Vol. I
THE TEMPEST
I.i (4,2) [Enter a Ship-master and a Boatswain] In this naval
dialogue, perhaps the first example of sailor's language exhibited on
the stage, there are, as I have been told by a skilful narrator, some
inaccuracies and contradictory orders.
I.i.8 (4,4) [blow, till thou burst thy wind, if room enough] Perhaps it
might be read,—blow till thou burst, wind, if room enough.
I.i.30 (5,5) It may be observed of Gonzalo, that, being the only good
man that appears with the king, he is the only man that preserves his
cheerfulness in the wreck, and his hope on the island.
I.i.52 (6,7) [set her two courses; off to sea again] The courses are the
main-sail and fore-sail. This term is used by Raleigh, in his
Discourse on Shipping.
I.i.63 (6,9)
[He'll be hang'd yet;
Though every drop of water swear against it,
And gape at wid'st to glut him.]
Shakespeare probably wrote, t'englut him, to swallow him; for which I
know not that glut is ever used by him. In this signification
englut, from engloutir, French, occurs frequently, as in Henry VI.
"—Thou art so near the gulf
Thou needs must be englutted."
And again in Timon and Othello. Yet Milton writes glutted offal for
swallowed, and therefore perhaps the present text may stand.
I.i.65 (7,1) [Farewell, brother!] All these lines have been hitherto
given to Gonzalo, who has no brother in the ship. It is probable
that the lines succeeding the confused noise within should be
considered as spoken by no determinate characters, but should be
printed thus.
1 Sailor. Mercy on us!
We split, we split!
2 Sailor. Farewell, my, &c.
3 Sailor. Brother, farewell, &c. (see 1765, I,6,6)
I.ii.15 (8,3) [Mira. O, woe the day! Pro. No harm, I have done nothing
but in care of thee] I know not whether Shakespeare did not make Miranda
speak thus:
O, woe the day! no harm?
To which Prospero properly answers:
I have done nothing but in care of thee.
Miranda, when he speaks the words, O, woe the day! supposes, not
that the crew had escaped, but that her father thought differently
from her, and counted their destruction no harm.
I.ii.27 (8,4) [virtue of compassion] Virtue; the most efficacious
part, the energetic quality; in a like sense we say, The virtue
of a plant is in the extract.
I.ii.29 (8,5)
[I have with such provision in mine art
So safely order'd, that there is no soul—
No, not so much perdition as an hair,
Betid to any creature in the vessel]
Thus the old editions read, but this is apparently defective.
Mr. Rowe, and after him Dr. Warburton, read that there is no
soul lost, without any notice of the variation. Mr. Theobald
substitutes no foil, and Mr. Pope follows him. To come so near
the right, and yet to miss it, is unlucky: the author probably
wrote no soil, no stain, no spot: for so Ariel tells,
Not a hair perish'd;
On their sustaining garments not a blemish,
But fresher than before.
And Gonzalo, The rarity of it is, that our garments being
drench'd in the sea, keep notwithstanding their freshness and
glosses. Of this emendation I find that the author of notes
on The Tempest had a glimpse, but could not keep it.
I.ii.58 (10,7) [and thy father Was duke of Milan, thou his only
heir] Perhaps—and thou his only heir.
I.ii.83 (11,1)
[having both the key
Of officer and office, set all hearts i' the state
To what tune pleas'd his ear]
Key in this place seems to signify the key of a musical instrument,
by which he set Hearts to tune.
I.ii.93 (11,2) [and my trust,Like a good parent, did beget of him
A falshood] Alluding to the observation, that a father above the
common rate of men has commonly a son below it. Heroum filii
noxae.
I.ii.155 (14,6) [deck'd the sea] To deck the sea, if explained, to
honour, adorn, or dignify, is indeed ridiculous, but the original
import of the verb deck is, to cover; so in some parts they
yet say deck the table. This sense nay be borne, but perhaps
the poet wrote fleck'd, which I think is still used in rustic
language of drops falling upon water. Dr. Warburton reads
mock'd, the Oxford edition brack'd. (see 1765, I,13,5)
I.ii.185 (15,8) [Thou art inclin'd to sleep: 'tis a good dulness]
Dr. Warburton rightly observes, that this sleepiness, which
Prospero by his art had brought upon Miranda, and of which he
knew not how soon the effect would begin, makes him question
her so often whether she is attentive to his story.
I.ii.196 (16,1) [I boarded the king's ship: now on the beak] The
beak was a strong pointed body at the head of the ancient gallies;
it is used here for the forecastle, or the bolt-sprit.
I.ii.197 (16,2) [Now in the waste] The part between the quarter-deck
and the forecastle.
I.ii.209 (16,3) [Not a soul But felt a fever of the mad] In all the
later editions this is changed to a fever of the mind, without
reason or authority, nor is any notice given of an alteration.
I.ii.218 (17,4) [On their sustaining garments not a blemish Thomas
Edwards' MSS: sea-stained] This note of Mr. Edwards, with which
I suppose no reader is satisfied, shews with how much greater
ease critical emendations are destroyed than made, and how
willingly every man would be changing the text, if his imagination
would furnish alterations. (1773)
I.ii.239 (19,7) [What is the time o' the day?] This passage needs
not be disturbed, it being common to ask a question, which the
next moment enables us to answer; he that thinks it faulty may
easily adjust it thus:
Pro. What is the time o' the day? Past the mid season.
Ari. At least two glasses.
Pro. The time 'twixt six and now—
I.ii.250 (19,8) [Pro. Dost thou forget From what a torment I did
free thee?] That the character and conduct of Prospero may be
understood, something must be known of the system of enchantment,
which supplied all the marvellous found in the romances
of the middle ages. This system seems to be founded on the
opinion that the fallen spirits, having different degrees of
guilt, had different habitations allotted them at their expulsion,
some being confined in hell, some (as Hooker, who delivers
the opinion of our poet's age, expresses it) dispersed in air,
some on earth, some in water, others in caves, dens, or minerals
under the earth. Of these, some were more malignant and
mischievous than others. The earthy spirits seem to have been
thought the most depraved, and the aerial the least vitiated.
Thus Prospero observes of Ariel:
—Thou wast a spirit too delicate
To act her earthy and abhorr'd commands.
Over these spirits a power might be obtained by certain rites
performed or charms learned. This power was called The Black
Art, or Knowledge of Enchantment. The enchanter being (as king
James observes in his Demonology) one who commands the devil,
whereas the witch serves him. Those who thought best of this
art, the existence of which was, I am afraid, believed very
seriously, held, that certain sounds and characters had a physical
power over spirits, and compelled their agency; others who
condemned the practice, which in reality was surely never
practised, were of opinion, with more reason, that the power of
charms arose only from compact, and was no more than the spirits
voluntary allowed them for the seduction of man. The art was
held by all, though not equally criminal, yet unlawful, and
therefore Causabon, speaking of one who had commerce with
spirits, blames him, though he imagines him one of the best kind
who dealt with them by way of command. Thus Prospero repents of
his art in the last scene. The spirits were always considered
as in some measure enslaved to the enchanter, at least for a
time, and as serving with unwillingness, therefore Ariel so often
begs for liberty; and Caliban observes, that the spirits serve
Prospero with no good will, but hate him rootedly.—Of these
trifles enough.
I.ii.306 (22,1) [Mira. The strangeness of your story put Heaviness
in me.] Why should a wonderful story produce sleep? I believe
experience will prove, that any violent agitation of the mind
easily subsides in slumber, especially when, as in Prospero's
relation, the last images are pleasing.
I.ii.321 (23,2)
[As wicked dew, as e'er my mother brush'd
With raven's feather from unwholsome fen,
Drop on you both!]
[Some critics, Bentley among them, had spoken of Caliban's new
language.] Whence these critics derived the notion of a new
language appropriated to Caliban, I cannot find: they certainly
mistook brutality of sentiment for uncouthness of words. Caliban
had learned to speak of Prospero and his daughter, he had no
names for the sun and moon before their arrival, and could not
have invented a language of his own without more understanding
than Shakespeare has thought it proper to bestow upon him. His
diction is indeed somewhat clouded by the gloominess of his temper,
and the malignity of his purposes; but let any other being
entertain the same thoughts, and he will find them easily issue
in the same expressions.
[As wicked dew,]—Wicked; having baneful qualities. So
Spenser says, wicked weed; so, in opposition, we say herbs or
medicines have virtues. Bacon mentions virtuous Bezoar, and
Dryden virtuous herbs.
I.ii.351 (25,4) [Abhorred slave] This speech, which the old copy
gives to Miranda, is very judiciously bestowed by Mr. Theobald
on Prospero.
I.ii.364 (27,7) [the red plague] I suppose from the redness of the
body universally inflamed.
I.ii.396 (28,9) [Full fathom five thy father lies] [Charles Gildon
had criticized the song as trifling, and Warburton had defended
its dramatic propriety.] I know not whether Dr. Warburton has
very successfully defended these songs from Gildon's accusation.
Ariel's lays, however seasonable and efficacious, must be
allowed to be of no supernatural dignity or elegance, they express
nothing great, nor reveal any thing above mortal discovery.
The reason for which Ariel is introduced thus trifling is,
that he and his companions are evidently of the fairy kind, an
order of beings to which tradition has always ascribed a sort of
diminutive agency, powerful but ludicrous, a humorous and frolick
controlment of nature, well expressed by the songs of Ariel.
I.ii.425 (31,3)
[Fer. my prime request,
Which I do last pronounce, is, O you wonder!
If you be maid, or no?
Mira. No wonder, Sir;
But, certainly, a maid.]
[Nothing could be more prettily imagined to illustrate the
singularity of her character, than this pleasant mistake. W.] Dr.
Warburton has here found a beauty, which I think the author never
intended. Ferdinand asks her not whether she was a created being,
a question which, if he meant it, he has ill expressed, but whether
she was unmarried; for after the dialogue which Prospero's
interruption produces, he goes on pursuing his former question.
O, if a virgin,
I'll make you queen of Naples.
I.ii.439 (32,5) [controul thee] Confute thee, unanswerably contradict thee.
I.ii.471 (33,7) [come from thy ward] Desist from any hope of awing
me by that posture of defence.
II.i.3 (36,1) [our hint of woe] Hint is that which recals to the
memory. The cause that fills our minds with grief is common.
Dr. Warburton reads stint of woe.
II.i.11 (36,3) [Ant. The visitor will not give him o'er so] Why Dr.
Warburton should change visitor to 'vizer for adviser, I cannot
discover. Gonzalo gives not only advice, but comfort, and is
therefore properly called The Visitor, like others who visit the
sick or distressed to give them consolation. In some of the
Protestant churches there is a kind of officers termed consolators
for the sick.
II.i.78 (38,6) [Widow Dido!] The name of a widow brings to their
minds their own shipwreck, which they consider as having made
many widows in Naples.
II.i.132 (39,7)
[Milan and Naples have
More widows in them of this business' making,
Than we bring men to comfort them]
It does not clearly appear whether the king and these lords
thought the ship lost. This passage seems to imply, that they
were themselves confident of returning, but imagined part of
the fleet destroyed. Why, indeed, should Sebastian plot against
his brother in the following scene, unless he knew how to find
the kingdom which be was to inherit?
II.i.232 (43,1) [this lord of weak remembrance] This lord, who,
being now in his dotage, has outlived his faculty of remembering;
and who, once laid in the ground, shall be as little remembered
himself, as he can now remember other things.
II.i.235 (43,2)
[For he's a spirit of persuasion, only
Professes to persuade the king his son's alive]
Of this entangled sentence I can draw no sense from the present
reading, and therefore imagine that the author gave it thus:
For he, a spirit of persuasion, only
Professes to persuade.
Of which the meaning may be either, that he alone, who is a
spirit of persuasion, professes to persuade the king; or that,
He only professes to persuade, that is, without being so
persuaded himself, he makes a show of persuading the king.
II.i.242 (44,3) [Ambition cannot pierce a wink beyond] That this is
the utmost extent of the prospect of ambition, the point where
the eye can pass no further, and where objects lose their
distinctness, so that what is there discovered, is faint, obscure,
and doubtful. (rev. 1778, I,50,4)
II.i.251 (44,5)
[though some cast again;
And, by that destiny, to perform an act,
Whereof what's past is prologue; what to come,
In yours, and my discharge.]
These lines stand in the old edition thus:
—though some cast again;
And, by that destiny, to perform an act,
Whereof what's past, is prologue; what to come,
In your and my discharge.
The reading in the later editions is without authority. The
old text may very well stand, except that in the last line in
should be is. and perhaps we might better say—and that by
destiny. It being a common plea of wickedness to call temptation
destiny.
II.i.259 (45,6) [Keep in Tunis] There is in this passage a propriety
lost, which a slight alteration will restore:
—Sleep in Tunis,
And let Sebastian wake!
II.i.278 (45,7) [Twenty consciences, That stand 'twixt me and
Milan, candy'd be they, Or melt e'er they molest] I had rather
read,
Would melt e'er they molest.
i.e. Twenty consciences, such as stand between me and my hopes,
though they were congealed, would melt before they could molest
one, or prevent the execution of my purposes. (see 1765, I,40,7)
II.i.286 (46,8) [This ancient morsel] For morsel Dr. Warburton
reads ancient moral, very elegantly and judiciously, yet I know
not whether the author might not write morsel, as we say a piece
of a man.
II.i.288 (46,9) [take suggestion] i.e. Receive any hint of villainy,
(1773)
II.i.297 (46,1)
[Ari. My master through his art foresees the danger,
That you, his friend, are in; and sends me forth
(For else his project dies) to keep them living]
[i.e. Alonzo and Antonio; for it was on their lives that his project
depended. Yet the Oxford Editor alters them to you, because
in the verse before, it is said—you his friend; as if, because
Ariel was sent forth to save his friend, he could not have another
purpose in sending him, viz. to save his project too. W.]
I think Dr. Warburton and the Oxford Editor both mistaken.
The sense of the passage, as it now stands, is this: He sees
your danger, and will therefore save them. Dr. Warburton has
mistaken Antonio for Gonzalo. Ariel would certainly not tell
Gonzalo, that his master saved him only for his project. He
speaks to himself as he approaches,
My master through his art foresees the danger
That these his friends are in.
These written with a y, according to the old practice, did not
much differ from you.
II.i.308 (47,2) [Why are you drawn?] Having your swords drawn. So
in Romeo and Juliet:
"What art thou drawn among these heartless hinds?"
II.ii.12 (48,3) [sometime am I All wound with adders] Enwrapped by
adders wound or twisted about me.
II.ii.32 (49,5) [make a man] That is, make a man's fortune. So in
Midsummer Night's Dream—"we are all made men."
II.ii.176 (54,5) [I'll get thee Young scamels from the rock] This
word has puzzled the commentators: Dr. Warburton reads shamois.
Mr. Theobald would read any thing rather than scamels. Mr.
Holt, who wrote notes upon this play, observes, that limpets are
in some places called scams, therefore I have suffered scamels
to stand.
III.i.48 (58,8) [Of every creature's best] Alluding to the picture
of Venus by Apelles.
III.ii.71 (62,5) [What a py'd ninny's this?] This line should certainly
be given to Stephano. Py'd ninny alludes to the striped
coat worn by fools, of which Caliban could have no knowledge.
Trinculo had before been reprimanded and threatened by Stephano
for giving Caliban the lie, he is now supposed to repeat his
offence. Upon which Stephano cries out,
What a py'd ninny's this? Thou scurvy patch!—
Caliban, now seeing his master in the mood that he wished, instigates
him to vengeance:
I do beseech thy greatness, give him blows.
III.iii.48 (67,2) [Each putter out on five for one] This passage
alluding to a forgotten custom is very obscure: the putter out
must be a traveller, else how could he give this account? the
five for one is money to be received by him at his return, Mr.
Theobald has well illustrated this passage by a quotation from
Jonson.
III.iii.82 (69,3) [clear life] Pure, blameless, innocent.
III.iii.86 (69,4)
[so with good life,
And observation strange, my meaner ministers
Their several kinds have done]
This seems a corruption. I know not in what sense life can here
be used, unless for alacrity, liveliness, vigour, and in this
sense the expression is harsh. Perhaps we may read,—with good
lift, with good will, with sincere zeal for my service. I should
have proposed,—with good lief, in the same sense, but that I
cannot find lief to be a substantive. With good life may however
mean, with exact presentation of their several characters, with
observation strange of their particular and distinct parts. So
we say, he acted to the life. (see 1765, I,60,4)
III.iii.99 (70,5) [bass my trespass] The deep pipe told it me in a
rough bass sound.
IV.i.2 (71,7) [for I Have given you here a third of mine own life]
[Theobald had argued that Miranda was at least half of Prospero's
life and had emended.] In consequence of this ratiocination Mr.
Theobald printed the text, a thread of my own life. I have
restored the ancient reading. Prospero, in his reason subjoined
why he calls her the third of his life, seems to allude to some
logical distinction of causes, making her the final cause.
IV.i.7 (71,8) [strangely stood the test] Strangely is used by way
of commendation, merveilleusement, to a wonder; the sense is the
same in the foregoing scene, with observation strange.
IV.i.37 (72,1) [the rabble] The crew of meaner spirits.
IV.i.59 (73,4) [No tongue] Those who are present at incantations
are obliged to be strictly silent, "else," as we are afterwards
told, "the spell is marred."
IV.i.166 (80,4) [We must prepare to meet with Caliban] To meet with
is to counteract; to play stratagem against stratagem.—The parson
knows the temper of every one in his house, and accordingly
either meets with their vices, or advances their virtues.
HERBERT's Country Parson.
IV.i.178 (80,5)
[so I charm'd their ears,
That, calf-like, they my loving follow'd through
Tooth'd briars, sharp furzes, pricking goss, and thorns,
Which enter'd their frail shins]
Thus Drayton, in his Court of Fairie of Hobgoblin caught in a
Spell:
"But once the circle got within,
"The charms to work do straight begin,
"And he was caught as in a gin:
"For as be thus was busy,
"A pain he in his head-piece feels,
"Against a stubbed tree he reels,
"And up went poor Hobgoblin's heels:
"Alas, his brain was dizzy.
"At length upon his feet he gets,
"Hobgoblin fumes, Hobgoblin frets;
"And as again he forward sets,
"And through the bushes scrambles,
"A stump doth hit him in his pace,
"Down comes poor Hob upon his face,
"And lamentably tore his case
"Among the briers and brambles."
IV.i.196 (81,7) [your fairy … has done little better than play'd the
Jack with us] Has led us about like an iguis fatuus, by which
travellers are decoyed into the mire.
IV.i.246 (83,3) [put some lime] That is, birdlime.
V.i.102 (90,7) [Ari. I drink the air before me] Is an expression of
swiftness of the same kind as to devour the way in Henry IV.
V.i.144 (92,1)
[Alon. You the like loss?
Pro. As great to me, as late;]
My loss is as great as yours, and has as lately happened to me.
V.i.174 (93,2) [Yes, for a score of kingdoms] I take the sense to be
only this: Ferdinand would not, he says, play her false for the
world; yes, answers she, I would allow you to do it for something
less than the world, for twenty kingdoms, and I wish you well
enough to allow you, after a little wrangle, that your play was
fair. So likewise Dr. Gray.
V.i.213 (94,3) [When no man was his own] For when perhaps should be
read where.
V.i.247 (96,4)
[at pick'd leisure
(Which shall be shortly) single I'll resolve you,
(Which to you shall seem probable) of every
These happen'd accidents]
These words seem, at the first view, to have no use; some lines
are perhaps lost with which they were connected. Or we may explain
them thus: I will resolve you, by yourself, which method,
when you hear the story [of Anthonio's and Sebastian's plot]
shall seem probable, that is, shall deserve your approbation.
V.i.267 (97,5)
[Mark but the badges of these men, my lords,
Then say, if they be true]
That is, honest. A true man is, in the language of that time,
opposed to a thief. The sense is, Mark what these men wear, and
say if they are honest.
Epilogue.10 (100,7) With the help of your good hands] By your
applause, by clapping hands. (1773)
General Observation (100) It is observed of The Tempest, that its
plan is regular; this the author of The Revisal thinks, what I
think too, an accidental effect of the story, not intended or
regarded by our author. But whatever might be Shakespeare's intention
in forming or adopting the plot, he has made it instrumental
to the production of many characters, diversified with
boundless invention, and preserved with profound skill in nature,
extensive knowledge of opinions, and accurate observation of
life. In a single drama are here exhibited princes, courtiers,
and sailors, all speaking in their real characters. There is
the agency of airy spirits, and of an earthly goblin. The
operation of magick, the tumults of a storm, the adventures of
a desert island, the native effusion of untaught affection, the
punishment of guilt, and the final happiness of the pair for
whom our passions and reason are equally interested. (1773)
It is observable (I know not for what cause) that the stile of this
comedy is less figurative, and more natural and unaffected than the
greater part of this author's, though supposed to be one of the first
he wrote. [Pope.] To this observation of Mr. Pope, which is very just,
Mr. Theobald has added, that this is one of Shakespeare's worst
plays, and is less corrupted than any other. Mr. Upton peremptorily
determines, that if any proof can be drawn from manner and stile,
this play must be sent packing, and seek for its parent elsewhere. How
otherwise, says he, do painters distinguish copies from originals,
and have not authors their peculiar stile and manner from which a true
critic can form as unerring judgment as a painter? I am afraid this
illustration of a critic's science will not prove what is desired. A
painter knows a copy from an original by rules somewhat resembling
these by which critics know a translation, which if it be literal, and
literal it must be to resemble the copy of a picture, will be easily
distinguished. Copies are known from originals, even when the painter
copies his own picture; so if an author should literally translate his
work, he would lose the manner of an original.
Mr. Upton confounds the copy of a picture with the imitation
of a painter's manner. Copies are easily known, but good imitations
are not detected with equal certainty, and are, by the
best judges, often mistaken. Nor is it true that the writer has
always peculiarities equally distinguishable with those of the
painter. The peculiar manner of each arises from the desire,
natural to every performer, of facilitating his subsequent works
by recurrence to his former ideas; this recurrence produces that
repetition which is called habit. The painter, whose work is
partly intellectual and partly manual, has habits of the mind,
the eye and the hand, the writer has only habits of the mind.
Yet, some painters have differed as much from themselves as from
any other; and I have been told, that there is little resemblance
between the first works of Raphael and the last. The same variation
may be expected in writers; and if it be true, as it seems,
that they are less subject to habit, the difference between their
works may be yet greater.
But by the internal marks of a composition we may discover
the author with probability, though seldom with certainty. When
I read this play, I cannot but think that I find, both in the
serious and ludicrous scenes, the language and sentiments of
Shakespeare. It is not indeed one of his most powerful effusions,
it has neither many diversities of character, nor striking
delineations of life, but it abounds in [Greek: gnomahi] beyond most of
his plays, and few have more lines or passages, which, singly
considered, are eminently beautiful. I am yet inclined to believe
that it was not very successful, and suspect that it has escaped
corruption, only because being seldom played, it was less exposed
to the hazards of transcription.
I.i.34 (108,6)
[However, but a folly bought with wit;
Or else a wit by folly vanquished]
This love will end in a foolish action, to produce which you are
long to spend your wit, or it will end in the loss of your wit,
which will be overpowered by the folly of love.
I.i.69 (109,7) [Made wit with musing weak] For made read make.
Thou, Julia, hast made me war with good counsel, and make wit
weak with muting.
I.i.70 (109,8) [Enter Speed] [Pope found this scene low and full of
"trifling conceits" and suggested it was possibly an interpolation
by the actors.] That this, like many other scenes, is mean and
vulgar, will be universally allowed; but that it was interpolated
by the players seems advanced without any proof, only to give a
greater licence to criticism.
I.i.153 (112,4) [you have testern'd me] You have gratified me with
a tester, testern, or testen, that is, with a sixpence.
I.ii.41 (114,5) [a goodly broker!] A broker was used for matchmaker,
sometimes for a procuress.
I.ii.68 (115,6) [stomach on your meat] Stomach was used for passion
or obstinacy.
I.ii.137 (117,8) [I see you have a month's mind to them] [A month's
mind was an anniversary in times of popery. Gray.] A month's
mind, in the ritual sense, signifies not desire or inclination,
but remonstrance; yet I suppose this is the true original of the
expression. (1773)
I.iii.1 (118,9) [what sad talk] Sad is the same as grave or serious.
I.iii.26 (119,2) [Valentine, Attends the emperor in his royal court]
[Theobald had tried to straighten out an historical error.] Mr.
Theobald discovers not any great skill in history. Vienna is
not the court of the emperor as emperor, nor has Milan been
always without its princes since the days of Charlemaigne; but
the note has its use.
I.iii.44 (120,3) [in good time] In good time was the old expression
when something happened which suited the thing in hand, as the
French say, a propos.
I.iii.84 (121,4) [Oh, how this spring of love resembleth] At the
end of this verse there is wanting a syllable, for the speech
apparently ends in a quatrain. I find nothing that will rhyme
to sun, and therefore shall leave it to some happier critic.
But I suspect that the author might write thus:
Oh, how this spring of love resembleth right,
The uncertain glory of an April day;
Which now shews all the glory of the light,
And, by and by, a cloud takes all away.
Light was either by negligence or affectation changed to sun,
which, considered without the rhyme, is indeed better. The next
transcriber, finding that the word right did not rhyme to sun,
supposed it erroneously written, and left it out.
II.i.27 (123,1) [Hallowmas] That is, about the feast of All-Saints,
when winter begins, and the life of a vagrant becomes less comfortable.
II.i.39 (123,2) [without you were so simple, none else would] None
else would be so simple.
II.i.148 (127,5) [reasoning with yourself?] That is, discoursing,
talking. An Italianism.
II.iii.22 (129,2) [I am the dog] This passage is much confused, and
of confusion the present reading makes no end. Sir T. Hammer
reads, I am the dog, no, the dog is himself and I am me, the dog
is the dog, and I am myself. This certainly is more reasonable,
but I know not how much reason the author intended to bestow on
Launce's soliloquy.
II.iv.57 (133,1) [not without desert] And not dignified with so
much reputation without proportionate merit.
II.iv.115 (134,2) [No: that you are worthless] I have inserted the
particle no to fill up the measure.
II.iv.129 (135,4)
[I have done penance for contemning love;
Whose high imperious thoughts have punish'd me
With bitter fasts, with penitential groans]
For whose I read those. I have contemned love and am punished.
Those high thoughts by which I exalted myself above human passions
or frailties have brought upon me fasts and groans.
II.iv.138 (136,5) [no woe to his correction] No misery that can be
compared to the punishment inflicted by love. Herbert called
for the prayers of the liturgy a little before his death, saying,
None to them, none to them.
II.iv.152 (136,6) [a principality] The first or principal of women.
So the old writers use state. She is a lady, a great state.
Latymer. This look is called in states warlie, in others
otherwise. Sir T. More.
II.iv.167 (137,8) [She is alone] She stands by herself. There is
none to be compared to her.
II.iv.207 (138,1) [with more advice] With more prudence, with more
discretion.
II.iv.209 (138,2) ['Tis but her picture I have yet beheld] This is
evidently a slip of attention, for he had seen her in the last
scene, and in high terms offered her his service.
II.v.28 (139,4) [My staff understands me] This equivocation, miserable
as it is, has been admitted by Milton in his great poem.
B. VI.
"——The terms we sent were terms of weight,
"Such as we may perceive, amaz'd them all,
"And stagger'd many who receives them right,
"Had need from head to foot well understand,
"Not understood, this gift they have besides,
"To shew us when our foes stand not upright."
II.vi (141,5) [Enter Protheus] It is to be observed, that in the
first folio edition, the only edition of authority, there are no
directions concerning the scenes; they have been added by the
later editors, and may therefore be changed by any reader that
can give more consistency or regularity to the drama by such
alterations. I make this remark in this place, because I know
not whether the following soliloquy of Protheus is so proper in
the street.
II.vi.7 (141,6) [O sweet-suggesting love] To suggest is to tempt in
our author's language. So again:
"Knowing that tender youth is soon suggested."
The sense is, O tempting love, if thou hast influenced me to
sin, teach me to excuse it. Dr. Warburton reads, if I have
sinn'd; but, I think, not only without necessity, but with less
elegance.
II.vi.35 (142,7) [Myself in counsel, his competitor] Myself, who
am his competitor or rival, being admitted to his counsel.
II.vi.37 (142,8) [pretended flight] We may read intended flight.
II.vi.43 (142,9) [Love, lend me wings to make my purpose swift,
As thou hast lent me wit to plot this drift!]
I suspect that the author concluded the act with this couplet,
and that the next scene should begin the third act; but the
change, as it will add nothing to the probability of the action,
is of no great importance.
III.i.45 (146,1) [be not aimed at] Be not guessed.
III.i.47 (147,2) [of this pretence] Of this claim made to your
daughter.
III.i.86 (148,4) [the fashion of the time] The modes of courtship,
the acts by which men recommended themselves to ladies.
III.i.148 (150,5) [for they are sent by me] For is the same
as for that, since.
III.i.153 (150,6) [why, Phaeton (for thou art Merops' son)] Thou
art Phaeton in thy rashness, but without his pretensions; thou
art not the son of a divinity, but a terrae filius, a low born
wretch; Merops is thy true father, with whom Phaeton was
falsely reproached.
III.i.185 (151,7) [I fly not death, to fly his deadly doom] To fly
his doom, used for by flying, or in flying, is a gallicism. The
sense is, By avoiding the execution of his sentence I shall not
escape death. If I stay here, I suffer myself to be destroyed;
if I go away, I destroy myself.
III.i.261 (153,8) [Laun. I am but a fool, look you; and yet I have
the wit to think my master is a kind of a knave: but that's all
one, if he be but one knave] [W: but one kind] This alteration
is acute and specious, yet I know not whether, in Shakespeare's
language, one knave may not signify a knave on only one occasion,
a single knave. We still use a double villain for a
villain beyond the common rate of guilt.
III.i.265 (154,9) [a team of horse shall not pluck] I see how
Valentine suffers for telling his love-secrets, therefore I will keep
mine close.
III.i.330 (156,4) [Speed. Item, she hath a. sweet mouth] This I take
to be the same with what is now vulgarly called a sweet tooth,
a luxurious desire of dainties and sweetmeats.
III.i.351 (157,5) [Speed. Item, she will often praise her liquor]
That is, shew how well she likes it by drinking often.
III.i.355 (157,6) [Speed. Item, she is too liberal] Liberal, is
licentious and gross in language. So in Othello, "Is he not a
profane and very liberal counsellor."
III.ii.7 (158,8) [Trenched in ice] Cut, carved in ice. Trencher,
to cut, French.
III.ii.36 (159,9) [with circumstance] With the addition of such
incidental particulars as may induce belief.
III.ii.51 (160,1)
[Therefore as you unwind her love from him,
Lest it should ravel, and be good to none,
You must provide to bottom it on me]
As you wind off her love from him, make me the bottom on which
you wind it. The housewife's term for a ball of thread wound
upon a central body, is a bottom of thread.
III.ii.68 (160,2) [lime] That is, birdlime.
III.ii.98 (161,4) [Duke. Even now about it. I will pardon you]
I will excuse you from waiting.
IV.i.36 (163,2) [By the bare scalp of Robin Hood's fat friar]
Robin Hood was captain of a band of robbers, and was much
inclined to rob churchmen.
IV.i.46 (163,3) [awful men] Reverend, worshipful, such as magistrates,
and other principal members of civil communities.
IV.ii.12 (165,1) [sudden quips] That is, hasty passionate reproaches
and scoffs. So Macbeth is in a kindred sense said to be sudden;
that is, irascible and impetuous.
IV.ii.45 (166,2) [For beauty lives with kindness] Beauty without
kindness dies unenjoyed, and undelighting.
IV.ii.93 (168,4) [You have your wish; my will is even this] The word
will is here ambiguous. He wishes to gain her will; she tells
him, if he wants her will he has it.
IV.ii.130 (169,5) [But, since your falsehood shall become you well]
This is hardly sense. We may read, with very little alteration,
But since you're false, it shall become you well.
IV.iii.37 (171,2) [Madam, I pity much your grievances] Sorrows,
sorrowful affections.
IV.iv.13 (172,1) [I would have, as one should say, one that takes
upon him to be a dog indeed, to be, as it were, a dog at all
things] I believe we should read, I would have. &c. one that
takes upon him to be a dog, to be a dog indeed, to be, &c.
IV.iv.79 (174,3) [It seems, you lov'd not her, to leave her token]
Protheus does not properly leave his lady's token, he gives it
away. The old edition has it,
It seems you lov'd her not, not leave her token.
I should correct it thus,
It seems you lov'd her not, nor love her token.
IV.iv.106 (175,4) [To carry that which I would have refus'd] The
sense is, To go and present that which I wish to be not accepted,
to praise him whom I wish to be dispraised.
IV.iv.159 (176,5)
[The air hath starv'd the roses in her cheeks,
And pinch'd the lily-tincture of her face.
That now she is become as black as I]
[W: And pitch'd] This is no emendation; none ever heard of a face
being pitched by the weather. The colour of a part pinched, is
livid, as it is commonly termed, black and blue. The weather may
therefore be justly said to pinch when it produces the same
visible effect. I believe this is the reason why the cold is
said to pinch.
IV.iv.198 (179,2) [her forehead's low] A high forehead was in our
author's time accounted a feature eminently beautiful. So in
The History of Guy of Warwick, Felice his lady is said to have
the same high forehead as Venus.
IV.iv.206 (179,3) [My substance should be statue in thy stead] [W:
statued] Statued is, I am afraid, a new word, and that it should
be received, is not quite evident.
V.i.12 (180,4) [sure enough] Sure is safe, out of danger.
V.iv.71 (185,1) [The private wound is deepest. Oh time, most curst!]
I have a little mended the measure. The old edition, and all but
Sir T. Hammer, read,
The private wound is deepest, oh time most accurst.
V.iv.106 (187,4) [if shame live In a disguise of love] That is, if
it be any shame to wear a disguise for the purposes of love.
V.iv.126 (187,5) [Come not within the measure of my wrath] The
length of my sword, the reach of my anger.
General Observation (189,8) In this play there is a strange mixture
of knowledge and ignorance, of care and negligence. The versification
is often excellent, the allusions are learned and just;
but the author conveys his heroes by sea from one inland town to
another in the same country; he places the emperor at Milan, and
sends his young men to attend him, but never mentions him more;
he makes Protheus, after an interview with Silvia, say he has
only seen her picture; and, if we may credit the old copies, he
has, by mistaking places, left his scenery inextricable. The
reason of all this confusion seems to be, that he took his story
from a novel, which he sometimes followed, and sometimes forsook,
sometimes remembered, and sometimes forgot.
That this play is rightly attributed to Shakespeare, I have
little doubt. If it be taken from him, to whom shall it be
given? This question may be asked of all the disputed plays,
except Titus Andronicus; and it will be found more credible, that
Shakespeare might sometimes sink below his highest flights, than
that any other should rise up to his lowest. (see 1765, I,259,5)
I.i.7 (194,4) [Custalorum] This it, I suppose, intended for a
corruption of Custos Rotulorum. The mistake was hardly designed by
the author, who, though he gives Shallow folly enough, makes him
rather pedantic than illiterate. If we read:
Shal. Ay, cousin Slender, and Custos Rotulorum.
It follows naturally:
Slen. Ay, and Ratalorum too.
I.i.22 (194,5) [The luce is the fresh fish; the salt fish is an old
coat] I see no consequence in this answer. Perhaps we may read,
the salt fish is not an old coat. That is, the fresh fish is the
coat of an ancient family, and the salt fish is the coat of a
merchant grown rich by trading over the sea.
I.i.115 (198,1) [and broke open my lodge] This probably alludes to
some real incident, at that time well known.
I.i.121 (198,2) ['Twere better for you, if 'twere not known in council;
you'll be laugh'd at] The old copies read, 'Twere better for
you, if 'twere known in council. Perhaps it is an abrupt speech,
and must be read thus: 'Twere better for you—if 'twere known in
council, you'll be laugh'd at. 'Twere better for you, is, I believe,
a menace.(1773)
I.i.127 (199,3) [coney-catching rascals] A coney-catcher was, in
the time of Elizabeth, a common name for a cheat or sharper.
Green, one of the first among us who made a trade of writing
pamphlets, published A Detection of the Frauds and Tricks of
Coney-catchers and Couzeners.
I.i.159 (200,6) [Edward shovel-boards] By this term, I believe, are
meant brass castors, such as are shoveled on a board, with king
Edward's face stamped upon them.
I.i.166 (201,8) [Word of denial in thy Labra's here] I suppose it
should rather be read,
Word of denial in my Labra's hear;
that is, hear the word of denial in my lips. Thou ly'st.
I.i.170 (201,9) [marry trap] When a man was caught in his own
stratagem, I suppose the exclamation of insult was marry, trap!
I.i.184 (202,3) [and so conclusions pass'd the careires] I believe
this strange word is nothing but the French cariere; and the
expression means, that the common bounds of good behaviour were
overpassed.
I.i.211 (203,4) [upon Allhallowmas last, a fortnight afore Michaelmas?]
[Theobald suspected that Shakespeare had written "Martlemas."]
This correction, thus seriously and wisely enforced, is
received by Sir Tho. Hammer; but probably Shakespeare intended a
blunder.
I.iii.56 (210,7) [The anchor is deep: will that humour pass?] I see
not what relation the anchor has to translation. Perhaps we may
read, the author is deep; or perhaps the line is out of its place,
and should be inserted lower after Falstaff has said,
Sail like my pinnace to those golden shores.
It may be observed, that in the tracts of that time anchor and
author could hardly be distinguished. (see 1765, II,464,7)
I.iii.110 (213,6) [I will possess him with yellowness] Yellowness is
jealousy. (1773)
I.iii.III (213,7) [for the revolt of mine is dangerous] I suppose we
may read, the revolt of men. Sir T. Hammer reads, this revolt of
mine. Either may serve, for of the present text I can find no
meaning.
I.iv.9 (213,8) [at the latter end of a sea-coal fire] That is, when
my master is in bed.
II.i.5 (219,1) [though love use reason for his precisian, he admits
him not for his counsellor] Of this word I do not see any meaning
that is very apposite to the present intention. Perhaps Falstaff
said, Though love use reason as his physician, he admits him not
for his counsellor. This will be plain sense. Ask not the reason
of my love; the business of reason is not to assist love, but
to cure it. There may however be this meaning in the present
reading. Though love, when he would submit to regulation, may
use reason as his precisian, or director in nice cases, yet when
he is only eager to attain his end, he takes not reason for his
counsellor. (1773)
II.i.27 (220,2) [I was then frugal of my mirth] By breaking this
speech into exclamations, the text may stand; but I once thought
it must be read, If I was not then frugal of my mirth.
II.i.29 (220,3) [Why, I'll exhibit a bill in the parliament for the
putting down of men] [T: of fat men] [W: of mum] I do not see that
any alteration is necessary; if it were, either of the foregoing
conjectures might serve the turn. But surely Mrs. Ford may
naturally enough, in the first heat of her anger, rail at the
sex for the fault of one.
II.i.52 (222,4) [These knights will hack, and so thou shouldst not
alter the article of thy gentry] [W: lack] Upon this passage the
learned editor has tried his strength, in my opinion, with more
spirit than success.
I read thus—These knights we'll hack, and so thou shouldest
not alter the article of thy gentry. The punishment of a recreant
or undeserving knight, was to hack off his spurs: the meaning
therefore is; it is not worth the while of a gentlewoman to
be made a knight, for we'll degrade all these knights in a little
time, by the usual form of hacking off their spurs, and thou, if
thou art knighted, shalt be hacked with the rest.
II.i.79 (223,5) [for he cares not what he puts into the press]
Press is used ambiguously, for a press to print, and a press to
squeeze.
II.i.114 (224,7) [curtail-dog] That is, a dog that misses hie game.
The tail is counted necessary to the agility of a greyhound; and
one method of disqualifying a dog, according to the forest laws,
is to cut his tail, or make him a curtail. (see 1765, II,477,+)
II.i.128 (225,9) [Away, Sir corporal Nym.—Believe it, Page, he speaks
sense] Nym, I believe, is out of place, and we should read thus:
Away, Sir corporal.
Nym. Believe it. Page, he speaks sense.
II.i.135 (225,1) [I have a sword, and it shall bite upon my necessity.—He
loves your wife] [V: bite—upon my necessity, he] I do
not see the difficulty of this passage: no phrase is more common
than—you may, upon a need, thus. Nym, to gain credit, says,
that he is above the mean office of carrying love-letters; he
has nobler means of living; he has a sword, and upon his necessity,
that is, when his need drives him to unlawful expedients,
his sword shall bite.
II.i.148 (226,3) [I will not believe such a Cataian] [Theobald and
Warburton had both explained "Cataian" as a liar.] Mr. Theobald
and Dr. Warburton have both told their stories with confidence,
I am afraid, very disproportionate to any evidence that can be
produced. That Cataian was a word of hatred or contempt is
plain, but that it signified a boaster or a liar has not been
proved. Sir Toby, in Twelfth Night, says of the Lady Olivia to
her maid, "thy Lady's a Cataian;" but there is no reason to
think he means to call her liar. Besides, Page intends to give
Ford a reason why Pistol should not be credited. He therefore
does not say, I would not believe such a liar: for that he is a
liar is yet to be made probable: but he says, I would not believe
such a Cataian on any testimony of his veracity. That is, "This
fellow has such an odd appearance; is so unlike a man civilized,
and taught the duties of life, that I cannot credit him." To be
a foreigner was always in England, and I suppose everywhere else,
a reason of dislike. So Pistol calls Slender in the first act,
a mountain foreigner; that is, a fellow uneducated, and of gross
behaviour; and again in his anger calls Bardolph, Hungarian wight.
II.i.182 (228,4) [very rogues] A rogue is a wanderer or vagabond,
and, in its consequential signification, a cheat.
II.i.236 (230,7) [my long sword] Not long before the introduction
of rapiers, the swords in use were of an enormous length, and
sometimes raised with both hands. Shallow, with an old man's
vanity, censures the innovation by which lighter weapons were
introduced, tells what he could once have done with his long
sword, and ridicules the terms and rules of the rapier.
II.ii.28 (234,6) [red lattice phrases] Your ale-house conversation.
II.ii.28 (234,7) [your bold-beating oaths] [W: bold-bearing] A
beating oath is, I think, right; so we now say, in low language, a
thwacking or swinging thing.
II.ii.61 (235,8) [canaries] This is the name of a brisk light
dance, and is therefore properly enough used in low language
for any hurry or perturbation.
II.ii.94 (236,1) [frampold] This word I have never seen elsewhere,
except in Dr. Hacket's Life of Archbishop Williams, where a
frampul man signifies a peevish troublesome fellow.
II.ii.142 (238,3) [Clap on more sails; pursue; up with your fights]
[Warburton had quoted a passage from Dryden'a Amboyna for "fights,"
explaining them as "small arms."] The quotation from Dryden might at
least have raised a suspicion that fights were neither small arms,
nor cannon. Fights and nettings are properly joined. Fights, I
find, are cloaths hung round the ship to conceal the men from the
enemy, and close-fights are bulkheads, or any other shelter that the
fabrick of a ship affords.
II.ii.170 (240,5) [not to charge you] That is, not with a purpose
of putting you to expence, or being burthensome.
II.ii.256 (242,6) [instance and argument] Instance is example.
II.ii.324 (244,8) [Eleven o'clock] Ford should rather have said ten
o'clock: the time was between ten and eleven; and his impatient
suspicion was not likely to stay beyond the time.
II.iii.60 (246,2) [mock-water] The host means, I believe, to reflect
on the inspection of urine, which made a considerable part of
practical physick in that time; yet I do not well see the meaning
of mock-water.
III.i.17 (249,5) [By shallow rivers, to whose falls] [Warburton had
introduced The Passionate Shepherd to his Love and _The Nymph's
Reply at this point in his text, attributing both to Shakespeare.]
These two poems, which Dr. Warburton gives to Shakespeare, are, by
writers nearer that time, disposed of, one to Marlow, the other to
Raleigh. These poems are read in different copies with great
variations.
III.i.123 (253,6) [scald, scurvy] Scall was an old word of reproach,
as scab was afterwards.
Chaucer imprecates on his scrivener;
"Under thy longe lockes mayest thou have the scalle."
III.ii.58 (255,7) [We have linger'd about a match between Anne Page
and my cousin Slender, and this day we shall have our answer]
They have not linger'd very long. The match was proposed by Sir
Hugh but the day before.
III.ii.73 (256,1) [The gentleman is of no having] Having is the same as
estate or fortune.
III.ii.90 (257,2) [I think, I shall drink in pipe-wine first with
him] [Tyrwhitt: horn-pipe wine] Pipe is known to be a vessel of
wine, now containing two hogsheads. Pipe wine is therefore wine, not
from the bottle, but the pipe; and the text consists in the ambiguity
of the word, which signifies both a cask of wine, and a musical instrument.
Horn-pipe wine has no meaning. (1773)
III.iii.60 (260,4) [that becomes the ship-tire, the tire-valiant,
or any tire of Venetian admittance] [Warburton had explained the
two tents as head-dresses, and "of Venetian admittance" as "which
will admit to be adorned."] This note is plausible, except in
the explanation of Venetian admittance: but I am afraid this
whole system of dress is unsupported by evidence.
III.iv.13 (267,7) [father's wealth] Some light may be given to those
who shall endear one to calculate the increase of English wealth,
by observing, that Latymer, in the time of Edward VI. mentions
it as proof of his father's prosperity, That though but a yeoman.
he gave his daughters five pounds each for her portion. At the
latter end of Elizabeth, seven hundred pounds were such a temptation
to courtship, as made all other motives suspected. Congreve
makes twelve thousand pounds more than a counterbalance to the
affectation of Belinda. Ho poet would now fly his favourite
character at less than fifty thousand.
III.iv.100 (270,1) [will you cast away your child on a fool and a
physician?] I should read fool or a physician, meaning Slender and
Caius.
III.v.113 (274,4) [bilbo] A bilbo is a Spanish blade, of which the
excellence is flexibleness and elasticity.
III.v.117 (274,5) [kidney] Kidney in this phrase now signifies kind or
qualities, but Falstaff means a man whose kidnies are as fat as mine.
III.v.155 (275,6) [I'll be horn-mad] There is no image which our
author appears so fond of, as that of cuckold's horns. Scarcely
a light character is introduced that does not endearor to produce
merriment by some allusion to horned husbands. As he wrote
his plays for the stage rather than the press, he perhaps reviewed
them seldom, and did not observe this repetition, or
finding the jest, however, frequent, still successful, did not
think correction necessary.
IV.i (276,7) [Page's house. Enter Mrs. Page. Mrs. Quickly, and William]
This is a very trifling scene, of no use to the plot, and I should think
of no great delight to the audience; but Shakespeare best knew what would
please.
IV.ii.22 (879,8) [he so takes on] To take on, which is now used for
to, grieve, seems to be used by our author for to, rage. Perhaps it was
applied to any passion.
IV.ii.26 (279,9) [buffets himself on the forehead, crying, peer-
out, peer-out!] That is, appear horns. Shakespeare is at his
old lunes. (see 1765, II, 526,+)
IV.ii.161 (283,1) [this wrongs you] This is below your character,
unworthy of your understanding, injurious to your honour. So
in The Taming of the Shrew, Bianca, being ill treated by her
rugged sister, says:
"You wrong me much, indeed you wrong yourself."
IV.ii.195 (284,2) [ronyon!] Ronyon, applied to a woman, means, as far as
can be traced, much the same with scall or scab spoken of a man.
IV.ii.204 (284,3) [I spy a great peard under his muffler] As the
second stratagem, by which Falstaff escapes, is much the grosser
of the two, I wish it had been practiced first. It is very unlikely that
Ford, baring been so deceived before, and knowing that he had been
deceived, would suffer him to escape in so slight a disguise.
IV.ii.208 (284,4) [cry out upon no trail] The expression is taken from
the hunters. Trail is the scent left by the passage of the game. To
cry out, is to open or bark.
IV.iii.13 (285,5) [they must come off] To come off, signifies in our
author, sometimes to be uttered with spirit and volubility. In this
place it seems to mean what is in our time expressed by to come down,
to pay liberally and readily. These accidental and colloquial senses are
the disgrace of language, and the plague of commentators.
IV.iv.32 (287,7) [And there he blasts the tree, and takes the cattle]
To take, in Shakespeare, signifies to seize or strike with a
disease, to blast. So in Hamlet;
"No planet takes."
So in Lear;
"——-Strike her young bones,
"Ye taking airs, with lameness." (rev. 1778,I,341,4)
IV.v.7 (290,3) [standing-bed, and truckle-bed] The usual furniture of
chambers in that time was a standing-bed, under which was a trochle,
truckle, or running bed. In the standing-bed lay the master, and in
the truckle-bed the servant. So in Hall's Account of a Servile Tutor:
"He lieth in the truckle-bed.
"While his young master lieth o'er his head."
IV.v.21 (291,4) [Bohemian-Tartar] The French call a Bohemian what we
call a Gypsey; but I believe the Host means nothing more than, by a wild
appellation, to insinuate that Simple makes a strange appearance.
IV. v. 29 (291, 5) [mussel-shell] He calls poor Simple mussel-shell,
because he stands with his mouth open.
IV. v. 104 (293, 6) [Primero] A game at cards.
IV. v. 122 (294, 7) [counterfeiting the action of an old woman] [T: a wood
woman] This emendation is received by Sir Thomas Hammer,
but rejected by Dr. Warburton. To me it appears reasonable
enough.
IV. v. 130 (294, 8) [sure, one of you does not serve heaven well, that
you are so cross'd] The great fault of this play, is the frequency of
expressions so profane, that no necessity of preserving
character can justify them. There are laws of higher authority
than those of criticism.
V. v. 28 (300, 3) [my shoulders for the fellow of this walk] Who the
fellow is, or why he keeps his shoulders for bin, I do not understand.
V. v. 77 (304, 9) [Fairies use flowers for their charactery] For the
matter with which they make letters.
V. v. 84 (304, 1) [I smell a man of middle earth] Spirits are supposed
to inhabit the ethereal regions, and fairies to dwell under
ground, men therefore are in a middle station.
V. v. 99 (305, 4) [Lust is but a bloody fire] So the old copies. I once
thought it should be read,
Lust is but a cloudy fire,
but Sir T. Hammer reads with less violence,
Lust is but i' the blood a fire.
V. v. 172 (308, 8) [ignorance itself is a plummet o'er me] Though this
be perhaps not unintelligible, yet it is an odd way of confessing
his dejection. I should wish to read:
—ignorance itself has a plume o' me;
That is, I am so depressed, that ignorance itself plucks me, and
decks itself with the spoils of my weakness. Of the present
reading, which is probably right, the meaning may be, I am so enfeebled,
that ignorance itself weighs me down and oppresses me. (see 1765, II,
554, 1)
V. v. 181 (309, 1) [laugh at my wife] The two plots are excellently
connected, and the transition very artfully made in this speech.
V. v. 249 (311, 2) [Page. Tell, what remedy?] In the first sketch of
this play, which, as Mr. Pope observes, is much inferior to the latter
performance, the only sentiment of which I regret the omission, occurs
at this critical time, when Fenton brings in his wife, there is this
dialogue.
Mrs. Ford. Come, mistress Page. I must be bold with you.
'Tis pity to part love that is so true.
Mrs. Page. [Aside] Although that I have miss'd in my intent,
Yet I am glad my husband's match is cross'd.
—Here Fenton. take her.—
Eva. Come, master Page, you must needs agree.
Ford. I' faith, Sir, come, you see your wife is pleas'd.
Page. I cannot tell, and yet my heart is eas'd;
And yet it doth me good the Doctor miss'd.
Come hither, Fenton, and come hither, daughter. (1773)
General Observation. Of this play there is a tradition preserved
by Mr. Rowe, that it was written at the command of queen Elizabeth,
who was so delighted with the character of Falstaff, that
she wished it to be diffused through more plays; but suspecting
that it might pall by continued uniformity, directed the poet to
diversify his manner, by shewing him in love. No task is harder
than that of writing to the ideas of another. Shakespeare knew
what the queen, if the story be true, seems not to have known,
that by any real passion of tenderness, the selfish craft, the
careless jollity, and the lazy luxury of Falstaff must have suffered
so much abatement, that little of his former cast would
have remained. Falstaff could not love, but by ceasing to be
Falstaff. He could only counterfeit love, and his professions
could be prompted, not by the hope of pleasure, but of money.
Thus the poet approached as near as he could to the work enjoined him;
yet having perhaps in the former plays completed his
own idea, seems not to have been able to give Falstaff all his
former power of entertainment.
This comedy is remarkable for the variety and number of the
personages, who exhibit more characters appropriated and discriminated,
than perhaps can be found in any other play.
Whether Shakespeare was the first that produced upon the English
stage the effect of language distorted and depraved by provincial
or foreign pronunciations, I cannot certainly decide.
This mode of forming ridiculous characters can confer praise
only on him, who originally discovered it, for it requires not
much of either wit or judgment: its success must be derived almost
wholly from the player, but its power in a skilful month,
even he that despises it, is unable to resist.
The conduct of this drama is deficient; the action begins and
ends often before the conclusion, and the different parts might
change places without inconvenience; but its general power, that
power by which all works of genius shall finally be tried, is
such, that perhaps it never yet had reader or spectator, who did
not think it too soon at an end.
Vol. II
Persons Represented: Varrius might be omitted, for he is only
once spoken to, and says nothing.
There it perhaps not one of Shakespeare's plays more darkened
than this by the peculiarities of its authour, and the
unskilfulness of its editors, by distortions of phrase, or
negligence of transcription.
I.i.6 (4,4) [lists] Bounds, limits.
I.i.7 (4,5) [Then no more remains,
But that your sufficiency, as your worth is able,
And let them work]
This is a passage which has exercised the sagacity of the
editors, and is now to employ mine. [Johnson adds T's and W's
notes] Sir Tho. Hammer, having caught from Mr. Theobald a
hint that a line was lost, endeavours to supply it thus.
—Then no more remains,
But that to your sufficiency you join
A will to serve us, as your worth is able.
He has by this bold conjecture undoubtedly obtained a meaning,
but, perhaps not, even in his own opinion, the meaning of
Shakespeare.
That the passage is more or less corrupt, I believe every reader will
agree with the editors. I am not convinced that a line is lost, as Mr.
Theobald conjectures, nor that the change of but to put, which Dr.
Warburton has admitted after some other editor, will amend the fault.
There was probably some original obscurity in the expression, which gave
occasion to mistake in repetition or transcription. I therefore suspect
that the authour wrote thus,
—Then no more remains.
But that to your sufficiencies your worth is abled,
_And let them work.
Then nothing remains more than to tell you, that your virtue is now
invested with power equal to your knowledge and wisdom. Let
therefore your knowledge and your virtue now work together._ It may
easily be conceived how sufficiencies was, by an inarticulate
speaker, or inattentive hearer, confounded with sufficiency as,
and how abled, a word very unusual, was changed into able. For
abled, however, an authority is not wanting. Lear uses it in the
same sense, or nearly the same, with the Duke. As for
sufficiencies, D. Hamilton, in his dying speech, prays that
Charles II. may exceed both the virtues and sufficiencies of
his father.
I.i.11 (6,6) [the terms For common justice, you are as pregnant in]
The later editions all give it, without authority,
—the terms
Of justice,—
and Dr. Warburton makes terms signify bounds or limits. I
rather think the Duke meant to say, that Escalus was pregnant,
that is, ready and knowing in all the forms of law, and, among
other things, in the terms or times set apart for its
administration.
I.i.18 (7,7) [we have with special soul Elected him our absence to
supply] [W: roll] This editor is, I think, right in supposing a
corruption, but less happy in his emendation. I read,
—we have with special seal
Elected him our absence to supply.
A special seal is a very natural metonymy for a special commission.
I.i.28 (8,8)
[There is a kind of character in thy life,
That to the observer doth thy history
Fully unfold]
Either this introduction has more solemnity than meaning, or it
has a meaning which I cannot discover. What is there peculiar
in this, that a man's life informs the observer of his history?
Might it be supposed that Shakespeare wrote this?
There is a kind of character in thy look.
History may be taken in a more diffuse and licentious meaning,
for future occurrences, or the part of life yet to come.
If this sense be received, the passage is clear and proper.
I.i.37 (8,1) [to fine issues] To great consequences. For high purposes.
I.i.41 (9,2) [But I do bend my speech To one that can my part in
him advertise] I know not whether we may not better read,
One that can my part to him advertise,
One that can inform himself of that which it would be otherwise
my part to tell him.
I.i.43 (9,3) [Hold therefore, Angelo] That is, continue to be
Angelo; hold as thou art.
I.i.47 (9,4) [first in question] That is, first called for; first
appointed.
I.i.52 (9,5) [We have with a leaven'd and prepared choice Proceeded
to you] [W: a levell'd] No emendation is necessary. Leaven'd
choice is one of Shakespeare's harsh metaphors. His train of
ideas seems to be this. I have proceeded to you with choice
mature, concocted, fermented, leavened. When bread is leavened
it is left to ferment: a leavened choice is therefore a choice
not hasty, but considerate, not declared as soon as it fell
into the imagination, but suffered to work long in the mind.
Thus explained, it suits better with prepared than levelled.
I.i.65 (10,6) [your scope is as mine own] That is, Your amplitude
of power.
I.ii.22 (12,7) [in metre?] In the primers, there are metrical graces,
such as, I suppose, were used in Shakespeare's time.
I.ii.25 (12,9) [Grace is grace, despight of all controversy] [Warbarton
had suspected an allusion to ecclesiastical disputes.] I
am in doubt whether Shakespeare's thoughts reached so far into
ecclesiastical disputes. Every commentator is warped a little
by the tract of his own profession. The question is, whether the
second gentleman has ever heard grace. The first gentleman limits
the question to grace in metre. Lucio enlarges it to grace
in any form or language. The first gentleman, to go beyond him,
says, or in any religion, which Lucio allows, because the nature
of things is unalterable; grace is as immutably grace, as his
merry antagonist is a wicked villain. Difference in religion
cannot make a grace not to be grace, a prayer not to be holy; as
nothing can make a villain not to be a villain. This seems to
be the meaning, such as it is.
I.ii.28 (12,1) [there went but a pair of sheers between us] We are
both of the same piece.
I.ii.35 (13,2) [be pil'd, as thou art pil'd, for a French velvet?]
The jest about the pile of a French velvet alludes to the loss of
hair in the French disease, a very frequent topick of our authour's
jocularity. Lucio finding that the gentleman understands the distemper
so well, and mentions it so feelingly, promises to remember
to drink his health, but to forget to drink after him. It was the
opinion of Shakespeare's time, that the cup of an infected person
was contagious.
I.ii.50 (13,3) [To three thousand dollars a year] [A quibble intended
between dollars and dolours. Hammer.] The same jest occured before
in the Tempest.
I.ii.83 (15,5) [what with the sweat] This nay allude to the sweating
sickness, of which the memory was very fresh in the time of
Shakespeare: but more probably to the method of cure then used
for the diseases contracted in brothels.
I.ii.124 (16,6)
[Thus can the demi-god, Authority,
Make us pay down, for our offence, by weight.—
The words of heaven;—on whom it will, it will;
On whom it will not, so; yet still 'tis just]
[Warburton had emended the punctuation of the second line] I
suspect that a line is lost.
I.ii.162 (18,8) [the fault, and glimpse, of newness] Fault and
glimpse have so little relation to each other, that both can
scarcely be right: we may read flash for fault or, perhaps we
may read,
Whether it be the fault or glimpse—
That is, whether it be the seeming enormity of the action, or
the glare of new authority. Yet the sane sense follows in the
next lines, (see 1765, I, 275, 4)
I.ii.188 (19,2) [There is a prone and speechless dialect] I can
scarcely tell what signification to give to the word prone. Its
primitive and translated senses are well known. The authour
may, by a prone dialect, mean a dialect which men are prone to
regard, or a dialect natural and unforced, as those actions seem
to which we are prone. Either of these interpretations are
sufficiently strained; but such distortion of words is not uncommon
in our authour. For the sake of an easier sense, we may read,
—In her youth
There is a pow'r, and speechless dialect,
Such as moves men.
Or thus,
There is a prompt and speechless dialect.
I.ii.194 (20,3) [under grievous imposition] I once thought it
should be inquisition, but the present reading is probably
right. The crime would be under grievous penalties imposed.
I.iii.2 (20,4) [Believe not, that the dribbling dart of love Can
pierce a compleat bosom] Think not that a breast compleatly
armed can be pierced by the dart of love that comes fluttering
without force.
I.iii.12 (21,5) [(A man of stricture and firm abstinence)] [W: strict ure]
Stricture may easily be used for strictness; ure is indeed
an old word, but, I think, always applied to things, never to
persons.
I.iii.43 (22,9) [To do it slander] The text stood,
So do in slander.—
Sir Thomas Hammer has very well corrected it thus,
To do it slander.—
Yet perhaps less alteration might have produced the true reading,
And yet my nature never, in the fight,
So _do_ing _slander_ed.—
And yet my nature never suffer slander by doing any open acts of
severity. (see 1765, I,279,3)
I.iii.51 (23,2) [Stands at a guard] Stands on terms of defiance.
I.iv.30 (24,3) [make me not your story] Do not, by deceiving me,
make me a subject for a tale.
I.iv.41 (26,5)
[as blossoming time
That from the seedness the bare fallow brings
To teeming foyson, so her plenteous womb
Expresseth his full tilth and husbandry]
As the sentence now stands, it is apparently ungrammatical. I
read,
At blossoming time, &c.
That is, As they that feed grow full, so her womb now at blossoming
time, at that time through which the feed time proceeds to
the harvest, her womb shows what has been doing. Lucio ludicrously
calls pregnancy blossoming time, the time when fruit is promised,
though not yet ripe.
I.iv.51 (26,6) [Bore many gentlemen, myself being one, In hand, and
hope of action] To bear in hand is a common phrase for to keep
in expectation and dependance, but we should read,
—with hope of action.
I.iv.56 (26,7) [with full line] With full extent, with the whole
length.
I.iv.62 (27,8) [give fear to use] To intimidate use, that is, practices
long countenanced by custom.
I.iv.69 (27,9) [Unless you have the grace] That is, the acceptableness,
the power of gaining favour. So when she makes her suit,
the provost says,
Heaven give thee moving graces. (1765, I,282,1)
I.iv.70 (27,1) [pith Of business] The inmost part, the main of my
message.
I.iv.86 (28,4) [the mother] The abbess, or prioress.
II.i.8 (29,7) [Let but your honour know] To know is here to examine,
to take cognisance. So in Midsummer-Night's Dream,
Therefore, fair Hermia, question your desires;
Know of your truth, examine well your blood.
II.i.23 (29,8)
['Tis very pregnant,
The jewel that we find, we stoop and take it,
Because we see it; but what we do not see,
We tread upon, and never think of it]
'Tis plain that we must act with bad as with good; we punish the
faults, as we take the advantages, that lie in our way, and what
we do not see we cannot note.
II.i.28 (30,8) [For I have had such faults] That is, because, by
reason that I have had faults.
II.i.57 (31,9) [This comes off well] This is nimbly spoken; this is
volubly uttered.
II.i.63 (32,1) [a tapster, sir; parcel-bawd] This we should now express
by saying, he is half-tapster, half-bawd. (1773)
II.i.66 (32,2) [she professes a hot-house] A hot-house is an English
name for a bagnio.
Where lately harbour'd many a famous whore,
A purging-bill now fix'd upon the door,
Tells you it it a hot-house, so it may.
And still be a whore-house. Ben. Jonson.
II.i.85 (32,3) [Ay, sir, by mistress Over-done's means] Here seems
to have been some mention made of Froth, who was to be accused,
and some words therefore may have been lost, unless the irregularity
of the narrative may be better imputed to the ignorance
of the constable.
II.i.180 (35,4) [Justice or Iniquity?] These were, I suppose, two
personages well known to the audience by their frequent appearance
in the old moralities. The words, therefore, at that time,
produced a combination of ideas, which they have now lost.
II.i.183 (35,5) [Hannibal] Mistaken by the constable for Cannibal.
II.i.215 (36,6) [they will draw you] Draw has here a cluster of
senses. As it refers to the tapster, it signifies to drain, to
empty; as it is related to hang, it means to be conveyed to execution
on a hurdle. In Froth's answer, it is the same as to
bring along by some motive or power.
II.i.254 (37,7) [I'll rent the fairest house in it, after three
pence a bay] A bay of building is, in many parts of England, a
common term, of which the best conception that I could ever attain,
is, that it is the space between the main beams of the
roof; so that a barn crossed twice with beams is a barn of three
bays.
II.ii.26 (40,8) [Stay yet a while] It is not clear why the provost
is bidden to stay, nor when he goes out.
II.ii.32 (40,9) [For which I must not plead but that I am
at war, 'twixt will, and will not]
This is obscure; perhaps it may be mended by reading,
For which I must now plead; but yet I am
At war, 'twixt will, and will not.
Yet and yt are almost indistinguishable in a manuscript. Yet no
alteration is necessary, since the speech is not unintelligible
as it now stands, (see 1765, 9I,294,5)
II.ii.78 (42,2) [And mercy then will breathe within your lips, Like
man new made] I rather think the meaning is, You would then
change the severity of your present character. In familiar
speech, You would be quite another man. (see 1765, 1,296,7)
II.ii.99 (43,6)
[Isab. Yet shew some pity.
Ang. I shew it most of all, when I shew justice;
For then I pity those I do not know]
This was one of Bale's memorials. When I find myself swayed to
mercy, let me remember, that there is a mercy likewise due to
the country.
II.ii.126 (45,2) [We cannot weigh our brother with ourself] [W: yourself]
The old reading is right. We mortals proud and foolish cannot
prevail on our passions to weigh or compare our brother, a
being of like nature and frailty, with ourself. We have different
names and different judgments for the same faults committed by
persons of different condition. (1773)
II.ii.141 (46,3) [She speaks, and 'tis Such sense, that my sense
breeds with it] Thus all the folios. Some later editor has
changed breeds to bleeds, and Dr. Warburton blames poor Mr. Theobald
for recalling the old word, which yet is certainly right.
My sense breeds with her sense, that is, new thoughts are stirring
in my mind, new conceptions are hatched in my imagination.
So we say to brood over thought.
II.ii.149 (46,4) [tested gold] Rather cupelled, brought to the test,
refined, (see 1765,I,299,6)
II.ii.157 (47,6) [For I am that way going to temptation, Where
prayers cross] Which way Angelo is going to temptation, we begin
to perceive; but how prayers cross that way, or cross each other,
at that way, more than any other, I do not understand.
Isabella prays that his honour may be safe, meaning only to
give him his title: his imagination is caught by the word honour;
he feels that his honour is in danger, and therefore, I believe,
answers thus:
I am that way going to temptation,
Which your prayers cross.
That is, I am tempted to lose that honour of which thou implorest
the preservation. The temptation under which I labour is that
which thou hast unknowingly thwarted with thy prayer. He uses the
same mode language a few lines lower. Isabella, parting, says,
Save your honour!
Angelo catches the word—Save it! From what?
From thee; even from thy virtue!—(rev. 1778,II,52,3)
II.ii.165 (47,7)
[But it is I,
That lying, by the violet, in the sun,
Do, as the carrion does, not as the flower,
Corrupt with virtuous season.]
I am not corrupted by her, but by my own heart, which excites
foul desires under the same benign influences that exalt her
purity, as the carrion grows putrid by those beams which encrease
the fragrance of the violet.
II.ii.186 (48,8) [Ever, till now, When men were fond, I smil'd,
and wonder'd how] As a day must now intervene between this conference
of Isabella with Angelo, and the next, the act might
more properly end here; and here, in my opinion, it was ended by
the poet.
II.iii.11 (49,1) [Who falling in the flaws of her own youth, Hath
blister'd her report] Who doth not see that the integrity of the
metaphor requires we should read, —flames of her own youth?
Warburton.]
Who does not see that, upon such principles, there is no end of
correction?
II.iii.36 (50,3) [There rest] Keep yourself in this temper.
II.iii.40 (50,4) [Oh, injurious love] Her execution was respited on
account of her pregnancy, the effects of her love: therefore she
calls it injurious; not that it brought her to shame, but that
it hindered her freeing herself from it. Is not this all very
natural? yet the Oxford editor changes it to injurious law.
II.iv.9 (51,6) [Grown fear'd and tedious] [W: sear'd] I think fear'd
may stand. What we go to with reluctance may be said to be
fear'd.
II.iv.13 (51,7) [case] For outside; garb; external shew.
II.iv.14 (51,8) [Wrench awe from fools, and tie the wiser souls To
thy false seeming?] Here Shakespeare judiciously distinguishes
the different operations of high place upon different minds.
Fools are frighted, and wise men are allured. Those who cannot
judge but by the eye, are easily awed by splendour; those who
consider men as well as conditions, are easily persuaded to love
the appearance of virtue dignified with power.
II.iv.16 (51,9) [Let's write good angel on the devil's horn; 'Tis
not the devil's crest] [Hammer: Is't not the devil's crest] I am
still inclined to the opinion of the Oxford editor. Angelo,
reflecting on the difference between his seeming character, and
his real disposition, observes, that he could change his gravity
for a plume. He then digresses into an apostrophe, O dignity,
how dost thou impose upon the world! then returning to himself,
Blood, says he, thou art but blood, however concealed with
appearances and decorations. Title and character do not alter
nature, which is still corrupt, however dignified.
Let's write good angel on the devil's horn;
Is't not?—or rather—'Tis yet the devil's crest.
It may however be understood, according to Dr. Warburton's
explanation. O place, how dost thou impose upon the world by
false appearances! so much, that if we write good angel on the
devil's horn, 'tis not taken any longer to be the devil's crest.
In this sense,
Blood, thou art but blood.!
is an interjected exclamation. (1773)
II.iv.27 (53,1) [The gen'ral subjects to a well-wish'd king] So the
later editions: but the old copies read,
The general subject to a well-wish'd king.
The general subject seems a harsh expression, but general
subjects has no sense at all; and general was, in our authour's
time, a word for people, so that the general is the people, or
multitude, subject to a king. So in Hamlet: The play pleased
not the million; 'twas caviare to the general.
II.iv.47 (54,3) [Falsely to take away a life true made] Falsely is
the same with dishonestly, illegally: so false, in the next
lines, is illegal, illegitimate.
II.iv.48 (54,4) [As to put metal in restrained means] In forbidden
moulds. I suspect means not to be the right word, but I cannot
find another.
II.iv.50 (55,5) ['Tis set down so in heaven, but not in earth] I
would have it considered, whether the train of the discourse
does not rather require Isabel to say,
'Tis so set down in earth, but not in heaven.
When she has said this, Then, says Angelo, I shall poze you
quickly. Would you, who, for the present purpose, declare your
brother's crime to be less in the sight of heaven, than the law
has made it; would you commit that crime, light as it is, to
save your brother's life? To this she answers, not very plainly
in either reading, but more appositely to that which I
propose:
I had rather give my body, than my soul. (1773)
II.iv.67 (56,6)
[Pleas'd you to do't at peril of your soul,
Were equal poize of sin and charity]
The reasoning is thus: Angelo asks, whether there might not be
a charity in sin to save this brother. Isabella answers, that
if Angelo will save him, she will stake her soul that it were
charity, not sin. Angelo replies, that if Isabella would save
him at the hazard of her soul, it would be not indeed no sin,
but a sin to which the charity would be equivalent.
II.iv.73 (56,7) [And nothing of your answer] I think it should be
read,
And nothing of yours answer.
You, and whatever is yours, be exempt from penalty.
II.iv.86 (56,9) [Accountant to the law upon that pain] Pain is here
for penalty, punishment.
II.iv.90 (57,2) [But in the loss of question,] The loss of
question I do not well understand, and should rather read,
But in the toss of question.
In the agitation, in the discussion of the question. To toss
an argument is a common phrase.
II.iv.106 (57,4) [a brother dy'd at once] Perhaps we should read,
Better it were, a brother died for once,
Than that a sister, by redeeming him.
Should die for ever.
II.iv.123 (58,6) [Owe, and succeed by weakness] To owe is, in this
place, to own, to hold, to have possession.
II.iv.125 (59,7) [the glasses where they view themselves; Which are
as easily broke, as they make forms] Would it not be better to
read,
——take forms.
II.iv.128 (59,8) [In profiting by them] In imitating them, in taking
them for examples.
II.iv.139 (59,1)
[I have no tongue but one. Gentle my lord,
Let me intreat you, speak the former language]
Isabella answers to his circumlocutory courtship, that she has
but one tongue, she does not understand this new phrase, and
desires him to talk his former language, that is, to talk as he
talked before.
II.iv.150 (60,3) [Seeming, seeming!] Hypocrisy, hypocrisy; counterfeit
virtue.
II.iv.156 (60,4) [My Touch against you] [The calling his denial of
her charge his vouch, has something fine. Vouch is the testimony
one man bears for another. So that, by this, he insinuates
his authority was so great, that his denial would have the same
credit that a vouch or testimony has in ordinary cases. Warburton.]
I believe this beauty is merely imaginary, and that vouch
against means no more than denial.
II.iv.165 (60,5) [die the death] This seems to be a solemn phrase
for death inflicted by law. So in Midsummer Night's Dream.
Prepare to die the death.
II.iv.178 (61,6) [prompture] Suggestion, temptation, instigation.
III.i.5 (62,8) [Be absolute for death] Be determined to die, without
any hope of life. Horace,—
—The hour, which exceeds expectation will be welcome.
III.i.7 (62,9) [I do lose a thing, That none but fools would keep]
[W: would reck] The meaning seems plainly this, that none but
fools would wish to keep life; or, none but fools would keep it,
if choice were allowed. A sense, which whether true or not, is
certainly innocent.
III.i.14 (63,3) [For all the accommodations, that thou bear'st Are
nurs'd by baseness] Dr. Warburton is undoubtedly mistaken in
supposing that by baseness is meant self-love here assigned as
the motive of all human actions. Shakespeare only meant to
observe, that a minute analysis of life at once destroys that
splendour which dazzles the imagination. Whatever grandeur can
display, or luxury enjoy, is procured by baseness, by offices of
which the mind shrinks from the contemplation. All the delicacies
of the table may be traced back to the shambles and the
dunghill, all magnificence of building was hewn from the quarry,
and all the pomp of ornaments dug from among the damps and
darkness of the mine.
III.i.16 (64,4) [the soft and tender fork Of a poor worm] Worm is
put for any creeping thing or serpent. Shakespeare supposes
falsely, but according to the vulgar notion, that a serpent
wounds with his tongue, and that his tongue is forked. He
confounds reality and fiction, a serpent's tongue is soft but not
forked nor hurtful. If it could hurt, it could not be soft. In
Midsummer Night's Dream he has the same notion.
—With doubler tongue
Than thine, O serpent, never adder stung.
III.i.17 (64,5)
[Thy best of rest is sleep,
And that thou oft provok'st; yet grosly fear'st
Thy death which is no more]
Here Dr. Warburton might have found a sentiment worthy of his
animadversion. I cannot without indignation find Shakespeare
saying, that death is only sleep, lengthening out his exhortation
by a sentence which in the friar is impious, in the reasoner
is foolish, and in the poet trite and vulgar.
III.i.19 (64,6)
[Thou art not thyself,
For thou exist'st on many thousand grains,
That issue out of dust]
Thou art perpetually repaired and renovated by external assistance,
thou subsistest upon foreign matter, and hast no power of
producing or continuing thy own being.
III.i.24 (64,7) [strange effects] For effects read affects; that is,
affections, passions of mind, or disorders of body variously
affected. So in Othello, The young affects.
III.i.32 (65,9)
[Thou hast nor youth, nor age;
But, as it were, an after-dinner's sleep,
Dreaming on both]
This is exquisitely imagined. When we are young, we busy
ourselves in forming schemes for succeeding time, and miss the
gratifications that are before us; when we are old, we amuse the
languor of age with the recollection of youthful pleasures or
performances; so that our life, of which no part is filled with
the business of the present time, resembles our dreams after
dinner, when the events of the morning are mingled with the
designs of the evening.
III.i.34 (65,1)
[for all thy blessed youth
Becomes as aged, and doth beg the alms
Of palsied eld]
[W: for pall'd, thy blazed youth Becomes assuaged] Here again I
think Dr. Warburton totally mistaken. Shakespeare declares that
man has neither youth nor age; for in youth, which is the
happiest time, or which might be the happiest, he commonly wants
means to obtain what he could enjoy; he is dependent on palsied
eld; must beg alms from the coffers of hoary avarice: and being
very niggardly supplied, becomes as aged, looks, like an old man,
on happiness which is beyond his reach. And when he is old and
rich, when he has wealth enough for the purchase of all that
formerly excited his desires, he has no longer the powers of enjoyment,
—_has neither heat, affection, limb, nor beauty,
To make _his riches pleasant.—
I have explained this passage according to the present reading,
which may stand without much inconvenience; yet I am willing to
persuade my reader, because I have almost persuaded myself, that
our authour wrote,
—for all thy blasted youth
Becomes as aged—
III.i.37 (66,2) [Thou has neither heat, affection, limb, nor beauty
To make thy riches pleasant] [W: nor bounty] I am inclined to
believe, that neither man nor woman will have much difficulty to
tell how beauty makes riches pleasant. Surely this emendation,
though it it elegant and ingenious, is not such as that an opportunity of
inserting it should be purchased by declaring ignorance
of what every one knows, by confessing insensibility to what
every one feels.
III.i.40 (66,3) [more thousand deaths] For this sir T. Hammer reads,
—— a thousand deaths:——
The meaning is not only a thousand deaths, but a thousand deaths
besides what have been mentioned.
III.i.55 (67,5) [Why, as all comforts are; most good in Deed] If this
reading be right, Isabella must mean that she brings something
better than words of comfort, she brings an assurance of deeds.
This is harsh and constrained, but I know not what better to offer. Sir
Thomas Hammer reads,—in speed.
III.i.59 (68,6) [an everlasting leiger. Therefore your best appointment]
Leiger is the same with resident. Appointment; preparation;
act of fitting, or state of being fitted for any thing. So
in old books, we have a knight well appointed; that is, well
armed and mounted or fitted at all points.
III.i.68 (68,8)
[Tho' all the world's vastidity you had,
To a determin'd scope]
A confinement of your mind to one painful idea; to ignominy, of
which the remembrance can neither be suppressed nor escaped.
III.i.79 (69,9)
[And the poor beetle, that we tread upon,
In corporal sufferance finds a pang as great,
As when a giant dies]
The reasoning is, that death is no more than every being must
suffer, though the dread of it is peculiar to man; or perhaps,
that_ we are inconsistent with ourselves, when we so much dread
that which we carelessly inflict on other creatures, that feel
the pain as acutely as we.
III.i.91 (69,1) [follies doth emmew] Forces follies to lie in cover
without daring to show themselves.
III.1.93 (69,3) [His filth within being cast] To cast a pond is
to empty it of mud.
Mr. Upton reads,
His pond within being cast, he would appear
A filth as deep as hell.
III.1.94 (70,4)
[Claud. The princely Angelo?
Isab. Oh, 'tis the cunning livery of hell,
The damned'st body to invest and cover
In princely guards!]
[W: priestly guards] The first folio has, in both places, prenzie,
from which the other folios made princely, and every editor may
make what he can.
III.i.113 (71,7)
[If it were damnable, he being so wise,
Why would he for the momentary trick
Be perdurably fin'd?]
Shakespeare shows his knowledge of human nature in the conduct of
Claudio. When Isabella first tells him of Angelo's proposal, he
answers, with honest indignation, agreeably to his settled principles,
Thou shalt not do't.
But the love of life being permitted to operate, soon furnishes
him with sophistical arguments, he believes it cannot be very
dangerous to the soul, since Angelo, who is so wise, will venture
it.
III.i.121 (71,8) [delighted spirit] This reading may perhaps stand,
but many attempts have been made to correct it. The most plausible
is that which substitutes,
—the benighted spirit,
alluding to the darkness always supposed in the place of future
punishment.
Perhaps we may read,
—the delinquent spirit,
a word easily changed to delighted by a bad copier, or unskilful
reader. Delinquent is proposed by Thirlby in his manuscript.(1773)
III.i.127 (72,9) [lawless and incertain thoughts] Conjecture sent
out to wander without any certain direction, and ranging through
all possibilities of pain.
III.i.139 (73,2) [Is't not a kind of incest, to take life From thine
own sister's shame?] In Isabella's declamation there is something
harsh, and something forced and far-fetched. But her indignation
cannot be thought violent, when we consider her not only as a virgin,
but as a nun.
III.i.149 (74,4) [but a trade] A custom; a practice, an established
habit. So we say of a man much addicted to any thing, he makes
a trade of it.
III.i.176 (75,6) [Hold you there] Continue in that resolution.
III.i.255 (77,l) [only refer yourself to this advantage] This is
scarcely to be reconciled to any established mode of speech. We
may read, only reserve yourself to, or only reserve to yourself
this advantage.
III.i.266 (77,2) [the corrupt deputy scaled] To scale the deputy may
be, to reach him, notwithstanding the elevation of his place; or
it may be, to strip him and discover his nakedness, though armed
and concealed by the investments of authority.
III.ii.6 (78,4) [since, of two usuries] Sir Thomas Hammer corrected
this with less pomp [than Warburton], then since of two usurers
the merriest was put down, and the worser allowed, by order of
law, a furr'd gown, &c. His punctuation is right, but the alteration,
small as it is, appears more than was wanted. Usury may
be need by an easy licence for the professors of usury.
III.ii.14 (79,5) [father] This word should be expunged.
III.ii.40 (80,7) [That we were all, as some would seem to be,
Free from all faults, as faults from seeming free!]
Sir T. Hammer reads,
Free from all faults, as from faults seeming free.
In the interpretation of Dr. Warburton, the sense is trifling,
and the expression harsh. To wish that men were as free from
faults, as faults are free from comeliness [instead of void of
comeliness] is a very poor conceit. I once thought it should be
read,
O that all were, as all would seem to be.
Free from all faults, or from false seeming free.
So in this play,
O place, 0 power—how dost thou
Wrench awe from fools, and tie the wiser souls
To thy false seeming.
But now I believe that a less alteration will serve the turn.
Free from all faults, or _faults from seeming free;
that men were really good, or that their faults were known_, that
men were free from faults, or faults from hypocrisy. So Isabella
calls Angelo's hypocrisy, seeming, seeming.
III.ii.42 (81,8) [His neck will come to your waist] That is, his
neck will be tied, like your waist, with a rope. The friars of
the Franciscan order, perhaps of all others, wear a hempen cord
for a girdle. Thus Buchanan,
Fac gemant suis,
Variata terga funibus.
III.ii.51 (81,1) [what say'st thou to this tune, matter and method?
Is't not drown'd i' the last rain?] [W: It's not down i' the
last reign] Dr. Warburton's emendation is ingenious, but I know
not whether the sense may not be restored with less change. Let
us consider it. Lucio, a prating fop, meets his old friend
going to prison, and pours out upon him his impertinent interrogatories,
to which, when the poor fellow makes no answer, he
adds, What reply? ha? what say'st thou to this? tune, matter,
and method,—is't not? drown'd i' th' last rain? ha? what say'st
thou, trot? &c. It is a common phrase used in low raillery of a
man crest-fallen and dejected, that he looks like a drown'd
puppy, Lucio, therefore, asks him, whether he was drowned in
the last rain, and therefore cannot speak.
III.ii.52 (82,2) [what say'st thou, trot?] Trot, or as it is now
often pronounced, honest trout, is a familiar address to a man
among the provincial vulgar. (1773)
III.ii.54 (82,3) [Which is the way?] What is the mode now?
III.ii.59 (82,4) [in the tub] The method of cure for veneral complaints
is grosly celled the powdering tub.
III.ii.89 (83,6) [Go—to kennel, Pompey—go] It should be remembered,
that Pompey is the common name of a dog, to which allusion
is made in the mention of a kennel. (1773)
III.ii.135 (85,9) [clack-dish] The beggars, two or three centuries
ago, used to proclaim their wont by a wooden dish with a moveable
cover, which they clacked to shew that their vessel was empty.
This appears in a passage quoted on another occasion by Dr. Gray,
(see 1765, I,331,9 and the note in the 1765 Appendix)
III.ii.144 (86,1) [The greater file of the subject] The larger list,
the greater number.
III.ii.193 (87,5) [He's now past it] Sir Thomas Hammer, He is not
past it yet. This emendation was received in the former edition,
but seems not necessary. It were to be wished, that we all explained
more, and amended less. (see 1765, I,333,5)
III.ii.277 (90,9)
[Pattern in himself to know,
Grace to stand, and virtue go]
These lines I cannot understand, but believe that they should be
read thus:
Patterning himself to know,
In grace to stand, in virtue go;
To pattern is to work after a pattern, and, perhaps, in
Shakespeare's licentious diction, simply to work. The sense is, he
that bears the sword of heaven should be holy as well as severe;
one that after good examples labours to know himself, to live
with innocence, and to act with virtue.
III.ii.294 (91,5)
[So disguise shall, by the disguis'd
Pay with falshood false exacting]
So disguise shall by means of a person disguised, return an
injurious demand with a counterfeit person.
IY.i.13 (93,4) [My mirth it much displeas'd, but pleas'd my woe]
Though the musick soothed my sorrows, it had no tendency to produce
light merriment.
IV.i.21 (93,5) [constantly] Certainly; without fluctuation of mind.
IV.i.28 (93,6) [circummur'd with brick] Circummured, walled round.
He caused the doors to be mured and cased up.
Painter's Palace of Pleasure.
IV.i.40 (94,7) [In action all of precept] I rather think we should
read,
In precept all of action,—
that is, in direction given not by words, but by mute signs.
IV.i.44 (94,8) [I have possess'd him] I have made him clearly and
strongly comprehend.
IV.i.60 (95,9) [O place and greatness] [It plainly appears, that
this fine speech belongs to that which concludes the preceding
scene, between the Duke and Lucio…. But that some time might be
given to the two women to confer together, the players, I suppose,
took part of the speech, beginning at No might nor greatness,
&c. and put it here, without troubling themselves about
its pertinency. Warburton.] I cannot agree that these lines are
placed here by the players. The sentiments are common, and such
as a prince, given to reflection, must have often present.
There was a necessity to fill up the time in which the ladies
converse apart, and they must have quick tongues and ready
apprehensions, if they understood each other while this speech was
uttered.
IV.i.60 (95,1) [false eyes] That is, Eyes insidious and traiterous.
IV.i.62 (95,2) [contrarious quests] Different reports, running
counter to each other.
IV.i.76 (96,4) [for yet our tithe's to sow] [W: tilth] The reader
is here attacked with a pretty sophism. We should read tilth,
i.e. our tillage is to make. But in the text it is to sow; and
who has ever said that his tillage was to sow? I believe tythe
is right, and that the expression is proverbial, in which tithe
is taken, by an easy metonymy, for harvest.
IV.ii.69 (100,7) [ As fast lock'd up in sleep, as guiltless labour
When it lies starkly in the traveller's bones ]
Stiffly. These two lines afford a very pleasing image.
IV.ii.83 (101,1) [Even with the stroke] Stroke is here put for the
stroke of a pen or a line.
IV.ii.86 (101,2) [To qualify] To temper, to moderate, as we say
wine is qualified with water.
IV.ii.86 (101,3) [Were he meal'd] Were he sprinkled; were he defiled,
A figure of the same kind our authour uses in Macbeth,
The blood-bolter'd Banquo.
IV.ii.91 (101,4) [that spirit's possess'd with haste, That wounds
the unresisting postern with these strokes] The line is irregular,
and the unresisting postern so strange an expression, that
want of measure, and want of sense, might justly raise suspicion
of an errour, yet none of the later editors seem to have supposed
the place faulty, except sir Tho. Hammer, who reads,
the unresting postern.
The three folio's have it,
unsisting postern,
out of which Mr. Rowe made unresisting, and the rest followed
him. Sir Thomas Hammer seems to have supposed unresisting the
word in the copies, from which he plausibly enough extracted
unresting, but be grounded his emendation on the very syllable that
wants authority. What can be made of unsisting I know not; the
best that occurs to me is unfeeling.
IV.ii.103 (103,6) [Duke. This is his lordship's man.
Prov. And here comes Claudio's pardon]
[Tyrwhitt suggested that the names of the speakers were misplaced]
When, immediately after the Duke had hinted his expectation of a
pardon, the Provost sees the Messenger, he supposes the Duke to
to have known something, and changes his mind. Either reading
may serve equally well. (1773)
IV.ii.153 (104,7) [desperately mortal] This expression is obscure.
Sir Thomas Hammer reads, mortally desperate. Mortally is in low
conversation used in this sense, but I know not whether it was
ever written. I am inclined to believe, that desperately mortal
means desperately mischievous. Or desperately mortal may mean a
man likely to die in a desperate state, without reflection or
repentance. (see 1765, I,348,7)
IV.ii.187 (106,8) [and tie the beard] A beard tied would give a very
new air to that face, which had never been seen but with the
beard loose, long, and squalid. (1773)
IV.iii.4 (107,2) [First, here's young master Rash] This enumeration
of the inhabitants of the prison affords a very striking view of
the practices predominant in Shakespeare's age. Besides those
whose follies are common to all times, we have four fighting men
and a traveller. It is not unlikely that the originals of the
pictures were then known.
IV.iii.17 (108,4) [master Forthlight] Should not Forthlight be
Forthright, alluding to the line in which the thrust is made? (1773)
IV.iii.21 (108,6) [in for the Lord's sake] [i.e. to beg for the rest
of their lives. Warburton.] I rather think this expression intended
to ridicule the puritans, whose turbulence and indecency often
brought them to prison, and who considered themselves as suffering
for religion.
It is not unlikely that men imprisoned for other crimes, might
represent themselves to casual enquirers, as suffering for
puritanism, and that this might be the common cant of the prisons.
In Donne's time, every prisoner was brought to jail by suretiship.
IV.iii.68 (110,7) [After him, fellows] Here was a line given to the
Duke, which belongs to the Provost. The Provost, while the Duke
is lamenting the obduracy of the prisoner, cries out,
After him, fellows, &c.
and, when they are gone out, turns again to the Duke.
IV.iii.72 (110,8) [to transport him] To remove him from one world
to another. The French trepas affords a kindred sense.
IV.iii.115 (112,1)
[I will keep her ignorant of her good,
To make her heavenly comforts of despair,
When least it is expected.]
A better reason might have been given. It was necessary to keep
Isabella in ignorance, that she might with more keenness accuse
the deputy.
IV.iii.139 (113,2) [your bosom] Your wish; your heart's desire.
IV.iii.149 (113,3) [I am combined by a sacred vow] I once thought
this should be confined, but Shakespeare uses combine for to
bind by a pact or agreement, so he calls Angelo the combinate
husband of Mariana.
IV.iii.163 (113,4) [if the old fantastical duke] Sir Thomas Hammer
reads, the odd fantastical duke, but old is a common word of
aggravation in ludicrous language, as, there was old revelling.
IV.iii.170 (114,5) [woodman] That is, huntsman, here taken for a
hunter of girls.
IV.iv.19 (115,6) [sort and suit] Figure and rank.
IV.iv.27 (115,7) [Yet reason dares her No] Mr. Theobald reads,
—Yet reason dares her note.
Sir Thomas Hammer,
—Yet reason dares her: No.
Mr. Upton,
—Yet reason dares her—No,
which he explains thus: Yet, says Angelo, reason will give her
courage—No, that is, it will not. I am afraid dare has no such
signification. I have nothing to offer worth insertion.
IV.iv.28 (116,8)
[For my authority bears a credent bulk;
That no particular scandal once can touch]
Credent is creditable, inforcing credit, not questionable. The
old English writers often confound the active and passive adjectives.
So Shakespeare, and Milton after him, use inexpressive
from inexpressible.
Particular is private, a French sense. No scandal from any
private mouth can reach a man in my authority.
IV.iv.36 (116,9) [Nothing goes right; we would, and we would not]
Here undoubtedly the act should end, and was ended by the poet;
for here is properly a cessation of action, and a night intervenes,
and the place is changed, between the passages of this
scene, and those of the next. The next act beginning with the
following scene, proceeds without any interruption of time or
change of place.
IV.v.1 (117,1) [Duke. These letters at fit time deliver me]
Peter never delivers the letters, but tells his story without any
credentials. The poet forgot the plot which he had formed.
IV.vi.4 (118,2) [He says, to vail full purpose] [T: t'availful]
[Warburton had explained "full" as "beneficial."] To vail full
purpose, may, with very little force on the words, mean, to hide
the whole extent of our design, and therefore the reading may
stand; yet I cannot but think Mr. Theobald's alteration either
lucky or ingenious. To interpret words with such laxity, as to
make full the sane with beneficial, is to put an end, at once,
to all necessity of emendation, for any word may then stand in
the place of another.
IV.vi.9 (118,3) [Enter Peter] This play has two Friars, either of
whom might singly have served. I should therefore imagine, that
Friar Thomas, in the first act, might be changed, without any
harm, to Friar Peter; for why should the Duke unnecessarily
trust two in an affair which required only one. The none of
Friar Thomas is never mentioned in the dialogue, and therefore
seems arbitrarily placed at the head of the scene.
IV.vi.14 (119,4) [Have bent the gates] Have taken possession of the
gates, (rev. 1778, II,134,4)
V.i.20 (120,5) [vail your regard] That is, withdraw your thoughts
from higher things, let your notice descend upon a wronged
woman. To vail, is to lower.
V.i.45 (121,6) [truth is truth To the end of reckoning] That is,
truth has no gradations; nothing which admits of encrease can be
so much what it is, as truth is truth. There may be a strange
thing, and a thing more strange, but if a proposition be true,
there can be none more true.
V.i.54 (121,7) [as shy, as grave, as just, as absolute] As shy; as
reserved, as abstracted: as just; as nice, as exact: as absolute;
as complete in all the round of duty.
V.i.56 (121,8) [In all his dressings] In all his semblance of virtue,
in all his habiliments of office.
V.i.64 (122,1) [do not banish reason For inequality] Let not the
high quality of my adversary prejudice you against me.
V.i.104 (124,4) [Oh, that it were as like, as it is true!] [Warburton had
explained "like" as "seemly."] Like I have never found
for seemly.
V.i.107 (124,8) [In hateful practice] Practice was used by the old
writers for any unlawful or insidious stratagem. So again,
This must needs be practice:
and again,
Let me have way to find this practice out.
V.i.145 (125,6) [nor a temporary medler] It is hard to know what
is meant by a temporary medler. In its usual sense, as opposed
to perpetual, it cannot be used here. It may stand for temporal:
the sense will then be, I know him for a holy man, one that meddles not
with secular affairs. It may mean temporising: I know
him to be a holy man, one who would not_ temporise, or take the
opportunity of your absence to defame you. Or we may read,
Not scurvy, nor a tamperer and medler:
not one who would bare tampered with this woman to make her a
false evidence against your deputy.
V.i.160 (126,8) [So vulgarly and personally accus'd] Meaning either
so grosly, with such indecency of invective, or by so mean and
inadequate witnesses.
V.i.205 (128,2) [This is a strange abuse] Abuse stands in this place
for deception, or puzzle. So in Macbeth,
This strange and self abuse,
means, this strange deception of himself.
V.i.219 (129,3) [her promised proportions Came short of composition]
Her fortune, which was promised proportionate to mine, fell short
of the composition, that is, contract or bargain.
V.i.236 (129,4) [These poor informal women] I once believed informal
had no other or deeper signification than informing, accusing.
The scope of justice, is the full extent; but think, upon farther
enquiry, that informal signifies incompetent, not qualified to
give testimony. Of this use there are precedents to be found,
though I cannot now recover them.
V.i.245 (130,5) [That's seal'd in approbation?] Then any thing subject
to counterfeits is tried by the proper officers and approved,
a stamp or seal is put upon it, as among us on plate, weights,
and measures. So the Duke says, that Angela's faith has been
tried, approved, and seal'd in testimony of that approbation, and,
like other things so sealed, is no more to be called in question.
V.i.255 (131,6) [to hear this matter forth] To hear it to the end;
to search it to the bottom.
V.i.303 (132,4) [to retort your manifest appeal] To refer back to
Angelo and the cause in which you appealed from Angelo to the
Duke.
V.i.317 (133,5) [his subject I am not, Nor here provincial] Nor here
accountable. The meaning seems to be, I am not one of his natural
subjects, nor of any dependent province.
V.i.323 (133,6) [the forfeits in a barber's shop] [Warburton had explained
that a list of forfeitures were posted in barber shops to
warn patrons to keep their hands off the barber's surgical instruments.]
This explanation may serve till a better is discovered.
But whoever has seen the instruments of a chirurgeon, knows that
they may be very easily kept out of improper hands in a very
small box, or in his pocket.
V.i.336 (134,7) [And was the duke a fleshmonger, a fool, and a
coward, as you then reported him to be?] So again afterwards,
You, sirrah, that know me for a fool, a coward,
One of all luxury—
But Lucio had not, in the former conversation, mentioned cowardice
among the faults of the duke.—Such failures of memory are
incident to writers more diligent than this poet.
V.i.359 (135,8) [show your sheep-biting face, and be hang'd an
hour' Will't not off?] This is intended to be the common language
of vulgar indignation. Our phrase on such occasions is
simply; show your sheep-biting face, and be hanged. The words
an hour have no particular use here, nor are authorised by custom.
I suppose it was written thus, show your sheep-biting face,
and be hanged—an' how? wilt not off? In the midland counties,
upon any unexpected obstruction or resistance, it is common to
exclaim an' how?
V.i.388 (136,9) [Advertising, and holy] Attentive and faithful.
V.i.393 (136,l) [be you as free to us] Be as generous to us, pardon
us as we have pardoned you.
V.i.401 (136,2) [That brain'd my purpose] We now use in conversation
a like phrase. This it was that knocked my design on the head.
Dr. Warburton reads,
—baned my purpose.
V.i.413 (137,3) [even from his proper tongue] Even from Angelo's
own tongue. So above.
In the witness of his proper ear
To call him villain.
V.i.438 (138,5) [Against all sense you do importune her] The meaning
required is, against all reason and natural affection; Shakespeare,
therefore, judiciously uses a single word that implies both;
sense signifying both reason and affection.
V.i.452 (139,6) ['Till he did look on me] The duke has justly observed
that Isabel is importuned against all sense to solicit for
Angelo, yet here against all sense she solicits for him. Her
argument is extraordinary.
A due sincerity govern'd his deeds,
'Till he did look on me; since it is so.
Let him not die.
That Angelo had committed all the crimes charged against him,
as far as he could commit them, is evident. The only intent
which his act did not overtake, was the defilement of Isabel. Of
this Angelo was only intentionally guilty.
Angela's crimes were such, as must sufficiently justify punishment,
whether its end be to secure the innocent from wrong, or
to deter guilt by example; and I believe every reader feels some
indignation when he finds him spared. From what extenuation of
his crime, can Isabel, who yet supposes her brother dead, form
any plea in his favour. Since he was good 'till he looked on me,
let him not die. I am afraid our varlet poet intended to inculcate,
that women think ill of nothing that raises the credit of
their beauty, and are ready, however virtuous, to pardon any act
which they think incited by their own charms.
V.i.488 (140,7) [But, for those earthly faults, I quit them all]
Thy faults, so far as they are punishable on earth, so far as
they are cognisable by temporal power, I forgive.
V.i.499 (141,8) [By this, lord Angelo perceives he's safe] It is
somewhat strange, that Isabel is not made to express either
gratitude, wonder or joy at the sight of her brother.
V.i.501 (141,9) [your evil quits you well] Quits you, recompenses,
requites you.
V.i.502 (141,1) [Look, that you love your wife; her worth, worth
yours] Sir T. Hammer reads,
Her worth works yours.
This reading is adopted by Dr. Warburton, but for what reason?
How does her worth work Angelo's worth? it has only contributed
to work his pardon. The words are, as they are too frequently,
an affected gingle, but the sense is plain. Her worth, worth
yours; that is, her value is equal to your value, the match is
not unworthy of you.
V.i.504 (141,2) [And yet here's one in place I cannot pardon] After
the pardon of two murderers, Lucio might be treated by the good
duke with less harshness; but perhaps the poet intended to show,
what is too often seen, that men easily forgive wrongs which are
not committed against themselves.
V.i.509 (142,3) [according to the trick] To my custom, my habitual
practice.
V.i.526 (142,4) [thy other forfeits] Thy other punishments.
V.i.534 (142,5) [Thanks, good friend Escalus, for thy much goodness]
I have always thought that there is great confusion in this concluding
speech. If my criticism would not be censured as too
licentious, I should regulate it thus,
_Thanks, good friend Escalus, for thy much goodness.
Thanks. Provost, for thy care and secrecy;
We shall employ thee in a worthier place.
Forgive him, Angelo, that brought you home
The head of Ragozine for Claudio's.
Ang. Th' offence pardons itself.
Duke, There's more behind
That is more gratulate. Dear Isabel,
I have a motion,&c,
V.i.545 (143,6) General Observation The novel of Cynthio Giraldi,
from which Shakespeare is supposed to have borrowed this fable,
may be read in Shakespeare illustrated, elegantly translated,
with remarks which will assist the enquirer to discover how much
absurdity Shakespeare has admitted or avoided.
I cannot but suspect that some other had new-modelled the
novel of Cynthio, or written a story which in some particulars
resembled it, and that Cynthio was not the authour whom Shakespeare
immediately followed. The emperour in Cynthio is named
Maximine; the duke, in Shakespeare's enumeration of the persons
of the drama, is called Vincentio. This appears a very slight
remark; but since the duke has no name in the play, nor is ever
mentioned but by his title, why should he be called Vincentio
among the persons, but because the name was copied from the
story, and placed superfluously at the head of the list by the
mere habit of transcription? It is therefore likely that there
was then a story of Vincentio duke of Vienna, different from
that of Maximine emperour of the Romans.
Of this play the light or comick part is very natural and
pleasing, but the grave scenes, if a few passages be excepted,
have more labour than elegance. The plot is rather intricate
than artful. The time of the action is indefinite; some time,
we know not how much, must have elapsed between the recess of
the duke and the imprisonment of Claudio; for he must have
learned the story of Mariana in his disguise, or he delegated
his power to a man already known to be corrupted. The unities
of action and place are sufficiently preserved.