discovers, exhibits, displays. The usual sense of ‘discover’ is to find
out or make known, but in Milton and Shakespeare the prefix dis- has
often the more purely negative force of un-: hence discover = uncover,
reveal. Comp.—
“Some high-climbing hill
Which to his eye discovers unaware
The goodly prospect of some foreign land.”
Par. Lost, iii. 546.
Attendant
Spirit descends. The part of the attendant spirit was taken by
Lawes (see Introduction), who, in his prologue or opening speech,
explains who he is and on what errand he has been sent, hints at the
plot of the whole masque, and at the same time compliments the Earl in
whose honour the masque is being given (lines 30-36). In the ancient classical drama the
prologue was sometimes an outline of the plot, sometimes an address to
the audience, and sometimes introductory to the plot. The opening of
Comus prepares the audience and also directly addresses it
(line 43). For the form of the epilogue in the
actual performance of the masque see note, l.
975-6.
1. starry threshold, etc. Comp. Virgil:
“The sire of gods and monarch of
men summons a council to the starry chamber” (sideream in sedem),
Aen. x. 2.
2. mansion, abode. Trench points out that
this word denotes strictly “a place of tarrying,” which
might be for a longer or a shorter time: hence ‘a
resting-place.’ Comp. John, xiv. 2, “In my
Father’s house are many mansions”; and Il
Pens. 93, “Her mansion in this fleshly nook.”
The word has now lost the notion of tarrying, and is applied to a
large and important dwelling-house. where, in which: the
antecedent is separated from the relative, a frequent construction in
Milton (comp. lines 66, 821, etc.). So in Latin, where the grammatical
connection would generally be sufficiently indicated by the
inflection. shapes ... spirits. An instance of the manner in
which Milton endows spiritual beings with personality without making
them
too distinct. “Of all the poets who have introduced into their
works the agency of supernatural beings Milton has succeeded
best” (Macaulay). We see this in Par. Lost (e.g.
ii. 666). Compare the use of the word ‘shape’ (Lat.
umbra) in l. 207: also
L’Alleg. 4, “horrid shapes and
shrieks”; and Il Pens. 6, “fancies fond with gaudy
shapes possess.” Milton’s use of the demonstrative
those in this line is noteworthy; comp. “that last
infirmity of noble mind,” Lyc. 71: it implies that the
reference is to something well known, and that further
particularisation is needless.
3.
insphered. ‘Sphere,’ with its derivatives
‘sphery,’ ‘insphere,’ and
‘unsphere’ (Il Pens. 88), is used by Milton with a
literal reference to the cosmical framework as a whole (see Hymn
Nat. 48) or to some portion of it. In Shakespeare
‘sphere’ occurs in the wider sense of ‘the path in
which anything moves,’ and it is to this metaphorical use of the
word that we owe such phrases as ‘a person’s sphere of
life,’ ‘sphere of action,’ etc. See also
Comus, 112-4, 241-3, 1021; Arc. 62-7; Par. Lost,
v. 618; where there are references to the music of the spheres.
4.
mild: an attributive of the whole clause, ‘regions of
calm and serene air.’ calm and serene. These are not mere
synonyms: the Lat. serenus = bright or unclouded, so that the
two epithets are to be respectively contrasted with
‘smoke’ and ‘stir’ (line 5); ‘calm’ being opposed to
‘stir’ and ‘serene’ to ‘smoke.’
Compare Homer’s description of the seat of the gods: “Not
by wind is it shaken, nor ever wet with rain, nor doth the snow come
nigh thereto, but most clear air is spread about it
cloudless, and the white light floats over it,”
Odyssey, vi.: comp. note, l. 977.
5.
this dim spot. The Spirit describes the Earth as it appears to those
immortal shapes whose presence he has just quitted.
6.
There are here two attributive clauses: “which men call
Earth” and “(in which) men strive,” etc.
low-thoughted care; narrow-minded anxiety, care about earthly
things. Comp. the form of the adjective ‘low-browed,’
L’Alleg. 8: both epithets are borrowed by Pope in his
Eloisa.
7.
This line is attributive to ‘men.’ pestered ...
pinfold, crowded together in this cramped space, the Earth.
Pester, which has no connection with pest, is a
shortened form of impester, Fr. empêtrer, to
shackle a horse by the foot when it is at pasture. The radical sense
is that of clogging (comp. Son. xii. 1); hence of crowding; and
finally of annoyance or encumbrance of any kind. ‘Pinfold’
is strictly an enclosure in which stray cattle are pounded or
shut up: etymologically, the word = pind-fold, a corruption of
pound-fold. Comp. impound, sheep-fold, etc.
8.
frail and feverish. Comp. “life’s fitful
fever” (Macbeth, iii. 2.
23). This line, like several of the adjacent ones, is alliterative.
9.
crown that Virtue gives. This is Scriptural language: comp.
Rev. iv. 4; 2 Tim. iv. 8, “Henceforth there is
laid up for me the crown of righteousness.”
10.
this mortal change. In Milton’s MS. line 7 was followed by the words,
‘beyond the written date of mortal change,’ i.e.
beyond, or after, man’s appointed time to die. These words were
struck out, but we may suppose that the words ‘mortal
change’ in line 10 have a similar
meaning. Milton frequently uses ‘mortal’ in the sense of
‘liable to death,’ and hence ‘human’ as
opposed to ‘divine’: the mortal change is therefore
‘the change which occurs to all human beings.’ Comp.
Job, xiv. 14: “all the days of my appointed time will I
wait, till my change come”: see also line 841. Prof. Masson takes it to mean ‘this
mortal state of life,’ as distinguished from a future state of
immortality. The Spirit uses ‘this’ as in line 8, in contrast with ‘those,’ line 2.
11.
enthroned gods, etc. In allusion to Rev. iv. 4,
“And upon the thrones I saw four and twenty elders sitting,
arrayed in white garments; and on their heads crowns of gold.”
Milton frequently speaks of the inhabitants of heaven as
enthroned. The accent here falls on the first syllable of the
word.
12.
Yet some there be, etc.: ‘Although men are generally so
exclusively occupied with the cares of this life, there are
nevertheless a few who aspire,’ etc. Be is here purely
indicative. This usage is frequent in Elizabethan English, and still
survives in parts of England. Comp. Lines on Univ. Carrier, ii.
25, where it occurs in a similar phrase, “there be that say
’t”: also lines 519, 668. It is employed to refer to a number of
persons or things, regarded as a class. by due steps,
i.e. by the steps that are due or appointed: comp.
‘due feet,’ Il Pens. 155. Due,
duty, and debt are all from Lat. debitus,
owed.
13.
their just hands. ‘Just’ belongs to the predicate:
‘to lay their just hands’ = to lay their hands with
justice. golden key. Comp. Matt. xvi. 19, “I will
give unto thee the keys of the kingdom of heaven”; also
Lyc. 111:
“Two massy keys he bore of metals twain
(The golden opes, the iron shuts amain).”
15.
errand: comp. Par. Lost, iii. 652, “One of the
seven Who in God’s presence, nearest to his throne, Stand ready
at command, and are his eyes That run through all the Heavens, or down
to the Earth Bear his swift errands”: also vii. 579.
but for such, i.e. unless it were for such.
16.
‘I would not sully the purity of my heavenly garments with the
noisome vapour of this sin-corrupted earth.’ ambrosial,
heavenly; also used by Milton in the sense of ‘conferring
immortality’: comp. l. 840; Par.
Lost, ii. 245; iv. 219, “blooming
ambrosial fruit.” ‘Ambrosial,’ like
‘amaranthus’ (Lyc. 149), is cognate with the
Sanskrit amríta, undying; and is applied by Homer to the
hair of the gods: similarly in Tennyson’s Oenone, 174:
see also In Memoriam, lxxxvi. Ben Jonson (Neptune’s
Triumph) has ‘ambrosian hands,’ i.e. hands fit
for a deity. Ambrosia was the food of the gods. weeds: now used
chiefly in the phrase “widow’s weeds,” i.e.
mourning garment. Milton and Shakespeare use it in the general sense
of garment or covering: in the lines On the Death of a Fair
Infant, it is applied to the human body itself; comp. also M.
N. D. ii. 1. 255, “Weed wide enough to wrap a fairy
in.” See also Comus, 189, 390.
18.
But to my task, i.e. but I must proceed to my task: see
l. 1012.
19.
every ... each. It is usual to write every ... every, or
each ... each, but Milton occasionally uses ‘every’
and ‘each’ together: comp. l. 311
and Lyc. 93, “every gust ... off each
beaked promontory.” Every denotes each without exception,
and can now only be used with reference to more than two objects;
each may refer to two or more.
20.
by lot, etc. When Saturn (Kronos) was dethroned, his empire of
the universe was distributed amongst his three sons, Jupiter
(‘high’ Jove), Neptune (the god of the Sea), and Pluto
(‘nether’ or Stygian Jove). In Iliad xv. Neptune
(Poseidon) says: “For three brethren are we, and sons of Kronos,
whom Rhea bare ... And in three lots are all things divided, and each
drew a domain of his own, and to me fell the hoary sea, to be my
habitation for ever, when we shook the lots.” nether,
lower: comp. the phrase ‘the upper and the nether lip,’
and the name Netherlands. Hell, the abode of Pluto, is called by
Milton ‘the nether empire’ (Par. Lost, ii. 295).
The form nethermost (Par. Lost, ii. 955) is, like
aftermost and foremost, a double superlative.
21.
sea-girt isles. Ben Jonson calls Britain a ‘sea-girt
isle’: comp. l. 27. Isle is the
M.E. ile, in which form the s has been dropped: it is
from O.F. isle, Lat. insula. It is therefore distinct
from island, where an s has, by confusion, been
inserted. Island = M.E. iland, A.S. igland (ig =
island: land = land). In line 50 Milton
wrote ‘iland.’
22.
like to rich and various gems, etc. Shakespeare describes
England as a ‘precious stone set in the silver sea,’
Richard II. ii. 1. 46: he also speaks of Heaven as being
inlayed with stars, Cym. v. 5. 352; M. of V. v.
1. 59, “Look how the floor of heaven Is thick inlaid with
patines of bright gold.” Compare also Par. Lost, iv. 700,
where Milton refers to the ground as having a rich inlay of
flowers. But for its inlay of islands the sea would be bare or
unadorned. like: here followed by the preposition to,
and having its proper force as an adjective: comp.
Il Pens. 9. Whether like is used as an adjective or an
adverb, the preposition is now usually omitted: comp. l. 57.
24.
to grace, i.e. to show favour to: a clause of purpose.
25.
By course commits, etc., i.e. “In regular
distribution he commits to each his distinct government.”
several: separate or distinct. Radically several is from
the verb sever: it is now used only with plural nouns.
26.
sapphire. This colour is again associated with the sea in line
29: see note there.
27.
little tridents, in contrast with that of Neptune, who,
“with his trident touched the stars” (Neptune’s
Triumph, Proteus’ Song, Ben Jonson).
28.
greatest and the best. Comp. Shakespeare’s eulogy in
Rich. II. ii. 1: also Ben Jonson’s “Albion, Prince
of all his Isles,” Neptune’s Triumph, Apollo’s
Song.
29.
quarters, divides into distinct regions. Comp. Dryden, Georg. I.
208:
“Sailors quarter’d Heaven, and found a name
For every fixt and ev’ry wandering star.”
Some would take the word as strictly denoting division into
four parts: “at that time the island was actually divided
into four separate governments: for besides those at London and
Edinburgh, there were Lords President of the North and of
Wales.” (Keightley). blue-haired deities. These must be
distinct from the tributary gods who wield their little tridents (line
27), otherwise the thought would ill accord
with the complimentary nature of lines 30-36.
Regarding the epithet ‘blue-haired’ Masson asks:
“Can there be a recollection of blue as the British colour,
inherited from the old times of blue-stained Britons who fought with
Caesar? Green-haired is the usual epithet for Neptune and his
subordinates”: in Spenser, for example, the sea-nymphs have long
green hair. But Ovid expressly calls the sea-deities caerulei
dii, and Neptune caeruleus deus, thus associating blue with
the sea.
30.
‘And all this region that looks towards the West (i.e. Wales) is
entrusted to a noble peer of great integrity and power.’ The peer
referred to is the Earl of Bridgewater. As Lord President he was
entrusted with the civil and military administration of Wales and the
four English counties of Gloucester, Worcester, Hereford, and
Shropshire. That he was a nobleman of high character is shown by the
fact that from 1617, when he was nominated one of “his Majestie’s
Counsellors,” he had continued to serve in various important public and
private offices. On his monument there is the following: “He was a
profound Scholar, an able Statesman, and a good Christian: he was a
dutiful Son
to his Mother the Church of England in her persecution, as well as in
her great splendour; a loyal Subject to his Sovereign in those worst
of times, when it was accounted treason not to be a traitor. As he
lived 70 years a pattern of virtue, so he died an example of patience
and piety.” falling sun: Lat. sol occidens. Orient
and occident (lit. ‘rising’ and ‘falling’) are
frequently used to denote the East and the West.
31.
mickle (A.S. micel) great. From this word comes
much. ‘Mickle’ and ‘muckle’ are current
in Scotland in the sense of great. Comp. Rom. and Jul. ii. 3.
15, “O, mickle is the powerful grace that lies In
herbs,” etc.
33.
An old and haughty nation. The Welsh are Kelts, an Aryan people
who probably first entered Britain about B.C. 500: they are therefore rightly spoken of as
an old nation. Compare Ben Jonson’s piece For the Honour of
Wales:
“I is not come here to taulk of Brut,
From whence the Welse does take his root,” etc.
That they were haughty and ‘proud in arms’ the Romans
found, and after them the Saxons: the latter never really held more
than the counties of Monmouth and Hereford. In the reign of Edward I.
attempts were made by that king to induce the Welsh to come to terms,
but the answer of the Barons was: “We dare not submit to Edward,
nor will we suffer our prince to do so, nor do homage to strangers,
whose tongue, ways and laws we know not of: we have only raised war in
defence of our lands, laws and rights.” By a statute of Henry
VIII. this ‘haughty’ people were put in possession of the
same rights and liberties as the English. proud in arms: this
is Virgil’s belloque superbum, Aen. i. 21
(Warton).
34.
nursed in princely lore, brought up in a manner worthy of their high
position. It is to be noted that the Bridgewater family was by birth
distantly connected with the royal family. Milton may allude merely to
their connection with the court. Lore is cognate with learn.
35.
their father’s state. This probably refers to the actual
ceremonies connected with the installation of the Earl as Lord
President. The old sense of ‘state’ is ‘chair of
state’: comp. Arc. 81, and Jonson’s
Hymenaei, “And see where Juno ... Displays her glittering
state and chair.”
36.
new-intrusted, an adjective compounded of a participle and a
simple adverb, new being = newly; comp.
‘smooth-dittied,’ l. 86. Contrast
the form of the epithet “blue-haired,” where the compound
adjective is formed as if from a noun, “blue-hair”: comp.
“rushy-fringed,” l. 890. Strictly
speaking, the Earl’s power was not ‘new-intrusted,’
though it was newly assumed. See Introduction.
37.
perplexed, interwoven, entangled (Lat. plecto, to plait or
twist). The word is here used literally and is therefore applicable to
inanimate objects. The accent is on the first syllable.
38.
horror. This word is meant not merely to indicate terror, but
also to describe the appearance of the paths. Horror is from Lat.
horrere, to bristle, and may be rendered
‘shagginess’ or ‘ruggedness,’ just as
horrid, l. 429, means bristling or
rugged. Comp. Par. Lost, i. 563, “a horrid front
Of dreadful length, and dazzling arms.” shady brows: this
may refer to the trees and bushes overhanging the paths, as the brow
overhangs the eyes.
39.
Threats: not current as a verb. forlorn, now used only
as an adjective, is the past participle of the old verb
forleosen, to lose utterly: the prefix for has an
intensive force, as in forswear; but in the latter word the
sense of from is more fully preserved in the prefix. See note, l. 234.
40.
tender age. Lady Alice Egerton was about fourteen years of age; the
two brothers were younger than she.
41.
But that, etc. Grammatically, but may be regarded as a
subordinative conjunction = ‘unless (it had happened) that I was
despatched’: or, taking it in its original prepositional sense,
we may regard it as governing the substantive clause, ‘that ...
guard.’ quick command: the adjective has the force of an
adverb, quick commands being commands that are to be carried quickly.
sovran, supreme. This is Milton’s spelling of the modern
word sovereign, in which the g is due to the mistaken
notion that the last syllable of the word is cognate with
reign. The word is from Lat. superanum = chief: comp. l.
639.
43.
And listen why; sc. ‘I was despatched.’ The
language of lines 43, 44 is suggested by
Horace’s Odes, iii. 1, 2: “Favete linguis; carmina
non prius Audita ... canto.” The poet implies that the plot of
his mask is original: it is not (he says) to be found in any ancient
or modern song or tale that was ever recited either in the
‘hall’ (= banqueting-hall) or in the ‘bower’
(= private chamber). Or ‘hall’ and ‘bower’ may
denote respectively the room of the lord and that of his lady.
46.
Milton in his usual significant manner (comp. L’Allegro and Il
Penseroso), proceeds to invent a genealogy for Comus. The mask is
designed to celebrate the victory of Purity and Reason over Desire and
Enchantment. Comus, who represents the latter, must therefore spring
from parents representing the pleasure of man’s lower nature and the
misuse of man’s higher powers on behalf of falsehood and impurity. These
parents are the wine-god Bacchus and the sorceress Circe. The former,
mated with Love, is the father of Mirth (see L’Allegro);
but, mated
with the cunning Circe, his offspring is a voluptuary
whose gay exterior and flattering speech hide his dangerously
seductive and magical powers. He bears no resemblance, therefore, to
Comus as represented in Ben Jonson’s Pleasure reconciled to
Virtue, in which mask “Comus” and “The
Belly” are throughout synonymous. In the Agamemnon of
Aeschylus, Comus is a “drinker of human blood”; in
Philostratus, he is a rose-crowned wine-bibber; in Dekker he is
“the clerk of gluttony’s kitchen”; in Massinger he
is “the god of pleasure”; and in the work of Erycius
Puteanus he is a graceful reveller, the genius of love and
cheerfulness. Prof. Masson says, “Milton’s Comus is
a creation of his own, for which he was as little indebted
intrinsically to Puteanus as to Ben Jonson. For the purpose of his
masque at Ludlow Castle he was bold enough to add a brand-new god, no
less, to the classic Pantheon, and to import him into Britain.”
Bacchus, the god who taught men the preparation of wine. He is
the Greek Dionysus, who, on one of his voyages, hired a vessel
belonging to some Tyrrhenian pirates: these men resolved to sell him
as a slave. Thereupon, he changed the mast and oars of the ship into
serpents and the sailors into dolphins. The meeting of Bacchus with
Circe is Milton’s own invention; in the Odyssey it is
Ulysses who lights upon her island: “And we came to the isle
Ææan, where dwelt Circe of the braided tresses, an awful
goddess of mortal speech, own sister to the wizard Æetes,”
Odys. x. from out, etc. Comp. Par. Lost, v. 345.
‘From out’ has the same force as the more common
‘out from.’
47.
misusèd, abused. The prefix mis- was very
generally used by Milton; e.g. mislike, misdeem,
miscreated, misthought (all obsolete).
48.
After the Tuscan mariners transformed, i.e. after the
transformation of the Tuscan mariners (see Ovid, Met. iii.).
They are called Tuscan, because Tyrrhenia in Central Italy was named
Etruria or Tuscia by the Romans: Etruria includes modern Tuscany. This
grammatical construction is common in Latin; a passive participle
combined with a substantive answering to an English verbal or abstract
noun connected with another noun by the preposition of, and
used to denote a fact in the past; e.g. “since created
man” (P. L. i. 573) = since the creation of man:
“this loss recovered” (P. L. ii. 21) = the recovery
of this loss.
49.
as the winds listed; at the pleasure of the winds: comp.
John, iii. 8, “the wind bloweth where it
listeth”; Lyc. 123. The verb list is, in
older English, generally used impersonally, and in Chaucer we find
‘if thee lust’ or ‘if thee list’ = if it
please thee. The word survives in the adjective listless of
which the older form was lustless: the noun lust has
lost its original and wider sense (which it still has in German), and
now signifies ‘longing desire.’
50.
On Circe’s island fell. Circe’s island = Aeaea, off
the coast of Latium. Circe was the daughter of Helios (the Sun) by the
ocean-nymph Perse. On ‘island,’ see note, l. 21; and with this use of the verb
fall comp. the Latin incidere in. The sudden
introduction of the interrogative clause in this line is an example of
the figure of speech called anadiplosis.
51.
charmèd cup, i.e. liquor that has been
charmed or rendered magical. Charms are incantations or
magic verses (Lat. carmina): comp. lines 526 and 817.
Grammatically, ‘cup’ is the object of
‘tasted.’
52.
Whoever tasted lost, i.e. who tasted (he) lost. In this
construction whoever must precede both verbs; Shakespeare
frequently uses who in this sense, and Milton occasionally:
comp. Son. xii. 12, “who loves that must first be
wise and good.” See Abbott, § 251. lost his upright
shape. In Odyssey x. we read: “So Circe led them
(followers of Ulysses) in and set them upon chairs and high seats, and
made them a mess of cheese and barley-meal and yellow honey with
Pramnian wine, and mixed harmful drugs with the food to make them
utterly forget their own country. Now when she had given them the cup
and they had drunk it off, presently she smote them with a wand, and
in the styes of the swine she penned them. So they had the head and
voice, the bristles and the shape of swine, but their mind abode even
as of old. Thus were they penned there weeping, and Circe flung them
acorns and mast and fruit of the cornel tree to eat, whereon wallowing
swine do always batten.” (Butcher and Lang’s
translation.)
54.
clustering locks: comp. l. 608. Milton
here pictures the Theban Bacchus, a type of manly beauty, having his
head crowned with a wreath of vine and ivy: both of these plants were
sacred to the god. Comp. L’Alleg. 16, “ivy-crowned
Bacchus”; Par. Lost, iv. 303; Sams. Agon. 569.
55.
his blithe youth, i.e. his fresh young figure.
57.
‘A son much like his father, but more like his mother.’ This may
indicate that it is upon Comus’s character as a sorcerer rather than as
a reveller that the story of the mask depends. Comp. Masque of Hymen:
“Much of the father’s face,
More of the mother’s grace.”
58.
Comus: see note, l. 46. The Greek word
κῶμος
denoted a
revel or merry-making; afterwards it came to mean the personification of
riotous mirth, the god of Revel. Hence also the word comedy. In
classical mythology the individuality of Comus is not well defined: this
enabled Milton more readily to endow him with entirely new
characteristics.
59.
frolic: an instance of the original use of the word as an adjective;
comp. L’Alleg. 18, “frolic wind”;
Tennyson’s Ulysses,
“a frolic welcome.” It is now chiefly used as a noun or a
verb, and a new adjective, frolicsome, has taken its place;
from this, again, comes the noun frolicsomeness. Frolic
is from the Dutch, and cognate with German fröhlich, so
that lic in ‘frolic’ corresponds to ly in
such words as cleanly, godly, etc. of: this use of the
preposition may be compared with the Latin genitive in such phrases as
æger animi = sick of soul; of = ‘because of’
or ‘in respect of.’
60.
Roving the Celtic and Iberian fields, i.e. roving
through Gaul and Spain. ‘Rove’ here governs an accusative:
comp. Lyc. 173, “walked the waves”; Par.
Lost, i. 521, “roamed the utmost Isles.”
61.
betakes him. The pronoun has here a reflective force: in
Elizabethan English, and still more often in Early English, this use
of the simple pronouns is common (see Abbott, § 223). Compare l.
163. ominous; literally = full of omens
or portents: comp. ‘monstrous’ = full of monsters
(Lyc. 158); also l. 79.
‘Ominous’ has now acquired the sense of
‘ill-omened’; compare the acquired sense of
‘hapless,’ ‘unfortunate,’ etc.
65.
orient, bright. The Lat. oriens = rising; hence (from
being applied to the sun) = eastern (l. 30);
and hence generally ‘bright’ or ‘shining’:
comp. Par. Lost, i. 546, “With orient colours
waving.”
66.
drouth of Phoebus, i.e. thirst caused by the heat of the
sun. Phoebus is Apollo, the Sun-god. Compare l. 928, where ‘drouth’ = want of rain;
the more usual spelling is drought. which: see note, l. 2. ‘Which’ is here object of
‘taste,’ and refers to ‘liquor.’
67.
fond, foolish (its primary sense). Fonned was the
participle of an old verb fonnen, to be foolish. The word is
now used to express great liking or affection: the idea of folly being
almost entirely lost. Chaucer has fonne, a fool: comp. Il
Pens. 6, “fancies fond”; Lyc. 56,
“I fondly dream”; Sams. Agon. 1682,
“So fond are mortal men.”
68.
Soon as, etc., i.e. as soon as the magical draught
produces its effect. In line 66 as is
temporal. potion. Radically, potion = a drink, but it is
generally used in the sense of a medicated or poisonous draught.
Poison is the same word through the French.
69.
Express resemblance of the gods. Comp. Shakespeare: “What
a piece of work is man! ... in action how like an angel, in
apprehension, how like a god!” See also Par. Lost, iii.
44, “human face divine.”
71.
ounce. This is the Felis uncia, allied to the panther and the
cheetah. Some connect it with the Persian yúz, panther.
72.
All other parts, etc. In the Odyssey (see note on l. 52) the bodies of those transformed
by Circe were entirely changed; here only the head. As one editor
observes, this suited the convenience of the performers who were to
appear on the stage in masks (see Stage direction, l. 92-3). Grammatically, line 72 is an example of the absolute construction,
common in Latin. The noun (‘parts’) is neither the subject
nor the object of a verb, but is used along with some attributive
adjunct—generally a participle
(‘remaining’)—to serve the purpose of an adverb or
adverbial clause. The noun (or pronoun) is usually said to be the
nominative absolute; but, in the case of pronouns, Milton uses the
nominative and the objective indifferently. In Old English the dative
was used.
73.
perfect, complete (Lat. perfectus, done thoroughly).
74.
Not once perceive, etc. This was not the case with the followers of
Ulysses: see note, l. 52.
76.
friends and native home forgot. Circe’s cup has here the
effect ascribed to the lotus in Odyssey ix. “Now
whosoever of them did eat the honey-sweet fruit of the lotus had no
more wish to bring tidings nor to come back, but there he chose to
abide with the lotus-eating men, ever feeding on the lotus and
forgetful of his homeward way.” In Tennyson’s
Lotos-Eaters there is no forgetfulness of friends and home:
“Sweet it was to dream of Fatherland, Of child, and wife and
slave.” Masson also refers to Plato’s ethical application
of the story (Rep. viii.); “Plato speaks of the moral
lotophagus, or youth steeped in sensuality, as accounting his very
viciousness a developed manhood, and the so-called virtues but signs
of rusticity.” Compare also Spenser, F. Q. ii. 12. 86,
“One above the rest in speciall, That had an hog been late, ...
did him miscall, That had from hoggish form him brought to
natural.”
77.
sensual sty: see note on l. 52. To those
who, “with low-thoughted care,” are “unmindful of
the crown that Virtue gives,” the world becomes little better
than a sensual sty. This line is adverbial to forget.
78.
favoured: compare Lat. gratus = favoured (adj.).
79.
adventurous, full of risks. The current sense of
‘adventurous,’ applied only to persons, is
“enterprising.” See l. 61, 609. glade: strictly, an open space in a
wood, and hence applied (as here) to the wood itself. It is cognate
with glow and glitter, and its fundamental sense is
‘a passage for light’ (Skeat).
80.
glancing star, a shooting star. Comp. Par. Lost, iv. 556:
“Swift as a shooting star
In autumn thwarts the night.”
The rhythm of the line and the prevalence of sibilants suit the sense.
81.
convoy: comp. Par. Lost, vi. 752, “convoyed
By four cherubic shapes.” It is another form of convey
(Lat. con = together, via = a way).
83.
sky-robes: the “ambrosial weeds” of line 16. Iris’ woof, material dyed in
rainbow colours. The goddess Iris was a personification of the
rainbow: comp. l. 992 and Par. Lost,
xi. 244, “Iris had dipped the woof.” Etymologically,
woof is connected with web and weave: it is short
for on-wef = on-web, i.e. the cross threads laid on the
warp of a loom.
84.
weeds: see note, l. 16.
86.
That to the service, etc. The part of the Spirit was acted by Lawes,
first in “sky-robes,” then in shepherd dress. In the dedication of
Comus by Lawes to Lord Brackley (anonymous edition of 1637), he
alludes to the favours that had been shown him by the Bridgewater
family. In the above lines Milton compliments Lawes and enables Lawes to
compliment the Earl (see Introduction).
86.
smooth-dittied: sweetly-worded. ‘Ditty’ (Lat.
dictatum) strictly denotes the words of a song as distinct from
the musical accompaniment; it is now applied to any little piece
intended to be sung: comp. Lyc. 32. For a similar panegyric on
Lawes’ musical genius compare Son. xiii. The musical
alliteration in lines 86-88 should be
noted.
87.
knows to still, etc.: comp. Lyc. 10, “he knew
Himself to sing.”
88.
nor of less faith, etc.; i.e. he is not less faithful than he is
skilful in music; and from the nature of his occupation he is most
likely to be at hand should any emergency arise.
92.
viewless, invisible: comp. The Passion, 50,
“viewless wing”; Par. Lost, iii. 518. Masson
calls this a peculiarly Shakespearian word: see M. for M. iii.
1. 124, “To be imprisoned in the viewless winds.” The word
is obsolete, but poets use great liberty in the formation of
adjectives in -less: comp. Shelley’s Sensitive
Plant, ‘windless clouds.’ See note, l. 574. charming-rod: see note, l. 52: also l. 653.
rout, a disorderly crowd. The word is also used in the sense of
‘defeat,’ and is cognate with route, rote,
and rut. All come from Lat. ruptus, broken: a
‘rout’ is the breaking up of a crowd, or a crowd broken
up; a ‘route’ is a way broken through a forest;
‘rote’ is a beaten track; and a ‘rut’ is a
track left by a wheel. See Lyc. 61, “by the rout
that made the hideous roar.”
93.
star ... fold, the evening star, Hesperus, an appellation of
the planet Venus: comp. Lyc. 30. As the morning star (called by
Shakespeare the ‘unfolding star’), it is called Phosphorus
or Lucifer, the light-bringer. Hence Tennyson’s allusion:
“Bright Phosphor, fresher for the night,...
Sweet Hesper-Phosphor, double name.”—
In Memoriam, cxxi.
Lines
93-144 are in rhymed couplets, and consist for
the most part of eight syllables each. The prevailing accentuation is
iambic.
94.
top of heaven, etc., i.e. is far above the horizon. So
in Lyc. 31, it is said to slope “toward heaven’s
descent,” i.e. to sink towards the horizon. Comp.
Virgil, Aen. ii. 250, “Round rolls the sky, and on comes
Night from the ocean.”
95.
gilded car: Apollo, as the god of the Sun, rode in a golden
chariot. Comp. Chaucer, Test. of Creseide, 208,
“Phoebus’ golden cart”; and “Phoebus’
wain,” line 190.
96.
his glowing axle doth allay. In the Hymn of the Nativity
Milton alludes to the “burning axle-tree” of the sun:
comp. Aen. iv. 482, “Atlas Axem umero
torquet.” There is here an allusion to the opinion of the
ancients that the setting of the sun in the Atlantic Ocean was
accompanied with a noise, as of the sea hissing (Todd).
‘Allay’ would thus denote ‘quench’ or
‘cool.’ His, in this line, = its. Its
occurs only three times in Milton’s poems, Od. Nat. 106;
Par. Lost, i. 254; Par. Lost, iv. 813: the word is found
also in Lawes’ dedication of Comus. The word does not
occur in English at all until the end of the sixteenth century, the
possessive case of the neuter pronoun it and of the masculine
he being his. This gave rise to confusion when the old
gender system decayed, and the form its gradually came into
use, until, by the end of the seventeenth century, it was in general
use. Milton, however, scarcely recognised it, its place in his
involved syntax being taken by the relative pronouns and other
connectives, or by his, her, thereof, etc.
97.
steep Atlantic stream. To the ancients the Ocean was the great
stream that encompassed the earth: Iliad, xiv.,
“the deep-flowing Okeanos
(βαθύρροος).”
With this use of ‘steep’ compare the
phrase ‘the high seas.’
98.
slope sun, sun sunk beneath the horizon, so that the only rays
visible shoot up into the sky. Slope = sloped; also used by
Milton as an adverb = aslope (Par. Lost, iv. 591), and as a
verb (Lyc. 31).
99.
dusky. Milton first wrote ‘northern.’
100.
Pacing toward the other goal, etc. Comp. Psalm xix. 5:
“The sun as a bridegroom cometh out of his chamber, and
rejoiceth as a strong man to run a race.”
102.
The spirit of lines 102-144 may be contrasted
with that of L’Allegro, 25-40. Both pieces are calls upon
Mirth and Pleasure, and both are therefore suitably expressed in the
same tripping
measure and with many similarities of language. But the
pleasures of L’Allegro begin with the sun-rise and yet
are “unreproved”; those of Comus and his crew begin
with the darkness and are “unreproved” only if
“these dun shades will ne’er report” them. The
“light fantastic toe” of the one is not the “tipsy
dance” of the other; and the laughter and liberty that betoken
the absence of “wrinkled Care” have nothing in common with
the “midnight shout and revelry” that can be enjoyed only
when Rigour, Advice, strict Age, and sour Severity have “gone to
bed.” The “quips and cranks” of
L’Allegro have given way to the magic rites of
Comus, and the wreathed smiles and dimples that adorn the face
of innocent Mirth are ill replaced by the wine-dropping “rosy
twine” of revelry.
104.
jollity: has here its modern sense of boisterous mirth. In
Milton occasionally the adjective ‘jolly’ (Fr.
joli, pretty) has its primary sense of pleasing or festive.
105.
Braid your locks with rosy twine; ‘entwine your hair with wreaths
of roses.’
106.
dropping odours: comp. l. 862-3.
108.
Advice ... scrupulous head. ‘Advice,’ now used
chiefly to signify counsel given by another, was formerly used also of
self-counsel or deliberation. See Chaucer, Prologue, 786,
“granted him without more advice”; and comp.
Shakespeare, M. of V. iv. 2. 6, “Bassanio upon more
advice, Hath sent you here this ring”; also Par.
Lost, ii. 376, “Advise, if this be worth
Attempting,” where ‘advise’ = consider. See also l.
755, note. Scrupulous = full of
scruples, conscientious.
110.
saws, sayings, maxims. Saw, say, and saga
(a Norwegian legend) are cognate.
111.
of purer fire, i.e. having a higher or diviner nature. (Or, as
there is really no question of degree, we may render the phrase as =
divine.) Compare the Platonic doctrine that each element had living
creatures belonging to it, those of fire being the gods; similarly the
Stoics held that whatever consisted of pure fire was divine, e.g.
the stars: hence the additional significance of line 112.
112.
the starry quire: an allusion to the music of the spheres; see
lines 3, 1021.
Pythagoras supposed that the planets emitted sounds proportional to
their distances from the earth and formed a celestial concert too
melodious to affect the “gross unpurgèd ear” of
mankind: comp. l. 458 and Arc. 63-73.
Shakespeare (M. of V. v. 1. 61) alludes to the music of the
spheres:
“There’s not the smallest orb which thou behold’st
But in his motion like an angel sings,
Still quiring to the young-eyed cherubins,” etc.
Quire is a form of choir (Lat. chorus, a band of singers); in
Greek tragedy the chorus was supposed to represent the sentiments of the
audience. Quire (of paper) is a totally different word, probably
derived from Lat. quatuor, four.
113.
nightly watchful spheres. Milton elsewhere alludes to the stars
keeping watch: “And all the spangled host keep watch in order
bright,” Hymn Nat. 21. ‘Nightly,’ used as an
adjective in the sense of ‘nocturnal’: comp. Il
Pens. 84, “To bless the doors from nightly
harm”; Arc. 48, “nightly ill”; and
Wordsworth’s line: “The nightly hunter lifting up
his eyes.” Its ordinary sense is “night by
night.”
114.
Lead in swift round. Comp. Arc. 71: “And the low world in
measured motion draw, After the heavenly tune.”
115.
sounds, straits: A.S. sund, a strait of the sea, so
called because it could be swum across. See Skeat, Etym.
Dict. s.v.
116.
to the moon, i.e. as affected by the moon. For similar
uses of ‘to,’ comp. Lyc. 33, “tempered
to the oaten flute”; Lyc. 44, “fanning their
joyous leaves to thy soft lays.” morrice. The
waters quiver in the moonlight as if dancing. The morrice = a morris
or Moorish dance, brought into Spain by the Moors, and thence
introduced into England by John of Gaunt. We read also of a
“morris-pike”—a weapon used by the Moors in
Spain.
117.
shelves, flat ledges of rock.
118.
pert, lively. Here used in its radical sense (being a form of
perk, smart): its modern sense is ‘forward’ or
‘impertinent.’ Skeat points out that perk and
pert were both used as verbs; e.g. “perked
up in a glistering grief,” Henry VIII. ii. 3. 21:
“how it (a child) speaks, and looks, and perts up the
head,” Beaumont and Fletcher’s Knight of the Burning
Pestle, i. 1. A similar change of k into t is seen
in E. mate from M.E. make. dapper, quick (Du.
dapper, Ger. tapfer, brave, quick). It is usual in the
sense of ‘neat.’
119.
dimple. Dimple is a diminutive of dip, and cognate with
dingle and dapple.
120.
daisies trim: comp. L’Alleg. 75, “Meadows
trim, with daisies pied”; Il Pens. 50,
“trim gardens.”
121.
wakes, night-watches (A.S. niht-wacu, a night wake). The
adjective wakeful (A.S. wacol) is the exact cognate of
the Latin vigil. The word was applied to the vigil kept at the
dedication of a church, then to the feast connected therewith, and
finally to an evening merry-making. prove, test, judge of (Lat.
probare). This is its sense in older writers and in the
much-misunderstood phrase—“the exception proves the
rule,” which means that the exception is a test of the rule.
124.
Venus now wakes, etc. Spenser, Brit. Ida, ii. 3, has “Night is Love’s holyday.” In this
line wakens is used transitively, its object being
‘Love.’
125.
rights. Here used, as sometimes by Spenser, where modern usage
requires rites (Lat. ritus, a custom): see l. 535.
126.
daylight ... sin. Daylight makes sin by revealing it. Contrast the
sentiment of Comus with that of Milton in Par. Lost, i. 500, “When
night Darkens the streets, then wander forth the sons Of Belial.”
127.
dun shades: evidently suggested by Fairfax’s
Tasso, ix. 62, “The horrid darkness, and the shadows
dun.” ‘Dun’ is A.S. dunn, dark.
129.
Cotytto, the goddess of Licentiousness: here called
‘dark-veiled’ because her midnight orgies were veiled in
darkness. She was a Thracian divinity, and her worshippers were called
Baptae (‘sprinkled’), because the ceremony of initiation
involved the sprinkling of warm water.
131.
called, invoked. dragon-womb Of Stygian darkness. The
Styx (= ‘the abhorred’) was the chief river in the lower
world. Milton here speaks of darkness as something positive, ejected
from the womb of Night, Night being represented as a monster of the
lower regions: comp. Par. Lost, i. 63. The pronoun
‘her’ shows that ‘womb’ is here used in its
strict sense, but in Par. Lost, i. 673, “in his
womb was hid metallic ore,” it has the more general sense
of “interior”: comp. the use of Lat. uterus,
Aen. ii. 258, vii. 499. dragon: Shakespeare refers to
the dragons or ‘dragon car’ of night, Cym. ii. 2.
48, “Swift, swift, you dragons of the night”;
Tro. and Cress. v. 8. 17, “The dragon wing of
night o’erspreads the earth”; see also Il Pens. 59,
“Cynthia checks her dragon yoke.”
132.
spets, a form of spits (as spettle for
spittle).
133.
one blot, i.e. a universal blot: comp. Macbeth, ii. 2. 63.
Milton first wrote, “And makes a blot of nature.”
134.
Stay, here used causally = check. The radical sense of the word
is ‘to support,’ as in the substantive stay and its
plural stays. ebon, black as ebony. Ebony is so called
because it is hard as a stone (Heb. eben, a stone); and the
wood being of a dark colour, the name has become a synonym both for
hardness and for blackness.
135.
Hecat’, i.e. Hecatè (as in line 535): a mysterious Thracian divinity, afterwards
regarded as the goddess of witchcraft: for these reasons a fit
companion for Cotytto and a fit patroness of Comus. Jonson calls her
“the mistress of witches.” She was supposed to send forth
at night all kinds of demons and phantoms, and to wander about with
the souls of the dead and amidst the howling of dogs.
136.
utmost end, full completion. Compare L’Alleg. 109,
“the corn That ten day-labourers could not end,”
where ‘end’ = ‘complete.’
137.
dues: see note, l. 12.
138.
blabbing eastern scout, i.e. the tale-telling spy that comes from
the East, viz. Morning.
139.
nice; hard to please, fastidious: “a finely chosen
epithet, expressing at once curious and squeamish”
(Hurd). It is used by Comus in contempt: comp. ii. Henry IV.
iv. 1, “Hence, therefore, thou nice crutch”; and
see the index to the Globe Shakespeare. the Indian
steep. In his Elegia Tertia Milton represents the sun as
the “light-bringing king” whose home is on the shores of
the Ganges (i.e. in the far East): comp. “the Indian
mount,” Par. Lost, i. 781, and Tennyson’s In
Memoriam, xxvi., “ere yet the morn Breaks hither over
Indian seas.”
140.
cabined loop-hole: an allusion to the first glimpse of dawn,
i.e. the peep of day. Comp. “Out of her window close she
blushing peeps,” said of the morning (P. Fletcher’s
Eclogues), as if the first rays of the sun struggled through
some small aperture. ‘Cabined,’ literally ‘belonging
to a cabin,’ and therefore small.
141.
tell-tale Sun. Compare Spenser, Brit. Ida, ii. 3,
“The thick-locked boughs shut out the tell-tale sun,
For Venus hated his all-blabbing light.”
Shakespeare refers to “the tell-tale day” (R. of
L. 806). In Odyssey, viii., we read how Helios (the sun)
kept watch and informed Vulcan of Venus’s love for Mars.
descry, etc., i.e. make known our hidden rites.
‘Descry’ is here used in its primary sense =
describe: both words are from Lat. describere, to write
fully. In Milton and Shakespeare ‘descry’ also occurs in
the sense of ‘to reconnoitre.’
142.
solemnity, ceremony, rite. The word is from Lat. sollus,
complete, and annus, a year; ‘solemn’ =
solennis = sollennis.
Hence the changes of meaning: (1) recurring at the end of a completed
year; (2) usual; (3) religious, for sacred festivals recur at stated
intervals; (4) that which is not to be lightly undertaken, i.e.
serious or important.
143.
knit hands, etc. Comp. Masque of Hymen:
“Now, now begin to set
Your spirits in active heat;
And, since your hands are met,
Instruct your nimble feet,
In motions swift and meet,
The happy ground to beat.”
144.
light fantastic round: comp. L’Alleg. 34,
“Come, and trip it, as you go, On the light fantastic
toe.” A round is a dance or ‘measure’ in which the
dancers join hands, ‘Fantastic’ = full of fancy,
unrestrained. So Shakespeare uses it of that which has merely been
imagined, and has not yet happened. It is now used in the sense of
grotesque. Fancy is a form of fantasy (Greek
phantasia).
At this point in the mask Comus and his rout dance a measure, after
which he again speaks, but in a different strain. The change is marked
by a return to blank verse: the previous lines are mostly in
octosyllabic couplets.
145.
different, i.e. different from the voluptuous footing of Comus
and his crew.
146.
footing: comp. Lyc. 103, “Camus, reverend sire,
went footing slow.”
147.
shrouds, coverts, places of hiding. The word etymologically
denotes ‘something cut off,’ being allied to
‘shred’; hence a garment; and finally (as in Milton) any
covering or means of covering. Many of Latimer’s sermons are
described as having been “preached in The Shrouds,” a
covered place near St. Paul’s Cathedral. The modern use of the
word is restricted: comp. l. 316.
brakes, bushes. Shakespeare has
“hawthorn-brake,” M. N. D. iii. l. 3, and
the word seems to be connected with bracken.
148.
Some virgin sure, sc. ‘it is.’
150.
charms ... wily trains; i.e. spells ... cunning
allurements. Charm is the Lat. carmen, a song, also used
in the sense of ‘magic verses’; wily = full of wile
(etymologically the same as guile). Train here denotes an
artifice or snare as in ‘venereal trains’ (Sams.
Agon. 533): “Oh, train me not, sweet mermaid, with
thy note” (Com. of Errors, iii. 2. 45). See Index, Globe
Shakespeare. Some would take ‘wily trains’ as =
trains of wiles.
151.
ere long: ere has here the force of a preposition; in A.S. it was
an adverb as well = soon, but now it is used only as a conjunction or a
preposition.
153.
Thus I hurl, etc. “Conceive that at this moment of the
performance the actor who personates Comus flings into the air, or
makes a gesture as if flinging into the air, some powder, which, by a
stage-device, is kindled so as to produce a flash of blue light. In
the original draft among the Cambridge MSS.
the phrase is powdered spells; but Milton, by a judicious
change, concealing the mechanism of the stage-trick, substituted
dazzling” (Masson).
154.
dazzling. This implies both brightness and illusion. spells. A
spell is properly a magical form of words (A.S. spel, a
saying):
here it refers to the whole enchantment employed. spongy air:
so called because it holds in suspension the magic powder.
155.
Of power to cheat ... and (to) give, etc. These lines are
attributive to ‘spells.’ The preposition ‘of’
is thus used to denote a characteristic; thus ‘of power’ =
powerful; comp. l. 677. blear illusion;
deception, that which deceives by blurring the vision.
Shakespeare has ‘bleared thine eye’ = dimmed thy vision,
deceived (Tam. Shrew, v. 1. 120). Comp. “This may stand
for a pretty superficial argument, to blear our eyes, and lull
us asleep in security” (Sir W. Raleigh). Blur is another
form of blear.
156.
presentments, appearances. This word is to be distinguished
from presentiment. A presentiment is a
“fore-feeling” (Lat. praesentire): while a
presentment is something presented (Lat. praesens, being
before). Shakespeare, Ham. iii. 4. 54, has
‘presentment’ in the sense of picture. quaint
habits, unfamiliar dress. Quaint is from Lat. cognitus, so
that its primary sense is ‘known’ or
‘remarkable.’ In French it became coint, which was
treated as if from Lat. comptus, neat; hence the word is
frequent in the sense of neat, exact, or delicate. Its modern sense is
‘unusual’ or ‘odd.’
158.
suspicious flight: flight due to suspicion of danger.
160.
I, under fair pretence, etc.: ‘Under the mask of friendly
intentions and with the plausible language of wheedling courtesy, I
insinuate myself into the unsuspecting mind and ensnare it.’
161.
glozing, flattering, wheedling. Compare Par. Lost, ix. 549,
“So glozed the temper, and his proem tuned:
Into the heart of Eve his words made way.”
Gloze is from the old word glose, a gloss or explanation (Gr.
glossa, the tongue): hence also glossary, glossology, etc. Trench, in
his lecture on the Morality of Words, points out how often fair names
are given to ugly things: it is in this way that a word which merely
denoted an explanation has come to denote a false explanation, an
endeavour to deceive. The word has no connection with gloss =
brightness.
162.
Baited, rendered attractive. Radically bait is the causative of
bite; hence a trap is said to be baited. Comp. Sams. Ag.
1066, “The bait of honied words.”
163.
wind me, etc. The verbs wind (i.e. coil) and
hug suggest the cunning of the serpent. The easy-hearted man is
the person whose heart or mind is easily overcome: ‘man’
is here used generically. Burton, in Anat. of Mel., says:
“The devil, being a slender incomprehensible spirit, can easily
insinuate and wind himself into human bodies.”
Me is here used reflexively: see note,
l. 61. This is not the ethic dative.
165.
virtue, i.e. power or influence (Lat. virtus).
This radical sense is still found in the phrase ‘by virtue
of’ = by the power of. The adjective virtuous is now used
only of moral excellence: in line 621 it has
its older meaning.
166.
The reading of the text is that of the editions of 1637 and 1645.
In the edition of 1673 the reading was:
“I shall appear some harmless villager,
And hearken, if I may, her business here.
But here she comes, I fairly step aside.”
But in the errata there was a direction to omit the comma after
may, and to change here into hear. In
Masson’s text, accordingly, he reads: “And hearken, if I
may her business hear.”
167.
keeps up, etc., i.e. keeps occupied with his country
affairs even up to a late hour. Gear: its original sense is
‘preparation’ (A.S. gearu, ready); hence
‘business’ or ‘property.’ Comp. Spenser, F.
Q. vi. 3. 6, “That to Sir Calidore was easy
gear,” i.e. an easy matter, fairly, softly.
Fair and softly were two words which went together,
signifying gently (Warton).
170.
mine ear ... My best guide. Observe the juxtaposition of
mine and my in these lines. Mine is frequent
before a vowel, especially when the possessive adjective is not
emphatic. In Shakespeare ‘mine’ is almost always found
before “eye,” “ear,” etc., where no emphasis
is intended (Abbott, § 237).
171.
Methought, i.e. it seemed to me. In the verb
‘methinks’ me is the dative, and thinks is
an impersonal verb (A.S. thincan, to appear), quite distinct
from the causal verb ‘I think,’ which is from A.S.
thencan, to make to appear.
173.
jocund, merry. Comp. L’Allegro, 94, “the
jocund rebecks sound.” gamesome, lively. This
word, like many other adjectives in -some, is now less common
than it was in Elizabethan English: many such adjectives are obsolete,
e.g. laboursome, joysome, quietsome, etc. (see Trench’s
English, Past and Present, v.).
174.
unlettered hinds, ignorant rustics (A.S. hina, a domestic).
175.
granges, granaries, barns (Lat. granum, grain). The word is now
applied to a farm-house with its outhouses.
176.
Pan, the god of everything connected with pastoral life: see Arc.
106, “Though Syrinx your Pan’s mistress were.”
177.
thank the gods amiss. Amiss stands for M.E. on misse = in
error. “Perhaps there is a touch of Puritan rigour in this. The gods
should be thanked in solemn acts of devotion, and not by merry-making”
(Keightley). See Introduction.
178.
swilled insolence, etc., i.e. the drunken rudeness of
those carousing at this late hour. Swill: to swill is to drink
greedily, hence to drink like a pig. wassailers; from
‘wassail’ [A.S. waes hael; from wes, be
thou, and hál, whole (modern English hale)], a
form of salutation, used in drinking one’s health; and hence
employed in the sense of ‘revelling’ or
‘carousing.’ The ‘wassail-bowl’ here referred
to is the “spicy nutbrown ale” of L’Allegro,
100. In Scott’s Ivanhoe, the Friar drinks to the Black
Knight with the words, “Waes hale, Sir Sluggish
Knight,” the Knight replying “Drink hale, Holy
Clerk.”
180.
inform ... feet. Comp. Sams. Agon. 335: “hither
hath informed your younger feet.” This use of
‘inform’ (= direct) is well illustrated in Spenser’s
F. Q. vi. 6: “Which with sage counsel, when they went
astray, He could enforme, and then reduce aright.”
184.
spreading favour. Epithet transferred from cause to effect.
187.
kind hospitable woods: an instance of the pathetic fallacy
which attributes to inanimate objects the feelings of men: comp. ll.
194, 195. As in this line (after
such) has the force of a relative pronoun.
188.
grey-hooded Even. Comp. “sandals grey,” Lyc.
187; “civil-suited,” Il Pens. 122; both applied to
morning.
189.
a sad votarist, etc. A votarist is one who is bound by a vow
(Lat. votum): the current form is votary, applied in a
general sense to one devoted to an object, e.g. a votary
of science. In the present case, the votarist is a palmer,
i.e. a pilgrim who carried a palm-branch in token of his having
been to Palestine. Such would naturally wear sober-coloured or homely
garments: comp. Drayton, “a palmer poor in homely russet
clad.” In Par. Reg. xiv. 426, Morning is a pilgrim clad
in “amice grey.” On weed, see note, l. 16.
190.
hindmost wheels: comp. l. 95: “If
this fine image is optically realised, what we see is Evening
succeeding Day as the figure of a venerable grey-hooded mendicant
might slowly follow the wheels of some rich man’s chariot”
(Masson).
192.
labour ... thoughts, the burden of my thoughts.
193.
engaged, committed: this use of the word may be compared with
that in Hamlet, iii. 3. 69, “Art more
engaged” (= bound or entangled). To engage is to
bind by a gage or pledge.
195.
stole, stolen. This use of the past form for the participle is
frequent in Elizabethan English. Else, etc. The meaning is:
‘The envious darkness must have stolen my brothers,
otherwise why should night hide the light of the stars?’
The clause ‘but for some felonious end’ is therefore to
some extent tautological.
197.
dark lantern. The stars by a far-fetched metaphor are said to be
concealed, though not extinguished, just as the light of a dark lantern
is shut off by a slide. Comp. More; “Vice is like a dark lanthorn,
which turns its bright side only to him that bears it.”
198.
everlasting oil. Comp. F. Q. i. 1. 57:
“By this the eternal lamps, wherewith high Jove
Doth light the lower world, were half yspent:”
also Macbeth, ii. 1. 5, “There’s husbandry in
heaven; Their candles are all out.” There is here an
irregularity of syntax. “That Nature hung in heaven” is a
relative clause co-ordinate in sense with the next clause; but
by a change of thought the phrase “and filled their lamps”
is treated as a principal clause, and a new object is introduced:
comp. l. 6.
203.
rife, prevalent. perfect, distinct; see note, l. 73.
204.
single darkness, darkness only. Single is from the same base as
simple; comp. l. 369.
205.
What might this be? This is a direct question about a past
event, and has the same meaning as “what should it be?” in
line 482: see note
there. A thousand fantasies, etc. On this, passage Lowell says:
“That wonderful passage in Comus of the airy tongues,
perhaps the most imaginative in suggestion he ever wrote, was conjured
out of a dry sentence in Purchas’s abstract of Marco Polo. Such
examples help us to understand the poet.” Reference may also be
made to the Anat. of Mel.: “Fear makes our imagination
conceive what it list, ... and tyrannizeth over our fantasy more than
all other affections, especially in the dark”; also to the song
prefixed to the same work, “My phantasie presents a thousand
ugly shapes,” etc. On the power of imagination or phantasy,
Shakespeare says:
“As imagination bodies forth
The forms of things unknown, the poet’s pen
Turns them to shapes, and gives to airy nothing
A local habitation and a name.“—
M. N. D. v. 1. 14.
Compare also Ben Jonson’s Vision of Delight:
“Break, Phant’sie, from thy cave of cloud,
And spread thy purple wings;
Now all thy figures are allow’d,
And various shapes of things:
Create of airy forms a stream ...
And though it be a waking dream,” etc.
207.
Of calling shapes, etc. In Heywood’s Hierarchy of
Angels there is a reference to travellers seeing strange shapes
beckoning to them. Such words as ‘shapes,’
‘shadows,’ ‘airy tongues,’ etc., illustrate
Milton’s power to create an indefinite, yet
expressive picture. Comp. Aen. iv.
460. beckoning shadows dire. A characteristic arrangement of words in
Milton: comp. lines 470, 945.
208.
syllable, pronounce distinctly.
210.
may startle well, may well startle.
212.
siding champion, Conscience. To side is to take a side, and
hence to assist: comp. Cor. iv. 2. 2: “The nobles who
have sided in his behalf.” ‘Conscience’ (here
a trisyllable) is used in its current sense: in Son. xxii. 10
it means consciousness. Comp. Hen. VIII. iii. 2. 379: “A
peace above all earthly dignities, A still and quiet
Conscience.”
213.
pure-eyed Faith. Comp. Lyc. 81, “those pure eyes
And perfect witness of all-judging Jove”; also the Scriptural
words, “God is of purer eyes than to behold iniquity.” The
maiden, whose safeguard is her purity, calls on Faith, Hope, and
Chastity, each being characterised by an epithet denoting purity of
thought and act, viz. ‘pure-eyed,’
‘white-handed,’ and ‘unblemished.’ The placing
of Chastity instead of Charity in the trio is significant: see i.
Cor. xiii.
214.
hovering angel. Hope hovers over the maiden to protect her. The
word ‘hover’ is found frequently in the sense of
‘shelter.’ girt, surrounded. golden wings. In Il
Pens. 52, Contemplation “soars on golden wing.”
216.
see ye visibly, i.e. you are not mere shapes, but living
presences. Ye: here the object of the verb. “This
confusion between ye and you did not exist in old
English; ye was always used as a nominative, and you as
a dative or accusative. In the English Bible the distinction is very
carefully observed, but in the dramatists of the Elizabethan period
there is a very loose use of the two forms” (Morris). It is so
in Milton, who has ye as nominative, accusative, and dative;
comp. lines 513, 967,
1020; also Arc. 40, 81, 101. It may be
noted that ye can be pronounced more rapidly than you,
and is therefore frequent when an unaccented syllable is required.
217.
the Supreme Good. God being the Supreme Good, if evil exists,
it must exist for God’s purposes. Evil exists for the sake of
‘vengeance’ or punishment.
219.
glistering guardian, i.e. one clad in the ‘pure
ambrosial weeds’ of l. 16.
Glister, glisten, glitter, and glint are
cognate words.
221.
Was I deceived? There is a break in the construction at the end
of line 220. The girl’s trust in Heaven
is suddenly strengthened by a glimpse of light in the dark sky. Warton
regards the repetition of the same words in lines 223, 224 as beautifully expressing the confidence
of an unaccusing conscience.
222.
her = its. In Latin nubes, a cloud, is feminine.
223.
does ... turn ... and casts. Comp. Il Pens. 46,
‘doth diet’ and ‘hears.’ When two co-ordinate
verbs are of the same tense and mood the auxiliary verb should apply
to both. The above construction is due probably to change of
thought.
225.
tufted grove. Comp. L’Alleg. 78: “bosomed
high in tufted trees.”
226.
hallo. Also hallow (as in Milton’s editions),
halloo, halloa, and holloa.
227.
make to be heard. Make = cause.
228.
new-enlivened spirits, i.e. my spirits that have been newly
enlivened: for the form of the compound adjective comp. note, l. 36.
229.
they, i.e. the brothers.
230.
Echo. In classical mythology she was a nymph whom Juno punished by
preventing her from speaking before others or from being silent after
others had spoken. She fell in love with Narcissus, and pined away until
nothing remained of her but her voice. Compare the invocation to Echo in
Ben Jonson’s Cynthia’s Revels, i. 1.
The lady’s song, which has been described as “an
address to the very Genius of Sound,” is here very naturally
introduced. The lady wishes to rouse the echoes of the wood in order
to attract her brothers’ notice, and she does so by addressing
Echo, who grieves for the lost youth Narcissus as the lady grieves for
her lost brothers.
231.
thy airy shell; the atmosphere. Comp. “the hollow round
of Cynthia’s seat,” Hymn Nat. 103. The marginal
reading in the MS. is cell. Some
suppose that ‘shell’ is here used, like Lat.
concha, because in classical times various musical instruments
were made in the form of a shell.
232.
Meander’s margent green. Maeander, a river of Asia Minor,
remarkable for the windings of its course; hence the verb ‘to
meander,’ and hence also (in Keightley’s opinion) the
mention of the river as a haunt of Echo. It is more probable, however,
that, as the lady addresses Echo as the “Sweet Queen of
Parley” and the unhappy lover of the lost Narcissus, the river
is here mentioned because of its associations with music and
misfortune. The Marsyas was a tributary of the Maeander, and the
legend was that the flute upon which Marsyas played in his rash
contest with Apollo was carried into the Maeander and, after being
thrown on land, dedicated to Apollo, the god of song. Comp.
Lyc. 58-63, where the Muses and misfortune are similarly
associated by a reference to Orpheus, whose ‘gory visage’
and lyre were carried “down the swift Hebrus to the Lesbian
shore.”
Further, the Maeander is associated with the sorrows of the maiden
Byblis, who seeks her lost brother Caunus (called by Ovid
Maeandrius juvenis). [Since the above was written, Prof. J. W.
Hales has given the following explanation of Milton’s allusion:
“The real reason is that the Meander was a famous haunt of
swans, and the swan was a favourite bird with the Greek and Latin
writers—one to whose sweet singing they perpetually
allude” (Athenaeum, April 20, 1889).]
‘Margent.’ Marge and margin are forms of the
same word.
233.
the violet-embroidered vale. The notion that flowers
broider or ornament the ground is common in poetry: comp.
Par. Lost, iv. 700: “Under foot the violet, Crocus, and
hyacinth, with rich inlay Broidered the ground.” In
Lyc. 148, the flowers themselves wear ‘embroidery.’
The nightingale is made to haunt a violet-embroidered vale because
these flowers are associated with love (see Jonson’s Masque
of Hymen) and with innocence (see Hamlet, iv. 5. 158:
“I would give you some violets, but they withered all when my
father died”). Prof. Hales, however, thinks that some particular
vale is here alluded to, and argues, with much acumen, that the poet
referred to the woodlands close by Athens to the north-west, through
which the Cephissus flowed, and where stood the birthplace of
Sophocles, who sings of his native Colonus as frequented by
nightingales. The same critic regards the epithet
‘violet-embroidered’ as a translation of the Greek ἰοστέφανος
(= crowned with violets), frequently applied by Aristophanes to
Athens, of which Colonus was a suburb. Macaulay also refers to Athens
as “the violet-crowned city.” It is, at least, very
probable that Milton might here associate the nightingale with
Colonus, as he does in Par. Reg. iv. 245: see the following
note.
234.
love-lorn nightingale, the nightingale whose loved ones are
lost: comp. Virgil, Georg. iv. 511: “As the nightingale
wailing in the poplar shade plains for her lost young, ... while she
weeps the night through, and sitting on a bough, reproduces her
piteous melody, and fills the country round with the plaints of her
sorrow.” Lorn and lost are cognate words, the
former being common in the compound forlorn: see note, l. 39. Milton makes frequent allusion to the
nightingale: in Il Penseroso it is ‘Philomel’; in
Par. Reg. iv. 245, it is ‘the Attic bird’; and in
Par. Lost viii. 518, it is ‘the amorous bird of
night.’ He calls it the Attic bird in allusion to the story of
Philomela, the daughter of Pandion, King of Athens. Near the Academy
was Colonus, which Sophocles has celebrated as the haunt of
nightingales (Browne). Philomela was changed, at her own prayer, into
a nightingale that she might escape the vengeance of her
brother-in-law Tereus. The epithet ‘love-lorn,’ however,
seems to point to the legend of Aēdon (Greek ἀηδών,
a nightingale), who, having killed her own son by mistake, was changed
into a nightingale, whose mournful song was represented by the Greek
poets as the lament of the mother for her child.
235.
her sad song mourneth, i.e. sings her plaintive melody.
‘Sad song’ forms a kind of cognate accusative.
237.
likest thy Narcissus. Narcissus, who failed to return the love of
Echo, was punished by being made to fall in love with his own image
reflected in a fountain: this he could never approach, and he
accordingly pined away and was changed into the flower which bears his
name. See the dialogue between Mercury and Echo in Cynthia’s
Revels, i. 1. Grammatically, likest is an adjective
qualified adverbially by “(to) thy Narcissus”: comp. Il
Pens. 9, “likest hovering dreams.”
238.
have hid. This is not a grammatical inaccuracy (as Warton thinks),
but the subjunctive mood.
240.
Tell me but where, i.e. ‘Only tell me where.’
241.
Sweet Queen of Parley, etc. ‘Parley is conversation (Fr.
parler, to speak): parlour, parole,
palaver, parliament, parlance. etc., are cognate.
Daughter of the Sphere, i.e. of the sphere which is her
“airy shell” (l. 231): comp.
“Sphere-born harmonious sisters, Voice and Verse” (At a
Solemn Music, 2).
243.
give resounding grace, etc., i.e. add the charm of echo to the
music of the spheres.
The metrical structure of this song should be noted: the lines vary
in length from two to six feet. The rhymes are few, and the effect is
more striking owing to the consonance of shell, well
with vale, nightingale; also of pair,
where with are and sphere; and of have
with cave. Masson regards this song as a striking illustration
of Milton’s free use of imperfect rhymes, even in his most
musical passages.
244.
mortal mixture ... divine enchanting ravishment. The words
mortal and divine are in antithesis: comp. Il
Pens. 91, 92, “The immortal mind that hath forsook Her
mansion in this fleshly nook.” The lines embody a compliment to
the Lady Alice: read in this connection lines 555 and 564.
‘Ravishment,’ rapture (a cognate word) or ecstasy: comp.
Il Pens. 40, “Thy rapt soul sitting in thine eyes”;
also l. 794.
246.
Sure, used adverbially: comp. line 493,
and ‘certain,’ l. 266.
247.
vocal, used proleptically.
248.
his = its: see note, l. 96. The pronoun
refers to ‘something holy.’
251.
smoothing the raven down. As the nightingale’s song smooths the
rugged brow of Night (Il Pens. 58), so here the song of the lady
smooths the raven plumage of darkness. In classical mythology Night is a
winged goddess.
252.
it, i.e. darkness.
253.
Circe ... Sirens three. In the Odyssey the Sirens are
two in number and have no connection with Circe. They lived on a rocky
island off the coast of Sicily and near the rock of Scylla (l. 257), and lured sailors to destruction by the
charm of their song. Circe was also a sweet singer and had the power
of enchanting men; hence the combined allusion: see also
Horace’s Epist. i. 2, 23, Sirenum voces, et Circes
pocula nôsti. Besides, the Sirens were daughters of the
river-god Achelous, and Circe had Naiads or fountain-nymphs among her
maids.
254.
flowery-kirtled Naiades: fresh-water nymphs dressed in flowers, or
having their skirts decorated with flowers. A kirtle is a gown; Skeat
suggests that it is a diminutive of skirt.
255.
baleful, injurious (A.S. balu, evil).
256.
sung. “The verbs swim, begin, run,
drink, shrink, sink, ring, sing,
spring, have for their proper past tenses swam,
began, ran, etc., preserving the original a; but
in older writers (sixteenth and seventeenth centuries) and in
colloquial English we find forms with u, which have come from
the passive participles.” (Morris). take the prisoned
soul, i.e. would take the soul prisoner;
‘prisoned’ being used proleptically.
257.
lap it in Elysium. Lap is a form of wrap: comp.
L’Alleg. 136, “Lap me in soft Lydian
airs.” Elysium: the abode of the spirits of the blessed; comp.
L’Alleg. 147, “heaped Elysian flowers.”
Scylla ... Charybdis. The former, a rival of Circe in the
affections of the sea-god Glaucus, was changed into a monster,
surrounded by barking dogs. She threw herself into the sea and became
a rock, the noise of the surrounding waves (”multis circum
latrantibus undis,” Aen. vii. 588) resembling the barking
of dogs. The latter was a daughter of Poseidon, and was hurled by Zeus
into the sea, where she became a whirlpool.
260.
slumber: comp. Pericles, v. 1. 335, “thick slumber
Hangs upon mine eyes.”
261.
madness, ecstasy. The same idea is expressed in Il Pens.
164: “As may with sweetness, through mine ear, Dissolve me into
ecstasies, And bring all heaven before mine eyes.” In
Shakespeare ‘ecstasy’ occurs in the sense of madness; see
Hamlet, iii. 1. 167, “That unmatched form and feature of
blown youth, Blasted with ecstasy”; Temp. iii. 3.
108, “hinder them from what this ecstasy May now provoke
them to”: comp. also “the pleasure of that madness,”
Wint. Tale, v. 3. 73. See also l. 625.
262.
home-felt, deeply felt. Compare “The home thrust
of a
friendly sword is sure” (Dryden); “This is a consideration
that comes home to our interest” (Addison): see also
Index to Globe Shakespeare.
263.
waking bliss, as opposed to the ecstatic slumber induced by the
song of Circe.
265.
Hail, foreign wonder! Warton notes that Comus is universally
allowed to have taken some of its tints from the Tempest, and quotes,
“O you wonder! If you be maid, or no?” i. 2. 426.
266.
certain: see note, l. 246.
267.
Unless the goddess, etc. = unless thou be the goddess
that in rural shrine dwells here. Here, as often in Latin, we
have ‘unless’ (Lat. nisi, etc.) used with a single
word instead of a clause: and, also as in Latin, the verb in the
relative clause has the person of the antecedent.
268.
Pan or Sylvan: see l. 176: also Il
Pens. 134, “shadows brown that Sylvan loves,” and
Arc. 106, “Though Syrinx your Pan’s mistress
were.” Sylvanus, the god of fields and forests, as denoted by
his name which is corrupted from Silvan (Lat. silva, a
wood).
269.
Forbidding, etc. These lines recall the language of
Arcades, in which also a lady is complimented as “a
deity,” “a rural Queen,” and
“mistress of yon princely shrine” in the land of Pan.
There is a reference also to her protecting the woods through her
servant, the Genius: Arc. 36-53, 91-95.
271.
ill is lost. A Latin idiom (as Keightley points out) = male
perditur: Prof. Masson, however, would regard it as equivalent to
“there is little loss in losing.”
273.
extreme shift; last resource. Comp. l. 617.
274.
my severed company: a condensed expression = the companions
separated from me. Comp. l. 315: this figure
of speech is called Synecdoche.
277.
What chance, etc. In lines 277-290 we
have a reproduction of that form of dialogue employed in Greek tragedy
in which question and answer occupy alternate lines: it is called
stichomythia, and is admirable when there is a gradual rise in
excitement towards the end (as in the Supplices of Euripides).
In Samson Agonistes, which is modelled on the Greek pattern,
Milton did not employ it.
278.
An alliterative line.
279.
near ushering, closely attending. To usher is to introduce (Lat.
ostium, a door).
284.
twain: thus frequently used as a predicate. It is also
used after its substantive as in Lyc. 110, “of metals
twain,” and as a substantive.
285.
forestalling, anticipating. ‘Forestall,’ originally
a marketing term, is to buy up goods before they have been displayed
at a stall in the market in order to sell them again at a
higher price: hence ‘to anticipate.’ prevented.
‘Prevent,’ now used in the sense of ‘hinder,’
seems in this line to have something of its older meaning, viz., to
anticipate (in which case ‘forestalling’ would be
proleptic). Comp. l. 362; Par. Lost,
vi. 129, “half-way he met His daring foe, at this
prevention more Incensed.”
286.
to hit. This is the gerundial infinitive after an adjective: comp.
“good to eat,” “deadly to hear,” etc.
287.
Imports their loss, etc.: ‘Apart from the present
emergency, is the loss of them important?’
289.
manly prime, etc.: ‘Were they in the prime of manhood, or
were they merely youths?’ With Milton the ‘prime of
manhood’ is where ‘youth’ ends: comp. Par.
Lost, xi. 245, “prime in manhood where youth
ended”; iii. 636, “a stripling Cherub he appears, Not of
the prime, yet such as in his face Youth smiled celestial.”
Spenser has ‘prime’ = Spring.
290.
Hebe, the goddess of youth. “The down of manhood”
had not appeared on the lips of the brothers.
291.
what time: common in poetry for ‘when’ (Lat. quo
tempore). Compare Horace, Od. iii. 6: “what time the
sun shifted the shadows of the mountains, and took the yokes from the
wearied oxen.” laboured: wearied with labour.
292.
loose traces. Because no longer taut from the draught of the
plough.
293.
swinked, overcome with toil, fatigued (A.S. swincan, to toil).
Skeat points out that this was once an extremely common word; the sense
of toil is due to that of constant movement from the swinging of the
labourer’s arms. In Chaucer ‘swinker’ = ploughman.
294.
mantling, spreading. To mantle is strictly to cloak or cover: comp.
Temp. v. 1. 67, “fumes that mantle Their clearer reason.”
297.
port, bearing, mien.
298.
faery. This spelling is nearer to that of the M.E. faerie than
the current form.
299.
the element; the air. Since the time of the Greek philosopher
Empedocles, fire, earth, air, and water have been popularly called the
four elements; when used alone, however, ‘the element’
commonly means ‘the air.’ Comp. Hen. V. iv. 1. 107,
“The element shows him as it doth to me”; Par.
Lost, ii.
490,
“the louring element Scowls o’er
the darkened landscape snow or shower,” etc.
301.
plighted, interwoven or plaited. The verb
‘plight’ (or more properly plite) is a variant of
plait: see Il Pens. 57, “her sweetest saddest
plight.” The word has no connection with
‘plight,’ l. 372.
awe-strook. Milton uses three forms of the participle, viz.
‘strook,’ ‘struck,’ and
‘strucken.’
302.
worshiped. The final consonant is now doubled in such verbs before
-ed.
303.
were = would be: subjunctive. like the path to Heaven;
i.e. it would be a pleasure to help, etc. There is (probably)
no allusion to the Scripture parable of the narrow and difficult way
to Heaven (Matt. vii.) as in Son. ix., “labours up
the hill of heavenly Truth.”
304.
help you find: comp. l. 623. The simple
infinitive is here used without to where to would now be
inserted. This omission of the preposition now occurs with so few
verbs that ‘to’ is often called the sign of the
infinitive, but in Early English the only sign of the infinitive was
the termination en (e.g. he can speken). The
infinitive, being used as a noun, had a dative form called the gerund,
which was preceded by the preposition to, and when this became
confused with the simple infinitive the use of to became
general. Comp. Son. xx. 4, “Help waste a sullen
day.”
305.
readiest way. Here ‘readiest’ logically belongs to
the predicate.
311.
each ... every: see note, l. 19.
alley, a walk or avenue.
312.
Dingle ... bushy dell ... bosky bourn. ‘Dingle’ =
dimble (see Ben Jonson’s Sad Shepherd) = dimple = a
little dip or depression; hence a narrow valley. ‘Dell’ =
dale, literally a cleft; hence a valley, not so deep as a dingle.
‘Bosky bourn,’ a stream whose banks are bushy or thickly
grown with bushes. ‘Bourn,’ a boundary, is a distinct word
etymologically, but the phrase “from side to side,” as
used by Comus, might well imply that the valley as well as the stream
is here referred to. ‘Bosky,’ bushy. The noun
‘boscage’ = jungle or bush (M.E. busch,
bush, bush). ‘See Tennyson’s Dream of F.
W. 243, “the sombre boscage of the wood.”
315.
stray attendance = strayed attendants; abstract for concrete,
as in line 274. Comp. Par. Lost, x. 80,
“Attendance none shall need, nor train”; xii. 132,
“Of herds, and flocks, and numerous servitude” (=
servants).
316.
shroud, etc. Milton first wrote “within these shroudie
limits”: see note, l. 147.
317.
low-roosted lark, i.e. the lark that has roosted on the ground.
This is certainly Milton’s meaning, as he refers to the
bird as rising from its “thatched pallet” = its nest,
which is built on the ground. ‘Roost’ has, however, no
radical connection with rest, but denotes a perch for fowls,
and Keightley’s remark that Milton is guilty of supposing the
lark to sleep, like a hen, upon a perch or roost, may therefore be
noticed. But the poets’ meaning is obvious. Prof. Masson takes
‘thatched’ as referring to the texture of the nest or to
the corn-stalks or rushes over it.
318.
rouse. Here used intransitively = awake.
322.
honest-offered: see notes, ll. 36,
228.
323.
sooner, more readily.
324.
tapestry halls. Halls hung with tapestry, tapestry being
“a kind of carpet work, with wrought figures, especially used
for decorating walls.” The word is said to be from the Persian.
325.
first was named. The meaning is: ‘Courtesy which
is derived from court, and which is still nominally most common
in high life, is nevertheless most readily found amongst those of
humble station.’ This sentiment is becoming in the mouth of Lady
Alice when addressed to a humble shepherd. ‘Courtesy’ (or,
as Milton elsewhere writes, courtship) has, like
civility, lost much of its deeper significance. Comp. Spenser,
F. Q. vi. 1. 1:
“Of Court it seems men Courtesy do call,
For that it there most useth to abound.”
327.
less warranted, i.e. when I have less guarantee of safety.
Guarantee and warrant, like guard and
ward, guile and wile, are radically the same.
329.
Eye me, i.e. look on me. To eye a person now
usually implies watching narrowly or suspiciously. square,
accommodate, adjust. The adj. ‘proportioned’ is here used
proleptically, denoting the result of the action indicated by the verb
‘square.’ Comp. M. for M. v. 1: “Thou
’rt said to have a stubborn soul, ... And squar’st
thy life accordingly.” Exeunt, i.e. they go out,
they leave the stage.
331.
Unmuffle, uncover yourselves. To muffle is to cover up,
e.g. ‘to muffle the throat,’ ‘a
muffled sound,’ etc. Muffle (subst.) is a
diminutive of muff.
332.
wont’st, i.e. art wont. Wont’st is
here apparently the 2nd person singular, present tense, of a verb
to wont = to be accustomed; hence also the participle
wonted (Il Pens. 37, “keep thy wonted
state”). But the M.E. verb was wonen, to dwell or be
accustomed, and its participle woned or wont. The fact
that wont was a participle being forgotten, it was treated as a
distinct verb, and a new participle formed, viz., wonted (=
won-ed-ed); from this again comes the noun wontedness. Milton,
however, uses wont as a present only twice in his poetry: as in
modern English he uses it as a noun (= custom) or as a participial
adj.
with the verb to be (Il Pens. 123,
“As she was wont”). benison, blessing: radically
the same as ‘benediction’ (Lat. benedictio).
333.
Stoop thy pale visage, etc. Comp. l. 1023 and Il Pens. 72,
“Stooping through a fleecy cloud.”
‘Visage,’ a word now mostly used with a touch of contempt,
in Milton simply denotes ‘face’: see Il Pens. 13,
“saintly visage”; Lyc. 62, “His gory
visage down the stream was sent.” amber: comp.
L’Alleg. 61, “Robed in flames and amber
light,” and Tennyson:
“What time the amber morn
Forth gushes from beneath a low-hung cloud.”
334.
disinherit, drive out, dispossess. Comp. Two Gent. iii. 2. 87,
“This or else nothing, will inherit (i.e. obtain
possession of) her.”
336.
Influence ... dammed up. The verb here shows that influence is
employed in its strict sense, = a flowing in (Lat. in and
fluo): it was thus used in astrology to denote “an
influent course of the planets, their virtue being infused
into, or their course working on, inferior creatures”; comp.
L’Alleg. 112, “whose bright eyes Rain
influence”; Par. Lost, iv. 669, “with kindly
heat Of various influence.” Astrology has left many
traces upon the English language, e.g. influence, disastrous,
ill-starred, ascendant, etc. See also l. 360.
337.
taper; here a vocative, the verb being “visit
(thou).”
338.
though a rush candle, i.e. ‘though it be only a
rush-candle’; a rush light, obtained from the pith of a rush
dipped in oil.
340.
long levelled rule; straight horizontal beam of light: comp. Par.
Lost, iv. 543, “the setting sun ... Levelled his
evening rays.” The instrument with which straight lines are
drawn is called a rule or ruler.
341.
star of Arcady Or Tyrian Cynosure; here put by synecdoche for
‘lode-star.’ More particularly, the star of Arcady
signifies any of the stars in the constellation of the Great Bear, by
which Greek sailors steered; and ‘Tyrian Cynosure’
signifies the stars comprising that part of the constellation of the
Lesser Bear which, from its shape, was called Cynosura, the
dog’s tail (Greek κυνὸς
οὐρά), and by which Phoenician or Tyrian
sailors steered. See L’Alleg. 80, “The
cynosure of neighbouring eyes,” where the word is used as
a common noun = point of attraction. Both constellations are connected
in Greek mythology with the Arcadian nymph Callisto, who was turned by
Zeus into the Great Bear while her son Arcas became the Lesser Bear.
Milton follows the Roman poets in associating these stars with Arcadia
on this account.
343.
barred, debarred or barred from.
344.
wattled cotes: enclosures made of hurdles, i.e. frames of
plaited twigs. Cote, cot, and coat
are varieties of the same word = a covering or enclosure.
345.
oaten stops: see Lyc. 33, “the oaten
flute”; 88, “But now my oat proceeds”; 188,
“the tender stops of various quills.” The
shepherd’s pipe, being at first a row of oaten stalks,
“the oaten pipe,” “oat,” etc., came to denote
any instrument of this kind and even to signify “pastoral
poetry.” The ‘stops’ are the holes over which the
player’s fingers are placed, also called vent-holes or
“ventages” (Ham. iii. 2. 372). See also note on ‘azurn,’ l. 893.
346.
whistle ... lodge, i.e. the sound of the shepherd
calling his dog by whistling. Or it may be used in the same sense as
in L’Alleg. 63, “the ploughman whistles
o’er the furrowed land.”
347.
Count ... dames: comp. L’Alleg. 52, “the
cock ... Stoutly struts his dames before”; 114,
“Ere the first cock his matin rings.” Grammatically,
‘count’ (infinitive) forms with ‘cock’ the
complex object of ‘might hear.’
349.
innumerous, innumerable (Lat. innumerus). Comp. Par.
Lost, vii. 455, “Innumerous living creatures”;
ix. 1089.
350.
hapless, unfortunate. Many words, such as happy, lucky, fortunate,
etc., which strictly refer to a person’s hap or chance, whether good or
bad, have become restricted to good hap: in order to give them an
unfavourable meaning a negative prefix or suffix is necessary.
With reference to the word fortune, Max Müller says:
“We speak of good and evil fortune, so did the French, and so
did the Romans. By itself fortuna was taken either in a good or
a bad sense, though it generally meant good fortune. Whenever there
could be any doubt, the Romans defined fortuna by such
adjectives as bona, secunda, prospera, for good;
mala or adversa for bad fortune ... Fortuna came
to mean something like chance.”
351.
her, herself. On the reflexive use of her, see note, l. 163.
352.
burs; burrs, prickly seed-vessels of certain plants, e.g. the
burr-thistle, the burdock (= the burr-dock), etc.
355.
leans. As Milton frequently omits the nominative, we may supply
she: otherwise leans would be intransitive and its
nominative ‘head’: see note, l.
715. fraught, freighted, filled. Freight is itself a
later form of fraught: in Sams. Agon., 1075,
fraught is a noun (Ger. fracht, a load). See line 732.
356.
What, etc. The ellipses may be supplied thus: “What
(shall be done) if (she be) in wild amazement?”
358.
savage hunger. ‘Hunger’ is put by synecdoche for
hungry animals.
359.
over-exquisite, i.e. too curious, over-inquisitive.
Exquisite is here used in the sense of inquisitive; in
modern English ‘exquisite’ has a passive sense only, while
‘inquisitive’ has an active sense (Lat. quaero, to
seek): see note, l. 714.
“The dialogue between the two brothers is an amicable contest between
fact and philosophy. The younger draws his arguments from common
apprehension, and the obvious appearance of things; the elder proceeds
on a profounder knowledge, and argues from abstracted principles. Here
the difference of their ages is properly made subservient to a contrast
of character” (Warton).
360.
To cast the fashion, i.e. to prejudge the form.
‘To cast’ was common in the sense of to calculate or
compute; see Shakespeare, ii. Henry IV. i. 1. 166, “You
cast the event of war.” Some think, however, that the
word has here its still more restricted sense as used in astrology,
e.g. “to cast a nativity”; others see in it
a reference to the founder’s art; and others to medical
diagnosis.
361.
Grant they be so: a concessive clause = granted that the evils
turn out to be what you imagined. The alternative is given in l. 364.
362.
What need, etc., i.e. why should a man anticipate his
hour of sorrow. ‘What’ = for what (Lat. quid):
comp. l. 752; also On Shakespeare, 6,
“What need’st thou such weak witness of thy
name?” On the verb need Abbott, § 297, says:
“It is often found with ‘what,’ where it is
sometimes hard to say whether ‘what’ is an adverb and
‘need’ a verb, or ‘what’ an adjective and
‘need’ a noun. ‘What need the bridge much broader
than the flood?’ M. Ado, i. 1. 318; either ‘why
need the bridge (be) broader?’ or ‘what need is
there (that) the bridge (be) broader?’”
363.
Compare Hamlet’s famous soliloquy, “rather bear those ills we
have,” etc.; and Pope’s Essay on Man, “Heaven
from all creatures hides the book of fate,” etc.
366.
to seek, at a loss. Compare Par. Lost, viii. 197:
“Unpractised, unprepared, and still to seek.”
Bacon, in Adv. of Learning, has: “Men bred in learning
are perhaps to seek in points of convenience.”
367.
unprincipled in virtue’s book, i.e. ignorant of
the elements of virtue. A principle (Lat. principium,
beginning) is a fundamental truth; hence the current sense of
‘unprincipled,’ implying that the man who has no fixed
rules of life is the one who will readily fall into evil. Comp.
Sams. Agon. 760, “wisest and best men ... with goodness
principled.”
368.
bosoms, holds within itself. The nom. is
‘goodness.’ ‘Peace’ is
governed by ‘in,’ l. 367.
369.
As that, etc. This is an adverbial clause of consequence to
‘unprincipled’; in modern English such a clause would be
introduced by ‘that,’ and in Elizabethan English either by
‘as’ or ‘that.’ Here we have both connectives
together. single: see note, l. 204.
noise, sound.
370.
Not being in danger, i.e. she not being in danger: absolute
construction. This parenthetical line is equivalent to a conditional
clause—‘if she be not in danger, the mere want of light
and noise need not disquiet her.’
371.
constant, steadfast.
372.
misbecoming: see note on
‘misused,’ l. 47. plight, condition. Skeat
derives this word from A.S. pliht, danger; others connect it with
pledge. It is distinct from plight, l.
301.
373.
Virtue could see, etc. The best commentary on this line is in lines
381-5: comp. Spenser: “Virtue gives
herself light through darkness for to wade,” F. Q. i. 1. 12.
375.
flat sea: comp. Lyc. 98, “level brine”: Lat.
aequor, a flat surface, used of the sea.
376.
seeks to, applies herself to. This use of seek is common in the
English Bible: see Deut. xii. 5, “unto his
habitation shall ye seek”; Isaiah, viii. 19, xi.
10, xix. 3; i. Kings, x. 24.
377.
her best nurse, Contemplation. The wise man loves contemplation
and solitude: comp. Il Penseroso, 51, where “the Cherub
Contemplation” is the “first and chiefest” of
Melancholy’s companions. In Sidney’s Arcadia,
“Solitariness” is “the nurse of these
contemplations.”
378.
plumes. Some would read prunes, both words being used of
a bird’s smoothing or trimming its feathers—or (more
strictly) picking out damaged feathers. See Skeat’s
Dictionary, and compare Pope’s line, “Where
Contemplation prunes her ruffled wings.”
379.
various, varied: comp. l. 22. The
‘bustle of resort’ is in L’Allegro the
‘busy hum of men.’
380.
all to-ruffled. Milton wrote “all to ruffled,”
which may be interpreted in various ways: (1) all to-ruffled, (2) all
too ruffled, (3) all-to ruffled. The first of these is given in the
text as it is etymologically correct: to is an intensive prefix
as in ‘to-break’ = to break in pieces;
‘to-tear’ = to tear asunder, etc.; while all (=
quite) is simply an adverb modifying to-ruffled. But about 1500
A.D. this idiom was misunderstood, and the
prefix to was detached from the verb and either read along with
all (thus all-to = altogether), or confused with too
(thus all-to = too too, decidedly too). It is doubtful in which sense
Milton used the phrase; like Shakespeare, he may have disregarded its
origin. See Morris, § 324; Abbott, §§ 28, 436.
381.
He that has light, etc. Comp. Par. Lost, i. 254:
‘The mind is its own place,’ etc.
382.
centre, i.e. centre of the earth: comp. Par. Lost
i. 686, “Men also ... Ransacked the centre”; and
Hymn Nat. 162, “The aged Earth ... Shall from the surface
to the centre shake.” Sometimes the word
‘centre’ was used of the Earth itself, the fixed
centre of the whole universe according to the Ptolemaic system. The
idea here conveyed, however, is not that of immovability (as in
Par. Reg. iv. 534, “as a centre firm”) but
of utter darkness.
385.
his own dungeon: comp. Sams. Agon. 156, “Thou art
become (O worst imprisonment!) The dungeon of
thyself.”
386.
most affects: has the greatest liking for. It now generally
denotes rather a feigned than a real liking: comp. pretend.
Lines 386-392 may be compared with Il
Pens. 167-174.
393.
Hesperian tree. An allusion to the tree on which grew the
golden apples of Juno, which were guarded by the Hesperides and the
sleepless dragon Ladon. Hence the reference to the ‘dragon
watch’: comp. Tennyson’s Dream of Fair Women, 255,
“Those dragon eyes of anger’d Eleanor Do hunt me, day and
night.” See also ll. 981-983.
395.
unenchanted, superior to all the powers of enchantment, not to
be enchanted. Similarly Milton has ‘unreproved’ for
‘not reprovable,’ ‘unvalued’ for
‘invaluable,’ etc.; and Shakespeare has
‘unavoided’ for ‘inevitable,’
‘imagined’ for ‘imaginable,’ etc. Abbott
(§ 375) says: The passive participle is often used to signify,
not that which was and is, but that which was and
therefore can be hereafter; in other words -ed is used
for -able.
396.
Compare Chaucer, Doctor’s Tale, 44, “She flowered
in virginity, With all humility and abstinence.”
398.
unsunned, hidden. Comp. Cym. ii. 5. 13, “As chaste
as unsunned snow”; F. Q. ii. 7, “Mammon ...
Sunning his treasure hoar.”
400.
as bid me hope, etc. The construction is, ‘as (you may)
bid me (to) hope (that) Danger will wink on Opportunity and (that
Danger will) let a single helpless maiden pass uninjured.’
401.
Danger will wink on, etc., i.e. danger will shut its
eyes to an opportunity. To wink on or wink at is to
connive, to refuse to see something: comp. Macbeth, i. 4. 52,
“The eye wink at the hand”; Acts, xvii. 30.
Warton notes a similar argument by Rosalind in As You Like It,
i. 3. 113: “Beauty provoketh thieves sooner than
gold.”
403.
surrounding. Milton is said to be the first author of any note who
uses this word in its current sense of ‘encompassing,’
which it has acquired through a supposed connection with round.
Shakespeare does not use it. Its original sense is ‘to
overflow’ (Lat. superundare).
404.
it recks me not, i.e. I do not heed: an impersonal use
of the old verb reck (A.S. récan, to care). Comp.
Lyc. 122, “What recks it them.”
405.
dog them both, i.e. follow closely upon night and
loneliness. Comp. All’s Well, iii. 4. 15, “death
and danger dogs the heels of worth.”
407.
unownèd, i.e. ‘thinking her to be
unowned,’ or ‘as if unowned.’ Milton thus, as in
Latin, frequently condenses a clause into a participle.
408.
infer, reason, argue. This use of the word is obsolete. See
Shakespeare, iii. Hen. VI. ii. 2. 44, “Inferring
arguments of mighty force”; K. John, iii. 1. 213,
“Need must needs infer this principle”: also
Par. Lost, viii. 91, “great or bright infers not
excellence.”
409.
without all doubt, i.e. beyond all doubt: a Latinism =
sine omni dubitatione.
411.
arbitrate the event, judge of the result. The meaning is
‘Where the result depends equally upon circumstances to be hoped
and to be dreaded I incline to hope.’
413.
squint suspicion. Compare Quarles: “Heart-gnawing Hatred, and
squint-eyed Suspicion.” To look askance or sideways frequently indicates
suspicion.
419.
if Heaven gave it, i.e. even although Heaven gave it.
420.
’Tis chastity. “The passage which begins here and
ends at line 475 is a concentrated expression
of the moral of the whole Masque, and an exposition also of a cardinal
idea of Milton’s philosophy” (Masson).
421.
clad in complete steel, i.e. completely armed; comp.
Hamlet, i. 4. 52, where the phrase occurs. The accent is on the
first syllable.
422.
quivered nymph. The chaste Diana of the Romans was armed with
bow and quiver; and Shakespeare makes virginity “Diana’s
livery.” So in Spenser, Belphoebe, the personification of
Chastity, has “at her back a bow and quiver gay.”
‘Quivered’ is the Latin pharetrata.
423.
trace, traverse, track. unharboured, affording no shelter.
Radically, a harbour is a lodging or shelter.
424.
Infámous, having a bad name, ill-famed: a Latinism. The word now
implies disgrace or guilt. It is here accented on the penult.
425.
sacred rays: comp. l. 782.
426.
bandite or mountaineer. ‘Bandite’ (in Shakespeare
bandetto, and now bandit) is borrowed from the Italian
bandito, outlawed or banned. ‘Mountaineer,’
here used in a bad sense. In modern English it has reverted to its
original sense—a dweller in mountains. The dwellers in mountains
are often fierce and readily become freebooters: hence the changes of
meaning. See Temp. iii. 3. 44, “Who would believe that
there were mountaineers Dew-lapp’d like bulls”;
also Cym. iv. 2. 120, “Who called me traitor,
mountaineer.”
428.
very desolation. Very (as an adj.) = true or real and may be traced
to Lat. verus = true: comp. l. 646.
429.
shagged ... shades. ‘Shagged’ is rugged or shaggy,
and ‘horrid’ is probably used in the Latin sense of
‘rough’: see note, l. 38.
430.
unblenched, undaunted, unflinching. This word, sometimes confounded
with ‘unblanched,’ is from blench, a causal of
blink.
431.
Be it not: a conditional clause = on condition that it be not.
432.
Some say, etc. Compare Hamlet, i. 1. 158:
“Some say that, ever against that season comes
Wherein our Saviour’s birth is celebrated,
The bird of dawning singeth all night long:
And then, they say, no spirit dares stir abroad.”
433.
In fog or fire, etc. Comp. Il Pens. 93, “those
demons that are found In fire, air, flood, or underground”: an
allusion to the different orders and powers of demons as accepted in
the Middle Ages. Burton, in his Anat. of Mel., quotes from a
writer who thus enumerates the kinds of sublunary
spirits—“fiery, aerial, terrestrial, watery, and
subterranean, besides fairies, satyrs, nymphs, etc.”
434.
meagre hag, lean witch. Hag is from A.S.
haegtesse, a prophetess or witch. Comp. Par. Lost, ii.
662; M. W. of W. iv. 2. 188, “Come down, you witch, you
hag.” unlaid ghost, unpacified or wandering
spirit. It was a superstition that ghosts left the world of spirits
and wandered on the earth from the hour of curfew (see Temp. v.
1. 40; King Lear, iii. 4. 120, “This is the foul fiend
Flibbertigibbet; he begins at curfew,” etc.) until “the
first cock his matin rings” (L’Alleg. 14).
‘Curfew’ (Fr. couvre-feu = fire-cover), the bell
that was rung at eight or nine o’clock in the evening as a
signal that all fires and lights were to be extinguished.
436.
swart faery of the mine. In Burton’s Anat. of Mel.
we read, “Subterranean devils are as common as the rest, and do
as much harm. Olaus Magnus makes six kinds of them, some
bigger, some less. These are commonly seen about mines of
metals,” etc. Warton quotes from an old writer: “Pioneers
or diggers for metal do affirm that in many mines there appear strange
shapes and spirits who are apparelled like unto the labourers in the
pit.” ‘Swart’ (also swarty, swarth,
and swarthy) here means black: in Scandinavian mythology these
subterranean spirits were called the Svartalfar, or black
elves. Comp. Lyc. 138, “the swart star,”
where ‘swart’ = swart making.
438.
Do ye believe. Ye is properly a second person plural, but (like
you) is frequently used as a singular: for examples, see Abbott, §
236.
439.
old schools of Greece. The brother now turns for his arguments from
the mediaeval mythology of Northern Europe to the ancient legends of
Greece.
440.
to testify, to bear witness to: comp. l. 248, 421.
441.
Dian. Diana was the huntress among the immortals: she was
insensible to the bolts of Cupid, i.e. to the power of love. She was
the protectress of the flocks and game from beasts of prey, and at the
same time was believed to send plagues and sudden deaths among men and
animals. Comp. the song to Cynthia (Diana) in Cynthia’s
Revels, v. 1, “Queen and huntress, chaste and fair,” etc.
442.
silver-shafted queen. The epithet is applicable to Diana both as
huntress and goddess of the moon: as the former she bore arrows which
were frequently called shafts, and as the latter she bore shafts or
rays of light. Shaft is etymologically ‘a shaven
rod.’ In Chaucer, C. T. 1364, ‘shaft’ = arrow.
443.
brinded lioness. ‘Brinded’ = brindled or streaked.
Comp. “brinded cat,” Macb. iv. 1. 1:
brind is etymologically connected with brand.
444.
mountain-pard, i.e. panther or other spotted wild beast.
Pard, originally a Persian word, is common in the compounds
leo-pard and camelo-pard.
445.
frivolous ... Cupid. See the speech of Oberon, M. N. D.
ii. 1. 65. The epithet ‘frivolous’ applies to Cupid in his
lower character as the wanton god of sensual love, not in his
character as the fair Eros who unites all the discordant elements of
the universe: see note, l. 1004.
447.
snaky-headed Gorgon shield. Medusa was one of the three Gorgons,
frightful beings, whose heads were covered with hissing serpents, and
who had wings, brazen claws, and huge teeth. Whoever looked at Medusa
was turned into stone, but Perseus, by the aid of enchantment, slew her.
Minerva (Athene) placed the monster’s head in the centre of her shield,
which confounded Cupid: see Par. Lost, ii. 610.
449.
freezed, froze. The adjective ‘congealed’ is used
proleptically, the meaning being ‘froze into a stone so that it
was congealed.’
450.
But, except: a preposition.
451.
dashed, confounded: this meaning of the word is obsolete.
452.
blank awe: the awe of one amazed. Comp. the phrase, ‘blank
astonishment,’ and see Par. Lost, ix. 890.
454.
so, i.e. chaste.
455.
liveried angels lackey her, i.e. ministering angels
attend her. So, in L’Alleg. 62, “the clouds in
thousand liveries dight”; a servant’s livery being
the distinctive dress delivered to him by his master.
‘Lackey,’ to wait upon, from ‘lackey’ (or
lacquey), a footboy, who runs by the side of his master. The word is
here used in a good sense, without implying servility (as in Ant.
and Cleop. i. 4. 46, “lackeying the varying
tide”). ‘Her’: the soul. Milton is fond of the
feminine personification: see line 396.
457.
vision: a trisyllable.
458.
no gross ear. See notes, l. 112 and 997.
459.
oft converse, frequent communion. Oft is here used adjectively:
this use is common in the English Bible, e.g. i. Tim. v.
23, “thine often infirmities.”
460.
Begin to cast ... turns. ‘Begin’ is subjunctive;
‘turns’ is indicative: the latter may be used to convey
greater certainty and vividness.
461.
temple of the mind, i.e. the body. This metaphor is
common: see Shakespeare, Temp. i. 2. 57, “There’s
nothing ill can dwell in such a temple”; and the Bible,
John, ii. 21, “He spake of the temple of his
body.”
462.
the soul’s essence. As if, by a life of purity, the body
gradually became spiritualised, and therefore partook of the
soul’s immortality.
465.
most, above all.
467.
soul grows clotted. This doctrine is expounded in Plato’s
Phaedo, in a conversation between Socrates and Cebes:
Socrates (speaking of the pure soul). That soul, I say, herself
invisible, departs to the invisible world—to the divine and
immortal and rational: thither arriving, she is secure of bliss,
and is released from the error and folly of men, their fears and
wild passions and all other human ills, and for ever dwells, as
they say of the initiated, in company with the gods. Is not this
true, Cebes?
Cebes. Yes; beyond a doubt.
Soc. But the soul which has been polluted, and is impure at
the
time of her departure, and is the companion and servant of the body
always, and is in love with and fascinated by the body and by the
desires and pleasures of the body, until she is led to believe that
the truth only exists in a bodily form, which a man may touch and
see and taste, and use for the purposes of his lusts—the soul, I
mean, accustomed to hate and fear and avoid the intellectual
principle, which to the bodily eye is dark and invisible and can be
attained only by philosophy;—do you suppose that such a soul will
depart pure and unalloyed?
Ceb. That is impossible.
Soc. She is held fast by the corporeal, which the continual
association and constant care of the body have wrought into her
nature.
Ceb. Very true.
Soc. And this corporeal element, my friend, is heavy and weighty
and earthy, and is that element by which such a soul is depressed
and dragged down again into the visible world, because she is
afraid of the invisible and of the world below—prowling about
tombs and sepulchres, in the neighbourhood of which, as they tell
us, are seen certain ghostly apparitions of souls which have not
departed pure, but are cloyed with sight and therefore visible.
Ceb. That is very likely, Socrates.
Soc. Yes, that is very likely, Cebes; and these must be the
souls, not of the good, but of the evil, who are compelled to
wander about such places in payment of the penalty of their former
evil way of life; and they continue to wander until through the
craving after the corporeal which never leaves them, they are
imprisoned finally in another body. And they may be supposed to
find their prisons in the same natures which they have had in their
former lives.
Further on in the same dialogue, Socrates says:
Each pleasure and pain is a sort of nail which nails and rivets the
soul to the body, until she becomes like the body, and believes
that to be true which the body affirms to be true; and from
agreeing with the body, and having the same delights, she is
obliged to have the same habits and haunts, and is not likely ever
to be pure at her departure, but is always infected by the
body.—Extracted from Jowett’s Translation of the
Dialogues.
468.
imbodies and imbrutes, i.e. becomes materialised and brutish.
Imbody, ordinarily used as a transitive verb, is here intransitive.
Imbrute (said to have been coined by Milton) is also intransitive; in
Par. Lost, ix. 166, it is transitive. The use of the word may have
been suggested by the Phaedo, where the souls of the wicked are said
to “find their prisons in the same natures which they have had in their
former lives,” those of gluttons and drunkards passing into asses and
animals of that sort.
469.
divine property. In his prose works Milton calls the soul
‘that divine particle of God’s breathing’: comp.
Horace, Sat. ii. 2. 79, “affigit humo divinae
particulam aurae”; and Plato’s Phaedo,
“The soul resembles the divine, and the body the
mortal.”
470.
gloomy shadows damp: see note, l. 207.
471.
charnel-vaults, burial vaults. ‘Charnel’ (O.F.
charnel, Lat. carnalis; caro, flesh): comp.
‘carnal,’ l. 474.
473.
As loth, etc. The construction is: ‘As (being) loth to
leave the body that it loved, and (as having) linked itself to a
degenerate and degraded state.’ it: by syntax this
pronoun refers to ‘shadows,’ or (in thought)
‘such shadow.’ It seems best, however, to connect
it with ‘soul,’ line 467.
474.
sensualty. The modern form of the word is sensuality.
475.
degenerate and degraded: the former because
‘imbodied,’ the latter because ‘imbruted.’
476.
divine Philosophy, i.e. such philosophy as is to be
found in “the divine volume of Plato” (as Milton has
called it).
477.
crabbed, sour or bitter: comp. crab-apple. Crab (a shell-fish)
and crab (a kind of apple) are radically connected, both conveying the
idea of scratching or pinching (Skeat).
478.
Apollo’s lute: Apollo being the god of song and music.
Comp. Par. Reg. i. 478-480; L. L. L. iv. 3. 342,
“as sweet and musical As bright Apollo’s lute,
strung with his hair.”
479.
nectared sweets. Nectar (Gk. νέκταρ, the drink
of the gods) is repeatedly used by Milton to express the greatest
sweetness: see l. 838; Par. Lost, iv.
333, “Nectarine fruits”; v. 306, 426.
482.
Methought: see note, l. 171. what
should it be? This is a direct question about a past event, and
means ‘What was it likely to be?’ “It seems to
increase the emphasis of the interrogation, since a doubt about the
past (time having been given for investigation) implies more
perplexity than a doubt about the future” (Abbott, § 325).
For certain, i.e. for certain truth, certainly.
483.
night-foundered; benighted, lost in the darkness. Radically,
‘to founder’ is to go to the bottom (Fr. fondrer;
Lat. fundus, the bottom), hence applied to ships; it is also
applied to horses sinking in a slough. The compound is Miltonic (see
Par. Lost, i. 204), and is sometimes stigmatised as
meaningless; on the contrary, it is very expressive, implying that the
brothers are swallowed up in night and have lost their way.
‘Founder’ is here used in the secondary sense of ‘to
be lost’ or ‘to be in distress.’
484.
neighbour. An adjective, as in line 576, and frequently in Shakespeare. Neighbour =
nigh-boor, i.e. a peasant dwelling near.
487.
Best draw: we had best draw our swords.
489.
Defence is a good cause, etc., i.e. ‘in defending
ourselves we are engaged in a good cause, and may Heaven be on our
side.’
490.
That hallo. We are to understand that the Attendant Spirit has
halloed just before entering; this is shown by the stage-direction given
in the edition of Comus printed by Lawes in 1637: He hallos; the
Guardian Dæmon hallos again, and enters in the habit of a shepherd.
491.
you fall, etc., i.e. otherwise you will fall on our swords.
493.
sure: see note, l. 246.
494.
Thyrsis, Like Lycidas, this name is common in pastoral poetry.
In Milton’s Epitaphium Damonis it stands for Milton
himself; in Comus it belongs to Lawes, who now receives
additional praise for his musical genius. In lines 86-88 the compliment is enforced by alliterative
verses, and here by the aid of rhyme (495-512). Masson thinks that the poet, having
spoken of the madrigals of Thyrsis, may have introduced this rhymed
passage in order to prolong the feeling of Pastoralism by calling up
the cadence of known English pastoral poems.
495.
sweetened ... dale; poetical exaggeration or hyperbole, implying
that fragrant flowers became even more fragrant from Thyrsis’ music.
496.
huddling. This conveys the two ideas of hastening and crowding:
comp. Horace, Ars Poetica, 19, “Et properantis
aquae per amoenos ambitus agros.” madrigal: a pastoral or
shepherd’s song (Ital. mandra, a flock): such
compositions, then in favour, had been made by Lawes and by
Milton’s father.
497.
swain: a word of common use in pastoral poetry. It denotes
strictly a peasant or, more correctly, a young man: comp. the
compounds boat-swain, cox-swain. See Arc. 26,
“Stay, gentle swains,” etc.
499.
pent, penned, participle of pen, to shut up (A.S.
pennan, which is connected with pin, seen in
pin-fold, l. 7). forsook: a form
of the past tense used for the participle.
501.
and his next joy, i.e. ‘and (thou), his next
joy’—words addressed to the second brother.
502.
trivial toy, ordinary trifle. The phrase seems redundant, but
‘trivial’ may here be used in the strict sense of common
or well-known. Compare Il Pens. 4, “fill the fixed mind
with all your toys”; and Burton’s Anat. of
Mel., “complain of toys, and fear without a
cause.”
503.
stealth of, things stolen by.
506.
To this my errand, etc., i.e. in comparison with this
errand of mine and the anxiety it involved. ‘To’ = in
comparison with; an idiom common in Elizabethan English, e.g.
“There is no woe to this correction,” Two
Gent. ii. 4. 138. See Abbott, § 187.
508.
How chance. Chance is here a verb followed by a substantive
clause: ‘how does it chance that,’ etc. This idiom is common in
Shakespeare (Abbott, § 37), where it sometimes has the force of an
adverb (= perchance): compare Par. Lost, ii. 492: “If chance the
radiant sun, with farewell sweet,” etc.
509.
sadly, seriously. Radically, sad = sated or full (A.S.
saed); hence the two meanings, ‘serious’ and
‘sorrowful,’ the former being common in Spenser, Bacon,
and Shakespeare. Comp. ‘some sad person of known
judgment’ (Bacon); Romeo and Jul. i. 1. 205, “Tell
me in sadness, who is that you love”; Par. Lost,
vi. 541, “settled in his face I see Sad
resolution.” See also Swinburne’s Miscellanies
(1886), page 170.
510.
our neglect, i.e. neglect on our part.
511.
Ay me! Comp. Lyc. 56, “Ay me! I fondly
dream”; 154. This exclamatory phrase = ah me! Its form is due to
the French aymi = alas, for me! and has no connection with
ay or aye = yes. In this line true rhymes with
shew: comp. youth and shew’th, Sonnet on
his having arrived at the age of twenty-three.
512.
Prithee. A familiar fusion of I pray thee, sometimes written
‘pr’ythee.’ Lines 495-512
form nine rhymed couplets.
513.
ye: a dative. See note on l. 216.
514.
shallow. Comp. Son. i. 6, “shallow
cuckoo’s bill,” xiia. 12;
Arc. 41, “shallow-searching Fame.”
515.
sage poets. Homer and Virgil are meant; both of these mention the
chimera. Milton (Par. Lost, iii. 19) afterwards speaks of himself as
“taught by the heavenly Muse.” Comp. L’Alleg.
17; Il Pens. 117,
“great bards besides In sage and solemn tunes have sung.”
516.
storied, related: ‘To story’ is here used actively:
the past participle is frequent in the sense of ‘bearing a story
or picture’; Il Pens. 159, “storied windows”;
Gray’s Elegy, 41, “storied urn”;
Tennyson’s “storied walls.” Story is an
abbreviation of history.
517.
Chimeras, monsters. Comp. the sublime passage in Par.
Lost, ii. 618-628. The Chimera was a fire-breathing monster, with
the head of a lion, the tail of a dragon, and the body of a goat. It
was slain by Bellerophon. As a common name ‘chimera’ is
used by Milton to denote a terrible monster, and is now current (in an
age which rejects such fabulous creatures) in the sense of a wild
fancy; hence the adj. chimerical = wild or fanciful.
enchanted isles, e.g. those of Circe and Calypso,
mentioned in the Odyssey.
518.
rifted rocks: rifted = riven. Orpheus, in search of Eurydice,
entered the lower world through the rocky jaws of Taenarus, a cape in
the south of Greece (see Virgil Georg. iv. 467, Taenarias
fauces); here also Hercules emerged from Hell with the captive
Cerberus.
519.
such there be. See note on l. 12 for
this indicative use of be.
520.
navel, centre, inmost recess. Shakespeare (Cor. iii. l.
123) speaks of the ‘navel of the state’; and in Greek
Calypso’s island was ‘the navel of the sea,’ while
Apollo’s temple at Delphi was ‘the navel of the
earth.’
521.
Immured, enclosed. Here used generally: radically it = shut up
within walls (Lat. murus, a wall).
523.
witcheries, enchantments.
526.
murmurs. The incantations or spells of evil powers were sung or
murmured over the doomed object; sometimes they were muttered (as
here) over the enchanted food or drink prepared for the victim. Comp.
l. 817 and Arc. 60, “With
puissant words and murmurs made to bless.”
529.
unmoulding reason’s mintage charactered, i.e.
defacing those signs of a rational soul that are stamped on the human
face. The figure is taken from the process of melting down coins in
order to restamp them. ‘Charactered’: here used in its
primary sense (Gk. χαρακτήρ,
an engraven or stamped mark), as in the phrase ‘printed
characters.’ The word is here accented on the second syllable;
in modern English on the first.
531.
crofts that brow = crofts that overhang. Croft = a small field,
generally adjoining a house. Brow = overhang: comp. L’Alleg. 8,
“low-browed rocks.”
532.
bottom glade: the glade below. The word bottom, however,
is frequent in Shakespeare in the sense of ‘valley’; hence
‘bottom glade’ might be interpreted ‘glade in the
valley.’
533.
monstrous rout; see note on the
stage-direction after l. 92. Comp. ‘the bottom of the monstrous
world,’ Lyc. 158. In Aen. vii. 15, we read that
when Aeneas sailed past Circe’s island he heard “the
growling noise of lions in wrath, ... and shapes of huge wolves
fiercely howling.”
534.
stabled wolves, wolves in their dens. Stable (= a
standing-place) is used by Milton in the general sense of abode,
e.g. in Par. Lost, xi. 752, “sea-monsters whelped
and stabled.” Comp. “Stable for camels,”
Ezek. xxv. 5, and the Latin stabulum, Aen. vi.
179, stabula alta ferarum.
535.
Hecate: see l. 135.
536.
bowers: see note, l. 45.
539.
unweeting; unwitting, unknowing. This spelling is found in
Spenser’s Faerie Queene, both in the compounds and in the
simple verb weet, a corruption of wit (A.S.
witan, to know). Compare Par. Reg. i. 126,
“unweeting, he fulfilled The purposed counsel.”
Sams. Agon. 1680; Chaucer, Doctor’s Tale,
“Virginius came to weet the judge’s
will.”
540.
by then, i.e. by the time when. The demonstrative adverb thus
implies a relative adverb: comp. the Greek, where the demonstrative is
generally omitted, though in Homer occasionally the demonstrative alone
is used. Another rendering is to make line 540
parenthetical.
542.
knot-grass. A grass with knotted or jointed stem: some,
however, suppose marjoram to be intended here. dew-besprent,
i.e. besprinkled with dew: comp. Lyc. 29. Be is
an intensive prefix; sprent is connected with M.E.
sprengen, to scatter, of which sprinkle is the
frequentative form.
543.
sat me down: see note, l. 61.
544.
canopied, and interwove. Comp. M. N. D. ii. 2. 49,
‘I know a bank,’ etc. In sense ‘canopied’
refers to ‘bank,’ and ‘interwove’ to
‘ivy.’ There are two forms of the past participle of
weave, viz. wove and woven: see Arc.
47.
545.
flaunting, showy, garish. In Lyc. 146, the poet first wrote
‘garish columbine,’ then ‘well-attired woodbine.’
547.
meditate ... minstrelsy, i.e. to sing a pastoral song:
comp. Lyc. 32. 66. To meditate the muse is a Virgilian
phrase: see Ecl. i. and vi. The Lat. meditor has the
meaning of ‘to apply one’s self to,’ and does not
mean merely to ponder.
548.
had, should have: comp. l. 394. ere
a close, i.e. before he had finished his song (Masson).
Close occurs in the technical sense of ‘the final cadence
of a piece of music.’
549.
wonted: see note, l. 332.
550.
barbarous: comp. Son. xii. 3, “a barbarous
noise environs me Of owls and cuckoos, etc.”
551.
listened them. The omission of to after verbs of hearing
is frequent in Shakespeare and others: comp. “To listen our
purpose”; “List a brief tale”; “hearken the
end”; etc. (see Abbott, § 199). ‘Them’: this
refers to the sounds implied in ‘dissonance.’
552.
unusual stop. This refers to what happened at l. 145, and the “soft and solemn-breathing
sound” to l. 230.
553.
drowsy frighted, i.e. drowsy and frighted. The noise of
Comus’s rout is here supposed to have kept the horses of night
awake and in a state of drowsy agitation until the sudden calm
put an end to their uneasiness. In Milton’s corrected MS. we read ‘drowsy flighted,’ where
the two words are not co-ordinate epithets but must be regarded as
expressing one idea = flying drowsily; to express this some insert a
hyphen. Comp. ‘dewy-feathered,’ Il Pens. 146, and
others of Milton’s remarkable compound adjectives. The reading
in the text is that of the printed editions of 1637, ’45, and
’73.
554.
Sleep (or Night) is represented as drawn by horses in a chariot
with its curtains closely drawn. Comp. Macbeth, ii. l. 51,
“curtained sleep.”
555.
‘The lady’s song rose into the air so sweetly and imperceptibly
that silence was taken unawares and so charmed that she would gladly
have renounced her nature and existence for ever if her place could
always be filled by such music.’ Comp. Par. Lost, iv.
604, “She all night long her amorous descant sung; Silence
was pleased”; also Jonson’s Vision of Delight:
“Yet let it like an odour rise
To all the senses here,
And fall like sleep upon their eyes,
Or music in their ear.”
558.
took, taken. Comp. l. 256 for a similar
use of take, and compare ‘forsook,’ line 499, for the form of the word.
560.
Still, always. This use of still is frequent in
Elizabethan writers (Abbott, § 69). I was all ear. Warton
notes this expressive idiom (still current) in Drummond’s
‘Sonnet to the Nightingale,’ and in Tempest, iv. l.
59, “all eyes.” All is an attribute of
I.
561.
create a soul, etc., i.e. breathe life even into the
dead: comp. L’Alleg. 144. Warton supposes that Milton may
have seen a picture in an old edition of Quarles’
Emblems, in which “a soul in the figure of an infant is
represented within the ribs of a skeleton, as in its prison.”
Rom. vii. 24, “Who shall deliver me out of the body of
this death?”
565.
harrowed, distracted, torn as by a harrow. This is
probably the meaning, but there is a verb ‘harrow’
corrupted from ‘harry,’ to subdue; hence some read
“harried with grief and fear.”
567.
How sweet ... how near. This sentence contains two
exclamations: this is a Greek construction. In English the idiom is
“How sweet ... and how near,” etc. We may, however,
render the line thus: “How sweet..., how near the deadly snare
is!”
568.
lawns. ‘Lawn’ is always used by Milton to denote an
open stretch of grassy ground, whereas in modern usage it is applied
generally to a smooth piece of grass-grown land in front of
a house. The origin of the word is disputed, but it seems radically to
denote ‘a clear space’; it is said to be cognate with
llan used as a prefix in the names of certain Welsh towns,
e.g. Llandaff, Llangollen. In Chaucer it takes the form
launde.
569.
often trod by day, which I have often trod by day, and therefore
know well.
570.
mine ear: see note, l. 171.
571.
wizard. Here used in contempt, like many other words with the
suffix -ard, or -art, as braggart, sluggard, etc. Milton
occasionally, however, uses the word merely in the sense of magician or
magical, without implying contempt: see Lyc. 55, “Deva
spreads her wizard stream.”
572.
certain signs: see l. 644.
574.
aidless: an obsolete word. See Trench’s English Past
and Present for a list of about 150 words in -less, all now
obsolete: comp. l. 92, note. wished:
wished for. Comp. l. 950 for a similar
transitive use of the verb.
575.
such two: two persons of such and such description.
577.
durst not stay. Durst is the old past tense of
dare, and is used as an auxiliary: the form dared is
much more modern, and may be used as an independent verb.
578.
sprung: see note, l. 256.
579.
till I had found. The language is extremely condensed here, the
meaning being, ‘I began my flight, and continued to run till I
had found you’; the pluperfect tense is used because the
speaker is looking back upon his meeting with the brothers after
completing a long narration of the circumstances that led up to it.
If, however, ‘had found’ be regarded as a subjunctive, the
meaning is, ‘I began my flight, and determined to continue it
until I had found (i.e. should have found) you.’ Comp.
Abbott § 361.
581.
triple knot, a three-fold alliance of Night, Shades, and Hell.
584.
“This confidence of the elder brother in favour of the final
efficacy of virtue, holds forth a very high strain of philosophy,
delivered in as high strains of eloquence and poetry” (Warton).
And Todd adds: “Religion here gave energy to the poet’s
strains.”
585.
safely, confidently. period, sentence.
586.
for me, i.e. for my part, so far as I am concerned: see
note, l. 602.
588.
Which erring men call Chance. ‘Erring’ belongs to
the predicate; “which men erroneously call Chance.” Comp.
Pope, Essay on Man:
“All nature is but art, unknown to thee;
All chance, direction, which thou canst not see.”
588.
this I hold firm. ‘This’ is explained by the next
line: “this belief, namely, that Virtue may be assailed, etc., I
hold firmly.”
590.
enthralled, enslaved. Comp. l. 1022.
591.
which ... harm, which the Evil Power intended to be most harmful.
595-7.
Gathered like scum, etc. According to one editor, this image is
“taken from the conjectures of astronomers concerning the dark spots
which from time to time appear on the surface of the sun’s body and
after a while disappear again; which they suppose to be the scum of that
fiery matter which first breeds it, and then breaks through and consumes
it.”
598.
pillared firmament. The firmament (Lat. firmus, firm or
solid) is here regarded as the roof of the earth and supported on
pillars. The ancients believed the stars to be fixed in the solid
firmament: comp. Par. Reg. iv. 55; also Wint. Tale, ii.
l. 100, “If I mistake In those foundations which I build upon,
The centre is not big enough to bear A schoolboy’s
top.”
602.
for, as regards. let ... girt, though he be surrounded.
603.
grisly legions. ‘Grisly,’ radically the same as
grue-some = horrible, causing terror. In Par. Lost, iv.
821, Satan is called “the grisly king.”
‘Legions’ is here a trisyllable.
604.
sooty flag of Acheron. Acheron, at first the name of a river of
the lower world, came to be used as a name for the whole of the lower
world generally. Todd quotes from P. Fletcher’s Locusts
(1627): “All hell run out and sooty flags display.”
605.
Harpies and Hydras. The Harpies (lit. ‘spoilers’)
were unclean monsters, being birds with the heads of maidens, with
long claws and gaunt faces. Hydras, here used as a general name
for monstrous water-serpents (Gk. hydōr, water); the name
was first given to the nine-headed monster slain by Hercules. See
Son. xv. 7, “new rebellions raise Their Hydra
heads”; the epithet ‘hydra-headed’ being applied to
a rebellion, an epidemic, or other evil that seems to gain strength
from every endeavour to repress it.
607.
return his purchase back, i.e. ‘give up his
spoil,’ or (as in the MS.)
‘release his new-got prey.’ To purchase (Fr.
pour-chasser) originally meant to pursue eagerly, hence to
acquire by fair means or foul: it thus came to mean ‘to
steal’ (as frequently in Spenser, Jonson, and Shakespeare), and
‘to buy’ (its current sense). See Trench, Study of
Words; Hen. V. iii. 2. 45, “They
will
steal anything, and call it purchase”; i. Hen. IV.
ii. l. 101, “thou shalt have share in our
purchase.”
609.
venturous, ready to venture. See note,
l. 79.
610.
yet, nevertheless. The meaning is: ‘Though thy
courage is useless, yet I love it.’ emprise: an
obsolete form (common in Spenser) of enterprise. It is
literally that which is undertaken; hence ‘readiness to
undertake’; hence ‘daring.’
611.
can do thee little stead, i.e. can help thee little.
Stead, both as noun and verb, is obsolete except in certain
phrases, e.g. ‘to stand in good stead,’ and in
composition, e.g. steadfast, homestead,
instead, Hampstead, etc. Its strict sense is place or
position: comp. Il Pens. 3, “How little you
bested.”
612.
Far other arms, i.e. very different arms.
‘Other’ has here its radical sense of
‘different,’ and can therefore be modified by an
adverb.
615.
unthread, loosen. Comp. Temp. iv. l. 259, “Go
charge my goblins that they grind their joints With dry convulsions,
shorten up their sinews With aged cramps.”
617.
As to make this relation, i.e. as to be able to tell this.
619.
a certain shepherd lad. This is supposed to refer to Charles
Diodati, Milton’s dearest friend, to whom he addressed his 1st and 6th
elegies, and after whose death he wrote the touching poem Epitaphium
Damonis, in which he alludes to his friend’s medical and botanical
skill:
“There thou shalt cull me simples, and shalt teach
Thy friend the name and healing powers of each.”
(Cowper’s translation.)
620.
Of small regard to see to: in colloquial English, ‘not
much to look at.’ This is an old idiom: comp. Greek καλὸς
ἰδεῖν: see English Bible,
“goodly to look to,” i. Sam. xvi. 12; Ezek.
xxiii. 15; Jer. xlvii. 3.
621.
virtuous, of healing power: see note,
l. 165. Comp. Il Pens. 113, “the virtuous ring and
glass.”
623.
beg me sing: see note, l. 304.
625.
ecstasy: see note, l. 261. The Greek
ekstasis = standing out of one’s self.
626.
scrip, wallet.
627.
simples, medicinal herbs. ‘Simple’ (Lat.
simplicem, ‘one-fold,’ ‘not compound’)
was used of a single ingredient in a medicine; hence its popular use
in the sense of ‘herb’ or ‘drug.’
630.
me, i.e. for me: the ethic dative.
633.
bore. The nom. of this verb is, in sense, some such word as the
plant or the root.
634.
unknown and like esteemed: known and esteemed to a like extent,
i.e. in both cases not at all. Like here corresponds to
the prefix un in unknown. On the description of the
plant, see Introduction, reference to Ascham’s
Scholemaster.
635.
clouted shoon, patched shoes. The expression is found in
Shakespeare, ii. Hen. VI. iv. 2. 195, “Spare none but
such as go in clouted shoon”; Cym. iv. 2. 214,
“put My clouted brogues from off my feet, whose rudeness
Answer’d my steps too loud”: see examples in Mayhew and
Skeat’s M. E. Dictionary. There are instances, however,
of clout in the sense of a plate of iron fastened on the sole
of a shoe. In either sense of the word ‘clouted shoon’
would be heavy and coarse. Shoon is an old plural (O.E.
scon); comp. hosen, eyen (= eyes), dohtren
(= daughters), foen (= foes), etc.
636.
more med’cinal, of greater virtue. The line may be scanned thus:
And yet | more med | ’cinal is | it than | that Mo | ly.
Moly. When
Ulysses was approaching the abode of Circe he was met by Hermes, who
said: “Come then, I will redeem thee from thy distress, and bring
deliverance. Lo, take this herb of virtue, and go to the dwelling of
Circe, that it may keep from thy head the evil day. And I will tell thee
all the magic sleight of Circe. She will mix thee a potion and cast
drugs into the mess; but not even so shall she be able to enchant thee;
so helpful is this charmed herb that I shall give thee ... Therewith the
slayer of Argos gave me the plant that he had plucked from the ground,
and he showed me the growth thereof. It was black at the root, but the
flower was like to milk. Moly the gods call it, but it is hard for
mortal men to dig; howbeit with the gods all things are possible”
(Odyssey, x. 280, etc., Butcher and Lang’s
translation). In his first Elegy Milton alludes to Mōly as
the counter-charm to the spells of Circe: see also Tennyson’s
Lotos-Eaters, “beds of amaranth and moly.”
638.
He called it Hæmony. He is the shepherd lad of
line 619. Haemony: Milton invents the
plant, both name and thing. But the adjective Haemonian is
used, in Latin poetry as = Thessalian, Haemonia being the old
name of Thessaly. And as Thessaly was regarded as a land of magic,
‘Haemonian’ acquired the sense of ‘magical’
(see Ovid, Met. vii 264, “Haemonia radices valle
resectas,” etc.), and Milton’s Haemony is simply
“the magical plant.” Coleridge supposes that by the
prickles and gold flower of the plant Milton signified the sorrows and
triumph of the Christian life.
639.
sovran use: see note, l. 41. The use of
this adjective with charms, medicines, or remedies of any kind was so
very common that the word came to imply ‘all-healing,’
‘supremely efficacious’; see Cor. ii. 1. 125,
“The most sovereign prescription in Galen.”
640.
mildew blast: comp. Arc. 48-53, Ham. iii. 4. 64,
“Here is your husband; Like a mildew’d ear
Blasting his wholesome brother.” A mildew blast is one
giving rise to that kind of blight called mildew (A.S.
meledeáw, honey-dew), it being supposed that the prevalence of
dry east winds was favourable to its formation.
642.
pursed it up, etc., i.e. put it in my wallet, though I
did not attach much importance to it. little reckoning: comp.
Lyc. 116, where the very same phrase occurs.
643.
Till now that. Here that = when, the clause introduced by it
being explanatory of now (see Abbott, § 284).
646-7.
Entered ... came off. ‘I entered into the very midst of
his treacherous enchantments, and yet escaped.’
Lime-twigs = snares; in allusion to the practice of catching
birds by means of twigs smeared with a viscous substance (called on
that account ‘birdlime’). Shakespeare makes repeated
allusion to this practice: see Macbeth, iv. 2. 34; Two
Gent. ii. 2. 68; ii. Hen. VI. i. 3. 91; etc.
649.
necromancer’s hall. Warton supposes that Milton here
thought of a magician’s castle which has an enchanted hall
invaded by Christian knights, as we read of in the romances of
chivalry. Necromancer, lit. one who by magical power can
commune with the dead (Gk. νεκρός, a corpse);
hence a sorcerer. From confusion of the first syllable with that of
the Lat. niger, black, the art of necromancy came to be called
“the black art.”
650.
Where if he be, Lat. ubi si sit: in English the relative
adverb in such cases is best rendered by a conjunction + a
demonstrative adverb; thus, ‘and if he be
there.’
651.
brandished blade. Comp. Hermes’ advice to Ulysses:
“When it shall be that Circe smites thee with her long wand,
even then draw thy sharp sword from thy thigh, and spring on her, as
one eager to slay her,” Odyssey, x. break his
glass. An imitation of Spenser, who makes Sir Guyon break the
golden cup of the enchantress Excess, F. Q. i. 12, stanza
56.
652.
luscious, delicious. The word is a corruption of lustious from
O.E. lust = pleasure: see note, l. 49.
653.
But seize his wand. The force of this injunction is shown by lines
815-819.
654.
menace high, violent threat. High is thus used in a
number of figurative senses, e.g. a high wind, a high hand,
high passions (Par. Lost, ix. 123), high descent, high design,
etc.
655.
Sons of Vulcan. In the Aeneid (Bk. viii. 252) we are
told that Cacus, son of Vulcan (the Roman God of Fire), “vomited
from his throat huge volumes of smoke” when pursued by Hercules,
“Faucibus ingentem fumum,” etc.
657.
apace; quickly, at a great pace. This word has changed its
meaning: in Chaucer it means ‘at a foot pace,’ i.e.
slowly. The first syllable is the indefinite article
‘a’ = one (Skeat).
658.
bear: the subjunctive used optatively (Abbott, § 365).
(Stage Direction) puts by: puts on one side, refuses.
goes about to rise, i.e. endeavours to rise. This
idiomatic use of go about still lingers in the phrase ‘to
go about one’s business’; comp. ‘to set
about’ anything.
659.
but, merely: comp. l. 656. After the
conditional clause we have here a verb in the present tense
(‘are chained’), a construction which well expresses the
certainty and immediate action of the sorcerer’s spell (see
Abbott, § 371).
660.
your nerves ... alabaster. Comp. Tempest, i. 2. 471-484.
Milton has the word alabaster three times, twice incorrectly spelled
alablaster (in this passage and Par. Lost, iv. 544) and
once correctly, as now entered in the text (Par. Reg. iv. 548).
Alabaster is a kind of marble: comp. On Shak. 14, “make
us marble with too much conceiving.”
661.
or, as Daphne was, etc. The construction is: ‘if I merely
wave this wand, you (become) a marble statue, or (you become)
root-bound, as Daphne was, that fled Apollo.’ Milton inserts the
adverbial clause in the predicate, which is not unusual; he then adds
an attributive clause, which is not usual in English, though common in
Greek and Latin. Daphne, an Arcadian goddess, was pursued by Apollo,
and having prayed for aid, she was changed into a laurel tree (Gk.
δάφνη): comp, the story
of Syrinx and Pan, referred to in Arc. 106.
662.
fled. Comp. the transitive use of the verb in l. 829, 939, Son.
xviii. 14, “fly the Babylonian woe”; Sams.
Agon. 1541, “fly The sight of this so horrid
spectacle.”
663.
freedom of my mind, etc. Comp. Cowper’s noble passage,
“He is the freeman whom the truth makes free,” etc.
(Task, v. 733).
665.
corporal rind: the body, called in Il Pens. 92,
“this fleshly nook.”
668.
here be all. See note, l. 12.
669.
fancy can beget: comp. Il Pens. 6.
672.
cordial julep, heart-reviving drink. Cordial, lit.
hearty (Lat. cordi, stem of cor, the heart):
julep, Persian gulāb, rose-water.
673.
his = its: see note, l. 96.
674.
syrups: Arab, sharāb, a drink, wine.
675.
that Nepenthes, etc. The allusion is explained by the following
lines of the Odyssey: “Then Helen, daughter of
Zeus, turned to new
thoughts. Presently she cast a drug into the wine whereof they drank, a
drug to lull all pain and anger, and bring forgetfulness of every
sorrow. Whoso should drink a draught thereof, when it is mingled in the
bowl, on that day he would let no tear fall down his cheeks, not though
his father and his mother died ... Medicines of such virtue and so
helpful had the daughter of Zeus, which Polydamna, the wife of Thon, had
given her, a woman of Egypt, where earth the grain-giver yields herbs in
greatest plenty, many that are healing in the cup, and many baneful”
(Butcher and Lang’s translation, iv. 219-230).
‘Nepenthes,’ a Greek adj. = sorrow-dispelling (νη, privative; πένθος,
grief). It is here used by Milton as the name of an opiate and it is now
occasionally used as a general name for drugs that relieve pain.
677.
Is of such power, etc.: see note, l.
155. The construction is, ‘That Nepenthes is not of such power
to stir up joy as this (julep is, nor is it) so friendly to life (nor)
so cool to thirst.’
679.
Why ... to yourself. Comp. Shakespeare, Son. i. 8,
“Thyself thy foe, to thy sweet self too cruel.”
680.
‘Nature gave you your beautiful person to be held in trust on
certain conditions, of which the most obligatory is that the body
should have refreshment after toil, ease after pain. Yet this very
condition you disregard, and deal harshly with yourself by refusing my
proferred glass at a time when you are in need of food and
rest.’ Comp. Shakespeare, Son. iv. “Unthrifty
loveliness, why dost thou spend Upon thyself thy beauty’s
legacy,” etc.
685.
unexempt condition, i.e. a condition binding on all and
at all times, a law of human nature.
687.
mortal frailty, i.e. weak mortals: abstract for
concrete.
688.
That. The antecedent of this relative is you, l. 682. See note, l. 2.
689.
timely, seasonable. So ‘timeless’ = unseasonable
(Scott’s Marmion, iii. 223, “gambol rude and
timeless joke”): comp. Son. ii. 8,
“timely-happy spirits”; and l. 970.
693.
Was this ... abode? The verb is singular, because
‘cottage’ and ‘safe abode’ convey one idea:
see Comus’s words, l. 320. Notice also
that the past tense is used as referring to the past act of
telling.
694.
aspects: accent on final syllable.
695.
oughly-headed: so spelt in Milton’s MS. = ugly-headed. Ugly is radically
connected with awe.
698.
with visored falsehood and base forgery. A vizor (also spelt
visor, visard, vizard) is a mask, “a false
face.” The allusion
is to
Comus’s disguise: see l. 166.
With in this line, as in lines 672 and
700, denotes by means of.
700.
liquorish baits: see note on
baited, l. 162. ‘Liquorish,’ by catachresis for
lickerish = tempting to the appetite, causing one to
lick one’s lips. The student should carefully distinguish
the three words lickerish (as above), liquorish (which
is really meaningless) and liquorice (= licorice = Lat.
glycyrrhiza), a plant with a sweet root.
702.
treasonous; an obsolete word. The current form
‘treasonable’ has usually a more restricted sense: Milton
and Shakespeare use treasonous in the more general sense of
traitorous (a cognate word). In this line ‘offer’ =
the thing offered.
703.
good men ... good things. This noble sentiment Milton has
borrowed from Euripides, Medea, 618, Κακοῦ γὰρ
ἀνδρος δῶρ᾿
ὄνησιν οὐκ
ἔχει “the gifts of the bad man are
without profit.” (Newton).
704.
that which is not good, etc. This is Platonic: the soul has a
rational principle and an irrational or appetitive, and when the former
controls the latter, the desires are for what is good only (Rep. iv.
439).
707.
budge doctors of the Stoic fur. Budge is lambskin with the wool
dressed outwards, worn on the edge of the hoods of bachelors of arts,
etc. Therefore, if both budge and fur be taken literally
the line is tautological. But ‘budge’ has the secondary
sense of ‘solemn,’ like a doctor in his robes; and
‘fur’ may be used figuratively in the sense of
sect, just as “the cloth” is used to denote the
clergy. The whole phrase would thus be equivalent to ‘solemn
doctors of the Stoic sect.’ It is possible that Milton makes
equivocal reference to the two senses of ‘budge.’
708.
the Cynic tub = the tub of Diogenes the Cynic, here put in
contempt for the Cynic school of Greek philosophy, which was the
forerunner of the Stoic system. Diogenes, one of the early Cynics,
lived in a tub, and was fond of calling himself ὁ κύων (the dog).
709.
the: here used generically.
711.
unwithdrawing. In this participle the termination -ing
seems almost equivalent to that of the past participle: comp.
“all-obeying breath” (= obeyed by all), A. and
C. iii. 13, 77. Nature’s gifts are not only full but
continuous.
714.
all to please ... curious taste. All = entirely, here
modifies the infinitives please and sate. Curious = fastidious:
its original sense is ‘careful’ or ‘anxious.’
Compare the two senses of exquisite, note l. 359.
715.
set, i.e. she set. The pronominal subject is omitted.
717.
To deck: infinitive of purpose.
718.
in her own loins, i.e. in the bowels of the earth.
719.
hutched = stored up, enclosed. Hutch is an old word for chest or
coffer, chiefly used now in the compound ‘rabbit-hutch.’
720.
To store her children with, i.e. wherewith to
store her children. Or we may read, ‘in order to store her
children with (them).’ ‘Store’ = provide.
721.
pet of temperance, i.e. a sudden and transitory fit of
temperance. pulse. So Daniel and his three companions refused
the dainties of the King of Babylon and fed on pulse and water;
Dan. i.
722.
frieze, coarse woollen cloth.
723.
All-giver. Comp. Gk. πανδώρα, an
epithet applied to the earth as the giver of all.
725.
‘And we should serve him as (if he were) a grudging master and a
penurious niggard of his wealth, and (we should) live like
Nature’s bastards’: see Hebrews xii. 8, “If
ye are without chastening, whereof all have been made partakers, then
are ye bastards, and not sons.”
728.
Who. The pronoun here relates not to the word immediately
preceding it, but to the substantive implied in the possessive pronoun
her, i.e. the sons of her who. His, her, etc., in such
constructions have their full force as genitives: comp.
L’Alleg. 124, “her grace whom” = the grace of
her whom. surcharged: overloaded, ‘overfraught’ (l.
732). waste fertility, wasted or unused
abundance. This participial use of ‘waste’ seems to be due
to the similarity in sound to such participles as
‘elevate’ (= elevated), ‘instruct’ (=
instructed), etc., which occur in Milton (comp. English Past and
Present, vi.).
729.
strangled, suffocated.
730.
winged air darked with plumes, i.e. the air being
darkened by the flight of innumerable birds. Spenser also has
dark as a verb. Both clauses in this line are absolute.
731.
over-multitude, outnumber. This line and the preceding one
illustrate the freedom with which, in earlier English, one part of
speech was used for another.
732.
o’erfraught: see note, l. 355.
733.
emblaze, make to blaze, make splendid. There is perhaps a
reference to the sense of emblazon, which is from M.E.
blazen, to blaze abroad, to proclaim.
734.
bestud with stars. In Milton’s MS. it is ‘bestud the centre with their
star-light,’ centre being the ‘centre of the
earth.’
735.
inured, accustomed, by custom rendered less sensitive.
Inure is from the old phrase ‘in ure’ = in
operation (Fr. œuvre, work).
737.
coy: shy or reserved. cozened: cheated, beguiled. The
origin of this word is interesting: a cozener is one who, for selfish
ends, claims kindred or cousinship with another, and hence a
flatterer or cheat.
739-755. Beauty is Nature’s coin,
etc. “The idea that runs through these seventeen lines is a
favourite one with the old poets; and Warton and Todd cite parallel
passages from Shakespeare, Daniel, Fletcher, and Drayton. Thus, from
Shakespeare (M. N. D. i. 1. 76-8):
“Earthlier happy is the rose distilled
Than that which, withering on the virgin thorn,
Grows, lives, and dies, in single blessedness.”
See also Shakespeare’s first six sonnets, which are pervaded
by the idea in all its subtleties” (Masson).
743.
let slip time, i.e. allow time to slip: see note, l. 304. Comp. Par. Lost, i. 178.
“Let us not slip the occasion.”
744.
It = beauty. languished, languid or languishing: comp.
Par. Lost, vi. 496, “their languished hope
revived”; Epitaph on M. of W. 33. The suffix -ed
is frequent in Elizabethan English where we now have -ing
(Abbott, § 374).
747.
most, as many as possible.
748.
homely ... home. There is here a play upon words as in Two
Gent. i. 1. 2: “Home-keeping youth have ever
homely wits.” Homely is derived from
home.
749. Women with coarse complexions and dull cheeks are good enough for
household occupations.
750.
of sorry grain, not brilliant, of poor colour.
‘Grain’ is from Lat. granum, a seed, applied to
small objects, and hence to the coccus or cochineal insect which
yields a variety of red dyes. Hence grain came to denote
certain colours, e.g. Tyrian purple, violet, etc., and is so
used by Milton: see Il Pens. 33, “a robe of darkest
grain”; Par. Lost, v. 285, “sky-tinctured
grain”; xi. 242, “A military vest of purple ...
Livelier than ... the grain Of Sarra,” etc. And as these
were fast or durable colours we have such phrases as ‘to dye in
grain,’ ‘a rogue in grain,’ ‘an ingrained
habit.’ (See further in Marsh’s Lect. on Eng. Lang.
p. 55).
751.
sampler, a sample or pattern piece of needlework. It is a
doublet of exemplar. tease the huswife’s wool. To
tease is to comb or card: comp. the Lat. vexare.
‘Huswife’ = house-wife, further corrupted into
hussy. Hussif (a case for needles, etc.) is a different
word.
752.
What need a vermeil-tinctured lip? See note, l. 362, on ‘what need.’
Vermeil: a French spelling of vermilion. The name is
from Lat. vermis, a worm (the cochineal insect, from which the
colour used to be got); and as vermis is cognate with Sansk.
krimi, a worm, it follows that vermilion,
crimson, and carmine are cognate.
753.
tresses. Homer (Odyssey, v. 390) speaks of “the
fair-tressed Dawn,” εὐπλόκαμος
Ἠώς.
755.
advised. Contrast with ‘Advice,’ l. 108.
756.
Lines 756-761 are not addressed to Comus.
757.
but that: were it not that.
758.
as mine eyes: as he has already charmed mine eyes; see note, l. 170.
759.
rules pranked in reason’s garb, i.e. specious
arguments. Pranked = decked in a showy manner: Milton (Prose
works, i. 147, ed. 1698) speaks of the Episcopal church service
pranking herself in the weeds of the Popish mass. Comp.
Wint. Tale, iv. 4. 10, “Most goddess-like
prank’d up”; Par. Lost, ii. 226,
“Belial, with words clothed in reason’s
garb.”
760-1.
I hate when Vice brings forward refined arguments, and Virtue allows
them to pass unchallenged. bolt = to sift or separate, as the
boulting-mill separates the meal from the bran; in this sense
the word (also spelt boult) is used by Chaucer, Spenser (F.
Q. ii. 4. 24), Shakespeare (Cor. iii. 1. 322, Wint.
Tale, iv. 4. 375, “the fanned snow that’s
bolted By the northern blasts twice o’er,” etc.).
The spelling bolt has confused the word with
‘bolt,’ to shoot or start out. See Index to Globe
Shakespeare.
763.
she would her children, etc., i.e. she wished (that) her
children should be wantonly luxurious: comp. l. 172; Par. Lost, i. 497-503.
764.
cateress, stewardess, provider: lit. ‘a buyer.’
Cateress is feminine: the masculine is caterer, where
the final -er of the agent is unnecessarily repeated.
765.
Means ... to the good: intends ... for the good.
767.
dictate. The accent in Milton’s time was on the first
syllable, both in noun and verb. spare Temperance. For
Milton’s praises of Temperance comp. Il Pens. 46,
“Spare Fast that oft with gods doth diet”; also the 6th
Elegy, 56-66; Son. xx., etc. “There is much in the Lady
which resembles the youthful Milton himself—he, the Lady of his
college—and we may well believe that the great debate concerning
temperance was not altogether dramatic (where, indeed, is Milton truly
dramatic?), but was in part a record of passages in the poet’s
own spiritual history.” Dowden’s Transcripts and
Studies.
768. If
Nature’s blessings were equally distributed instead of being
heaped upon a luxurious few, then (as Shakespeare says, King
Lear, iv. 1. 73) “distribution should undo excess, And each
man have enough.”
769.
beseeming, suitable. The original sense of seem is
‘to be fitting,’ as in the words beseem and
seemly.
770.
lewdly-pampered; one of Milton’s most expressive
compounds = wickedly gluttonous. Lewd has passed through
several changes of meaning: (1) the lay-people as distinct from the
clergy; (2) ignorant or unlearned; and finally (2) base or
licentious.
774.
she no whit encumbered, i.e. Nature would not be in the
least surcharged (as Comus represented in l. 728). No whit, used adverbially = not in
the least, lit. ‘not a particle.’ Etymologically
aught = a whit, naught = no whit.
776.
His praise due paid, i.e. would be duly paid. On
due, see note, l. 12. gluttony:
abstract for concrete.
779.
Crams, i.e. crams himself. There are many verbs in
English that may be thus used reflexively without having the pronoun
expressed, e.g. feed, prepare, change,
pour, press, etc.
780.
enow. ‘Enow’ conveys the notion of a number, as in
early English: it is also spelt anow, and in Chaucer
ynowe, and is the plural of enough. It still occurs as a
provincialism in England. On lines 780-799
Masson says: “A recurrence, by the sister, with much more mystic
fervour, to that Platonic and Miltonic doctrine which had already been
propounded by the Elder Brother (see lines 420-475).”
782.
sun-clad power of chastity. With ‘sun-clad’ compare
‘the sacred rays of chastity,’ l. 425. Similarly in the Faerie Queene, iii.
6, Spenser says of Belphoebe, who represents Chastity, “And
Phoebus with fair beams did her adorn.”
783.
yet to what end? A rhetorical question, = it would be to no
purpose.
784.
nor ... nor. These correlatives are often used in poetry for
neither ... nor (Shakespeare often omitting the former
altogether), and are equally correct. Nor is only a contraction
of neither, and the first may as well be contracted as the
second.
785.
sublime notion and high mystery. In the Apology for
Smectymnuus Milton tells of his study of the “divine volume
of Plato,” wherein he learned of the “abstracted
sublimities” of Chastity and Love: also of his study of the Holy
Scripture “unfolding these chaste and high mysteries, with
timeless care infused, that the body is for the Lord, and the Lord for
the body.”
790.
dear wit. ‘Dear’ is here used in contempt: its
original sense is ‘precious’ (A.S. deore), but in
Elizabethan English it has a variety of meanings, e.g. intense,
serious, grievous, great, etc. Comp. “sad occasion
dear,” Lyc. 6; “dear groans,”
L. L. L. v. 2. 874. Craik suggests “that the notion
properly involved in it of love, having first become generalised into
that of a strong affection of any kind, had thence passed on to that
of such an emotion the very reverse of love,” as in my
dearest foe. gay rhetoric: here so named in contempt, as
being the instrument of sophistry.
791.
fence, argumentation, Fence is an abbreviation of
defence: comp. “tongue-fence” (Milton),
“fencer in wits’ school” (Fuller), Much Ado,
v. 1. 75.
794.
rapt spirits. ‘Rapt’ = enraptured, as if the mind
or soul had been carried out of itself (Lat. raptus,
seized): comp. Il Pens. 40, “Thy rapt soul sitting
in thine eyes.” Milton also uses the word of the actual
snatching away of a person: “What accident hath rapt him
from us,” Par. Lost, ii. 40.
797.
the brute Earth, etc., i.e. the senseless Earth would
become sensible and assist me. ‘Brute’ = Lat.
brutus, dull, insensible: comp. Horace, Odes, i. 34. 9,
“bruta tellus.”
800.
She fables not: she speaks truly. This line is alliterative.
801.
set off: comp. Lyc. 80, “set off to the
world.”
802.
though not mortal: sc. ‘I am.’ shuddering
dew. The epithet is, by hypallage, transferred from the person to
the dew or cold sweat which ‘dips’ or moistens his
body.
804.
Speaks thunder and the chains of Erebus, etc.; in allusion to
the Titanomachia or contest between Zeus and the Titans. Zeus,
having been provided with thunder and lightning by the Cyclops, cast
the Titans into Tartarus or Erebus, a region as far below Hell as
Heaven is above the Earth. The leader of the Titans was Cronos
(Saturn). There is a zeugma in speaks as applied to
‘thunder’ and ‘chains,’ unless it be taken as
in both cases equivalent to denounces.
806.
Come, no more! Comus now addresses the lady.
808.
canon laws of our foundation, i.e. the established rules
of our society. “A humorous application of the language of
universities and other foundations” (Keightley).
809.
’tis but the lees, etc. Lees and settlings
are synonymous = dregs. The allusion is to the old physiological
system of the four primary humours of the body, viz. blood, phlegm,
choler, and melancholy (see Burton’s Anat. of Mel. i. 1,
§ ii. 2): “Melancholy, cold and dry, thick, black, and
sour, begotten of the more feculent part of nourishment, and purged
from the spleen”; μελαγχολία,
black bile. See Sams. Agon. 600, “humours black That
mingle with thy fancy”; and Nash’s Terrors of the
Night (1594): “(Melancholy) sinketh down to the bottom like
the lees of the wine, corrupteth the blood, and is the cause of
lunacy.”
811.
straight, immediately. The adverb straight is now
chiefly used of direction; to indicate time straightway (= in a
straight way) is more usual: comp. L’Alleg. 69:
“Straight mine eye hath caught new pleasures.”
814.
scape, a mutilated form of ‘escape,’ occurs both as
a noun and a verb in Shakespeare and Milton: see Par. Lost, x.
5, “what can scape the eye of God?”; Par.
Reg. ii. 189, “then lay’st thy scapes on names
adored.”
816.
without his rod reversed. This use of the participle is a
Latinism: see note, l. 48. At the same time it
is to be noted that a phrase of this kind introduced by
‘without’ is in Latin frequently rendered by the ablative
absolute: such construction is here inadmissible because
‘without’ also governs ‘mutters.’
817.
backward mutters. The notion of a counter-charm produced by
reversing the magical wand and by repeating the charm backwards occurs
in Ovid (Met. xiv. 300), who describes Circe as thus restoring
the followers of Ulysses to their human forms. Milton skilfully makes
the neglect of the counter-charm the occasion for introducing the
legend of Sabrina, which was likely to interest an audience assembled
in the neighbourhood of the River Severn. On ‘mutters,’
see note, l. 526.
820.
bethink me. The pronoun after this verb is reflexive.
“The deliverance of their sister would be impossible but for
supernatural interposition, the aid afforded by the Attendant Spirit
from Jove’s court. In other words, Divine Providence is
asserted. Not without higher than human aid is the Lady rescued, and
through the weakness of the mortal instruments of divine grace but
half the intended work is accomplished.” Dowden’s
Transcripts and Studies.
821.
In this line and the next the attributive clauses are separated from
the antecedent: see note, l. 2.
822.
Melibœus. The name of a shepherd in Virgil’s
Eclogue i. Possibly the poet Spenser is here meant, as the tale
of Sabrina is given in the Faerie Queene, ii. 10, 14. The tale
is also told by Geoffrey of Monmouth and by Sackville, Drayton and
Warner. As Milton refers to a ‘shepherd,’ i.e. a
poet, and to ‘the soothest shepherd,’ i.e. the
truest poet, and as he follows Spenser’s version of the story in
this poem, we need not hesitate to identify Meliboeus with
Spenser.
823.
soothest, truest. The A.S. sóth meant
true; hence also ‘a true thing’ = truth. It
survives in soothe (lit. to affirm to be true), soothsay
(see l. 874), and forsooth (= for a
truth).
824.
from hence. Hence represents an A.S. word heonan,
-an being a suffix = from: so that in the phrase ‘from
hence’ the force of the preposition is twice introduced. Yet the
idiom is common: it arises from forgetfulness of the origin of the
word. Comp. Arc. 3: “which we from hence
descry.”
825.
with moist curb sways: comp. l. 18.
Sabrina was a numen fluminis or river-deity.
826.
Sabrina: The following is Milton’s version of the
legend:—“After this, Brutus, in a chosen place, builds
Troja Nova, changed in time to Trinovantum, now London; and began to
enact laws (Heli being then High Priest in Judea); and, having
governed the whole isle twenty-four years, died, and was buried in his
new Troy. His three sons—Locrine, Albanact, and
Camber—divide the land by consent. Locrine had the middle part,
Loëgria; Camber possessed Cambria or Wales; Albanact, Albania,
now Scotland. But he, in the end, by Humber, King of the Huns, who,
with a fleet, invaded that land, was slain in fight, and his people
driven back into Loëgria. Locrine and his brother go out against
Humber; who now marching onward was by them defeated, and in a river
drowned, which to this day retains his name. Among the spoils of his
camp and navy were found certain young maids, and Estrilidis, above
the rest, passing fair, the daughter of a king in Germany, from whence
Humber, as he went wasting the sea-coast, had led her captive; whom
Locrine, though before contracted to the daughter of Corineus,
resolves to marry. But being forced and threatened by Corineus, whose
authority and power he feared, Gwendolen the daughter he yields to
marry, but in secret loves the other; and, ofttimes retiring as to
some sacrifice, through vaults and passages made underground, and
seven years thus enjoying her, had by her a daughter equally fair,
whose name was Sabra. But when once his fear was off by the death of
Corineus, not content with secret enjoyment, divorcing Gwendolen, he
makes Estrilidis his Queen. Gwendolen, all in rage, departs into
Cornwall; where Pladan, the son she had by Locrine, was hitherto
brought up by Corineus, his grandfather; and gathering an army of her
father’s friends and subjects, gives battle to her husband by
the river Sture, wherein Locrine, shot with an arrow, ends his life.
But not so ends the fury of Gwendolen, for Estrilidis and her daughter
Sabra she throws into a river, and, to have a monument of revenge,
proclaims that the stream be thenceforth called after the
damsel’s name, which by length of time is changed now to
Sabrina or Severn.”—History of Britain
(1670).
827.
Whilom, of old. An obsolete word, lit. ‘at time’;
A.S. hwílum, instr. or dat. plur. of hwil,
time.
830.
step-dame. For the actual relationship, see note, l. 826. The prefix step (A.S.
steóp-) means ‘orphaned,’ and applies properly to a child whose parent has re-married: it
was afterwards used in the words ‘step-father,’ etc.
Dame (Fr. dame, a lady) retains the sense of mother in
the form dam.
832.
his = its: see note, l. 96.
834.
pearled wrists, wrists adorned with pearls. An appropriate epithet,
as pearls were said to exist in the waters of the Severn.
835.
aged Nereus’ hall, the abode of old Nereus, i.e.
the bottom of the sea. Nereus, the father of the Nereids, or sea
nymphs, is described as the wise and unerring old man of the sea; in
Virgil, grandaevus Nereus. See also, l. 871, and compare Jonson’s
Neptune’s Triumph, last song: “Old Nereus, with his
fifty girls, From aged Indus laden home with pearls.”
836.
piteous of, i.e. full of pity for; comp. Lat. miseret
te aliorum (genitive). Milton occasionally uses the word in this
passive sense; its active sense is ‘causing pity,’
i.e. pitiful. Comp. Abbott, § 3. reared her lank
head, i.e. raised up her drooping head: comp. Par.
Lost, viii.: “In adoration at his feet I fell Submiss: he
reared me.” ‘Lank,’ lit. slender; hence weak.
The adjective lanky is in common use = tall and thin.
837.
imbathe, to bathe in: the force of the preposition being
reduplicated, as in Lat. incidere in.
838.
nectared lavers, etc., baths sweetened with nectar and scented
with asphodel flowers. On ‘nectar,’ see note, l. 479. asphodel; the same, both
name and thing, as ‘daffodil’ (see Lyc. 150, where
it takes the form ‘daffadillies’): Gk. ἀσφόδελος,
M.E. affodille. The initial d in daffodil has not been
satisfactorily explained: see l. 851.
839.
the porch. So Quintilian calls the ear the vestibule of the
mind: comp. Haml. i. 5. 63: “the porches of mine
ear”; also the phrase, “the five gateways of
knowledge.”
840.
ambrosial oils, oils of heavenly fragrance: see note, l. 16, and compare Virgil’s use of
ambrosia in Georg. iv. 415, liquidum ambrosiae
diffundit odorem.
841.
quick immortal change: comp. l. 10.
842.
Made Goddess, etc. This participial construction is frequent in
Milton as in Latin: it is equivalent to an explanatory clause.
844.
twilight meadows: comp. “twilight groves,” Il Pens. 133;
“twilight ranks,” Arc. 99; Hymn Nat. 188.
845.
Helping all urchin blasts, remedying or preventing the
blighting influence of evil spirits. ‘Urchin blasts’ is
probably here used generally for what in Arcades, 49-53, are
called “noisome winds and blasting vapours chill,”
‘urchin’ being
common in the sense of ‘goblin’ (M. W. of W. iv. 4.
49). Strictly the word denotes the hedgehog, which for various reasons
was popularly regarded with great dread, and hence mischievous spirits
were supposed to assume its form: comp. Shakespeare, Temp, i.
2. 326, ii. 2. 5, “Fright me with urchin-shows”;
Titus And. ii. 3. 101; Macbeth, iv. 1. 2, “Thrice
and once the hedge-pig whined,” etc. Compare the
protecting duties of the Genius in Arcades. Helping:
comp. the phrases, “I cannot help it,” i.e.
prevent it; “it cannot be helped,” i.e.
remedied, etc.
846.
shrewd. Here used in its radical sense = shrew-ed,
malicious, like a shrew. Comp. M. N. D. ii. 1, “That
shrewd and knavish sprite called Robin Goodfellow.”
Chaucer has the verb shrew = to curse; the current verb is
beshrew.
847.
vialed, contained in phials.
850.
garland wreaths. A garland is a wreath, but we may take the
phrase to mean ‘wreathed garlands’: comp. “twisted
braids,” l. 862.
852.
old swain, i.e. Meliboeus (l. 862). “But neither Geoffrey of Monmouth nor
Spenser has the development of the legend” (Masson).
853.
clasping charm: see l. 613, 660.
854.
warbled song: comp. Arc. 87, “touch the
warbled string”; Son. xx. 12, “Warble
immortal notes.”
857.
This will I try, i.e. to invoke her rightly in song.
858.
adjuring, charging by something sacred and venerable. The
adjuration is contained in lines 867-889,
which, in Milton’s MS., are directed
“to be said,” not sung, and in the Bridgewater MS. “to sing or not.” From the latter
MS. it would appear that these lines were
sung as a kind of trio by Lawes and the two brothers.
863.
amber-dropping: see note, l. 333; and
comp. l. 106, where the idea is similar,
warranting us in taking ‘amber-dropping’ as a compound
epithet = dropping amber, and not (as some read) ‘amber’
and ‘dropping.’ Amber conveys the ideas of luminous
clearness and fragrance: see Sams. Agon. 720,
“amber scent of odorous perfume.”
865.
silver lake, the Severn. Virgil has the Lat. lacus in
the sense of ‘a river.’
868.
great Oceanus, Gk. Ὠκέανόν τε
μέγαν. The early Greeks regarded the
earth as a flat disc, surrounded by a perpetually flowing river called
Oceanus: the god of this river was also called Oceanus, and afterwards
the name was applied to the Atlantic. Hesiod, Drayton, and Jonson have
all applied the epithet ‘great’ to the god Oceanus; in
fact, throughout these
lines Milton uses what may be called the “permanent
epithets” of the various divinities.
869.
earth-shaking Neptune’s mace, i.e. the trident of
Poseidon (Neptune). Homer calls him ἐννοσίγαιος
= earth-shaking: comp. Iliad, xii. 27, “And the Shaker of
the Earth with his trident in his hands,” etc. In Par.
Lost, x. 294, Milton provides Death with a “mace
petrifick.”
870.
Tethys’ ... pace. Tethys, wife of Oceanus, their children
being the Oceanides and river-gods. In Hesiod she is ‘the
venerable’ (πότνια
Τηθύς), and in Ovid ‘the
hoary.’
871.
hoary Nereus: see note, l. 835.
872.
Carpathian wizard’s hook. See Virgil’s
Georg. iv. 387, “In the sea-god’s Carpathian gulf
there lives a seer, Proteus, of the sea’s own hue ... all things
are known to him, those which are, those which have been, and those
which drag their length through the advancing future.”
Wizard = diviner, without the depreciatory sense of line 571; see note there.
Hook: Proteus had a shepherd’s hook, because he tended
“the monstrous herds of loathly sea-calves”:
Odyssey, iv. 385-463.
873.
scaly Triton’s ... shell. In Lycidas, 89, he is
“the Herald of the Sea.” He bore a ‘wreathed
horn’ or shell which he blew at the command of Neptune in order
to still the restless waves of the sea. He was ‘scaly,’
the lower part of his body being like that of a fish.
874.
soothsaying Glaucus. He was a Boeotian fisherman who had been
changed into a marine deity, and was regarded by fishermen and sailors
as a soothsayer or oracle: see note, l.
823.
875.
Leucothea: lit. “the white goddess” (Gk. λευκή,
θεά), the
name by which Ino, the daughter of Cadmus, was worshipped after she
had thrown herself into the sea to avoid her enraged husband
Athamas.
876.
her son, i.e. Melisertes, drowned and deified along with
his mother: as a sea-deity he was called Palaemon, identified by the
Romans with their god of harbours, Portumnus.
877.
tinsel-slippered. The ‘permanent epithet’ of
Thetis, a daughter of Nereus and mother of Achilles, is
“silver-footed” (Gk.
ἀργυρόπεζα). Comp. Neptune’s Triumph (Jonson):
“And all the silver-footed nymphs were drest
To wait upon him, to the Ocean’s feast.”
‘Tinsel-slippered’ is a paraphrase of this, for
‘tinsel’ is a cloth worked with silver (or gold): the
notion of cheap finery is not radical. Etymologically, tinsel
is that which glitters or scintillates. On the beauty of this
epithet, and of Milton’s compound epithets generally, see
Trench, English Past and Present, p. 296.
878-80.
Sirens ... Parthenopè’s ... Ligea’s. The
three Sirens (see note, l. 253) were
Parthenopè, Ligēa, and Lucosia. The tomb of the first was
at Naples (see Milton’s Ad Leonaram, iii., “Credula
quid liquidam Sirena, Neapoli, jactas, Claraque Parthenopes fana
Achelöiados,” etc.). Ligea, described by Virgil
(Georg. iv. 336) as a sea-nymph, is here represented as seated,
like a mermaid, in the act of smoothing her hair with a golden
comb.
881.
Wherewith = with which. The true adjective clause is
“sleeking ... locks” = with which she sleeks, etc.; and
the true participial clause is “she sits ... rocks” =
seated on ... rocks.
882.
Sleeking, making sleek or glossy. The original sense of
‘sleek’ is greasy: comp. Lyc. 99, “On the
level brine Sleek Panopè with all her sisters
played.”
885.
heave, raise. Comp. the similar use of the word in
L’Alleg. 145, “Orpheus’ self may heave his
head.”
887.
bridle in, i.e. restrain.
888.
have: subjunctive after till, as frequently in Milton.
890.
rushy-fringèd, fringed with rushes. The more usual form
would be rush-fringed: we may regard Milton’s form as a
participle formed from the compound noun “rushy-fringe”:
comp. ‘blue-haired,’ l. 29;
“false-played,” Shakespeare, A. and C. iv. 14.
891.
grows. A singular with two nominatives connected by and:
the verb is to be taken with each. But the compound subject is really
equivalent to “the willow with its osiers dank,” osiers
being water-willows or their branches. dank, damp: comp.
Par. Lost, vii. 441, “oft they quit the
dank” (= the water).
893.
Thick set, etc., i.e. thickly inlaid with agate and
beautified with the azure sheen of turquoise, etc. There is a zeugma
in set. azurn sheen. Sheen = brightness: it occurs again
in l. 1003; see note
there. ‘Azurn’: modern English has a tendency to use the
noun itself as an adjective in cases where older English used an
adjective with the suffix -en = made of. Most of the adjectives
in -en that still survive do not now denote “made
of,” but simply “like,” e.g. golden hair,
etc. Azurn and cedarn (l. 990),
hornen, treen, corden, glassen,
reeden, etc., are practically obsolete; see Trench, English
Past and Present. Comp. ‘oaten’ (Lyc. 33),
‘oaken’ (Arc. 45). As the words ‘azurn’
and ‘cedarn’ are peculiar to Milton some hold that he
adopted them from the Italian azzurino and cedrino.
894.
turkis; also spelt turkoise, turquois, and turquoise: lit.
‘the Turkish stone,’ a Persian gem so called because it
came through Turkey (Pers. turk, a Turk).
895.
That ... strays. Milton does not imply that these stones
were found in the Severn, nor does he in lines 932-937 imply that cinnamon grows on its
banks.
897.
printless feet. Comp. Temp. v. i. 34: “Ye that on
the sands with printless foot Do chase the ebbing
Neptune”; also Arc. 85: “Where no print of step
hath been.”
902.
It will be noticed that the Spirit takes up the rhymes of
Sabrina’s song (‘here,’ ‘dear’;
‘request,’ ‘distressed’), and again Sabrina
continues the rhymes of the Spirit’s song
(‘distressed,’ ‘best’).
913.
of precious cure, of curative power. See note on this use of ‘of,’ l. 155.
914.
References to the efficacy of sprinkling are frequent, e.g. in
the English Bible, in Spenser, in Virgil (Aen. vi. 229), in
Ovid (Met. iv. 479), in Par. Lost, xi. 416.
916.
Next: an adverb modifying ‘touch.’
917.
glutinous, sticky, viscous. The epithet is transferred from the
effect to the cause.
921.
Amphitrite: the wife of Neptune (Poseidon) and goddess of the
Sea.
923.
Anchises line: see note, l. 827.
Locrine was the son of Brutus, who was the son of Silvius, who was the
grandson of the great Aeneas, who was the son of old Anchises.
924.
may ... miss. This verb is optative: so are ‘(may)
scorch,’ ‘(may) fill,’ ‘may roll,’ and
‘may be crowned.’
925.
brimmèd. The passive participle is so often used where
we now use the active that ‘brimmed’ may mean
‘brimming’ = full to the brim. On the other hand,
‘brim’ is frequent in the sense of bank (comp. l.
119), so that some regard
‘brimmed’ as = enclosed within banks.
928.
singèd, scorched. We should rather say
‘scorching.’ On the good wishes expressed in lines 924-937 Masson’s comment is: “The
whole of this poetic blessing on the Severn and its neighbourhood,
involving the wish of what we should call ‘solid commercial
prosperity,’ would go to the heart of the assemblage at
Ludlow.”
933.
beryl: in the Bible (Rev. xxi. 20) this precious stone
forms one of the foundations of the New Jerusalem. The word is of
Eastern origin: comp. Arab, billaur, crystal. golden
ore. As a matter of fact gold has been found in the Welsh
mountains.
934.
May thy lofty head, etc. The grammatical construction is:
‘May thy lofty head be crowned round with many a tower and
terrace, and here and there (may thy lofty head be crowned) with
groves of myrrh and cinnamon (growing) upon thy banks.’ This
makes ‘banks’ objective, and ‘upon’ a
preposition: the only
objection to this reading is that the notion of crowning the head upon
the banks is peculiar. The difficulty vanishes when we recollect that
Milton frequently connects two clauses with one subject rather
loosely: the subject of the second clause is ‘thou,’
implied in ‘thy lofty head.’ An exact parallel to this is
found in L’Alleg. 121, 122: ‘whose bright eyes rain
influence and judge the prize’; also in Il Pens.
155-7; ‘let my due feet never fail to walk ... and love,
etc.’: also in Lyc. 88, 89. The explanation adopted by
Prof. Masson is that Milton had in view two Greek verbs—περιστεφανόω,
‘to put a crown round,’ and ἐπιστεφανόω,
“to put a crown upon”: thus, “May thy lofty head be
crowned round with many a tower and terrace, and thy banks here
and there be crowned upon with groves of myrrh and
cinnamon.” This makes ‘banks’ nominative, and
‘upon’ an adverb.
In the Bridgewater MS. the stage
direction here is, Song ends.
942.
Not a waste, etc., i.e. ‘Let there not be a
superfluous or unnecessary sound until we come.’
‘waste’ is an attributive: see note, l. 728.
945.
gloomy covert wide: see note, l. 207.
946.
not many furlongs. These words are deliberately inserted to
keep up the illusion. It is probable that, in the actual
representation of the mask, the scene representing the enchanted
palace was removed when Comus’s rout was driven off the stage,
and a woodland scene redisplayed. This would give additional
significance to these lines and to the change of scene after l. 957. ‘Furlong’ = furrow-long: it thus
came to mean the length of a field, and is now a measure of
length.
949.
many a friend. ‘Many a’ is a peculiar idiom, which
has been explained in different ways. One view is that
‘many’ is a corruption of the French mesnie, a
train or company, and ‘a’ a corruption of the preposition
‘of,’ the singular noun being then substituted for the
plural through confusion of the preposition with the article. A more
correct view seems to be that ‘many’ is the A.S.
manig, which was in old English used with a singular noun and
without the article, e.g. manig mann = many men. In the
thirteenth century the indefinite article began to be inserted; thus
mony enne thing = many a thing, just as we say ‘what
a thing,’ ‘such a thing.’ This would
seem to show that ‘a’ is not a corruption of
‘of,’ and that there is no connection with the French word
mesnie. Milton, in this passage, uses ‘many a
friend’ with a plural verb. gratulate. The simple verb is
now replaced by the compound congratulate (Lat.
gratulari, to wish joy to a person).
950.
wished, i.e. wished for; see note, l. 574. and beside, i.e.
‘and where, besides,’ etc.
952.
jigs, lively dances.
958.
Back, shepherds, back! On the rising of the curtain, the stage
is occupied by peasants engaged in a merry dance. Soon after the
attendant Spirit enters with the above words. Enough your play,
i.e. we have had enough of your dancing, which must now give
way to ‘other trippings.’
959.
sunshine holiday. Comp. L’Alleg. 98, where the
same expression is used. There is a close resemblance between the
language of this song and lines 91-99 of L’Allegro.
Milton’s own spelling of ‘holiday’ is
‘holyday,’ which shows the origin of the word. The accent
in such compounds (comp. blue-bell, blackbird, etc.) falls on the
adjective: it is only in this way that the ear can tell whether the
compound forms (e.g. hóliday) or the separate words
(e.g. hóly dáy) are being used.
960.
Here be: see note, l. 12. without
duck or nod: words used to describe the ungraceful dancing and
awkward courtesy of the country people.
961.
trippings ... lighter toes ... court guise: words used to
describe the graceful movements of the Lady and her brothers: comp.
L’Alleg. 33: “trip it, as you go, On the light
fantastic toe.” Trod (or trodden), past participle of
tread: ‘to tread a measure’ is a common expression,
meaning ‘to dance.’ ‘Court guise,’ i.e.
courtly mien; guise is a doublet of wise = way,
e.g. ‘in this wise,’ ‘likewise,’
‘otherwise.’ In such pairs of words as guise
and wise, guard and ward, guile and
wile, the forms in gu have come into English through the
French.
963.
Mercury (the Greek Hermes) was the herald of the gods, and as
such was represented as having winged ankles (Gk. πτηνοπέδιλος):
his name is here used as a synonym both for agility and
refinement.
964.
mincing Dryades. The Dryades are wood-nymphs (Gk. δρῦς, a
tree), here represented as mincing, i.e. tripping with short
steps, unlike the clumsy striding of the country people. Comp.
Merch. of V. iii. 4. 67: “turn two mincing steps
Into a manly stride.” Applied to a person’s gait (or
speech), the word now implies affectation.
965.
lawns ... leas. On ‘lawn,’ see note, l. 568: a ‘lea’ is a
meadow.
966.
This song is sung by Lawes while presenting the three young persons to
the Earl and Countess of Bridgewater.
967.
ye: see note, l. 216.
968.
so goodly grown, i.e. grown so goodly. Goodly =
handsome (A.S. gódlic = goodlike).
970.
timely. Here an adverb: in l. 689 it is
an adjective. Comp. the two phrases in Macbeth: “To gain
the timely inn,” iii. 3. 7; and “To call
timely on him,” ii. 3. 51.
972.
assays, trials, temptations. Assay is used by Milton in
the sense of ‘attempt’ as well as of ‘trial’:
see Arc. 80, “I will assay, her worth to
celebrate.” The former meaning is now confined to the form
essay (radically the same word); and the use of assay
has been still further restricted from its being used chiefly of the
testing of metals. Comp. Par. Lost, iv. 932, “hard
assays and ill successes”; Par. Reg. i. 264, iv.
478.
974,
5. To triumph. The whole purpose of the poem is succinctly
expressed in these lines. Stage Direction: Spirit
epiloguizes, i.e. sings the epilogue or concluding stanzas.
In one of Lawes’ manuscripts of the mask, the epilogue consists
of twelve lines only, those numbered 1012-1023. From the same copy we find that line
976 had been altered by Lawes in such a manner
as to convert the first part of the epilogue into a prologue which, in
his character as Attendant Spirit, he sang whilst descending upon the
stage:—
From the heavens now I fly,
And those happy climes that lie
Where day never shuts his eye,
Up in the broad field of the sky.
There I suck the liquid air
All amidst the gardens fair
Of Hesperus, and his daughters three
That sing about the golden tree.
There eternal summer dwells,
And west winds, with musky wing,
About the cedarn alleys fling
Nard and cassia’s balmy smells.
Iris there with humid bow
Waters the odorous banks, that blow
Flowers of more mingled hue
Than her purfled scarf can show,
Yellow, watchet, green, and blue,
And drenches oft with Manna dew
Beds of hyacinth and roses,
Where many a cherub soft reposes.
Doubtless this was the arrangement in the actual performance of the
mask.
976.
To the ocean, etc. The resemblance of this song, in rhythm and
rhyme, to the song of Ariel in the Tempest, v. 1. 88-94, has
been frequently pointed out: “Where the bee sucks, there suck
I,” etc. Compare also the song of Johphiel in The Fortunate
Isles (Ben Jonson): “Like a lightning from the sky,”
etc. The epilogue as sung by Lawes (ll. 1012-1023) may also be compared with the
epilogue of the Tempest: “Now my charms are all
o’erthrown,” etc.
977.
happy climes. Comp. Odyssey, iv. 566: “The
deathless gods will convey thee to the Elysian plain and the
world’s end ... where life is easiest for men. No snow is there,
nor yet great storm, nor any rain; but always ocean sendeth forth the
breeze of the shrill west to blow cool on men”: see also l. 14. ‘Clime,’ radically the same as
climate, is still used in its literal sense = a region of the
earth; while ‘climate’ has the secondary meaning of
‘atmospheric conditions.’ Comp. Son. viii. 8:
“Whatever clime the sun’s bright circle
warms.”
978.
day ... eye. Comp. Son. i. 5: “the eye of
day”; and Lyc. 26: “the opening eyelids of
the Morn.”
979.
broad fields of the sky. Comp. Virgil’s
“Aëris in campis latis,” Aen. vi.
888.
980.
suck the liquid air, inhale the pure air. ‘Liquid’
(lit. flowing) is used figuratively and generally in the sense of pure
and sweet: comp. Son. i. 5, “thy liquid notes.”
981.
All amidst. For this adverbial use of all (here
modifying the following prepositional phrase), compare Il Pens.
33, “all in a robe of darkest grain.”
982.
Hesperus: see note, l. 393. Hesperus,
the brother of Atlas, had three daughters—Aegle, Cynthia, and
Hesperia. They were famed for their sweet song. In Milton’s
MS. Hesperus is written over
Atlas: Spenser makes them daughters of Atlas, as does Jonson in
Pleasure reconciled to Virtue.
984.
crispéd shades. ‘Crisped,’ like
‘curled’ (comp. “curl the grove,” Arc.
46) is a common expression in the poetry of the time, and has the same
meaning. The original form is the adjective ‘crisp’ (Lat.
crispus = curled), from which comes the verb to crisp
and the participle crisped. Compare “the crisped
brooks ... ran nectar,” Par. Lost, iv. 237, where the
word is best rendered ‘rippled’; also Tennyson’s
Claribel, 19, “the babbling runnel
crispeth.” In the present case the reference is to the
foliage of the trees.
985.
spruce, gay. This word, now applied to persons with a touch of
levity, was formerly used both of things and persons in the sense of
gay or neat. Compare the present and earlier uses of the word
jolly, on which Pattison says:—“This is an instance
of the disadvantage under which poetry in a living language labours.
No knowledge of the meaning which a word bore in 1631 can wholly
banish the later and vulgar associations which may have gathered round
it since. Apart from direct parody and burlesque, the tendency of
living speech is gradually to degrade the noble; so that as time goes
on the range of poetical expression grows from generation to
generation more and more restricted.” The origin of the word
spruce is disputed: Skeat holds that it is a corruption of
Pruce (old Fr. Pruce, mod. Fr. Prusse) =
Prussia; we read in the 14th century of persons dressed after the
fashion of Prussia or Spruce, and Prussia was called Sprussia by some
English writers up to the beginning of the 17th century. See also
Trench, Select Glossary.
986.
The Graces. The three Graces of classical mythology were
Euphrosyne (the light-hearted one), Aglaia (the bright one), and
Thalia (the blooming one). See L’Alleg. 12:
“Euphrosyne ... Whom lovely Venus, at a birth, With two sister
Graces more, To ivy-crownèd Bacchus bore.” They were
sometimes represented as daughters of Zeus, and as the goddesses who
purified and enhanced all the innocent pleasures of life.
rosy-bosomed Hours. The Hours (Horæ) of classical
mythology were the goddesses of the Seasons, whose course was
described as the dance of the Horæ. The Hora of Spring
accompanied Persephone every year on her ascent from the lower world,
and the expression “The chamber of the Horæ opens”
is equivalent to “The Spring is coming.”
‘Rosy-bosomed’; the Gk. ῥοδόκολπος:
compare the epithets ‘rosy-fingered’ (applied by Homer to
the dawn), ‘rosy-armed,’ etc.
989.
musky ... fling. Compare Par. Lost, viii. 515:
“Fresh gales and gentle airs Whispered it to the woods, and from
their wings Flung rose, flung odours from the spicy shrub.” In
this passage the verb fling is similarly used.
‘Musky’ = fragrant: comp. ‘musk-rose,’ l. 496.
990.
cedarn alleys, i.e. alleys of cedar trees. For
‘alley,’ comp. l. 311. For the
form of ‘cedarn,’ see note on
‘azurn,’ l. 893. Tennyson uses the word
‘cedarn’ in Recoll. of Arab. Nights, 115.
991.
Nard and cassia; two aromatic plants. Cassia is a name sometimes
applied to the wild cinnamon: nard is also called spike-nard; see
allusion in the Bible, Mark, xiv. 3; Exod. xxx. 24, etc.
992.
Iris ... humid bow: see note, l. 83. The
allusion is, of course, to the rainbow.
993.
blow, here used actively = cause to blossom: comp. Jonson,
Mask at Highgate, “For thee, Favonius, here shall
blow New flowers.”
995.
purfled = having an embroidered edge (O.F. pourfiler):
the verb to purfle survives in the contracted form to
purl, and is cognate with profile = a front line or edge.
shew: here rhymes with dew; comp. l. 511, 512. This points to the fact that in
Milton’s time the present pronunciation of shew, though
familiar, was not the only one recognised.
996.
drenches with Elysian dew, i.e. soaks with heavenly dew.
The Homeric Elysium is described in Odyssey, iv.: see note, l. 977;
it was afterwards identified with the abode of the blessed, l. 257. Drench is the causative of
drink: here the nominative of the verb is ‘Iris’
and the object ‘beds.’
997.
if your ears be true, i.e. if your ears be pure: the
poet is about to speak of that which cannot be understood by those
with “gross unpurgèd ear” (Arc. 73, and
Com. l. 458). He alludes to that pure Love which “leads
up to Heaven,” Par. Lost, viii. 612.
998.
hyacinth. This is the “sanguine flower inscribed with
woe” of Lycidas, 106: it sprang from the blood of
Hyacinthus, a youth beloved by Apollo.
999.
Adonis, the beloved of Venus, died of a wound which he received
from a boar during the chase. The grief of Venus was so great that the
gods of the lower world allowed him to spend six months of every year
on earth. The story is of Asiatic origin, and is supposed to be
symbolic of the revival of nature in spring and its death in winter.
Comp. Par. Lost, ix. 439, “those gardens feigned Or of
revived Adonis,” etc.
1000. waxing well of, i.e.
recovering from. The A.S. weaxan = to grow or increase:
Shakespeare has ‘man of wax’ = adult, Rom. and Jul.
i. 3. 76; see also Index to Globe Shakespeare.
1002. Assyrian queen, i.e. Venus,
whose worship came from the East, probably from Assyria. She was
originally identical with Astarte, called by the Hebrews Ashteroth:
see Par. Lost, i. 438-452, where Adonis appears as Thammuz.
1003, 4.
far above ... advanced. These words are to be read together:
‘advanced’ is an attribute to ‘Cupid,’ and is
modified by ‘far above.’
1003.
spangled sheen, glittering brightness. ‘Spangled’:
spangle is a diminutive of spang = a metal clasp, and
hence ‘a shining ornament.’ In poetry it is common to
speak of the stars as ‘spangles’ and of the heavens as
‘spangled’: comp. Addison’s well-known lines:
“The spacious firmament on high,
With all the blue ethereal sky,
And spangled heavens, a shining frame,
Their great Original proclaim.”
Comp. also Lyc. 170, “with new-spangled
ore.” ‘Sheen’ is here used as a noun, as in line 893; also in Hymn Nat. 145, “throned
in celestial sheen”: Epitaph on M. of W. 73,
“clad in radiant sheen.” The word occurs in Spenser
as an adjective also: comp. “her dainty corse so fair and
sheen,” F. Q. ii. 1. 10. In the line “By
fountain clear or spangled starlight sheen” (M. N.
D. ii. l. 29) it is doubtful whether the word is a noun or an
adjective. Milton uses the adjective sheeny (Death of Fair
Infant, 48).
1004.
Celestial Cupid. The ordinary view of Cupid is given in the note to line 445; here he is the lover of Psyche
(the human soul) to whom he is united after she has been purified by a
life of trial and misfortune. The myth of Cupid and Psyche is as
follows: Cupid was in love with Psyche, but warned her that she must
not seek to know who he was. Yielding to curiosity, however, she drew
near to him with a lamp while he was asleep. A drop of the hot oil
falling on him, he awoke, and fled from her. She now wandered from
place to place, persecuted by Venus; but after great sorrow, during
which she was secretly supported by Cupid, she became immortal and was
united to him for ever. In this story Psyche represents the human soul
(Gk. ψυχή), which is disciplined
and purified by earthly misfortune and so fitted for the enjoyment of
true happiness in heaven. Further, in Milton’s Allegory it is
only the soul so purified that is capable of knowing true love: in his
Apology for Smectymnuus he calls it that Love “whose
charming cup is only virtue,” and whose “first and
chiefest office ... begins and ends in the soul, producing those happy
twins of her divine generation, Knowledge and Virtue.” To this
high and mystical love Milton again alludes in Epitaphium
Damonis:
“In other part, the expansive vault above,
And there too, even there the god of love;
With quiver armed he mounts, his torch displays
A vivid light, his gem-tipt arrows blaze,
Around his bright and fiery eyes he rolls,
Nor aims at vulgar minds or little souls,
Nor deigns one look below, but aiming high
Sends every arrow to the lofty sky;
Hence forms divine, and minds immortal, learn
The power of Cupid, and enamoured burn.”
Cowper’s translation.
1007.
among: preposition governing ‘gods.’
1008.
make: subjunctive after ‘till.’ Its nominative is
‘consent.’
1010.
blissful, blest. Bliss is cognate with bless and
blithe. Comp. “the blest kingdoms meek of joy and
love,” Lyc. 177. are to be born. There seems to be
here a confusion of constructions between the subjunctive co-ordinate
with make and the indicative dependent in meaning on
“Jove hath sworn” in the following line.
1011.
Youth and Joy. Everlasting youth and joy are found only after the
trials of earth are past. So Spenser makes Pleasure the daughter of
Cupid and Psyche, but she is “the daughter late,”
i.e. she is possible only to the purified soul. See also note on l. 1004.
1012.
my task, i.e. the task alluded to in line 18. This line is an adverbial clause = Now that
(or because) my task is smoothly done.
1013.
The Spirit’s task being finished he is free to soar where he
pleases. There seems to be implied the injunction that mankind can by
virtue alone attain to the same spiritual freedom.
1014.
green earth’s end. The world as known to the ancients did not
extend much beyond the Straits of Gibraltar. The Cape Verd Islands,
which lie outside these straits, may be here referred to: comp. Par.
Lost, viii. 630:
“But I can now no more; the parting sun
Beyond the earth’s green Cape and Verdant Isles
Hesperean sets, my signal to depart.”
1015.
bowed welkin: the meaning of the line is, “Where the arched sky
curves slowly towards the horizon.” Welkin is, radically,
“the region of clouds,” A.S. wolcnu, clouds.
1017.
corners of the moon, i.e. its horns. The crescent moon is said
to be ‘horned’ (Lat. cornu, a horn). Comp. the
lines in Macbeth, iii. 5. 23, 24: “Upon the corners of
the moon There hangs a vaporous drop profound.”
1020.
She can teach ye how to climb, etc. Compare Jonson’s song to
Virtue:
“Though a stranger here on earth
In heaven she hath her right of birth.
There, there is Virtue’s seat:
Strive to keep her your own;
’Tis only she can make you great,
Though place here make you known.”
1021.
sphery chime, i.e. the music of the spheres. “To
climb higher than the sphery chime” means to ascend beyond the
spheres into the empyrean or true heaven—the abode of God and
the purest Spirits. Milton therefore implies that by virtue alone can
we come into God’s presence. See note on
“the starry quire,” line 112. ‘Chime’ is
strictly ‘harmony,’ as in “silver
chime,” Hymn Nat. 128: the word is cognate with
cymbal.
1022, 3.
if Virtue feeble were, etc. A triumphant expression of that
confidence in the invincibleness of virtue, when aided by Divine
Providence, and therefore a fitting conclusion of the whole masque.
Milton’s whole life reveals his unshaken belief in the truth expressed
in the last two lines of his Comus.