made this natural and certain correction, that I
had been completely anticipated in it by Capell. How it
does provoke one to think of the wilful blindness or obtuseness
of editors! For nearly an entire century they have
had the true reading before their eyes, and never could see
it! Singer has "Ay, right; good creature" etc.; but the
punctuation shows he did not understand the passage.
Sc. 6.
"Oh, for the love of laughter let him fetch off his drum."
"This counterfeit lump of ore will be melted."
'Ore' is Theobald's correction of ours in the folio.
"Hinder not the honour of his design."
For 'honour' I, with others, have adopted Theobald's
correction humour; which, however, is not absolutely certain.
Sc. 7.
"That she'll demand. A ring the county wears."
As this is the only place in the play where 'county'
occurs, and as we have had 'the count he' twice already in
this scene, I think we ought to read so here also. (See on
Twelfth Night, i. 5.)
"Herself most chastely absent. After this."
The 2nd folio added this, which had evidently been effaced.
"Is wicked meaning in a lawful deed,
And lawful meaning in a lawful act."
If we were not aware of the abjectness of printer-worship,
we might wonder at Warburton's most certain correction
wicked for the last 'lawful' not having been adopted by
every editor.
Sc. 1.
"And buy me another of Bajazet's mule, if you
prattle me into these perils."
Warburton read mute for 'mule,' and I think he was
right. We have "Turkish mute" (Hen. V. i. 2).
"Inform them on that.—So I will, sir.—
Till then I'll keep him dark and safely locked up."
In the first line Rowe read 'em for 'on.'
Sc. 2.
"As you are now, for you are cold and stern."
Collier's folio reads as stone for 'and stern,' which is very
plausible.
"Who, moving others, are themselves as stone
Unmoved, cold, and to temptation slow."—Son. xciv.
"To swear by him whom I profess to love,
That I will work against him."
I read to for 'by,' in which I had been anticipated by
Johnson, who was followed by Malone. 'Swear' naturally
suggested 'by' to the printer's mind. (See on Macb. i. 5,
R. and J. i. 1.)
"For what's more monstrous, more a prodigy,
Than to hear me protest truth of affection
Unto a person that I would dishonour?"
Jonson, New Inn, iii. 2.
The same sentiment is expressed in "Yes, as I love the
woman that wrong'd him" (Meas. for Meas. ii. 3). In this
speech of Diana's, Mr. Staunton would give 'Then pray
you ... love you ill' to Bertram; but without any great
advantage.
"I see that men make ropes in such a scarre,
That we'll forsake ourselves."
This is evident nonsense. Rowe read hopes and affairs
for 'ropes' and 'scarre'; and to this emendation, or Mitford's
of case for 'scarre,' I see no very serious objection.
We have "make envy" (Hen. VIII. v. 2), "make doubt"
(Ib.), "make comfort" (Cymb. i. 2), "making practice"
(Meas. for Meas. iii. 2). Why then object to "make hopes?"
even though it is to be found nowhere else in Shakespeare.
'Scarre,' however, is probably right; in Lingua (i. 6) we
have, "Poets will write whole volumes of this scar." It
must be remembered that scare was written scarre, and so as
a substantive 'scarre' may be fright, alarm, flutter, perturbation.
Finally, it is even possible that 'ropes' may be right,
a line being lost; something of this sort: "Of oaths and
vows to scale our fort, in hope."
"Have the like oaths. He had sworn to marry me."
Here, as elsewhere, we have has and had confounded.
Sc. 3.
"Merely our traitors, and, as in the common
course of all treasons, we still see them reveal themselves,
till they attain to their abhorred ends."
I think it would be better to read, as I have done, is for
'in' (see on King John, iv. 2), and conceal for 'reveal,' unless
for the latter we should prefer reading veil. Perhaps
also we might retain 'reveal,' and read when for 'till.'
"Is it not meant damnable in us to be trumpeters of
our unlawful intents?"
Malone's first thought was most for 'meant.' Mr. Dyce
proposes mean and; I think he is right, and have followed
him. (See on Rom. and Jul. i. 3.)
"If I were to live this present hour."
The context seems to require die, not 'live'; so here, as
elsewhere, we may happen to have a substitution of the contrary
term. (See Introd. p. 66.)
"Or whether he thinks it were not possible."
This would seem to be one of the places where 'or' is for
and.
Sc. 4.
"Dear almost as his life; for which gratitude."
Both sense and metre require this addition.
"Our wagon is prepared, and time revives us."
As 'revives' seems to make no sense, we might read reproves,
or rather invites. "The time invites you. Go." (Ham. i. 3.)
Sc. 5.
"But sure he is the prince of the world."
For 'sure' we should, I think, read since.
Sc. 2.
"But I am now, sir, muddied in Fortune's mood."
Warburton's conjecture of moat for 'mood' is very specious,
but, I fear, nothing more. 'Muddied' and 'mood'
form what is termed a paronomasia.
"I do pity his distress in my smiles of comfort."
The Cambridge editors adopt Warburton's reading similes.
I doubt if either was the poet's word.
"You beg more than one word then."
It was the 3rd folio that supplied one.
Sc. 3.
"Natural rebellion done in the blade of youth,
When oil and fire," etc.
The context would suggest blaze to any one, as it did to
Theobald.
"The nature of his great offence is dead."
He means Helena, but I do not see how 'nature' applies
to her. Perhaps we should read motive; or some other word.
"I am not a day of season."
Something seems evidently lost here; for the address to
Bertram is too abrupt. I would read 'seasonable weather.'
We have, 'Like an unseasonable stormy day (Rich. II. iii.
2); and there was in the Liturgy, at that time, "a prayer
for seasonable weather." The phrase 'day of season,' I believe,
occurs nowhere else. Lower down—probably in the
same page of the MS.—there appears to be an effacement of
the same kind, and the loss of an entire line.
"The daughter of this lord.—
Admiringly, my liege. At first * * * sight of her. (?)
I stuck my choice upon her. Ere my heart
Durst make too bold a herald of my tongue,
Where the impression of mine eye infixing," etc.
Is it not amazing that no one seems ever to have perceived
that a line must have been lost between the last two lines?
It may have been of this kind, "Another object met my
wandering fancy." Capell, I find, read 'At the first sight.'
"The last that ere I took her leave at court."
I read 'last time' and e'er for 'ere.' Rowe read e'er she;
but the text is right.
"And that even here thou takest
As from my death-bed, my last living leave."—Rich. II. 5.
"He needs not our mistrust."—Macb. iii. 3.
"I bade her if her fortunes ever stood," etc.
The proper word would seem to be told, not 'bade'; but
bid was used in the sense of tell or say, as in "bid farewell,"
etc.
"And bade me if I had a friend that lov'd her;
I should but teach him how to tell my story,
And that would woo her."—Othel. i. 3.
"Now I, to comfort him, bid him 'a should not think of God."—Hen. V. ii. 3.
As 'ingaged' is usually the same as engaged, a sense which
would be absurd here, we might venture to read 'ungaged,'
or 'uningaged. (See on Com. of Err. ii. 2.)
"I'll buy me a son-in-law in a fair, and toll him."
So Steevens also reads.
"I wonder, sir, sir wives are monsters to you."
The second 'sir' is an evident error. The 2nd folio omits
it, and reads 'are such.' I read, as Tyrwhitt had done, since.
"Come hither, Count. Do you know these women
here"?
"Than in my thought it lies now.—Good, my lord."
"He blushes, and 'tis hit."
For 'hit,' which is probably wrong, Capell read it; Pope,
who is generally followed, his. It is very hard to choose;
as each makes good sense, each is a natural printer's error.
"Her insuit coming with her modern grace."
I accept without hesitation the excellent correction of
Collier's folio, and of Sidney Walker, infinite cunning. In
Tr. and Cr. iii. 2, we read 'coming in dumbness,' where Pope
made the proper correction cunning.
"You, that have turned off a first so noble wife,
May justly diet me."
As I can make little sense of 'diet,' I read deny.
"Do you not know he promised me marriage?"
The negative is required for both sense and metre.
Sc. 1.
"And when the moon, like to a silver bow
New-bent in heaven."
'New' is the correction of Rowe; the 4tos and folio have
Now.
"But I will woo thee in another key,
With pomp, with triumph, and with revelling."
Collier's folio gives the right word, 'revelry.'
"This man hath [be]witch'd the bosom of my child."
The verse in this play is strictly decasyllabic. The 2nd
folio omits 'man,' with Mr. Dyce's approval. In omitting
be, I have been preceded by Theobald.
"Unto his lordship, whose unwished yoke
My soul consents not to give sovereignty."
The 2nd folio needlessly reads 'to whose.'
"To fit your fancie[s] to your father's will."
"I have a widow aunt, a dowager,
Of great revenue, and she hath no child,
And she respects me as her only son.
From Athens is her house remote seven leagues."
Common sense dictates the transposition made here of
the last lines. There is no note on this passage in the Cambridge
Shakespeare; so none of the known critics can have
noticed it. The third line, it is evident, had been an addition
made by the poet in the margin.
"By the simplicity of Venus' doves,
By that which knitteth souls and prospers loves."
Singer transposes these lines. It is, by the way, surprising
how many transpositions there are in this play; but it
was not necessary to transpose here, and his doing so arose
from his misunderstanding the second line; in which the
allusion is most probably to the Cestus of Venus.
"Sickness is catching; oh, were favour so!
Your words I catch, fair Hermia; ere I go."
For 'your words' Hanmer read 'Yours would,' an excellent
emendation, and generally adopted.
"Emptying our bosoms of their counsel sweet,
There my Lysander and myself shall meet;
And thence from Athens turn away our eyes,
To seek new friends and stranger companies."
'Sweet' and 'stranger companies' are Theobald's corrections
of swelled and strange companions. "More certain
emendations," says Mr. Dyce, "were never made."
Sc. 2.
"To tear a cat in and to make all split."
Sc. 1.
"But make room, fairy; here comes Oberon."
The decasyllabic form must be preserved. Pope read as I
do.
"What, jealous Oberon! Fairies skip hence."
In the 4tos and folio 'Fairy.' (See Introd. p. 52.)
"When thou wast stolen away from Fairyland,
And in the shape of Corin sat all day."
This is the reading of the folio; the 4tos, which all the
editors follow, have hast. I prefer the former; for Shakespeare
invariably employs the verb substantive with 'stolen
away,' except in the case of a doubly-compound tense.
"The human mortals want their winter here."
Theobald proposed and then rejected 'winter-cheer.' I
should prefer summer for 'winter' (see Introd. p. 66); for
in Dr. Forman's Diary of the year 1594—which year Shakespeare
had certainly in view—we read, "This monethes of
June and July were very wet and wonderfull cold, like
winter, that the 10 dae of Julii many did syt by the fyer,
yt was so cold; and soe was it in Maye and June; and
scarse too fair dais together all that tyme, but it rayned
every day more or lesse. Yf it did not raine then was it
cold and cloudye.... There were many gret fludes this
sommer."
"The seasons change their manners, as the year
Had found some months asleep and leaped them over."
2 Hen. IV. iv. 4.
It is possible, however, that the error may lie in 'want,'
for which we might read have, or some other word.
"And on old Hiems' chin and icy crown
An odorous chaplet."
For 'chin' Grey read chill; Tyrwhitt, whom some follow,
thin. But it is probably one of those inadvertencies so
frequent in our poet.
"The one I'll slay, the other slayeth me."
Thirlby's just correction of stay and stayeth.
"Hast thou the flower there? Welcome, wanderer.—
Ay, there it is.—I pray thee give it me."
For 'there' in the second line, Mr. Dyce reads—and perhaps
rightly—here.
I read and arrange the whole passage thus:
"I know a bank whëre the wild thyme blows,
Where violets and the nodding oxlip grows,
Quite o'er-canopied with lusciöus woodbine,
With sweet musk-roses and with eglantine,
And there the snake throws her enamell'd skin
Weed wide enough to wrap a fairy in.
There sleeps Titania sometime of the night,
Lull'd in these flowers with dances and delight.
Then with the juice of this I'll streak her eyes," etc.
In the second line I have transposed 'oxlip' and 'violet';
for the former 'nods' and the latter does not, "With cowslips
wan, that hang the pensive head" (Lycidas, v. 14).
In the third I give o'er for 'over.' The transposition which
follows is imperatively demanded by the sequence of ideas,
and we have other instances in this play. The fifth and
sixth lines may have been an addition made by the poet or
transcriber in the margin, and taken in in the wrong place
by the printer. (See on i. 1.) If 'And' be the right word
in the last line, something must have been lost, ex. gr.
"Upon her will I steal there as she lies;" but the poet's
word may have been what I have given, Then, strongly
emphaticized, and written Than, the two first letters of
which having been effaced, the printer made it 'And.' The
very same thing seems to have taken place in L. L. L. v. 2.
It may also have been that yn, then, was taken for &, and.
Sc. 2.
"Pard or boar with bristled hair."
The rime demands the old form hear. (See on Com. of
Err. iii. 2.)
"Transparent Helena, Nature shows her art."
The transposition 'her shows' of the folio is merely one
of those of which we have so many examples in these plays.
The usual reading is that of the 2nd folio, 'here shows.'
"So I being young, till now ripe not to reason."
It would seem better to read 'not ripe'; or 'ripe' may
be a verb.
Sc. 1.
"If I were so, fair Thisby, I were only thine."
"So is mine eye enthralled to thy shape."
This and the two following lines are transposed in Roberts'
4to and the folio.
Sc. 2.
"Being o'er shoes in blood, plunge in the deep
And kill me too."
Mr. Dyce, with whom I agree, adopts the excellent reading
of Coleridge and Sidney Walker, 'knee-deep.'
"Once o'er shoes we are straight o'er head in sin."
Woman Killed with Kindness.
"And from thy hated presence part I so."
Pope added so, which is required by metre and rime, and
yet is wanting in all the old editions.
"This princess of pure white, this seal of bliss."
For 'princess' Hanmer read pureness; Collier proposes
impress; but no change is needed. 'White' is whiteness,
and 'princess of pure white' is sovereign lady of whiteness,
i.e., white in the highest degree. I suspect that Chaucer
wrote emperes in
"The emprise and the flower of flowers alle."
Leg. of Good Women.
"For parting us.—Oh! is this all forgot?"
The 2nd folio read 'O and is'; Malone added now; we
might also add then. A syllable certainly is wanting.
"But miserable most to love unlov'd...
This you should pity rather than despise."
"Thy threats have no more strength than her weak prayers."
Here 'prayers' is the correction by Theobald of praise of
the original editions.
"Away you Ethiop.—No, no, sir, seem
To break loose; take on as you'd follow me,
But yet come not. You are a tame man, go."
This is the reading of the folio, which, with the addition
of me—evidently rubbed out at the end—gives excellent
sense and metre. For 'sir' the 4tos read he'll, which makes
the passage abrupt.
"Out loathed medicine! [O] hated potion, hence!"
The same omission was made by Pope.
"Hate me! wherefore? O me! What news, my love?"
For 'news' Collier's folio, followed by Singer, reads
means. I think they are right.
"I with the morning's love have oft made sport."
Rowe read light for 'love,' and Johnson and Singer have
followed him. But it seems to be Cephalus that is meant.
Sc. 1.
"Which straight she gave me and her fairy sent."
It should be 'fairies.' (See on ii. 1.)
"All may to Athens back again repair."
The reading hitherto has been 'May all,' but the transposition
restores the grammar.
"Dian's bud o'er Cupid's flower."
The 4to and folio read or. The correction is Thirlby's.
"Trip we after nightès shade."
Fisher's 4to has 'nights,' of which I have made a dissylable,
as being more Shakespearean than 'the night's' of
the folio and Roberts' 4to, which most feebly and inharmoniously
throw the emphasis on 'the.' This gen. occurs
more than once in our poet's earlier plays.
"When in a wood of Crete they bay'd the bear."
With Hanmer I incline to read boar.
"The woods, the fountains, every region round."
Here, too, I suspect that the poet wrote 'mountains.'
'Seem'd in next line is the reading of the 2nd folio; the
originals have seeme.
"Was to be gone from Athens where we might
Without the peril of the Athenian law...."
This is the reading of Fisher's 4to; Roberts' and the folio
read 'might be'; which does not suit the metre of this play.
Egeus breaks in and interrupts him.
"Melted, e'en as the snow, seems to me now."
"It wasted and consum'd even like ice
That by the vehemence of heat dissolveth."
Green's Tu Quoque.
The ordinary correction is that of Capell, 'as doth'; an
Anon. read 'All melted.'
"Was I betroth'd ere I saw Hermia;
But, like in sickness, did I loathe this food."
'Saw' is Steevens' correction of see; in L. L. L. iv. 1,
we have "I came, see and overcame." 'In sickness' is
Farmer's correction of 'a sickness' of the originals.
"Mine own and not mine own.—But are you sure
That we are yet awake? It seems to me."
The folio omits 'are ... awake.' Capell also added But
and an Anon. yet. The poet's words may, however, have
been, "Are you sure we are awake? it seems to me." But
that would make the preceding speech terminate in a manner
that does not occur in this play.
Sc. 1.
"That is hot ice, and wondrous strange snow."
'Strange' is a very feeble word here. If, as I have ventured
to do, we read 'sable snow,' we have a parallel to 'hot
ice.' Upton read black; Staunton swarthy; Hanmer scorching.
"And what poor duty cannot do, noble respect
Takes it in might not merit."
As there are no short lines in this play, I think a word has
been lost in the first line. I read faltering, Theobald read
'willing duty.'
"His speech was like unto a tangled chain."
"This grisly beast, which lion hight by name,
The trusty Thisby, coming first by night.
· · · · ·
Did scare away, or rather did affright."
A line riming with the first appears to be lost. Some read
'by name hight,' making a triplet; but I cannot agree with
them.
"Here come two noble beasts in, A lion and a man."
Theobald reads moon for 'man.' The correction is ingenious,
but not certain. I have, however, adopted it.
"A lion-fell, but else no lion's dam."
So Singer reads; others 'A lion's fell.'
"For by thy gracious, golden, glittering streams."
This is the reading of the 2nd folio; for the old editions
repeat 'beams' from the preceding line. "Phebus of gold
his stremès down hath sent" (Chauc. Merch. Tale), was probably
in the poet's mind; or
"Which erst so glistened with the golden streams,
That cheerful Phœbus spred down from his sphere."
(Induct. to Mir. for Magistrates.)
"Would go well near to make a man look sad.—
Beshrew my heart, but I do pity the man."
"These lily lips
This cherry nose."
Rime demands Theobald's 'lily brows.'
Sc. 2.
"Now the hungry lion roars,
And the wolf behowls the moon."
'Behowls' is Warburton's correction of beholds of the
originals. It is proved to be right by the following passage
of Marston's Antonio's Revenge:—
"Now barks the wolf against the full-cheek'd moon,
Now lions' half-clamm'd entrails roar for food" (iii. 3).
As this play was not printed till 1602, this may be an
imitation of the passage of our text.
"Ever shall in safety rest,
And the owner of it blest."
Singer and a friend of Mr. Staunton's very judiciously
transposed these lines, the third, or rather fourth transposition
in this play. We may observe that twice before it was
the second line of the couplet that commenced with 'Ever.'
For a fifth transposition in the original editions, see on iii.
1. By the 'owner' is meant the occupant of the 'chamber.'
Malone read 'shall it,' which is the usual reading.
Sc. 1.
"No, not a denier. Go by, S. Jeronimy!
Go to thy cold bed and warm thee."
It is very strange that none of the critics should have
seen that S. is Signior, not Saint. The poet probably wrote
it Sr; for we shall find in the subsequent part of the play sir
twice used for signior, the ordinary address in plays the scene
of which lies in Italy. The 4to edition of 1631 omits S., but
it is of no authority. I should feel inclined to read the next
line, "Humph, Go to thy cold bed, and wärm thee," which
occurs again in Lear (iii. 4). It may have been borrowed
from some unknown play; but there is nothing like it in
Kyd's Spanish Tragedy, which is evidently referred to in
what precedes.
"I know my remedy; I must go fetch the head-borough."
Theobald, whom most editors follow, induced by the reply
of Sly, read thirdborough. But might not Sly have
mistaken the word?
"Huntsman, I charge thee tender well my hounds.
Brach Merriman,—the poor cur is emboss'd"—
"And couple Clowder with the deep-mouth'd brach."
'Brach' cannot be right; for brach was bitch (see Index
s. v.), and what sportsman would say Bitch Sweet lips, for instance,
of one of his hounds? In the usual manner the
printer was led away by the 'brach' in the following line.
The original word must have been a verb, and, were we not
aware of what critics usually are, we might wonder at Johnson's
most simple and natural emendation, Bathe not being
universally adopted. In his whole speech the lord shows
his affection for his hounds; for the charge about coupling
Clowder with another hound is evidently owing to his being
united to an ill-conditioned dog. Poor Merriman, it is
plain, had got a swelling in the leg or elsewhere—for that
is the only possible meaning of 'emboss'd' in this place;
so when the Prince (1 Hen. IV. iii. 3) calls Falstaff
an "embossed rascal," he means swollen up—the proper
remedy for which was bathing or fomenting with warm
water; and this he directs to be done. But Mr. Collier
tells us that "a dog or a deer is said to be embossed when
fatigue makes them foam at the mouth;" from which all
that can be inferred is that Mr. Collier is no sportsman;
for any one who has been out with hounds knows that when
fatigued they pant and put out their tongues, but never
foam. Shakespeare, who apparently knew something of
hunting, has correctly, "Lolling the tongue with slaughtering"
(Cymb. v. 3), alluding to hounds. On the other hand,
Mr. Dyce most confidently reads Trash, i.e., put a "heavy
collar, strap or rope dragging loose on the ground" on him
to check his speed. I fear that Mr. Dyce is no sportsman
either. At least at the present day hounds do not carry
weight; for that, I suppose, is what he means. He probably
understood 'emboss'd' in the same sense as Mr. Collier.
I adopt Johnson's reading, though aware that in cases of this
kind (Introd. p. 65) we should not look for any similarity
of form (Mr. Dyce's ductus literarum) in the word to be substituted.
(See on Othel. iii. 3.) Here, for example, we
might read Mind, or some other word.
"And when he says what he is say that he dreams."
Sc. 2.
"And not a tinker, nor Christophero Sly."
"Madam wife, they say that I have dreamed here."
Sc. 1.
"Pisa, renowned for grave citizens,
Gave me my being, and my father first,
A merchant of great traffic through the world,
Vincentio[s] come of the Bentivoglii.
Vincentio's son, brought up in Florence,
It shall become to serve all hopes conceiv'd," etc.
In the first four lines I have, with previous editors, given
the correct punctuation, and have omitted the superfluous s
after Vincentio in the fourth. In the following line the
metre shows that something is wrong, and it may be that
'Vincentio's' should be Lucentio his, for nothing is more
common than this confusion of proper names. (See on King
John, ii. 1.) Hanmer I find also made this correction. At
the same time it is equally probable that something has been
omitted, and that we should read 'only son,' or 'son and
heir,' as in v. 1. It is one of those cases in which choice is
difficult. I have given the first in my Edition of the plays;
but I now greatly prefer the third.
"Or so devote to Aristotle's checks."
Undoubtedly Ethics, the correction of Blackstone and
Collier's folio.
"Balk logic with acquaintance that you have."
For 'Balk' the editors read talk, but it is right.
"Her list in strifeful terms with him to balk."
F. Q. iii. 2. 12.
"Gramercies, Tranio, well dost thou advise,
If Biondello thou wert come on shore."
Here and elsewhere in this play, and nowhere else, the
printer seems to have added an s to 'Gramercie.' I follow
Collier's folio in reading now were for 'thou wert.'
"Good gentlemen, importune me no further."
So I have printed it, but Pray or Now might be better.
"Now, gentlemen, that I may soon make good
What I have said ... Bianca, get you in."
"Gentlemen,
Content ye; I am resolved. Go in, Bianca."
"Their love is not so great, Hortensio."
The 3rd folio properly read Our for 'Their.'
"Master, you look'd so longly on the maid."
As 'longly' occurs nowhere else, it is probably only a
printer's error for longingly, which I have given. This omission
of a syllable is by no means unusual. (See on M. for
M. iv. 2; All's Well, i. 3.)
"Because she will not be annoy'd with suitors."
With Singer I read he for 'she.'
"I will charm him first to keep his tongue."
We should perhaps read charge for 'charm'; for it is the
tongue that is charmed. We have, however,
"And by a pair of women of her own,
Whom she had charm'd."
A King and no King, v. 4.
Sc. 2.
"Verona for a while I take my leave of."
"I'll try how you can sol, la, fa, and sing it.—
Help, masters, help!"
'Masters' is the correction of Theobald for mistress of the
folio. Master and mistress are confounded also in v. 1, and
in Mer. of Ven. iv. 1, 2 Hen. IV. ii. 4, 2 Hen. VI. i. 3, Tim.
ii. 2. Mistress was frequently written misteris, which may
have been partly the cause of the confusion.
"That gives not half so great a blow to hear."
For 'to hear,' which makes very poor sense, Warburton
most happily read to th' ear. He was equally happy in Tim.
i. 2.
"For his own good and yours."
For 'yours' Thirlby most properly read ours.
"Bion. He that has the two fair daughters?"
For Bion. I read Gre., in which I had been anticipated
by Capell, Tyrwhitt, and Heath; so that it is certain. In
my Edition will be found the correct punctuation of the
whole passage.
"And were his daughter fairer than she is."
There is either an aposiopesis or a line lost after this;
I think the latter.
"What! this gentleman will out-talk us all."
There is apparently something wrong here. As 'what!'
is almost invariably followed by an interrogative, I would
read 'will this gentleman'; we might also insert an adj.
before 'gentleman,' or read all of us for 'us all.' The
speech, however, as it is a single line, may be as the poet
wrote it; I have therefore let it stand in my Edition.
"No, sir, but hear I do that he hath two."
To avoid the jingle we might read 'I do hear.'
"If it be so, sir, that you are the man."
I have no doubt that for 'that' we should read then.
(See Introd. p. 68.)
"And if you break the ice, and do this seek."
For 'seek' I read deed; Rowe read feat.
Sc. 1.
"As the other in music and in mathematics."
"But, gentle sir, methinks you walk like a stranger."
Perhaps for 'sir' we should read signior, and for 'walk'
look.
"Sirrah!
Lead these gentlemen to my daughters, and tell them both."
So we should arrange the passage.
"No such jade as you, if me you mean."
We might read 'Not such a jade.' Mr. Dyce reads,
after Collier's folio, 'as bear you,' which is better, and
which I follow.
"'Tis in his tail.—'Tis in his tongue.—Whose tongue?"
"The gain I seek is quiet me the match."
For 'me' Rowe properly read in.
"Myself am struck in years I must confess."
There must be a line at least lost after this.
"To set foot under thy table. Tut, a toy."
"Do get their children; but in this case of wooing
A child shall get a sire, if I fail not of my cunning."
Rime demands for 'cunning' the reading of Steevens,
doing. Wooing and doing have already rimed in this scene.
(See also Tr. and Cr. i. 2, ad fin.)
Sc. 1.
"Spit in the hole, man, and tune it again."
"To charge true rules for old inventions."
All are agreed to read change with 2nd folio; and as
'old' evidently makes no sense, Theobald read odd. With
Rowe I prefer new. (See Introd. p. 66.)
Sc. 2.
"Make friends, invite, and proclaim the banns."
The 2nd folio adds yes, Malone them, Dyce guests after
'invite'; my own conjecture was aye. Would it not be
better, however, to read as I have done, "Make friends be
invited, and proclaim the banns"? There is an exactly
similar omission of be in All's Well, i. 3, where there can
be no doubt. We might also read simply 'friends invited';
but I doubt, after all, if it were not best to read "Make
invite friends too and proclaim the banns," which would
agree better with the character of the speaker.
"Master, master! news, and such news as you never heard of.—
Is it new and old too? how may that be?"
Is it quite evident that old has been omitted in the first
line. Rowe, who is followed, prefixed it to the first 'news.'
I think it is better with the second, as in Collier's folio.
"Often burst, and now's repaired with knots."
"And 'The Humours of forty Fancies.'"
Collier's folio reads "The Amours or forty Fancies."
"Were it not better I should rush in thus...."
Sense and metre demand the negative. There is, I think,
a break in sense at the end of the line.
"But, sir, to her love concerneth us to add
Her father's liking."
So I find Tyrwhitt also correctly completed the line.
"Signior Gremio, how came you from the church."
"I'll tell you, sir Lucentio. When the priest."
For 'sir' we should most certainly read signior. (See on
Induction, sc. 1.)
"Having no other reason, etc."
This speech is prose in the 1st folio; in the 2nd it is
arranged as verse, but not well. In my Edition I have rearranged
it, as I find Reed also had done.
"My household stuff, my field, my barn, my granary."
S. Walker conjectured my grange; the Cambridge editors
my garner.
Sc. 1.
"Out, out you rogue! you pluck my foot awry."
"'Tis burnt, and so is all the meat that's here."
I had also conjectured, like Capell, 'all the rest of.'
Sc. 2.
"Is it possible, friend Licio, that [mistress] Bianca."
Pope also made this metric correction. Master and Mistress
do not occur in this play as titles.
"Never to marry with her, though she would entreat me."
"Would all the world but he had quite foresworn her."
Rowe also added her.
"An ancient angel coming down the hill."
If 'angel' be right, it must mean that he was an angel of
deliverance to them. Singer and Dyce quote from Cotgrave's
Dictionary "Angelot à la grosse escaille. An old
Angel, and by metaphor a fellow of the old, sound, honest,
and worthy stamp." But how could Biondello know his
character? Some read engle, properly ingle; but this is
rather, comrade, bosom-friend. In Gascoigne's Supposes,
from which this part of the play is taken, he is termed
"good soul," and it may be that the poet's word here was
uncle—the conjecture also of a Mr. Bubier, in the Cambridge
Edition—a term used of elderly persons. (See Index s. v.
Nuncle.) Just afterwards he is said to be "surely like a father"
and (iv. 5) Katherine says to the real Vincentio "Now I
perceive thou art a reverend father."
"Master he is a marcantant or a pedant."
'Marcantant' is the Italian mercante, mercatante, or mercadante.
It may be corrupt.
"And what of him, Tranio?"
As this is so very abrupt and not very clear, we might
conjecture an effacement of will you make or something
similar.
"That you are like to Sir Vincentio."
Here, again, the printer has put 'Sir' for Signior, and
probably added the 'to' to make up the metre.
"Come, go with me to clothe you as becomes you."
The 2nd folio reads 'Go with me, sir.'
Sc. 3.
"Why then the mustard; and without the beef."
"I gave him no order; I gave him the stuff only."
Sc. 4.
"Ay, ay, what else? and but I be deceiv'd."
"'Twere good that he were school'd—Fear you not him."
"To have him match'd; and if you please to like it
No worse than I, upon some agreement, sir,
Me shall you find ready and willing both
With one consent to have her so bestow'd."
Here is what seems to be a convincing proof of the effacement
of the ends of lines in the MS. In the second line the
2nd folio inserted sir in the middle, and in the third it read
'most ready and most willing.' Lower down the ends of
two lines more have been also effaced.
"The match is made and all is done;
Your son shall have my daughter, with consent.—
I thank you, sir, where then do you know best."
'Your son' belongs to first line; and as we have had
(iii. 2) "And marry sweet Bianca with consent," we might
complete the metre by reading 'with my full consent'; but
it is more probable, as this page of the MS. appears to have
been injured, that the loss was at the end. I read of me,
Baptista, as (v. 1) we have "mine only son and heir to the
lands of me, signior Vincentio." In the next line 'know' is
most probably a mere printer's error. I have in my Edition,
given hold, the reading of Collier's folio; but I think now
that the right word is trow, which occurs more than once in
Shakespeare in the sense of think, and which I find was also
the conjecture of Hanmer.
"I cannot tell; except while they are busied about."
The 1st folio has expect, which was rightly corrected in the
2nd. While was properly supplied by Capell.
"The priest be ready [to come] against you come with your appendix."
Both sense and metre counsel the ejection of 'to come'
caused by the following 'you come.'
"She will be pleased, then wherefore should I doubt her?"
The rime evidently requires this addition, made also by
Pope.
Sc. 5.
"And so it shall be still for Katherine."
'Still' is Ritson's correction of so in the folio.
"But soft you! company is coming here."
Sc. 1.
"And then come back to my master."
This is the reading of Capell, which I have followed;
master's, that of Theobald, is perhaps better. The folio has
mistress: see on i. 2.
"I pray you tell signior Lucentio that his father is
come from Padua."
Tyrwhitt, who has been followed by all succeeding editors,
reads Pisa, which is no doubt right; but the error was
the poet's.
"Right son unto the right Vincentio."
"Better once than never; for never is too late."
Sc. 2.
"And time it is when raging war is done,
To smile at scapes and perils overblown."
The folio has come; but both sense and rime demand
'done,' Rowe's correction. We might also, as Mr. Collier
observes, read gone; and this is perhaps the best.
"And how likes Gremio these quick-witted folks?"
So also Capell.
"What! head and butt! a hasty-witted body."
"Let us each one send in unto his wife."
"Oh! worse and worse; she will not come. O vile!"
Sc. 1.
"What stuff 'tis made of, whereof it is born, I am
To learn; and such a want-wit sadness makes of me."
"That courtesy to them, and do them reverence."
"And see my wealthy Andrew docks in sand."
For 'docks' the editors read, after Rowe, 'dock'd'; but it
is simpler to read 'dock,' the s being the usual printer's addition.
We might even perhaps retain the text, reading
'see!'
"If they should speak 'twould almost damn those ears."
Sc. 2.
"Come Nerissa. Sirrah, go before. Whiles we
shut the gate upon one wooer, another knocks
at the door."
Perhaps a rime and a seven-foot line were intended, in
which case we should arrange thus, as Knight has also done;
"Come in, Nerissa. Sirrah, go before.
Whiles we shut the gate upon one wooer, another knocks at the door."
Sc. 3.
"Will you pleasure me in it? Shall I know your answer?"
"Mark you this Bassanio," etc.
This speech should be marked Aside. It is so in my Edition.
"Hath a dog money? Is it possible?"
We should read 'monies,' the word Shylock always uses.
"Of usance for my monies, and you'll not hear me.
This is kind that I offer.—This were kindness."
So it should be arranged.
Sc. 1.
"Then is Alcides beaten by his page."
'page' is Theobald's undoubted correction; 4tos and folio
read rage.
"First forward to the temple! After dinner
Your hazard shall be made."
Surely 'temple' has no meaning here. Must not the
poet have written table. In Lucrece (st. 168), in the Var.
Shakespeare, "Her sacred temple" is printed "Her sacred
table." I am not aware that any critic has observed this
palpable error. The term 'table,' it may be observed, was
much more used by our forefathers than by us. Thus in
The Elder Brother (iii. 4) Miramont says to his brother,
"May be I'll see your table too," i.e. be of your dinner-party.
Sc. 2.
"Certainly the Jew is the very Devil's incarnation."
"Do you know me, father?"
Mr. Dyce thinks Shakespeare wrote 'not know,' which
occurs again in Lancelot's next speech. I have adopted his
reading.
Sc. 3.
"If a Christian do not play the knave and get thee."
The 2nd folio properly read did. (See on Jul. Cæs. ii. 2.)
This change of tense was not unfrequent. We often meet
see for saw.
Sc. 5.
"Well thou shalt see; thy eyes shall be thy judge."
It might be better to read 'the judge.' Even at the present
day printers confound these words.
"Will be worth a Jewès eye,"
I prefer this, the reading of the old copies, to 'Jewess,'
Pope's reading, which is usually followed.
Sc. 6.
"How like a younker or a prodigal."
Rowe's correction for 'younger.'
Sc. 7.
"Go draw aside the curtains."
So also at end of scene; but as in sc. ix. it is 'curtain,' I
ascribe the s to the printer.
"But more than these in love I do deserve her."
See also Capell.
"Gilded timber do worms infold."
Pope read wood may for 'timber do' of the 4tos and folio;
Johnson, who is always followed, read tombs; I read woods.
The meaning is that gilded wooden work was often worm-eaten.
Sc. 1.
"And hindered me of half a million."
So also Warburton.
'Where' is Rowe's correction; the original editions read
Here, which may be right.
Sc. 2.
"I speak too long, but 'tis to piece the time,
To eke it, and to draw it out."
'Piece' is Rowe's correction for peize, and is, I think,
right.
"There is no vice so simple but assumes."
The originals all have voice; 'vice' is a correction, and a
true one, of the 2nd folio.
"Thus ornament is but the guiled shore
To a most dangerous sea, the beautious scarf
Veiling an Indian beauty."
Unless we take it ironically—which is unworthy of the
poet—'beauty' here is nonsense. It plainly owes its origin
to the preceding 'beautious.' Hanmer read dowdy; Sidney
Walker gipsy—both bad. I read, with the utmost confidence,
feature as the only word suited to the place. (See Index
s. v.) Mr. Spedding, I find, conjectured visage or feature,
apparently taking them to be synonymous.
"Nor none of thee, thou pale and common drudge."
For 'pale' Farmer read stale, perhaps needlessly.
"Thy paleness moves me more than eloquence."
Warburton read plainness, of which Mr. Dyce approves,
and perhaps with reason. I have, however, made no change.
Lead in fact never is pale; for its surface is always oxydized.
Shakespeare, moreover, would hardly use the same term of
two distinct substances. (See, however, on Rom. and Jul. ii.
5.)
Sc. 3.
"The Duke cannot deny the course of law,
For the commodity that strangers have
With us in Venice. If it be denied
'Twill much impeach the justice of the state."
I thus point and amend the passage, as Capell had done,
followed only, I believe, by Knight. I am rather dubious of
'justice,' and should prefer interest or traffic.
Sc. 4.
"From out the state of hellish misery."
I prefer 'misery,' the reading of the first 4to, to cruelty,
that of the others and the folio.
"As I have ever found thee honest-true."
These compounds of two adjectives—the first being used
adverbially—are not by any means uncommon. They are
frequent in Shakespeare; in Fletcher's Hum. Lieut. (iii. 2)
we have "serious-true," and in his Chances (ii. 1) "glorious-foolish."
(See on 1 Hen. IV. iii. 1.)
"In speed to Padua; see thou render this."
All the old editions read Mantua, but it is so certain that
it must have been a mere slip of the poet or the printer that
Theobald's correction has been universally and properly
adopted. (See on Hen. V. iii. Chor.)
"Unto the Tranect, to the common ferry."
Rowe, I think properly, read Traject (tragetto It.).
Sc. 5.
"And if on earth he do not mean it, then."
Here 'it' seems to mean 'to live an upright life'; rather
a harsh construction. It is not likely that the poet used
'mean' in the sense of mener Fr., yet it seems to be used
so sometimes in Piers Ploughman.
Sc. 1.
"Cannot contain their urine; for Affection,
Masters of passion, sways it to the mood
Of what it likes or loathes."
The original editions all read "Cannot contain their urine
for affection;" but that this cannot be right is proved by the
context. The only question then is, should we read Master
with Thirlby, or Mistress with the same and Capell. Nothing
(see Introd. p. 59) is more common than the addition
of s, while master and mistress are frequently confounded.
(See on Taming of Shrew, i. 2.) On the whole, I prefer
mistress. In the last line I read she for 'it,' evidently caused
by that in the preceding line. For the meaning of 'affection,'
see Index s. v.
"Why he a woollen bag-pipe."
The bag of the bag-pipe is no doubt generally covered at
the present day with a piece of green baize, which is woollen;
yet I incline with Hawkins and Steevens to read swollen; the
s might easily have been lost, of which I think we have
another example in the change of sway to wag (Much Ado,
v. 1).
"As to offend himself, being offended."
I prefer this punctuation.
"I pray you think you question with the Jew."
Though by reading 'a Jew' we get sense, and Launce
(Com. of Err. ii. 3) makes a Jew the type of hard-heartedness,
and we have the same notion in Much Ado, ii. 3, I yet
cannot but adhere to stint your for 'think you,' as I have
given it in my Edition. It seems to me so much more forcible,
and more suited to the calm resignation of Antonio; while
in the other reading there is something of sneer or irony that
is unpleasant. Nothing was easier than for the printer to
read stint, the more unusual term, as think, and then to make
your you for the sake of sense (see Introd. p. 67), and as they
are pronounced nearly alike. However, judicet lector.
"You may as well use question with the wolf
Why he hath made the ewe bleat for the lamb."
This is the reading of the Bridgewater copy of Heyes' 4to,
only reading bleak for 'bleat'; in the Devonshire copy of
that 4to it is:
"Well use question with the wolf
The ewe bleat for the lamb."
In the folio:
"Or even as well use question with the wolf
... The ewe bleat for the lamb."
So editions vary!
"Of such deep misery doth she cut me off."
A syllable is wanting, and a, the reading of the 2nd folio,
is feeble. We have "such deep sin"(Rich. II. i. 1); "deep
grief" (Ham. iv. 5); and many similar expressions. The
omission of an adjective is not unusual. (See on M. N. D.
v. 1.)
"As makes it light or heavy in the substance
Or the division of the twentieth part
Of one poor scruple."
By reading Of for 'Or' we gain both in sense and energy.
The proof-sheets of my Edition have given me instances of
this confusion of or and of.
"Be valu'd 'gainst your wife's commandement."
Sc. 1.
"Full of good news. My master will be here ere morning."
By reading morn we should get a rime.
"My friend, Stephano, I pray you signify."
Both 4tos and folios read "signify I pray you."
"Is thick-inlaid with patens of pure gold."
The reading of the 2nd folio, patterns, the one usually followed,
is decidedly wrong. In Spanish patena is a medal
worn by country-women about the neck.
"By the sweet power of music; therefore the poets."
I think we should read this in the plural, as no particular
poet was regarded as the author of this mythe.
"Peace, ho! the moon sleeps with Endymion."
In reading "ho!" for the how of the original editions, I
had been anticipated by Malone.
"That she did give me, whose—poësy was
—For all the world like cutler's poetry
Upon a knife—Love me and leave me not."
By punctuating thus, we need not read, with Steevens,
'to me.'
"Or your own honour to contain the ring."
It might be better, with Pope, to read retain. (See on Two
Gent. v. 4, ad fin.)
"In summer where the ways are fair enough."
The usual confusion of where and when.
"Well while I live," etc.
A waggish allusion to a story told by Poggio, Ariosto,
Rabelais, La Fontaine, and Prior. Our poet probably got
it from Rabelais, with whom he was familiar.
Sc. 1.
"As I remember, Adam, it was upon this fashion.
He bequeathed me, by will, but poor a thousand crowns, and as thou sayest," etc.
The 2nd folio reads 'a poor thousand,' but the metre is
in favour of the original reading, and we meet "What poor
an instrument" (Ant. and Cleop. v. 2). It is really surprising
to see with what pertinacity editors reject the necessary
word He, first supplied by Blackstone.
"Or to speak more properly stays me here at home."
Warburton read stys, as in Temp. i. 2, which is certainly
more forcible; but Orlando could not be said to be 'sty'd,'
like Caliban.
"If Rosalind, the Duke's daughter, be banished."
Hanmer added old to 'Duke,' which, however, is not
necessary.
Sc. 2.
"Ros. My father's love is enough to honour him enough."
Ros. should probably be Cel. (so also Theobald), and the
second 'enough' be rejected.
The princess here plays on the similarity of sound between
spot and sport, pronounced with the r nearly effaced.
"There is such odds in the man."
Hanmer properly read men.
"Mounsieur the challenger, the princess calls for you.—
I attend them," etc.
Celia had desired Le Beau to call him; Orlando, seeing
two princesses, says 'them'; so the corrections of the critics
are needless.
"If you saw yourself with your eyes, or knew yourself with your judgement."
Warburton ingeniously, but perhaps needlessly, read our
for 'your.'
"But justly, as you have exceeded all promise here."
Hanmer read 'here exceeded.'
"But yet indeed the taller, is his daughter."
For 'taller' Pope read shorter, Malone smaller, which is
the usual reading, as Rosalind was 'the taller.' I feel, however,
almost certain that the poet wrote 'less taller,' and
have so printed it. We have, "Against the envy of less
happier lands" (Rich. II. ii. 1), and no one would object to
more taller.
Sc. 3.
"Not a word!—No, not one to throw at a dog."
The 'No,' it will be seen, was transferred to the beginning
of the next speech, where it was not wanted; while both
sense and metre require it here.
"No, some of it for my child's father."
Rowe properly read 'father's child.' Sense, taste, and
delicacy, alike commend this simple and natural transposition.
Some editors, however, think otherwise.
"Mistress, dispatch you with your safest haste."
For 'safest' Collier's folio reads fastest; we might also
read, with Singer, swiftest, like "swiftest expedition" (Two
Gent. iii. 1); "in all swift haste" (Tr. and Cr. i. 1). But it
is not necessary to alter the text; for safe is, sure, certain,
a sense which it retains in the Midland counties. "To take
the safest occasion by the front" (Oth. iii. 2).
"Which teacheth thee, that thou and I am one."
Such was the structure of the time. "My thoughts and
I am for this other element" (Jonson, Cynthia's Revels, i.
1). It was the same in French:
"Ni la mort ni vous-même
Ne me ferez jamais prononcer que je l'aime."
Racine, Bajazet, iv. 1.
Sc. 1.
"Here feel we not the penalty of Adam,
The season's difference," etc.
As the Duke proceeds to show that he did feel this difference,
the text cannot be right. Critics, therefore, for 'not'
read but, as these words were frequently confounded by the
printers. But then a question arises, was 'the season's difference'
any part of 'the penalty of Adam.' In Scripture
that penalty was "in the sweat of thy face shalt thou eat
bread;" and this was the very penalty that the Duke and his
friends did not feel; for we have just been told of them (i. 1)
that "they fleet away the time carelessly, as they did in the
Golden World." Further, it does not appear that any
writer anterior to Milton made the Ovidian change of seasons
a part of Adam's penalty. The text may therefore be
right, and a line, something like this, have been lost,
"Here is no toil; we have only to endure"
Upton, most properly, made this the conclusion of the
Duke's speech. (See on W. T. v. 1)
"First for his weeping into the needless stream."
Pope's change of 'into' to in has been generally followed,
but without the slightest reason, by the decasyllabists. I
am almost ashamed to say that I have joined them from pure
inadvertence.
"Left and abandon'd of his velvet friends."
"The body of the country, city, court."
The 2nd folio supplied the.
"Send to his brother's; fetch that gallant hither."
Sc. 3.
"When service should in my old limbs lie lame,
And unregarded age in corners thrown."
There is either a line lost after these, or we should read
'be in corners thrown,' as I have done. The omission of be
was not infrequent.
"The constant service of the antique world,
When service sweat for duty not for meed."
The 'service' in the first line arose from that in the
second (See Introd. p. 64). I read fashion; Collier's folio
has favour.
"From seventy years, till now almost fourscore."
Such is the reading of the folio—a convincing proof of
how little the old printers are to be relied on. Editors,
without exception, read seventeen.
Sc. 4.
"O Jupiter, how weary are my spirits!"
'Weary' is Warburton's correction of merry of the folio.
"I pray you bear with me; I cannot go no further."
For 'cannot' the 2nd folio has can, the usual reading.
Yet I doubt if the change was needed.
"From whom I took two cods."
Johnson read, as every man of sense would read, peas for
'cods.' I have just shown the origin of the change.
Sc. 5.
"And turn his merry note."
We still say turn a tune and a note. Pope, then, was wrong
in reading tune for 'turn.' "When threadbare Martial
turns his merry note" (Hall. Sat. vi. 1) was probably in
the poet's mind.
Sc. 7.
"Doth very foolishly, although he smart,
Not to seem senseless of the bob."
Both sense and metre demand this addition of Theobald's,
whom all editors follow. We have the very same omission
in
"Yet if it be your wills not to forgive
The sin I have committed, let it not fall," etc.
Philaster, ii. 4.
where none of the editors have perceived the loss.
"Why who cries out on pride."
There is something wanting here; for in this play the
speeches never begin thus with a short line. It is evident
also that it is one kind of pride, that of dress, that is spoken
of. I therefore read without hesitation 'pride of bravery,'
and, three lines further on, wearer's for 'weary,' in which I
had been anticipated by Singer.
"Of what kind should this cock come of."
This seems to be a third instance of effacement in a single
page of the MS. I would add I marvel.
"And take upon command what help we have."
"And in his room not only to eat his fill, but be the lord
of the feast." (Lodge, Rosalynde, p. 53.) "They covet not
their neighbours' goods; but command all that is their neighbours'
as their own." (MS., 1559, ap. Froude, Hist. of Eng.
viii. 3.)
"And then the whining schoolboy."
This is a proper addition of Pope's.
Sc. 2.
"Here comes young master Ganymede, my new mistress['s] brother."
Though it stands thus in the folio, metre and the usage of
the time reject the s.
"But the fair of Rosalind."
We might read 'fair face,' or, with Rowe, face for 'fair';
which last, however, is the same as fairness; so no change
is needed.
"Winter'd garments must be lined."
The 3rd folio properly reads Winter.
"Why should this desert be?"
Rowe read 'a desert'; Tyrwhitt 'silent be.' I rather
prefer the latter; but it is against it that, excepting in one
of the following and the six last lines, the first foot is always
monosyllabic. I have therefore followed Rowe.
"Or at every sentence end."
For 'Or' I read And. (See Note at end of Samson
Agonistes in my Edition of Milton's Poems.)
"It may well be called Jove's tree when it drops forth fruit."
The 2nd folio reads 'forth such; Capell read such for
'forth.' Perhaps the first is to be preferred; yet I find I
have followed Capell in my Edition.
"Make me believe it! You may as soon make her."
Surely the passage thus gains not only in metre, but in
spirit.
Sc. 3.
"By so much is a horn more precious than to want."
There is apparently an aposiopesis here.
"Leave me not behind thee, prythee."
Both rime and metre require this addition; yet none of
the critics has made it.
Sc. 4.
"Breaks his staff like a noble goose."
Singer, very unnecessarily and most tamely, reads notable
for 'noble.' Printing from his edition, I have heedlessly
followed him in mine.
"Bring us unto this sight, and you shall say."
Sc. 5.
"Than he that dies and lives by bloody drops."
It is quite impossible that this line in its present form
could have come from the pen of the poet. He must have
seen the absurdity of dying before living, and he could have
had no motive for departing from the universal form "live
and die," as in "I could live and die in the eyes of Troilus"
(Tr. and Cr. i. 2). If we then transpose, and take 'by' in the
sense of beside, near, in contact with (Index s. v.), we get excellent
sense. 'Dies,' however, may be a printer's error for
some other verb—sheds perhaps; and then 'by' may be
taken in its ordinary sense. I had also, like Heath, conjectured
'daily lives.'
"The cicatrice and capable impression."
For 'capable' Singer's and Collier's folio read palpable;
I have followed them.
"Nor I am sure there is no force in eyes
That can do hurt to any one.—O! dear Phebe."
For 'Nor' we might perhaps better read And. (See my
note on Sam. Agon., 1692.) Still no change is needed.
"That you insult and exult all at once
Over the wretched? What! though you have no beauty."
The transposition in the first line removes all necessity
for correction. Strange that the critics should not have
thought of it! In my Edition the transposition is, "That
you insult and all at once exult," which is wrong; but it is
there corrected. By reading 'What!' the difficulty found
here by critics is removed.
"That the old Carlot once was master of."
In the folio 'Carlot' is printed as a proper name, and it
may be the Spanish Carloto. No such substantive as 'carlot'
is known.
"He is fallen in love with your foulness, and she'll."
For 'she' we should, I think, read, as I have done, you.
"I have more cause to hate him than to love him."
The I was supplied in the 2nd folio.
Sc. 1.
"And the foolish chroniclers of the age found it was—Hero of Sestos."
The use of the word 'found' proves that Hanmer's reading
coroners is right. In Twelfth Night (i. 5) the coroner
is said to sit on a drowned man.
"That cannot make her fault her husband's occasion."
This seems to mean occasioned, caused by her husband.
Or we may read, with Hanmer, accusation. I find I have
done so, but doubt if I was justified in so doing.
"I'll go find a shadow and sigh till he come.—And
I'll go sleep."
Both sense and metre seem to demand this addition.
Sc. 3.
"My gentle Phebe did bid me give you this."
Editors, myself included, follow 2nd folio, and omit 'did.'
I think we are wrong.
"Art thou god to shepherd turn'd."
I think we should read 'a god.'
"Like a ripe sister, but the woman low."
The necessary insertion was made in the 2nd folio.
"As how I came into that desert place."
There may have been, as Malone thought, a line lost here;
but I rather think it is an aposiopesis.
Sc. 2.
"Her sudden consenting, but say with me."
Rowe supplied Her.
"All purity, all trial, all observance."
As 'observance' is the word in the riming line, Collier's
folio and Malone read obedience; Heath perseverance; Harness
and Singer, whom I find I have followed, endurance.
I quite agree with those who read, with Rowe, Who and
to.
Sc. 3.
"Yet the note was very untuneable."
Theobald read untimeable, as the reply is "we kept time;"
but, as time and tune were synonymous, there seems to be no
need of change.
Sc. 4.
"As those that fear they hope and know they fear."
To give sense here, I read 'their hope' and 'their fear,'
and for 'know' hope. In the change of 'they' to their I
find I had been anticipated by Heath. The thought is the
same as in "In these feared hopes." (Cymb. ii. 4). The
printer having made 'they hope,' in order to get some sense,
changed the following 'hope' to know, no unusual practice.
Yet Mr. Dyce says, "I believe that the line now stands as
Shakespeare wrote it." Coleridge thus expresses the same
thought:
"And Fears self-willed, that shunned the eye of Hope;
And Hope that scarce would know itself from Fear."
"That thou mightest join his hand in his
Whose heart within his bosom is."
Editors read her for 'his' in both lines. The first change,
made in the 3rd folio, is necessary; the second, made by
Malone, not so.
"And all their lands restored to him again."
For 'him' editors very properly, following Rowe, read
them; in MS. probably 'em.
"I make my courtesy, bid me farewell."
Sc. 1.
"Is it possible Disdain should die while she
hath such meet food to feed it as Signior Benedick?"
For 'it' we should probably read her, or rather on.
"Scratching could not make it worse, or 'twere such a face as yours" [were].
The 'were' was probably suggested by the preceding
''twere.'
Sc. 2.
"This be true. Go you and tell her of it."
The metre requires 'should be.'
Sc. 3.
"There is no measure in the occasion that heeds it."
Sc. 1.
Bene. "Well I would you did like me."
It should be Balt. here and in the next two speeches.
"Which I mistrusted not. Farewell, therefore, Hero!"
Collier's folio reads needlessly 'then, Hero.'
"It is the base, though bitter disposition of Beatrice."
For 'though,' which can hardly be right, the usual reading
is the, the correction of Johnson, which is very good;
the words were easily confounded, especially when though
was written tho'.
"That I stood like a man at a mark, with a whole army shooting at me."
We should expect him; but 'me' may have been the
poet's word. For the first 'at' we might perhaps read as.
"All that Adam had left him before he transgressed."
There must certainly be an error either in 'left' or in
'before.' For the latter we might read after; for the former
perhaps lent or about. I think the true reading is lent, in
which I had been anticipated by Collier's folio. Lend was
constantly used in the sense of give. "I can lend you
letters to divers officers," etc. (Jonson, Every Man out, etc.
iii. 1.) It is not quite out of use yet.
"County Claudio, when mean you go to church?"
For 'County,' which occurs nowhere else in the play, I
read Count, which also suits the metre.
Sc. 2.
"Hear me call Margaret Hero; hear Margaret term me Claudio."
The poet no doubt wrote 'Claudio' here; but from what
precedes it certainly should have been Borachio. These
slips were not at all unusual with him.
Sc. 3.
"We'll fit the hid fox with a pennyworth."
The originals read 'kid-fox'; but his hiding had just been
mentioned, and the name of the game probably alluded to
was Hide Fox. Warburton made the correction.
"Since many a lover doth commence his suit thus."
Something seems evidently wanting for the sense.
"Notes, notes, forsooth, and noting!"
Theobald's correction; the old copies have nothing.
"O, ay. Stalk on; stalk on; the fowl sits."
Perhaps for the sake of metre yonder should be added.
"Beats her heart, tears her hair, prays, curses, O sweet Benedick!"
I agree with Collier's folio and Singer in reading cries for
'curses,' which was suggested by 'prays.'
"My lord, will you walk in? dinner is ready."
"And virtuous; 'tis so, I cannot reprove it."
It would perhaps be better to read 'disprove it.'
"And choke a daw withal."
Collier's folio reads 'not choke'; but it is dubious.
Sc. 1.
"Good Margaret, run thee in to the parlour."
Pope read 'into.'
"Whisper her ear and tell her I and Ursula."
There has probably been an omission of in before 'her.'
"No, not to be so odd and from all fashions."
The proper word is nor, as Capell also saw.
Sc. 2.
"Well, every one can master a grief, but he that has it."
Both folio and 4to read 'cannot' for 'can,' Pope's correction.
"As a German from the waist downward all slops, and
a Spaniard from the hip upward no doublet."
This is only in 4to, 1600. We should probably read, as
Mason also did, 'all doublet.'
"He is no fool for fancy as you would have it to appear he is."
For 'fool' we should perhaps read food.
"She shall be buried with her face upwards."
That is, like everybody else. Theobald read heels for face,
quoting,
"Whilst I have meat and drink love cannot starve me;
For if I die of the first fit I am unhappy,
And worthy to be buried with my heels upward;"
(Fletcher, Wild-goose Chase, i. 3)
while Mason proposed feet. But Singer says, referring to
Winter's Tale, iv. 3, that the meaning is, she shall be buried
in her lover's arms; and I think there is a waggish allusion
to nuptial joys.
Sc. 1.
"Out on thee, seeming! I will write against it,
You seem to me as Dian in her orb."
For 'thee' we should, I think, read thy or this, as they
were pronounced alike, and for 'seem' seem'd, for the same
reason.' (See Introd. p. 52.) Pope also read thy, and Hanmer
seem'd.
"But if all aim but this be levell'd false."
I would read in; for 'but,' suggested by 'But,' makes
nonsense. I have, however, made no change in my Edition.
Sc. 1.
"And bid him speak of patience to me."
"And sorrow wag, cry Hem! when he should groan."
For 'wag,' which gives no sense, I would read sway, which
gives most excellent sense.
"For Affection,
Mistress of passion, sways it."
Mer. of Ven. iv. 1.
"You sway the motion of Demetrius' heart."
M. N. D. i. 1.
"The will of man is by his reason sway'd."
Ib. ii. 2.
"Our own stars all our fortunes,
Which, as we sway 'em, to abuse or bless us."
Fletch. Chances, ii. 3.
It seems evident that the initial s of sway was effaced, a
thing not unusual. As to the change of y to g, I lately read
a work on South America, in which the well-known name
Almagro was invariably printed Almayro. 'Cry Hem!'
may mean, use the language of rakish youths; "Our watch-word
was, Hem boys!" (2 Hen. IV. iii. 2).
"Some of us would lie low.—Who is it wrongs him?"
"Gentlemen both, we will not wake your patience."
The meaning of 'wake' is not clear; perhaps we should
read task. Hanmer read rack; Talbot waste.
"I cannot bid you bid my daughter live."
A printer's error, probably caused in the usual way. We
might better read make, though 'bid' makes sense. 'Can
I make men live whe'r they will or no?' (2 Hen. VI.
iii. 3.)
"I do embrace your offer, and dispose
From henceforth of poor Claudio."
It would seem that something had been lost at the end,
the speech terminates so abruptly. We might supply at
your pleasure.
"Have you been deceived; for they swore you did."
Mr. Dyce would read 'for they did swear'; but the two
dids rather offend the ear.
"Brave punishments for him. Come, strike up, piper."
Sc. 1.
"The Council shall hear of it; it is a riot."
The metre requires of, which makes the expression more
idiomatic. Sir Hugh naturally omits it.
"And I thank you always with my heart la!"
The folio reads 'love you'; the correction is Farmer's.
So also in Shallow's next speech.
Sc. 3.
"The good humour is to steal at a minute's rest."
As "minim's rest" occurs in Rom. and Jul. ii. 1, Langton
and Collier's folio would so read here; but it may be, and
probably is, a mere blunder of Nym's.
"He hath studied her well, and translated her well."
The folio reads will; in both places the 4tos have 'well' in
the first, and omit it in the last.
"Hold, sirrah, bear you these two letters tightly."
"For the revolt of mine is dangerous."
For 'the' we must, with Pope, read this. We have,
"For this revolt of thine" (Hen. V. ii. 1). Theobald, whom
some critics follow, read mien for 'mine,' which I utterly
reject. (See on Two Gent. ii. 4.) I do not think 'revolt'
occurs anywhere in the sense of mere change.
Sc. 1.
"What! have I scaped love-letters in the holiday-time of my beauty?"
I is the insertion of the 2nd folio; and is perhaps not absolutely
necessary, as we might put a (!) after 'beauty.'
"For though Love use Reason as his precision."
For 'precision,' which gives but poor sense, we should
adopt, as I have done, Johnson's conjecture, physician:
"My reason the physician to my love." Son. cxlvii.
"I'll exhibit a bill in Parliament for the putting down of men."
Theobald's reading, 'fat men' has been generally and
properly adopted. There is a similar omission of fat in
1 Hen. IV. ii. 2. In the 4to she says, "Well, I shall trust
fat men the worse while I live for his sake."
"Will you go, An-heires?"
This is mere nonsense. Boaden's conjecture, Cavalieres,
adopted by Singer and myself, seems to be very good; it
might easily, with a little effacement, have been mistaken
by the printer. We might also, and still better I think,
read on heróes, as this last word was thus pronounced at
times by Spenser, Chapman, and others; and we have,
"Noble heróes, my sword and yours are kin" (All's Well,
ii. 1). The metre excludes héroes. Theobald, followed by
Dyce, read mynheers, not a Shakespearian term; Steevens on
hearts; Malone and hear us. The reading of the 4tos is
'Bully Hector!'
Theobald read fealty, Collier's folio has fidelity. I prefer
the last; but I make no change.
Sc. 2.
"Give fire, she is my prize."
Most certainly 'my' should be thy; the confusion is
common.
Sc. 3.
"Cried Game? said I well?"
Mr. Douce, Mr. Dyce, and myself, all independently corrected
'Cried I aim?' and Warburton had proposed Cry
aim. The correction might therefore appear to be certain;
and yet I am dubious of it. 'Cried game' is the reading of
the 4tos, as well as of the folio; and as the first 4to and the
folio were printed from independent MSS., it is not at all
likely that two transcribers or printers should have fallen
into the same error. 'Cried Game? said I well?' would
suit the abrupt tone of the Host, and signify, Did I intimate
sport?
"Thou hast the right arched beauty of the brow."
The 4to reads bent for 'beauty'; so the right word may
be bend. I have given 'bent'.
"By the Lord, thou art a tyrant to say so."
For 'tyrant' the 4tos read traitor. I have adopted this
reading, though dubious of its being the best.
"What thou wert if Fortune thy foe were not, Nature is."
So also Capell.
"I love thee, and none but thee."
The metre proves this to be the right text.
I think Hanmer was right in reading uncouple; for 'uncape,'
as a term of the chase, is unknown. The final letters
of uncouple had probably been effaced in the MS.
Sc. 4.
"Farewell, gentle Mistress Page. Färewell,
Nan."
Both sense and metre gain, I think, by this addition.
Policy, if nothing else, should make Fenton return the farewell
of Mrs. Page. Capell read 'my gentle.'
"A fool and a physician."
We should certainly read with Hanmer or for 'and.'
Sc. 5.
"As they'd have drowned a bitch's blind puppies."
The original copies read 'a blind bitch's'; Hanmer made
the obvious transposition.
Sc. 2.
"Your husband is in his old lunes again."
The folio has lines. Theobald made the correction. See
W. T. ii. 2.
"Good gentlemen, let him not strike the old woman."
The negative was added in the 2nd folio.
Sc. 4.
"You say he has been thrown into the rivers."
It might be better to read see for 'say.'
"That silk will I go buy. And in that time."
With Mr. Dyce, I adopt Theobald's reading of tire for
'time,' as best suited to the context.
"And he my husband best of all affects."
If 'husband' be the subject to 'affects,' as I think he is,
we should read him. See Introd. p. 52.
Sc. 5.
"Conceal them or thou diest."
Collier's folio for 'or' reads and; but the text is right.
Simple had used 'conceal' in the sense of reveal, and the
Host repeats his word.
Sc. 6.
"The mirth whereof's so larded with my matter."
Sc. 2.
"Remember, son Slender, my daughter."
The word daughter, necessary both for sense and metre,
was supplied by the 2nd folio.
Sc. 5.
Among the characters given in the heading of this
scene, we meet Mrs. Quickly and Pistol; the 4tos have
"Mrs. Quickly, like the Queen of Fairies," and prefix Quic.
to the following speeches, and it is not said that Anne was
to assume that character. The folio heads the speeches
with Qui. and Qu. We may therefore say that the poet was
oblivious when, in iv. 4. 6, he said that Anne should "present
the Fairy Queen;" for throughout she only appears as
an ordinary fairy, as is plain by the mistake made by Caius
and Slender. The poet seems to have confined the speaking
to the elder persons.
"You moonshine-revellers, and shades of night,
You orphan-heirs of fixed Destiny."
No one has been able to make any sense of 'orphan-heirs,'
which may therefore be treated as a corruption. Warburton
read 'ouphen-heirs,' which Singer adopts; but there is no
such word as ouphen. My own opinion is that the poet
wrote ouphes and heirs; and as in general the d in and is
not pronounced, even before vowels, and the ou might easily
be mistaken for or, the printer made orphan. The line, we
may see, thus forms a parallel to the preceding line. The
poet seems to have used 'heirs' in the sense of children.
In Fletcher's Mad Lover we have,
"Coarse and base appetites, earth's mere inheritors,
And heirs of idleness and blood." (ii. 1.)
In favour of my reading, it may be observed that in iv. 4
and in the following speeches the Ouphes occur, as well as
the Elves and Fairies, and nowhere else in Shakespeare.
"Elves list your names. Silence, you airy toyès.
Cricket to Windsor chimneys shalt thou leap;
What fires thou findest unraked and hearths unswept."
The rime shows that 'toyès' is a dissyllable. In 'unswept'
the t should not be sounded, and, I think, not be
printed. Unswep is merely the apocopated part, of which
examples are so numerous in our language; it is like kep,
crep, etc., which, though regarded now as vulgarisms, are
grammatically correct. Collier's folio, followed by Mr.
Collier and others, reads 'when thou'st leap'd,' a mere result
of ignorance of grammar.
"And turn him to no pain."
From what precedes, we might conjecture burn.
"To repay that money will be a biting affliction."
I have, after Theobald, added here from the 4tos the
following lines, of which, however, he did not give the
last:—
"Mrs. Ford. Nay, husband, let that go to make amends,
Forgive that sum and so we'll all be friends.
Ford. Well, here's my hand; all is forgiven at last.
Fal. It hath cost me well. I've been well pinch'd and wash'd."
The play is thus made to end more agreeably, and Falstaff
can accept the invitation to supper with a better grace.
These lines, it is true, rime, and so are not quite in harmony
with the other speeches, whence it seems to follow that the
omission was made by the poet. But his judgement in this
case must have fallen asleep; for Ford had no right to be so
hard on the poor knight, as he had given him the money,
or rather we might say forced it on him. As to the rime,
we have two other couplets toward the end of the play.
Sc. 1.
"Oh! it came o'er my ear like the sweet sound
That breathes upon a bank of violets."
As a sound breathing is pure nonsense, Pope read south for
'sound'; and, with the exception of Mr. Knight and Mr.
Staunton, all the editors, I believe, have followed him. Yet
even this correction does not remove the difficulty, for south
alone, no more than north, east, or west, is never used of the
wind. It seems to me then that the poet wrote south wind,
and as the th was usually suppressed in south, north, etc., as
sou'-west, sou'-east, the printer pronounced sou wind or, it
may be, sou 'ind, which easily became 'sound' in his mind,
and so he printed it. (See Introd. p. 67.) It is rather remarkable
that this very correction is made by an Anon. in
the Cambridge Shakespeare. The same idea, I may observe,
occurs in the Antonio and Mellida of Shakespeare's contemporary,
Marston (Act I.):
"Smile heaven and softest southern wind
Kiss her cheek gently with perfumed breath."
Both were probably indebted to "Her breath is more sweet
than a gentle south-west wind, that comes creeping over
flowery fields and shadowed waters" in Sidney's Arcadia.
For a similar omission of wind, see on Temp. i. 2.
"So please you, my lord, I might not be admitted."
"The element itself, till seven years heat 'em,
Shall not behold her face at ample view."
That is, not for seven summers, possibly with an allusion
to racing, as in Win. Tale, i. 2. As the element is the sky,
the heaven, we might also read it.
"Of her sweet perfections with one self-king."
That is with Love. We might also transpose, but, I think,
with a loss of force. We have an instance of this prefixing
of the genitive in Temp. iii. 3.
Sc. 2.
"They say she hath abjur'd the company
And sight of men."
This is the judicious transposition of Theobald. The
folio has 'sight' in the first, 'company' in the second line,
to the manifest injury of the metre.
Sc. 3.
"Castiliano vulgo! for here comes Sir Andrew Aguecheek."
Warburton's conjecture of volto for 'vulgo' is ingenious,
and may be right, meaning putting on a grave countenance,
like a Castilian.
"An thou let her part so sir Andrew."
It was left to the 3rd folio to supply the needful her.
"Thou seest it will not curl by nature."
Theobald's indubitable emendation of 'cool my nature'
of the folio.
"In a flame-coloured stock."
This is Pope's correction of 'dam'd coloured' of the folio.
Knight reads damask; Collier's folio dun, which is very bad
indeed. We meet in other dramatists with straw-, peach-, carnation-colour'd
stocks. It is perhaps impossible to recover
the right word, yet I see little objection to flame-colour;
for if we suppose flame pronounced as in Latin and French
(see Introd. p. 74), flame-coloured might easily become
'damn'd (pr. dam) coloured' in the printer's mind. In
confirmation we have elsewhere in the folio 'scar-crow,' not
'scare-crow,' and other like words.
Sc. 4.
"Is as the maiden's organ, shrill and sound;
And all is semblative a woman's part."
I have read 'in sound'; for and and in are perpetually
confounded. I also read 'semblative to.'
Sc. 5.
"Of fools to be no better than the fools' zanies."
So also Capell.
"At your door like a sheriff's post, and be the supporter
Of a bench."
For 'and' I read or, and so did Hanmer.
"If you be not mad, begone; if you have reason, be brief."
Mason omitted the negative, but perhaps needlessly.
Oli. "Tell me your mind.—Vio. I am a messenger..."
This is Warburton's arrangement, the folio giving the
whole to Viola. (See on Meas. for Meas. ii. 3.) I have added
the sign of the break, which seems necessary.
"Look you, sir; such one I was, as this present.... Is it not well done?"
By reading and pointing thus we get most excellent sense,
and increase the vivacity and humour of the passage. Mason,
whom Singer follows, read "as this presents," which no
doubt may be right, but is far less effective.
"With adorations, with fertile tears."
See Introd. p. 55.
"The countes man, he left this ring behind him."
Capell, who is invariably followed, made it county's. I,
however, read, as in iii. 3, 'count his.' With one exception
(Mer. of Ven. i. 2), County is peculiar to Romeo and Juliet;
formosissima in Much Ado, ii. 1, we should, I think, read Count.
Sc. 2.
"She took the ring of me; I'll none of it."
As it is evident from Malvolio's reply that this was not
what Viola said, the negative may have been omitted here,
as in so many other places; Malone read 'no ring.' Singer
retains the reading of the folio, saying that Viola fibs to
"avoid betraying the weakness of Olivia to her steward."
"That methought that her eyes had lost her tongue."
The 2nd folio read 'That sure methought.'
"Alas! our frailty is the cause, not we;
For such as we are made, if such we be."
For 'if,' which is undoubtedly wrong, Tyrwhitt, followed
by Steevens and others, read of, which would seem to be
confirmed by,
"For we are soft, as our complexions are."
M. for M. ii. 4.
"Such as our atoms were, even such are we."
Dryden, Wife of Bath's Tale.
I have printed my own conjecture e'en. Hanmer read ev'n,
and yet Tyrrwhitt probably was right, frailty being meant.
"And I, poor monster, fond as much on him;
And she, mistaken, seems to doat on me."
I quite agree with Mr. Dyce in reading As for 'And' in
the second line. These words are confounded even at the
present day.
Sc. 3.
"I had such a leg; and so sweet a breath to sing."
I suspect 'leg'; for what has it to do here? and Sir Andrew
had already praised his own leg.
Sc. 4.
"Go seek him out, and play the tune the while."
"More longing, wavering, sooner lost and worn."
In Mer. of Ven. i. 4, the folio reads 'well-worn thrift'
for the 'well-won thrift' of the 4to. Hanmer was therefore
right in reading here won, the usual concomitant of
'lost.'
"Give me now leave to leave thee."
As it is the Clown that goes away, we should perhaps
transpose the pronouns, 'Give' being I give. Mr. Dyce,
however, says the text is right, it being "a courteous form
of dismissal," to which explanation I see no objection.
"It cannot be so answered.—Sooth, but you must."
The reply proves that 'It' should be I, as Hanmer corrected.
Sc. 5.
"Wind up my watch or play with my ... some rich jewel."
This punctuation of Mr. Collier's is excellent.
"Though our silence be drawn from us with cars."
For 'cars we might perhaps read 'car-' or 'cart-ropes.'
In iii. 1. we have drawing with "oxen and wain-ropes."
Hanmer read by the ears, S. Walker racks.
"Her Cs, Us, and her Ts, and Ps! Why that?"
"Souter will cry upon it, for all this, though it be as rank as a fox."
We should probably read 'be not.' Hanmer read ben't.
"I will not give my part of this sport," etc.
It might appear better to read would; but all is right.
"I will not lose the part I hope to share
In these his fortunes for my patrimony."
Jonson, Sejanus, v. 10.
Sc. 1.
"And fools are as like to husbands as pilchards are to herrings."
It might be better to omit the second 'are.'
"And not like the haggard cheek at every feather."
The negative is absolutely necessary. Collier's folio,
Johnson, and Dyce, read 'Not like'; but 'And' should be
retained.
"But wise men's folly fallen quite taint their wit."
So the folio reads; Theobald and Tyrwhitt 'wise men
folly-fallen.' I agree with them, and have so printed it.
Some read 'taints.'
"I mean to go in, sir, to enter."
"Hideth my heart. So, let me hear you speak."
The usual reading is 'Hides my poor heart'; but this
simple change, made also by Delius, fully restores the metre.
The printer may, however, have substituted 'Hides' for
conceals or covers.
"Do not extort thy reasons from this clause."
Perhaps for 'thy' we should read my.
Sc. 2.
"Did she see thee the while, old boy?"
The 3rd folio first added thee.
"Challenge me the Count's youth to fight with him."
I think 'him' should be thee. Ritson read you.
Sc. 3.
"And thanks, and ever thanks. Good turns oft."
Here we have an instance of the advantage of transposition,
for the folio has "oft good turns." 'Turns' is a dissyllable.
Theobald read 'thanks, and oft.'
"For which if I be lapsed in this place."
We should surely read latched, i.e. caught, taken. See on
M. N. D. iii. 2. Mr. Hunter, I find, read as I do.
Sc. 4.
"He's coming, madam, but in a very strange manner."
"No dram of a scruple, no scruple of a scruple."
Surely the poet's word must have been ounce for the last
'scruple.'
"He is a knight, dubbed with unhatched rapier."
Malone proposed 'an hatched,' and he was probably right.
"Ay, is it, I warrant him. Do but read it."
"That, honour sav'd, I may upon asking give."
Sc. 3.
"Yet there he was, and there I found this credited."
So it is in the folio, with the omission of the last letter,
which had either been effaced in the MS. or was left out
by the printer. Mason seems also to have seen the truth:
yet no one followed him!
"That my most jealous and too doubtful soul
May live at peace. He shall conceal it,
Whiles you are willing it shall come to note."
The second line is imperfect. In my Edition I added still
(printed, or perhaps written, till), and we might also read
closely or truly, i.e. faithfully. 'Whiles' is to be understood
as till whiles. (See Index s. v.) We might also end
the line with it, and begin the next with That; as while and
whiles that occur in Chaucer, Golding, and others.
Sc. 1.
"A bawbling vessel was he captain of."
We should perhaps read 'bauble-vessel,' as in Tr. and
Cr. i. 3.
"Then he's a rogue and a passy-measures panyn."
The 2nd folio, which is generally followed, reads pavin,
which is a dance, and so could hardly be used of a man.
"First told me thou wast mad. Then cam'st in smiling,
And in such forms which here were presuppos'd
Upon thee in the letter."
For 'Then' I read 'Thou.' (Introd. p. 68.) Theobald
read 'cam'st thou.' In the next line we should probably
read as for 'which.'
"Of our dear souls. Meantime, sweet sister."
We might read 'In the meantime,' but there is no necessity
whatever for change.
Sc. 1.
"Since I am put to know that your own science
Exceeds in that the lists of all advice
My strength can give you."
I know of no meaning 'put' has in English that will
make any sense here. We must, then, regard it as a misprint;
and as a negative is plainly wanting, I read not yet, the negative
being, as so frequently, omitted, and 'put' printed for
yet. "Why, brother Rivers, are you yet to learn?" (3 H.
VI. iv. 4.) Pope read not for 'put.'
"But that to your sufficiency as
Your worth is able * * *"
It is quite evident that part of a line has been lost. The
numerous corrections attempted here may be seen in the
Cambridge Edition. I supply you add diligence.
"Hold therefore, Angelo, thy deputation."
Something was surely lost here; and as Angelo is constantly
called the Deputy, deputation (which occurs a few
lines higher) seems to be the missing word.
Sc. 2.
"I grant as there may between the list[s] and the velvet."
"And which is more, within these three days his head's to be chopped off."
Sc. 3.
"Only for propagation of a dower
Remaining in the coffer of her friends."
For 'propagation' Malone would read prorogation; but
the text seems to be right, as 'propagation' was used in
the sense of extension, increase.
"All kinds of natures
That labour on the bosom of this sphere
To propagate their states."—Timon, i. 1.
"Griefs of my own lie heavy in my breast,
Which thou wilt propagate, to have it press'd,
With more of thine."—Rom. and Jul. i. 1.
"To give thanks to the gods of Rome,
That for the propagation of the empire
Vouchsafe us one to govern it like themselves."
Massinger, Rom. Actor. i. 3.
And portions—as we learn by Sir Moth Interest in Jonson's
Magnetic Lady—used to double in seven years. The same
play would also justify Malone's reading, as guardians were
not always willing to part with dowers in their hands.
Perhaps for 'of a dower' we should read 'of her dower,'
for the h in her not being pronounced, and the r but slightly,
the printer might easily make the mistake; so also 'coffer'
should probably be 'coffers.'
Sc. 4.
"For terror not to use, in time the rod
More mock'd than fear'd, so our decrees
Dead to infliction, to themselves are dead."
In the second line Becomes was added by Pope, or rather
by Davenant, and it has been adopted by subsequent editors.
Yet the poet may have written, and I think did write, 'the
rod is' and 'More mocked at.'
"And yet my nature never in the fight have
To do in slander."
"How I may formally in person bear me."
"Only this one now: Lord Angelo is precise."
Sc. 5.
"Sir, make me not your story."
For 'story' Singer would read sport; but 'me' may be
'to me,' and her meaning be, seek not to impose on me.
"As those that feed grow full; as blossoming time
That from the seedness the bare fallow brings
To teeming foison ... even so her plenteous womb," etc.
"The Duke, who is very strangely gone from hence,
Bore many gentlemen, myself being one,
In hand and hope of action."
As in and and are so frequently confounded (see on iii. 2
ad fin.) I would read in for 'and' in the last line.
Sc. 1.
"Err'd in this point which now you censure him for."
"What's open made
To justice, that justice seizes. What know the laws?"
"Some run from brakes of ice and answer none,
And some are condemn'd for a fault alone."
We have a similar sentiment in Cymb. v. 1. As of ice
and of vice are pronounced exactly alike, we may safely
assume the latter to be the true reading. The whole difficulty
then lies in 'brakes.' A brake was certainly, as we
are told, a frame to confine restless or vicious horses in when
shoeing; but when it is added that it is also an instrument
of torture, I become somewhat dubious. At any rate no
one would say a rack or a gibbet of vice; so why a brake of
vice? I incline then, but with hesitation, to think that we
should read wreaks o' vice. We have "wreak the love"
(R. and J. iii. 5); "wreak our wrongs." (Tit. And. iv. 3.)
I put the ambiguous o', because wreak takes on rather than
of after it.
"I thought by the readiness in the office, you had," etc.
For 'by the,' the usual correction (which I have followed)
is 'by your.' Mr. Collier thinks 'by this' might be
better; for this and your were used promiscuously. Either
might easily be confounded with the. (See Introd. p. 68.)
Sc. 2.
"But you might do it, and do the world no wrong."
This apparently necessary transposition was made by S.
Walker. The folio reads "But might you."
"May call it back again. Well, believe this."
Here back is the proper addition made in the 2nd folio.
"Becomes them not with half so fair a grace
As mercy does. If he had been as you,
And you as he, you would have slipped like him,
But he, like you, would not have been so stern."
"Why, all the souls that were were forfeit once."
As the first 'were' may have been caused by the second,
I would, like Warburton, read for it are. In "We cannot
cross the cause why we were born" (L. L. L. iv. 3), the
folio reads 'are born.'
"If the first that did th' edict infringe."
So it stands in the folio, and Pope was, it may be, right
in reading 'If the first man,' but we might also read, and
perhaps better, as I have done, 'the edict did.'
"Either now, or by remissness new-conceiv'd."
For 'now' I felt inclined to read new, with Pope, but I
prefer 'now born,' and so I have printed it. (See on All's
Well, ii. 3.)
"Are now to have no successive degrees
But here they live to end."
We should for 'here' either read where, or better, with
Hanmer, ere.
"Would use his heaven for thunder; nothing but thunder!
Merciful Heaven!"
"Than the soft yielding myrtle; but man, proud man!"
"That soft and yielding mind should not be in him."
Lyly, Campaspe, ii. 2.
"Most ignorant of what he's most assured of."
"Not with fond sickles of the tested gold."
In all the English versions of the Scriptures anterior to
the Authorized one, sicle is the word, from siclus of the Vulgate,
by which the Hebrew shekel is rendered. Shakespeare
therefore knew nothing of this last, and must of course have
written sickle. Yet all editors, the Cambridge and myself
included, have adopted Pope's correction, shekel, for which
all are highly to blame. The word 'tested' proves that
Gen. xxiii. 16 was in the poet's mind.
"Would all themselves laugh mortal."
It would be simpler and better to read: "Would laugh
themselves all mortal."
"For I am that way going to temptation,
Where prayers cross.—At what hour to-morrow shall I
Attend your lordship?—At any time fore noon."
"Heaven save your honour!—From thee, even from thy virtue."
Sc. 3.
"Who, falling in the flaws of her own youth,
Hath blister'd her report."
Editors follow Warburton in reading flames for 'flaws';
but as flaw is defect, weakness, the text may be right. Flaw
is also gust, blast of wind, which also might make some
sense here. We should, then, perhaps read 'flaw.'
"Showing we would not spare Heaven, as we love it,
But as we stand in fear...."
For 'spare' Collier's folio reads serve.
"Jul. May grace go with you! Duke. Benedicite!"
So Ritson properly arranges. It is evident that the names
and May, which I and Steevens have added, were effaced in
the MS. In Twelfth Night (i. 5) we have a similar effacement
of names of speakers. In the following line 'love'
should be law, a change made by Hanmer.
Sc. 4.
"Is like a good thing, being often read,
Grown sear'd and tedious."
The folio has 'fear'd'; the correction is Warburton's.
It is a most unusual use of 'sear'd' in the sense of dry;
sear would seem less strange. So Heath also thought.
"To thy false seeming.—Blood thou art blood still!—
Let us write 'Good Angel' on the Devil's horn,
'Tis not the Devil's crest.... How now! Who's there?"
Pope read 'but blood'; Malone 'still blood.'
"As to put metal in restricted means."
It might be better to read, with Malone, moulds instead
of 'means.'
"Ha! say you so, then I shall pose you quickly."
"Now took your brother's life or to redeem him."
Here 'or' is a correction by Davenant and Rowe of and of
the folio.
"'Twere equal poise of sin and charity."
"If that be sin I'll make it my morn-prayer."
As Shakespeare has used 'morn' elsewhere but once in a
compound, it were better, as the metre requires, to read
'morning', as Hanmer also read.
"Or seem so, crafty; and that is not good."
Editors read 'craftily'; we might also read 'seeming.'
"Or seeming so in skill" (Winter's Tale, ii. 1); but no
change is necessary. The folio has 'that's'; hence the
reading of the editors, the Cambridge included.
"Proclaim an enshield beauty."
The word 'enshield' occurs nowhere else. It is of course,
as Steevens says, enshielded, covered with a shield. To this
there is no very great objection; but as elsewhere (Cor. iv.
6) the poet has 'inshell'd,' i.e. covered with a shell,
it
might be better to read so here also, as I find Tyrwhitt
has done.
"Than beauty could display'd.—But mark me now."
So I think we should read, and not 'displayed' and with
the metric accent on 'me.' Perhaps also for 'beauty' we
should read itself.
"But in the loss of question."
There is no need, with Johnson and others, to change
'loss'; it is quite correct. (See Index s. v. 'Lose.')
"No. Ignomy in ransom and free pardon
Are of two houses. Lawful mercy is
Nothing akin to foul redemption."
Sense and metre alike demand the negative, which had
evidently been effaced. Steevens also read 'akin.'
"Else let my brother die.—
If not a fedary but only he,
Owe and succeed thy weakness."
"A very obscure passage," says Mr. Dyce, "in which
Rowe printed 'by weakness,' and Malone proposes 'this
weakness.' (On 'fedary' see Richardson's Dictionary, sub
Federal.)" And this is all this noted critic has to say! For
my part I do not regard this passage as by any means past
cure, and I think that Warburton came very near the true
sense. The main point is to ascertain the exact meaning of
fedary. "Federy and federary," says Richardson, "in
Shakespeare are the same word differently written (having
no connexion whatever with Feud or Feudatory), and signify
a colleague, associate, or confederate;" and he refers to
Minshew, s. v. Feodarie. Now Minshew's words are "Feodarie
alias Feudaris alias Feudatrie, Feudelarius, is an office
authorized by the Master of the Court of Wards and Liveries
by letters patent, and under the seal of that office," etc.
Cotgrave has "A feodarie, feudal, feodal, feudataire;" in
both of which places I think the "connexion with Feud and
feudatory" is very apparent; and the last convinces me that
a fedary or feodary was a vassal, a liegeman; and that, I have
no doubt, is its sense in this place? and in Cymb. iii. 2, where
it again occurs, as I shall there show. I do not think
Richardson was at all justified in making, as he seems to do,
fedary a different word from feodary. There was also feodar
a vassal, "For seventeen kings were Carthage feodars."
(Marston. Sophon. Prol.) It must strike every one of taste
with surprise that Shakespeare should have written such a
leonine verse as
"If not a fedary, but only he."
And further, whether 'fedary' be vassal or confederate, the
person should be mentioned to whom he stood in that relation.
In the former sense—the only true one—that person
must be either Heaven or the Duke, which was omitted by
the printer. I am in favour of the former, both for metre-sake
and because we have elsewhere, "The rest of your fees,
O Gods! the senators of Athens" (Tim. iii. 5); and "God's
vassals drop and die" (Hen. V. iii. 2). I read thus:—
"We are all frail.—Isab. Else let my brother die.—
If not a fedary of Heaven, but only he,
Owe and succeed this weakness.... Ang. Nay, women are frail too."
Isabella replies at once, fully assenting to Angelo's observation.
After a brief pause, she is proceeding to reason on
the subject, when he interrupts her. We may observe that
'owe' and 'succeed' are legal terms, which here form a
hysteron-proteron, like some other common phrases. Perhaps,
indeed, we might transpose them; for Isabella is speaking
quite calmly and composedly. The change of 'thy' to
this is perfectly legitimate; and to may have been omitted or
effaced after 'succeed.'
"Who would believe me? Oh! these perilous mouths!"
The same addition was proposed by Mr. Seymour.
"To such abhorr'd pollution as this."
Though this addition is not absolutely necessary, it gives
such force to the sentiment that I willingly believe it may
have come from the poet's pen.
Sc. 1.
"Servile to all the skyey influences
That dost this habitation, where thou keepest,
Hourly afflict."
No doubt 'dost' may make some sense here, but do, or
rather, as more Shakesperian, doth, makes far better sense.
In Son. xxxix. there is the very same confusion of dost and
doth.
"For thy complexion shifts to strange effects."
Johnson read affects, which seems to be better.
"And Death unloads thee.—Friend hast thou none."
There might seem to be no need of adding anything here.
But we may see that there is not an end of a paragraph.
(See Introd. p. 82.) I therefore read, 'And Death in fine.'
"For all thy blessed youth
Becomes as aged, and doth beg the alms
Of palsied Eld."
No sense has been made of 'as aged,' which may therefore
be regarded as corrupt. As in Tr. and Cr. v. 3, as lawful
should be unlawful, I have here read in my Edition engaged
(also the reading of Mr. Staunton) in the sense of
dependent, in subjection, the ordinary state of youth under
the authority of parents and elders, depending on them for
money, etc. We might perhaps read as gaged in the same
sense, if we had examples. The Cambridge editors propose
abased, which is good, and might easily have become 'as
aged.' Possibly the poet wrote an abject, as we have, "We
are the Queen's abjects" (Rich. III. i. 1), and "I will make
thee stoop, thou abject" (Jonson, Ev. Man Out, etc., v. 3), "That
thou wilt never let me live to be An abject" (Chapman,
Hymn to Venus, v. 312), "Yea, the very abjects" (Ps.
xxxv. 15).
"What is yet in this
That bears the name of life? Yet in this life
Lie hid moe thousand deaths; yet death we fear."
For 'Yet,' caused by the other two, I read Yea; for 'moe'
some, not more, as is usual, and which makes no sense.
"Dear sir, ere long I'll visit thee again."
For 'sir' Mason, with whom I agree, reads son. Further
on in the scene the Duke calls him 'son.' (See on Cor. iii.
2.) It was perhaps the following line that suggested 'sir'
to the printer.
"Bring me to hear them speak."
So Steevens read, transposing the 'them' and 'me' of
the folio; and later editors have properly followed him.
"Now, sister, what's the comfort?—
Why, as all comforts are, most good, most good indeed."
This is the proper arrangement. Editors usually omit the
first 'most good,' to get their favourite decasyllabic verse,
heedless of the loss of force.
"Think you I can a resolution fetch
From flowery tenderness?"
It appears to me that a negative is required to make the
passage more correct and natural; and we know how frequently
it is omitted in these plays. Here, however, I
think, 'a' has been printed in its place (see on Twelfth
Night, ii. 2), for the compositor probably did not pronounce
the t in 'cannot,' and so made it 'can a.' I therefore read,
'I cannot resolution fetch.' Heath takes 'Think you' as
imperative, not interrogative, like Bethink you.
"Thou art too noble to preserve a life
In base appliances."
It might seem better to read By than 'In'; but it is not
safe to meddle with prepositions. See on iv. 4.
"Nips youth in the head, and follies doth enmew
As falcon doth the fowl."
It is the falcon, not the fowl, that is enmewed. Would
that every correction were as certain as that which I have
made here! I read, with the fullest confidence, enew. (See
Index s. v.) It is a most curious circumstance that in this
place of the MS. I unconsciously wrote bud for 'head,' a
correction which was afterwards given in Notes and Queries
(3rd S. v. 229), and had, I believe, been previously proposed
by Grey. If 'head' be the right reading, it may signify
the state of bloom. "That unmatch'd form and feature of
blown youth" (Ham. iii. 1).
"The prenzie Angelo!—
Oh! 'tis the cunning livery of Hell
The damnedst bodie to invest and cover
In prenzie gardes."
So the passage stands in the folio. As there is no such
word known in English as 'prenzie,' the 2nd folio read
princely, Hanmer priestly, which Mr. Dyce adopts. I think,
however, that the German Tieck hit on the right word, precise,
and I have so printed it without hesitation. We have
had already, "Lord Angelo is precise" (i. 4), "is severe"
(ii. 1), and "well-seeming" (iii. 1); but it is nowhere said
that he was princely or priestly, and surely the guards or
bindings of a dress could hardly be so termed. As to the
change of accent, which Mr. Dyce makes an objection, a
reader of our old poets should be ashamed to urge it, it is
of such frequent occurrence, and it occurs more than once
in this very play. In i. 2 we actually have "précise villains,"
and "A sort of sober, scurvy, precise neighbours"
(Jonson, Alch. i. 1). (See Introd. p. 80.) I further think we
should read 'bodies,' and with Collier's folio garbs, which
being spelt garbes differs only in one letter from 'gardes.'
As the latter were mere bindings, edgings, facings, they
could hardly be said to cover a body. The infinitives 'invest'
and 'cover' are used (as so frequently) where we now
use a participle with an article. See Introd. p. 70.
"Yes.—Has he affections in him?"
For 'Yes' the metre demands I will, as I have printed
it. See Introd. p. 68.
"That age, ache, penury, or imprisonment."
The folio reads perjury; 'penury' is the correction of the
2nd folio.
"Stead up your appointment, and go in your place."
Sc. 2.
"I drink, I eat, array myself, and live."
The folio reads away. Theobald's correction, 'array,' is
self-evident.
"You will not bail me then, sir? Neither then, Pompey, nor now."
Both metre and sense require Neither.
"Ha, what sayest thou, trot?"
I adopt Grey's reading, to't for 'trot.' He has just asked
a question, and he is repeating it.
"I know of none. Can you tell me of any?"
"And that he is a motion generative."
With Theobald I read 'ungenerative.'
"Yes, with your beggar of fifty, and his use was."
"And knowledge with dearer love."
The folio has deare; the obvious correction is Hanmer's.
With Hanmer I read not for 'now.'
"My lord, so please you, this friar hath been with him."
The metre requires this addition, which also relieves the
Provost's speech from abruptness.
"Of gracious order, late come from the See."
The folio reads Sea. This wrong spelling was not unusual.
In King John (iii. 1) we have 'holy Sea' used of
Canterbury. As 'See' never occurs thus alone, we might
read 'the Holy See,' or rather, as I have done, "the See of
Rome;" "I Pandulph ... Legate from the See of Rome."
(Old Play of King John.) For a similar effacement see Ant.
and Cleop. ii. 4.
"He who the sword of Heaven will bear
Must be as holy as severe;
Pattern in himself to know,
Grace to stand and virtue go."
The last line is evidently corrupt. I would read,
"In grace to stand, in virtue go,"
in which I had been anticipated by Johnson. We have
more than one instance of in being effaced in the beginning
of a line; and such having been the case here, the printer,
to get some appearance of sense, converted the remaining
'in' to and—also a usual change. 'To know,' 'to stand,'
'to go,' are equivalent to knowing, etc. (See Introd. p. 70.)
For 'know,' I, as well as Mr. Staunton, had conjectured
show; but no change is needed.
"How may likeness made in crimes,
Making practice on the times,
To draw with idle spider's strings
Most ponderous and substantial things!"
"A passage," says Mr. Dyce, "in which it seems hopeless
to ascertain what the poet really wrote." At all events, by
omitting 'To' in the third line we get excellent sense, and
what more need we require? After I had made this simple
emendation, I learned, to my great surprise—for the editors
gave no heed to it—that I had been anticipated in it by
Theobald. 'Draw' in the third line connects with 'may'
in the first; but the printer, taking 'practice' for a verb,
added 'To' to try to make sense. For 'making practice,'
see on All's Well, iv. 2. 'Likeness' is simulation: "Do
not assume my likeness," i.e. pretend to be like me. (Tim.
iv. 3.) "Thou simular of virtue." (Lear iii. 2.) The poet
probably wrote 'crime' and 'time.'
Sc. 1.
"There have I made my promise upon the
Heavy middle of the night to call upon him."
Capell, I think rightly, arranges thus:
"There have I made my promise to call upon him
Upon the heavy middle of the night."
Transpositions of this kind, made by the printers, are not
uncommon. (See on Tr. and Cr. v. 2.) Capell read 'on him.'
"Good Friar, I know you do, and I have found it."
So Pope also conjectured.
"Run with these false and most contrarious quest."
I incline to read their. The 2nd folio added s to 'quest.'
"Our corn's to reap, for yet our tithe's to sow."
Warburton properly read tilth.
Sc. 2.
"If it be too little for your thief," etc.
I quite agree with those who make this part of Abhorson's
speech.
"This is a gentle Provost. Seldom when."
Mr. Singer reads 'seldom-when' as one word, and quotes
in defence of it seldom-time, any-when, seldom-what; and he
might have added seld-when, from Gower's Conf. Amantis.
In any case, 'Tis seems wanting before it, as in "'Tis seldom
when the bee doth leave her comb" (2 Hen. IV. iv. 4).
"That wounds the unsisting postern with those strokes."
The printer, by a most common error, omitted re in unresisting.
Surely the critics in general should have seen this,
as Rowe did.
"This is his lordship's man."
The folio reads 'lord's man'; but both sense and metre
require the correction adopted by the editors, after Pope.
So Pope. The folio transposes 'Is' and 'It.' (See on
Two Gent. ii. 4.)
"As a man that apprehends death no more."
So I should have printed it, but did not.
"Perchance of the Duke's death, perchance his entering
into some monastery, but, by chance, nothing
of what's here writ."
Hanmer also added here.
Sc. 3.
"And to transport him in the mind he is in."
"And how shall we continue, Claudio."
Persons are not continued. Perhaps we should read
'continue to keep.'
"Ere twice the sun hath made his journal greeting
To the under generation, you shall find
Your safety manifested."
I adopt Hanmer's emendation, 'under' for 'yond' of the
folio. "The under-generation," says Mr. Dyce, "is the
human race that dwells under heaven." In Timon (i. 1) we
have "this beneath-world," i.e. this world under heaven.
"Quick, quick, despatch, and send the head to Angelo."
"By cold gradation and weal-balanc'd form."
Surely the correct reading is well. So also Rowe.
"Mark what I say, which you shall find to be
By every syllable a faithful verity."
"There to give up their power. If you can, pace your wisdom
In that good path, that I would wish it go in
And you shall have your bosom on the wretch."
The punctuation of the first line, which is that given by
the editors, while aiming at sense, makes it unreadable. We
should read "Pace, if you can, your wisdom." Or, retaining
this line unaltered, we might in the third line read Then
for 'And.' (See on M. N. D. ii. 1.)
"I am combined by a sacred vow."
As 'combined' makes no good sense, we might read constrained.
"But other vows constrain another course"
(Marston Ant. and Mel. II. v. 6). Perhaps the word was
confined, in the sense of limited, held in.
Sc. 4.
"How might she tongue me! Yet reason dares her no;
For my authority bears of a credent bulk,
That no particular scandal once can touch,
But it confounds the breather."
There is evidently something wrong here. What is the
meaning of 'dares?' Mr. Singer says overawes (as larks?),
and in proof of 'no' being crying No, he quotes: "I wear
a sword to satisfy the world no" (Fletch. Chances, iii. 4).
"I am sure he did it for I charged him no" (Id. Wife for
Month, iv. 3). In the next line Mr. Dyce reads so, others
such, for 'of.' My own decided opinion is, that in the first
line the poet wrote saies (says), which of course, being
written with a long s in the beginning, might easily be taken
for 'dares.' 'Says her no,' then, is forbids her, as in "Who
shall say me Nay?" (1 H. IV. iii. 1); "God defend his
Grace should say us Nay" (Rich. III. iii. 7); and in this
play (ii. 2), "Did I not tell thee Yea?" In the second line
I would omit 'of.' See on Rich. II. v. 1; Cymb. iii. 5.
"Might in the time to come have ta'en revenge
By so receiving," etc.
For 'By' we should apparently read For; yet in Jeronimo
(ii. 1) we have:—
"Kneel by thy father's loins, and thank my liege
By honouring me, thy mother, and thyself,
With this high staff of office."
Either, then, the printers made the same confusion in both
places, or by was used in the sense of for.
Sc. 5.
"To Valentius, to Rowland, and to Crassus."
In 'Valentius' an n may have been omitted.
Sc. 6.
"He says to veil his full purpose."
"The generous and gravest citizens
Have hent the gate; and very near upon this time
The Duke is entering. Therefore, hence away."
Something had evidently been lost at the end of the second
line. Perhaps also we should read 'The most generous.'
Sc. 1.
"Or wring redress from you. Hear me, O hear me here!"
For 'here' we might read hear; but no change is needed.
"Nay it is ten times true."
Perhaps it should be 'truer.'
"As ne'er I heard in madness."
"He did, my lord, most villainously. Believe it."
"First let her show her face."
It is your in the 1st folio; the correction was made in the
2nd.
"No, my lord.—Are you a maid then?—No, my lord."
"Not that I know of.—No! you say your husband."
"And punish them, unto your height of pleasure."
"We'll touze you
Joint by joint, but we'll know his purpose. What!
Unjust!—Be not so hot, sir; the Duke dare," etc.
For his in the second line we should certainly read your.
"Your well-defended honour, you must pardon him."
"A due sincerity govern'd his deeds, till he
Did look on me. Since it is so, let him not die.—
My brother had but justice, in that he did
The thing for which he died. For Angelo."
"Which is that Barnardine?—This is, my lord."
"Look that you love your wife; her worth's worth yours."
"Wherein have I deserved so of you?"
In the folio 'so deserv'd.'
"There's more behind that is more gratulate."
The poet may have written 'gratulating,' and the final
letters have been effaced. The meaning, however, is the
same.
Sc. 1.
"Their encounters, though not personal, have
been so royally attornied."
Both sense and metre require so, given in Collier's folio.
Sc. 2.
"When in Bohemia
You take my lord, I'll give him my commission
To let him there a month behind the gest
Prefix'd for his parting."
The third line has apparently no sense. The critics say
'let' is detain; but no instance of its use in that sense is to
be found. We might read sit, which occurs in the sense of
stay, dwell, live, as "I sit at ten pounds a week" (Mer.
Wives, i. 3); and we have "and sit him down and die"
(2 Hen. IV. iii. 1). We might also, and still better, read
set, which has nearly the same sense, settled, seated: "Being
unarm'd and set in secret shade" (F. Q. vi. 3, 8). "Whoever
shoots at him, I set him there" (All's Well, iii. 2). In
Fletcher's Nice Valour (iv. 1) Heath, followed by Dyce, reads
sets for 'lets' in "That lets it out, only for show or profit."
'Gest' (from giste, gîte, Fr.?) is used of the halting-places
on a royal progress. Singer quotes from Strype a request
from Cranmer to Cecil, "to let him have the new-resolved
upon gests from that time to the end, that he might know
from time to time where the king was." Hence it would
appear that there was a program of the gests, stating the
time of arrival at and departure from each of them. I have
therefore read 'gest-day,' supposing the last word, as usual,
to have been effaced. See Introd. p. 58.
"What lady she her lord."
I read soe'er for 'she.' "What bloody work soe'er" (Othel.
iii. 3).
"The doctrine of ill-doing nor dream'd we even."
The usual reading is 'no nor,' that of the 2nd folio.
"Of my young play-fellow.—Good grace to boot!"
"You may ride us
With a soft kiss a thousand furlongs ere
With spur we heat an acre."
The phraseology here is evidently that of the race-course,
where a heat is a race. I read 'we heat us.' The phrase is
elliptic, the full phrase being 'We heat us by running over
an acre of ground.'
"May it be?—
Affection! thy intention stabs the centre."
So I would point, with Steevens; in the folio it is "May
it be affection?" The whole passage is rather obscure.
'Affection' is imagination, fancy (see Index s. v.); and the
meaning seems to be that it stretches to (expressed by intention),
and stabs, or pierces, even the centre of the earth.
"Looking on the lines
Of my boy's face methought I did recoil
Twenty-three years."
The folio reads 'methoughts,' and a MS. correction, followed
by Mr. Collier, my thoughts; but 'recoil' is always a
neuter verb in Shakespeare.
"He makes a July's day short as December's."
"With all the nearest things to my heart as well as."
"Resides not in that man that does not think it."
This is the reading of the 2nd folio also.
"Why he that wears her like her medal hanging
About his neck."
"That like a jewel has hung twenty years
About his neck."
Hen. VIII. ii. 2.
With Collier's folio, I read a for 'her.' The error, suggested
by the preceding 'her,' is an ordinary one with
printers.
"With the pin and the web, but theirs, theirs only."
In Florio a cataract in the eye is termed "a pin and a web."
"Is goads, is thorns, is nettles, tails of wasps."
"I am appointed by him to murder you."
The 'appointed him' of the folio is a strange expression.
"That e'er was heard or read of. Swear his thought over
By each particular star."
This, if correct, would seem to mean exorcise his thought,
try to banish it.
"Profess'd love to him, why his revenges must
In that be made more bitter. Fear o'ershades me.
Good expedition be my friend, and comfort
The gracious queen."
How could his expedition or haste to depart comfort the
queen? It would seem to have the contrary effect, as tending
to prove her guilt. For 'and' in the third line we
might, with Singer, read God, or, as I have done, with Hanmer,
Heaven. The insertion of love in the first line seems
necessary.
Sc. 1.
"And why so, my dear lord?—Not for because."
"Or a half-moon made with a pen.—Who taught you this?"
"All's true that is mistrusted."
For 'is' it might be better to read was. The change was
not unusual.
"Has made thee swell thus.—But I'd say he had not."
Has might seem to have been the poet's word.
"More, she's a traitor; and Camillo is
A federary with her, and one that knows her
To be what she should shame to know herself,
But with her most vile principal."
'Federary' is an unknown word. It may be a printer's
error for federate; but I rather think—as I find that Malone,
followed by Singer and Dyce, reads, and which is also more
metrical—that the right word is fedary, to be taken in the
same sense as in Meas. for Meas. and Cymb. As Polyxenes
is styled 'her principal,' the meaning may be that she (and
Camillo 'with her') had transferred her allegiance to him.
"You did mistake,—No, no, if I mistake."
As 'land-damn' seems to be an unknown term, it might
be better to read, with Collier's folio, lamback, derived perhaps
from lambiccare, It. There is also a vulgar term lambaste.
'Damn' was probably suggested by the same word
in the preceding line.
Sc. 3.
"We have always truly served you and beseech you."
"They have been absent. 'Tis good speed, and foretells."
We might also read it; or, with Pope, 'This good speed.'
Sc. 2.
"This sessions—to our great grief we pronounce it."
"To prate and talk for life and honour 'fore
Who please to come and hear."
We might be inclined to read plead for 'prate'; but no
change is required.
"Since he came
With what encounter so uncurrent I
Have strain'd to appear thus."
I read 'have I Strain'd to appear thus?' in which I had
been anticipated by Hanmer. An 'uncurrent encounter'
was an unusual kind of meeting; and 'strain'd' signifies
pulled against the line of my duty as a wife—a metaphor
taken from dogs in a leash—
"What I was I am,
More straining on for plucking back, not following
My leash unwillingly" (iv. 3).
It might also signify, acted indecorously, "Unless he know
some strain in me that I know not myself." Merry Wives, ii. 1.
"You will not own it.—More than I am mistress of."
So also Hanmer corrected.
"Thy brat hath been cast out, like to itself,
No father owning it."
If we read 'left to itself' we might get better sense.
"But yet hear this; mistake me not. No! life—
I prize it not a straw.... But, for mine honour."
So we may best punctuate, with Hanmer. We might
perhaps read 'For life,' as above.
"Which you knew great, and to the hazard boldly."
The 2nd folio reads 'certain hazard.'
"What studied torments, tyrant, hast thou for me?
What wheels? what racks? what fires? what flaying, boiling,
In leads or oils?"
See above, i. 2. Introd. p. 55.
"Who is lost too. Take your patience to you, sir."
Sc. 3.
"Which may, if Fortune please, both breed thee, pretty one."
So Rowe also.
"A boy or a child, I wonder."
I think we should read 'maid-child', a term we meet with
in Pericles, v. 3. We have man-child in Cor. i. 3, and in the
Bible. I made the correction without being aware of the
passage in Pericles.
In the folio it is mad; but this correction, given by Theobald,
is indubitable.
"Chorus. To the effects of his fond jealousy, so grieving."
"If never yet, that Time himself doth say,
He wishes earnestly you never may."
This is evidently one of the cases in which 'that' has
taken the place of than, then. See Introd. p. 68.
Sc. 1.
"but I fear the angle, that plucks my son
thither."
I adopt Theobald's reading of and for 'but.'
Sc. 2.
"Within a mile of where my land and living lies."
Sc. 3.
"I should blush
To see you so attired; sworn, I think,
To show myself a glass."
For 'sworn' Theobald, followed by Singer and Dyce,
reads swoon; but the text is right; 'myself' is simply me:
"Upon my life she finds, although I cannot,
Myself to be a marvellous proper man."
Rich. III. i. 2.
"He will the rather do it when he sees
Ourselves well-sinewed to our defence."
King John, v. 7.
"Burn hotter than my faith does.—Oh! but, sir."
"One of these two necessities must be."
So also Hanmer read. (See on Temp. ii. 1.) The folio has
'must be necessities.'
"On his shoulder and on his, her face of fire."
"As your good flock shall prosper.—Sir, welcome."
A syllable is lost apparently. We might add hither or to
us at the end, or, as I have done,'you're welcome.' Malone
would read 'welcome, sir,' which sounds rather flat. Mr.
Collier observes that "Shakespeare [i.e. the printer?]
was a better judge of verse than Mr. Malone."
"From Dis's waggon! daffodils."
An epithet, probably yellow, which I have given, has evidently
been lost here. All the other flowers, we may see,
have epithets. Coleridge also saw the want, and supplied
golden. How ill-qualified he was for emendatory criticism!
Hanmer's early was much better.
"Nothing but that, but so move still, still so."
"And the true blood that peeps fairly through it."
Collier's folio makes a natural and obvious correction,
reading 'so fairly.' The usual reading is that of Steevens,
a transposition of 'peeps' and 'fairly,' and I have retained it.
"Nothing she does or seems
But smacks of something greater than herself."
Here again the same folio makes the correction says
for 'seems'; yet it is not very necessary.
"He tells her something
That makes her blood look on it."
This is probably the genuine text; but 'wakes her blood.
Look on it!' the reading of Collier's folio, is very plausible.
It is strange that neither Singer nor Dyce notice this reading.
They read with Theobald 'look out.'
"Pray you, good shepherd, what fair swain is this,
That dances with your daughter?—
They call him Doricles, and he boasts himself
To have a worthy feeding. I have it but
Upon his own report, and I believe it."
Steevens, quoting passages from Drayton, explains 'feeding'
in the sense of pasture, and Mason explains 'worthy'
as valuable, substantial; but neither is convincing. I would,
with Hanmer, read 'breeding:'
"A gentleman, I do assure myself,
And of a worthy breeding, though he hide it."
Fletcher, Monsieur Thomas, i. 1.
In reading 'I have it but' for 'but I have it' of the
folio, I am supported by Hunter and Singer.
"Who loves another best."
Hanmer and Mason would read 'the other,' and so we
should say now; but there is no need of change. It was, in
fact, the language of the time; we should still say, "they
love one another."
"Come, buy of me, come buy, come buy, come buy!
Buy lads, or else your lasses cry. Come buy!"
"Clamour your tongues and not a word more."
Grey proposed Charm for 'Clamour,' and in Othello (v. 2)
we have the very phrase, "charm your tongue." But, as far
as I have observed, charm in this sense is used only by characters
of the educated class. Singer says 'clamour' here
is a mere corruption of chamour, chaumer, or chaumbre, from
the French chômer, 'to refrain,' and he adds, "Mr. Hunter
has cited a passage from Taylor, the water-poet, in which
the word was thus again perverted:—'Clamour the promulgation
of your tongue.'" For my own part I think that,
except in orthography, the text is right. The real word
was probably clammer or clemmer, the same as the simple
clam or clem, to squeeze or press, and the phrase answers to
Hold your tongues. "To clam a bell," says Johnson, "is to
cover the dapper with felt, which drowns the blow and
hinders the sound." As for the extract from Taylor, I
attach little importance to it, as he probably adopted the
word from this very passage. See on Rom. and Jul. iii. 3.
"Why, sir, they stay at door."
The folio places 'sir' at the end of the speech; but the
metre requires the transposition, which also makes the reply
run more naturally. I neglected to make it in my Edition.
"Can he speak? hear?
Know man from man? dispute his own estate?"
In Romeo and Juliet (iii. 3) we have, "Let me dispute
with thee of thy estate;" but in Jonson's Fox, iii. 2,
"Read you the principles, argued all the grounds,
Disputed every fitness, every grace."
"Far than Deucalion off."
'Far' is an old form for farther, as near is of nearer. (See
Rich. II. iii. 2, v. 1.) We need not then read farther, nor,
with Johnson, 'Far as.'
"Or hoop his body more with thy embraces."
The folio has 'hope,' the orthography of the time.
"Looks on it alike. Will't please you, sir, begone?"
"To die upon the bed my father died on."
"And most opportune to our need I have."
For 'our' the folio reads her, probably from the preceding
line. Theobald made the correction.
"His welcomes forth; asks thee, the son, forgiveness."
The folio has there for 'the.' The correction was made
in the 3rd folio.
"She is as forward of her breeding as
She's in the rear of our birth."
"And then your blood had been the dearer by I know
not how much an ounce."
Hanmer added the negative.
"Besides the King to effect your suits, here is the man shall do."
Sc. 1.
"Destroyed the sweetest companion that e'er man
Bred his hopes out of.—True, too true, my lord."
The folio gives 'True' to the King. See on As You Like
It, ii. 1. Ant. and Cleop. ii. 2.
"Was like to be the best.—My good Paulina."
"Would make her sainted spirit
Again possess her corpse, and on this stage,
Where we offenders now appear, soul-vex'd,
And begin, Why to me?...—Had she such power
She had just such cause."
In the third line I adopt, with Mr. Dyce, the certain, as I
think, emendation of Mr. Spedding, 'Where we offend
her,' and I join 'now' with it. Offender and offend her are
pronounced exactly alike, and 'we' caused the printer to add
s. In the last line 'such,' caused by that in the preceding
line, is superfluous, and should be omitted.
"Will have your tongue too. This is a creature who."
"Whose daughter
His tears proclaim'd his, parting with her."
I would read, as I find Thirlby read, her for the second
'his,' caused probably by the first.
"Give you all greetings that a king at friend."
The 2nd folio reads needlessly 'as friend.'
"Which lames Report to follow it, and undoes Description to do it justice."
This last word, added by Singer, is required both by sense
and metre.
"That she might no more be in danger of losing her."
"And caught the water, though not the fish."
"And himself little better, and extremity of weather continuing."
Sc. 3.
"On those that think it is unlawful business."
Hanmer properly read Or for 'On.'
"Strike all that look upon you with marvel. Come."
"This is your son-in-law,
And son unto the king, who, heavens directing,
Is troth-plight to your daughter."
So it should be punctuated. The folio reads 'whom,'
confounding, as usual, who and whom; of which there are
other instances in this play. See Introd. p. 59.
Sc. 1.
"Mercy on us!
We split, we split! farewell, my wife and children!
Farewell, my brother! we split, we split, we split!"
This is, beyond question, "the confused noise within,"
and not the exclamation of Gonzalo, of whose family we
hear nothing. Speaking behind the scenes was not unusual.
"Long heath, brown furze."
As the epithets are here most inappropriate, we should
probably transpose them, as I have done (see on iv. 1); for
heath is brown, and "they were in a clump or cluster of
tall furze," says Scott (Redgauntlet, ch. xvi.). We might
also transpose the substantives (see on Twelfth Night, i. 2,
and on M. N. D. ii. 1). Hanmer proposed to read "Ling,
heath, broom, furze;" and this reading Mr. Dyce adopts;
but ling was probably a word unknown to the poet, and it
is only another name for heath.
Sc. 2.
"Who had no doubt some noble creature in her."
If 'creature' is not a collective, it is a misprint for 'creatures.'
"Was duke of Millaine, and his only heir
And princess, no worse issued."
Pope read, I think correctly, 'A princess.' We have,
"And marriage" for "A marriage" (Hen. VIII. ii. 4). See
also on Jul. Cæs. v. 2.
"And to my state grew stranger."
We should perhaps read 'a stranger.'
"I, thus neglecting worldly ends, all dedicate[d]."
So also Ritson. See Rom. and Jul. i. 1.
"Was dukedom large enough for; of temporal royalties."
"Than other princess can, that have more time
For vainer hours, and tutors not so careful."
As the plural of 'princess' does not occur in Shakespeare,
and a plural seems required here, I suspect that 'princess'
may be a collective. (See Introd. p. 70.) For 'hours' we might
read joys, i.e. enjoyments. Still the passage may be as the
poet wrote it.
"I find my zenith doth depend upon
A most auspicious star."
I am not sufficiently versed in astrology to determine
whether 'zenith' be right or not.
"Yea, his dread trident shake.—That's my brave spirit!"
Like the subsequent "Why, that's my spirit!" and
"That's my noble master!" So also Hanmer.
"Some trick of desperation. All but the mariners."
"Bound sadly home for Naples, supposing that
They saw the king's ship wrack'd, and his great person perish."
This is undoubtedly the proper arrangement.
"Of the salt deep, to run upon the sharp
Wind of the north, to do me business in
The veins of the earth, when it is bak'd with frost.—
I do not, sir.—Thou liest, malignant thing!
Hast thou forgot the foul witch, Sycorax,
Who with age and envy was grown into a hoop?
Hast thou forgot her?—No, sir.—Thou hast. Where was she born?"
So we should arrange the whole passage.
"Come forth, thou tortoise! When?"
Steevens made the same addition.
"Drop on you both! a south-west wind blow on ye!"
As north, south, etc., were not used alone of the wind, I
have added wind, which also gives energy to the expression,
which is tame and feeble, if the metric accent fall on 'ye.'
See on Twelfth Night, i. 1.
"Oho! oho! I would it had been done!"
Steevens properly made this a parenthesis. 'Whist' is
whisted, hushed. "The moisting air was whist, no leaf ye
could have moving seen." Golding, Ovid, p. 81.
"Of his bones are corals made."
"Make the prize light. One word more, sir. I charge thee."
"The wrack of all my friends, nor this man's threats,
To whom I am subdued, are but light to me."
For 'nor' Steevens read or; we might also read and or
nay; but perhaps it is as it was written. For 'are,' too, the
proper word would be were.
Sc. 1.
"Beseech you, sir, be merry; you have cause
Of joy:—so have we all; for our escape," etc.
I make the transposition of "So have we all—of joy," in
the second line boldly; for surely neither Shakespeare nor
any other writer would put a parenthesis between a noun
and its genitive. Gonzalo is speaking quite calmly, and
without any perturbation. We have an exactly similar
printer's error in
"Add more,
From thine invention, offers."
Ant. and Cleop. iii. 10.
"One of these two must be necessities."
Wint. Tale, iv. 3.
See also Hen. VIII. iii. 1.
"Every day some sailor's wife,
The master's of some merchant—and the merchant
Have just our theme of woe."
The word 'merchant' occurs here in two different senses;
and when this play was written Shakespeare had long since
abstained from such practices. One of them, therefore, must
belong to the printer; if the first, then we might, and I think
should, read vessel, if the second, owner. 'Merchant' certainly
occurs in the sense of merchantman. See B. and F. Coxcomb,
i. 3.
"Ant. Ha, ha, ha! So you're paid."
Theobald's arrangement; the folio gives 'So,' etc., to Seb.
"To the shore that o'er his wave-worn basis bow'd,
As stooping to relieve him."
Possibly the poet wrote receive, which seems more appropriate.
"Weigh'd, between loathness and obedience, at
Which end o' the beam should bow."
The editors in general read, with Malone, she'd for 'should';
but surely she was not the balance. We get very good sense
by omitting either 'at' or 'o'; in my Edition I have, as
Pope had done, omitted the latter; for o', or of, was sometimes
added by the printers. (See on M. for M. iv. 4.)
'Weigh'd' is pondered.
"Boürn or bound of land, tilth, vineyard, none."
Editors have taken strange liberties with the whole of this
passage. Here they omit 'Bourne.'
"Will you laugh me asleep? for I am very heavy.—
Go sleep, and hear us not."
It is very strange that none of the editors should have
seen that the negative had been effaced or omitted. Surely
the very last thing that Antonio could have wished was that
he should hear them; and how could he if he went to sleep?
Not, we may also see, is required by the metre. The latter
part may be a half-aside.
"I am more serious than my custom, you
Must be so too; if you heed me; which to do."
"The setting of thine eye and cheek proclaims."
"Which throes thee much to yield.—Thus, sir."
Perhaps to complete the measure and improve the sense
we should add, I say. The folio spells 'throes' throwes.
"Be rough and razorable; she that from whom
We all were sea-swallow'd, though some cast again—
And by that destiny—to perform an act."
Though in my Edition I have not altered the text, I think
we should read 'from whom coming' with Singer; 'we
were all,' and 'cast up.' Musgrave proposed 'destin'd,' which
is probably right. Rowe, followed by the other editors,
omitted 'that' in the first line.
"Twenty consciences
That stand 'twixt me and Milan, candied be they
And melt ere they molest!"
I must confess I do not clearly understand this passage.
Surely as he was, as he had just said, in actual possession of
Milan, his conscience could not 'stand' between him and
it. Perhaps, however, we are to view 'stand' as in the
conjunctive mood, and expressing a condition. Neither do
I see clearly the meaning of 'candied' and 'melt' in this
place.
"That's verily. 'Tis best we stand upon our guard."
Pope's reading, verity, is most certain. "'Tis verity, I
assure you" (Mass. New Way, etc. i. 1).
Sc. 2.
"And another tempest a brewing."
"Young scamels from the rock."
Theobald, in my mind most properly, proposed sea-mells,
of the existence of which term Malone and Reed have given
abundant proofs; by the usual change of l to w we have sea-mew,
the term now in use. Yet some editors persist in retaining
the old printer's error, as limpets are in some places
called scams or scammels, not reflecting that old limpets are
to be preferred. Mr. Dyce reads staniels, after another conjecture
of Theobald's.
"Nor scrape trencher nor wash dish."
In the folio it is 'trenchering,' caused by the participles in
the preceding line.
Sc. 1.
"Point to rich ends. This my mean task
Would be as heavy to me, as odious; but."
The first line here is short, which it should not be, as it
does not begin or end a paragraph. (See Introd. p. 82.) We
should therefore arrange thus:
"Point to rich ends. This my mean task would be
As heavy to me as 'tis odious; but."
It is very remarkable that I never noticed this until after
my Edition had been printed. However, I rectified it in the
corrections.
"But these sweet thoughts do even refresh my labours,
Most busy, lest when I do it...."
This punctuation removes all difficulty. The entrance of
Miranda causes him to break off.
"So perfect and so peerless are created."
The folio reads peetiesse. It escaped the Camb. editors.
"And would no more endure
This wooden slavery, than to suffer
The flesh-fly blow my mouth."
Though, as Malone has shown, this construction is quite
correct, still, as Pope also saw, the metre demands 'than I
would suffer.' In the Maid's Tragedy (iv. 2) we have
"'Tis fit an old man and a counsellor
To fight for what he says,"
where we must either read 'fit for,' or 'should fight,' to
make any sense.
"Beyond all limit of what's else in the world."
"Much business appertaining to my project."
"Now does my project gather to a head."—v. 1.
Sc. 2.
"As you like this give me the lie another time."
Perhaps for 'As' we should read An.
"Trin. Wilt come? I'll follow, Stephano."
The first sentence here belongs, I think, to Stephano's last
speech. See on As You Like it, ii. 1.
Sc. 3.
"If I should say I saw such islanders."
The folio has 'islands.' So in the Queen of Corinth (iii. 1),
"Our neighbour islands would make of us." In both
places sense and metre alike require islanders.
"I cannot too much muse ...
Such shapes, such gesture, and such sound, expressing—
Although they want the use of tongue—a kind
Of excellent dumb discourse."
"They vanished strangely.—'Tis no matter, since."
"Each putter out of five for one."
We should perhaps read on for 'of'; or, with Thirlby and
Malone, transpose 'five' and 'one,' of which both Gifford
and Dyce approved. Yet it may be that no change is necessary,
for of and on are constantly used interchangeably, and
o' stands for both. The 'of' of the text may, however,
have been caused by the initial letter of the following word.
"I will stand to and feed," etc.
Mason arranged thus:—
"I will stand to and feed, although my last.
No matter, since I feel the best is past.
Brother, my lord the duke, stand to and do as we."
Mr. Dyce properly rejects this arrangement, but on the last
line he observes "They cannot with any propriety be reduced
to a single line." Was Mr. Dyce unaware of the existence
of six-foot lines in these plays? The true reason for rejecting
this arrangement is, that in this play Shakespeare does
not employ couplets.
"Hath caused to belch you up, and on this island."
The first folio has 'up you'; the necessary and obvious
transposition was made in the fourth. Some editors, most
unjustifiably, throw out 'you.'
"One dowle that's in my plume."
For 'dowle' I read with confidence down, believing it to
be a printer's error for dowlne, a mode of spelling down:
"There lies a dowlney feather, which stirs not.
Did he suspire, that light and weightless dowlne
Perforce must move."
2 Hen. IV. iv. 2, fol.
Singer refers to dictionaries, etc., of the 17th century for the
use of dowle; but they all probably found it only in this
place.
Sc. 1.
"Have given you here a third of my own life."
For 'third,' which might easily have been a printer's
error for thrid, i.e. thread, editors in general follow Theobald
in reading this last word. It is easy to conceive how
Miranda might be regarded as a thread or integral portion
of her father's life, but not how she could be a third of it.
"Do not smile at me that I boast her of."
Of course Shakespeare wrote 'of her.' The editors, without,
I believe, an exception, have 'boast her off'—a phrase
unknown to the poet—introduced by the editor of the 2nd
folio, who had little or no idea of emendation by transposition.
"The strongest suggestion
Our worser Genius can, shall never melt
Mine honour into lust."
As it is difficult to make any good sense here of 'can'
alone, we should perhaps read 'can make', or 'can give,'
making 'Genius' a trisyllable, and the line of six feet.
"Or night kept chain'd below.—'Tis fairly spoke."
"Thy banks with pioned and twilled brims."
'Banks' may be either the margins of streams or hillocks,
or slight elevations of land; but 'brims,' which can only be
the edges or margins of hollows, shows that it is the former
that is meant. 'Pioned' seems to be a word of Shakespeare's
own creation; for, finding the word pioneer in common
use, and pyonings—a word of Spenser's coinage—in the
Faerie Queen (ii. 10. 63) signifying defences, the work of
pioneers, he thought himself at liberty to form a verb pion.
This is generally taken to mean dig; and 'twilled' is supposed
to be a term transferred from cloth, etc., and signifying
ridged; and so the passage is made to mean dug, and laid
out in ridges, which, however, hardly accords with the context.
Steevens, on the other hand, read 'pioned and lilied';
but neither the piony nor the lily can properly be regarded
as a wild flower (though the former is said to grow on the
Severn), and such only could be meant here. Others again for
'twilled' read tilled, or give strange meanings to 'twilled.'
My own opinion is, that the sense which Shakespeare gave
to his 'pioned' was fenced, and that 'twilled' was a
printer's error. We may observe that 'and twilled' is pronounced
an twilled, which differs very slightly in sound from
'and willow'd.' (See Introd. p. 52.) By reading, then, "Thy
banks with pioned and willow'd brims" we get most excellent
sense, the idea in the poet's mind being the bank of a
stream, fenced, as it were, and secured against overflow, with
a range of willows along its edge, and 'betrimmed,' i.e.
adorned, with primroses, violets, and other wild flowers;
for "April showers bring forth May flowers." I have not
hesitated to make this correction in my Edition.
"To make cold nymphs chaste crowns."
In my Edition I have here transposed the adjectives (See
on i. 1). We are to take 'cold,' as so frequently, in the sense
of cool, which agrees well with flowers growing on the edge
of a stream, while it seems absurd to term them 'chaste.'
'Nymphs' is evidently maidens; for if the Naiades were
meant there would be an article.
"Summon'd me hither to this short-grass'd green."
This must be the right reading, as the folio has gras'd.
Some would read graz'd, which can hardly be right.
"And the broom groves
Whose shadow the dismissed bachelor loves."
For 'broom' Hanmer read brown, which I have adopted;
though contrary to my rule (see Introd. p. 51), as I have met
no earlier authority for this use of brown than Milton. The
poet's word may have been broad or trim. The broom
never attains a height to justify the terming it a 'grove.'
Dyer, a good authority, has in his Fleece "low-tufted
broom," and Bloomfield (Rural Tales) "tufts of green
broom," both using the proper term. I doubt if 'grove'
is ever used of any but forest-trees.
"Spring come to you at the farthest,
In the very end of harvest."
No one has ever made, or can make, sense of this. For
'Spring' Collier's folio reads Rain—no great improvement.
The fact is, as the context plainly shows, that the poet's
word was Shall. With this simple change the whole passage
becomes clear and grammatical, and forms a parallel to
the fairy-blessing at the end of Mids. Night's Dream.
"So rare a wonder'd father and a wise."
Some copies of the folio read 'wife' for 'wise'; which
has become the general reading, even that of the Cambridge
Edition. I prefer, as more Shakespearian, the other reading,
which is also that of all the succeeding folios.
"Makes this place paradise—O sweet, now silence."
"You nymphs, called Naiads of the winding brooks,
With your sedg'd crowns and ever harmless looks."
The word in the folio is windring; so it is doubtful whether
we should read winding or wandering. 'Sedg'd' may have
been sedge; for the sound is exactly the same in this place.
"You do look in a mov'd sort, my son."
The folio reads "my son, in a moved sort."
"Leave not a wrack behind."
This is undoubtedly the true reading. The folio has racke,
but instances of this error are common. See my note on
Milton's Par. Reg. iv. 452. We have wrack for rack in
"Even like a man new-haled from the wrack."
1 Hen. VI. ii. 5.
"Humanly speaking all, all lost, quite lost."
With Malone, I read are for the second 'all.' In the
same way we have "sir, sir," in All's Well, v. 2.
"O good my lord, give me thy favour still."
"Let us alone,
And do the murder first."
With Theobald I read 'Let us along,' which connects so
well with what follows: we have this very expression in
Wint. Tale, v. 2; and see on L. L. L. iv. 3. Hanmer read
'Let it alone.'
"Make us strange stuff ..."
"Hey, Fury, Fury! there, Tyrant, there! hark, hark!"
Sc. 1.
"Just as you left them. All are prisoners, sir."
"A solemn air and the best comforter
To an unsettled fancy cure thy brains, that,
Now useless, boil within thy skull."
It is better, I think, to correct thus than, with the editors,
to read 'boil'd.'
"My true preserver, and a loyal sir
To him thou followest."
"That sir that serves and seeks for gain."
Lear, ii. 4.
"A lady to the worthiest sir that ever
Country call'd his."
Cymb. i. 7.
Still I think that the final syllable of servant may have been
effaced.
"You, brother mine that entertain ambition."
This is the reading of the folio, and I see no need of reading
with editors 'entertain'd.'
"That yet looks on me, or would know me."
With Collier's folio I read e'er for 'or.'
"How thou hast met us here, whom three hours since
Were wrack'd upon this shore."
This is a remarkable instance of the use of whom for who
in the nominative. See W. Tale, ad fin.
"Where we in all our trim freshly beheld
Our royal, good, and gallant ship."
For 'our' in the first line we must of course read her
with Thirlby and Theobald. It was probably caused by the
'Our' of the next line; but from similarity of pronunciation
our is sometimes confounded with her and a.
"Ever in a dream were we divided from them."
For 'them' we should perhaps read her.
"This is a strange thing as e'er I look'd on."
With Capell I read 'as strange a.' We have just had
"This is as strange a maze as e'er men trod."
"That is thy charge; then to the elements."
I confidently read 'element,' that is air, his return to
which had been already promised him.