OF all the tribes of specially literary people (one sometimes thinks),
of the Popes, Drydens, Swinburnes, Paters, the Brownings or Tennysons
even, not to mention hosts of lesser names—which of them, after all, as
time goes on, and except for certain antiquarian interests and a few
passages which represent the real unloading of the writers’ hearts, will
really be affectionately remembered or persistently read? A few pithy
passages, of verse or tale, enshrining some vivid sharp experience—and
for the rest what a deluge of words! The touch on actual life so thin,
so poor, so ignorant. The society, yes, which animates itself round a
Rape of a Lock, or discusses Broad Church questions over the walnuts and
the wine, is there—but of the great world, what? A shade of sentiment
or of thought, interesting enough, no doubt, and which may happen to be
in vogue among a certain class—but of the great reaches of human
passion and experience how much—or how little? Words, words, and
fine-spun forms out of the thinnest basis of material! At every turn of
the page gross misapprehensions and ignorance of the actual lives and
conditions of life and heart of the thousands and millions and
thousand-millions of the earth! How can these things hold any readers
except those whose outlook is equally blinkered? The purely literary
work has its interest, has its place; but its appeal is so limited.
With Whitman, the workman, the normal (or “average”) man—for of course
the man who deals with materials and wins his living from them is the
normal man—comes, for the first time, in a deliberate and
representative way, into literature. He comes, not as a man who abandons
his former mode of life in order to seek a literary ideal, but as the
master-workman who stays where he is and uses literary form for his
own expression—and with the same directness and mastery that he uses
towards life. Hence a new era of literature—a literature appealing to
all who deal with life directly, and know what it is, a literature which
will be read and lovingly absorbed by the millions as time goes on.
We may perhaps say that in every great artist there is something of the
manner of the workman. In Michel Angelo, in Beethoven, in Velasquez, in
Pheidias, in Dante—a certain clearing for action, economy, directness,
decisiveness. The good workman wants to make his work absolutely
effective. That is his first thought. The great artist will not stop
short of the most clear and perfect expression. He will do nothing to
cloud it. In a note of Whitman’s, for his own use, we find recommended
as a rule for composition “the most translucid clearness without
variation.”[10] And every one must feel that the first and
root-criterion of form is Expression. If the work conveys the meaning
perfectly, then obviously any change of form (which necessarily must
bring some change of meaning with it) will be a loss. Therefore, the
expression being perfect, the form is also perfect. The two cannot be
separated. We may analyse or examine the form in such a case—but to
propose to alter it is mere foolishness. Read again the poem “To Him
that was Crucified,” quoted in the preceding paper, and realise the
wonderful burden of thought and emotion conveyed, and then also realise
that a single word displaced or altered anywhere in the poem would blur
or diminish its total message and expression.
Is it possible indeed in these cases of perfect excellence, to stop and
examine the form as a thing apart? I do not say that it is impossible;
but it is surely very difficult. Are there not some pieces of music so
beautiful, that though we try again and again while hearing them to
analyse their form, we simply fail to do so? And are there not poems of
which the mind refuses to count the syllables. Read, for example, the
following from “Leaves of Grass”:—
RECONCILIATION
Word over all, beautiful as the sky!
Beautiful that war and all its deeds of carnage must in time be utterly lost;
That the hands of the sisters Death and Night incessantly softly wash again, and ever again, this soil’d world.
For my enemy is dead, a man divine as myself is dead.
I look where he lies white-faced and still in the coffin—I draw near;
Bend down and touch lightly with my lips the white face in the coffin.
Here underneath, all the time, one feels a subtle impalpable metre
pulsing. Some one possibly may be able to disentangle and define that
metre; but I confess that I can’t—simply because, each time I read, the
meaning holds and fills my mind too full. Let a thing be said with
such animation and directness that you try in vain to think of the
form, then surely that form is perfect, whatever it is! The form
vanishes in the meaning; and that is what our bodies will one day
do—not disappear from sight, but so glow and be suffused in what they
convey, as to cease to have any separate existence.[11]
There is no need, to-day, to justify Whitman’s forms and rhythms, any
more than there is need to justify those of Beethoven or Brahms or
Wagner. There are good country folk who delight to sit and beat time
with hand or foot to the village band; and there are folk who only
recognise a ballad metre in poetry; but they need not detain us. Ballad
metres have an excellent and charming use and quality, but they do not
cover the whole ground.
There are two things in literature which demand expression—roughly,
brain and heart. On the one hand, mere fact, description, argument; on
the other, mood, emotion, mental colouring. As the extreme type of the
one, we have books of law, science, mathematics; as the extreme type of
the other, and lying beyond literature, music. In literature proper,
there is always of course a blend or admixture of the two elements; but
those works which express a predominance of the mental and scientific
element come under the head of prose, and those which express
predominant emotion come under the head of poetry and approach the
musical in form. Just as in music every mood has its rhythm—light
jingles of dances, lulling, swaying cradle-songs, ballad-refrains,
swelling love-songs, strong marches, or great symphonic metres
including these—so in poetry. “Wherever there is emotion concerned in
the thought there will be emotional effects in the language—that is,
there will be rhythm; and the wave-like rhythms and rhymes and
recurrences will take on the simplest and briefest, or the most complex
and far-reaching forms, according to the character of the emotion
concerned.”[12]
The underlying and dominant mood of Whitman’s poems, corresponding to
his theme, is extraordinarily vast and inclusive—and it requires for
its expression a rhythm of similarly broad and flexible character. It is
obvious that such emotions as he deals with could never be caged in a
symmetrical verse or stanza.
“I have not so much emulated the birds that musically sing,
I have abandoned myself to flights, broad circles,
The hawk, the sea-gull, have far more possess’d me than the canary or mocking-bird.
I have not felt to warble and trill, however sweetly,
I have felt to soar in freedom and in the fulness of power, joy, volition.”
But in thus soaring in freedom and the fulness of power and joy he finds
a rhythm and a music of his own. “I see,” says Anne Gilchrist, “that no
counting of syllables will reveal the mechanism of the music; and that
this rushing spontaneity could not stay to bind itself with the fetters
of [formal] metre. But I know that the music is there, and that I would
not for something change ears with those who cannot hear it.”[13]
Whitman needed for his expression a poetical form of the utmost
flexibility—capable of adaptation to the widest ranges of his immense
personality. It is, in fact, his personality which forms the organic
centre of “Leaves of Grass.” He calls the latter (see “A Backward Glance
o’er Travel’d Roads”) “an attempt from first to last, to put a Person,
a human being (myself, in the latter half of the Nineteenth Century, in
America) freely, fully, and truly on record.” As a work of art,
therefore, “Leaves of Grass” ought to stand whole, unbroken, undivided,
and grouped round the central presence of the author. “Who touches this,
touches a man.”—“In regard to the unity and construction of the poems,”
says John Burroughs in “The Flight of the Eagle,”[14] “the reader sooner
or later discovers the true solution to be, that the dependence,
cohesion, and final reconciliation of the whole are in the personality
of the poet himself.... When Tennyson sends out a poem, it is perfect,
like an apple or a peach; slowly wrought out and dismissed, it drops
from his boughs holding a conception or an idea that spheres it and
makes it whole. It is completed, distinct, and separate—might be his,
or might be any man’s. It carries his quality, but it is a thing of
itself, and centres and depends upon itself. Whether or not the world
will hereafter consent, as in the past, to call only beautiful creations
of this sort Poems, remains to be seen. But this is certainly not what
Walt Whitman does, or aims to do, except in a few cases. He completes no
poems, apart and separate from himself, and his pages abound in hints to
that effect:—
“‘Let others finish specimens—I never finish specimens;
I shower them by exhaustless laws, as Nature does, fresh and modern continually.’
His lines are pulsations, thrills, waves of force, indefinite dynamics,
formless, constantly emanating from the living centre, and they carry
the quality of the author’s personal presence with them in a way that is
unprecedented in literature.”
And again Whitman says (I am quoting from the edition of 1860):—
“I will not make poems with reference to parts,
But I will make leaves, poems, poemets, songs, says, thoughts, with reference to ensemble;
And I will not sing with reference to a day, but with reference to all days,
And I will not make a poem, nor the least part of a poem, but has reference to the Soul,
Because, having looked at the objects of the universe, I find there is no one, nor any particle of one, but has reference to the Soul.”
The ultimate form therefore of Whitman’s poems is the form of himself,
of the Soul as individualised and uttered in him. As looking at the
ocean, boundless and reaching far beyond our ken, we yet recognise in
each wave the form of the sea which gives it birth; so in reading
“Leaves of Grass” we recognise in each poem or poemet the form and
unifying law of the author. Indeed there is a singular resemblance in
the great measured yet irregular roll of Whitman’s lines to the onset of
waves along a shore—now creeping white and low in long successive
array, now madly surging and towering in spray, now lipping sunlit and
blue upon the land. Every mood, at one time or another, is there and to
be recognised—yet underneath, and greater than all, and illustrated by
them all, the law and life of the ocean itself.
While all Whitman’s poems are thus parts of a whole, and must gain their
deepest meanings and interpretations through a study of the whole, there
are some which are almost unintelligible except in this relation—mere
ejaculations, single sentences, or not even so much as single sentences
(see Kosmos, “Leaves of Grass,” p. 303, also pp. 217, 218). Of these,
Burroughs’ remarks about their non-completion, except in relation to the
poet’s personality, are true in the most literal way. Of others, there
is a decided sense of artistic completion in themselves, though still
subsidiary to the total work. And it is interesting, with regard to this
subject of form, to see how Whitman gains in these latter cases his
artistic unity.
One of the most frequent and characteristic devices of his writing is
the use of a very long sentence. By the phrasing of his lines the
construction of a very lengthy sentence can be kept clear and effective,
while the meaning and burden of it can be piled up and elaborated, till
at last the total can be discharged upon the reader with overwhelming
effect. Many of his poems (e.g. “When I heard the learn’d astronomer,”
p. 214; or, “I sit and look out,” p. 215; or those two from Children
of Adam, “Ages and ages returning,” and “We too, how long we were
fool’d,” pp. 92 and 93), are constructed on this plan. They are just one
single sentence, and convey one unitary effect. Others, though
consisting of more than one sentence, are still the same in principle.
Often by repeating the form of the sentence (“I see, I see;” “I hear,
I hear”), he gains a like result. What a wonderful poem is that Salut
au Monde, in which these sights and sounds, of the whole world, these
lists and processions of earth-dwellers, these appeals to you, you, you,
“whoever you are,” pile up, in strange surging and swelling
reiteration—till at last they break out and break down in the final
four lines:—
“Toward you all, in America’s name,
I raise high the perpendicular hand, I make the signal,
To remain after me in sight for ever,
For all the haunts and homes of men.”
Here the picture of the immense earth, and the poet’s relation to it, is
the central motive. In another, the open road is the figure which holds
all together. In another, the Brooklyn Ferry. In another, the broad axe.
And in all, as I have said before, a deep pulsating music, easy to
catch, though difficult to define.
Often the music is that of “recitative”—sonorous, bold, free, not
returning into itself like a melody, but moving forward with suggestions
of things to follow. This is perhaps the most general and characteristic
of Whitman’s musical effects. See, for instance, that strange poem:—
“As Adam early in the morning,
Walking forth from the bower refresh’d with sleep,
Behold me where I pass, hear my voice, approach,
Touch me, touch the palm of your hand to my body as I pass,
Be not afraid of my body.”
How finely that might be set to music—solemn, mystic, appealing,
oracular! Or read “Old Ireland” (p. 284) in the same connection, and
countless other poems or portions of poems. In the “Ox-tamer” (p. 307)
there is much the same recitative effect, with more metrical return and
melody. More rhythmical and melodic still is that beautiful “Vigil
Strange,” on p. 238, or the “Sight in Camp,” p. 240; and more so still
perhaps, the well-known “Come up from the fields, father,” p. 236. In
many of these we notice distinct refrains and recurrences, not only of
lines, but of metres—often a return at the end to the refrain of the
beginning, as in the “Ox-tamer” or the “March in the ranks hard prest,”
or “The bivouac’s fitful flame”; often a recurrence throughout of a
certain type of line—as of anapests (six-foot) in “Come up from the
fields”:—
“But now from the fields come, father, come at the daughter’s call,
And come to the entry, mother, to the front door come right away,”
or some other sort of refrain, as in “Beat, Beat, Drums!” (p. 222), or
in “Gods” (p. 213).
“Lover divine and perfect comrade,
Waiting content, invisible yet, but certain,
Be thou my God.”
Finally we have a few in distinct stanzas and set metre (or nearly so)
like “O Captain” (p. 262), or “Pioneers” (p. 183), or the “Dirge for Two
Veterans” (p. 246); but on the whole these are not the most
characteristic or satisfactory of his pieces.
For short poems held together by a distinct mood and music of their own
(even if the latter be hard to define), turn to “To Him that was
Crucified,” already quoted, or to “To a Common Prostitute,” or to those
wonderful lyric ejaculations “Tears” (p. 204), or “Darest thou now, O
soul” (p. 338), or “The Last Invocation” (p. 346), with their solemn
organ-tones.
In two of his long poems, namely, “Out of the Cradle” (p. 196), and
“When lilacs last in the door-yard bloomed,” Whitman has by a
combination of some of the devices above mentioned produced an artistic
effect and unity which is very remarkable, and which has made these
poems general favourites. The unitary scene and landscape in both cases,
the recurrence of certain emblems, lilac and star and grey-brown bird or
sagging moon and sea, the rhythmic songs introduced of love and death,
and the sobbing melody of the surge throughout the first mentioned poem,
and the repeated music of the Lincoln Hymn:—
“O how shall I warble myself for the dead one there I loved?
And how shall I deck my song for the large sweet soul that has gone?
And what shall my perfume be for the grave of him I love?
. . . . .
Lilac and star and bird twined with the chant of my soul,”
—all these things give to these two great poems an artistic unity and
distinction which single them somewhat out from the rest, and grant them
(unlike some others of Whitman’s) to stand alone as it were, and on
their own merits.
Nevertheless it must be said, and somewhat in defence of John Burroughs’
position, that these two poems, beautiful as they are, are not so
characteristic, so deeply fascinating and impressive, so central in the
whole scheme and cosmos of “Leaves of Grass,” as those other great
poems, which, though not so obviously metrical or artistically balanced
and complete, are governed more directly by the presence and direct
utterance of the personality behind them: I mean, of course, first and
foremost, the “Song of Myself,” and afterwards the two series, Children
of Adam and Calamus, and such poems as “By Blue Ontario’s Shore,”
“The Answerer” (p. 134), “The Sleepers” (p. 325), “To Think of Time” (p.
333), “Sunset” (p. 374), “Vocalism” (p. 297), “So Long” (p. 380), and
many others. There is in these poems an extraordinary oracular prophetic
utterance which lifts them right through the sphere of art, and out of
it, into something above. “No one will get at my verses,” he says,[15]
“who insists upon viewing them as a literary performance, or attempt at
such performance, or as aiming mainly towards art or aestheticism.” It
is in this quality in Whitman’s work, transcending art, yet indeed only
possible through the patient study, through the perfection and final
surrender of art, that the secret of his power lies. In his poems of
this order a technical unity is not demanded (though it may be found in
some of them) because they speak in the name of that Self which is and
remains the unity of all things—the wind which bloweth where it listeth
over the world. They have no need to seek for unity and beauty,
because in uttering the Self these things are already given and found.
Here is a great mystery, difficult to express. No wonder that in that
truly oracular poem, “Vocalism” (p. 297), Whitman announces so great, so
almost terrifying and impossible an apprenticeship before “the divine
power to speak words” can come and be loosened in man or woman—nothing
less than the circling of all experience, and the final surrender:
“For only at last after many years, after chastity, friendship, procreation, prudence and nakedness,
After treading ground and breasting river and lake,
After a loosen’d throat, after absorbing eras, temperaments, races, after knowledge, freedom, crimes,
After complete faith, after clarifyings, elevations, and removing obstructions,
After these and more, it is just possible there comes to a man, a woman, the divine power to speak words....
Surely, whoever speaks to me in the right voice, him or her I shall follow,
As the water follows the moon, silently, with fluid steps, anywhere around the globe.”
It is here no case of neglecting art; but technical art and all its
devices are only a very very small part of the apprenticeship. Before
the deep music and beauty of these greatest poems we can only stand
silent, absorbing indeed, but in no mood to analyse. Something greater
than mortal speaks to us in them, some voice blended of ages and ages
and vistas of human experience. Something more even than human; for
Nature, the prairies and the lakes, the ocean and the forest by some
hidden magic become vocal in them:
“I hear you whispering there, O stars of heaven,
O suns—O grass of graves—O perpetual transfers and promotions,
If you do not say anything how can I say anything?”
. . . . .
“The woodman that takes his axe and jug with him shall take me with him all day,
The farm-boy, ploughing in the field, feels good at the sound of my voice,
In vessels that sail my words sail, I go with fishermen and seamen and love them.
The soldier camp’d or upon the march is mine,
On the night ere the pending battle many seek me, and I do not fail them,
On that solemn night (it may be their last) those that know me seek me.”
Whitman, by his vast command of and sympathy with the things of the
actual world, by his strange interpenetration and identity with the
elemental whole, has in these great poems revealed a presence which, as
long as the waters glisten and the leaves rustle, can never pass or
cease to speak to us; and as in ancient days, from some cavern on a
mountain side, a voice in divine frenzy issuing was taken to be that of
the Earth-god before whose eyes past and future are one, so from these
writings the music arising seems to be the inspiration and
part-utterance even of ageless Nature herself.
For the rest there are, of course, deficiences and weaknesses. As hinted
earlier in this book, the voluminous power which marshals and holds in
leash whole battalions of phrases, to hurl them finally on the reader
with irresistible effect, sometimes fails; and then we get a lumbering,
disjointed, efforted movement which is the reverse of admirable.
Whitman’s later poems, though interesting in many ways, do often show
this deficiency of inspiration and some consequent lapse into
mannerisms; and his prose perhaps shows the same more frequently.
To the reader coming to these works for the first time, the disregard of
conventions in every direction is so great, that it sometimes attracts
all his attention, rendering him insensible to the interior message, and
annoying him with a suspicion of mere affectation. “If he only were not
obscene,” says such a reader, “or slangy, or prosaic, or contradictory;
if he only would not put in lists of trades, or of seaport towns, or
lines that ramble at large across all the proprieties of metre and
grammar—we could endure him! But thus and thus he is intolerable.” It
is only after some familiarity and a gradual change of the point of view
and perspective, that the reader begins to see that much which he
thought affected is perfectly natural and in place. “To speak with the
perfect rectitude and insouciance of the movements of animals, and the
unimpeachableness of the sentiment of trees in the woods, and grass by
the roadside,” is Whitman’s own standard, and the more one reads the
more I think one is compelled to acknowledge his near approach to it.
That he uses the parlance of common folk instead of the set phrases of
the learned is not an affectation, but simply what Dante, and Chaucer,
and Pushkin, and many another pioneer of a national literature has done;
that he speaks freely of physiological things is not obscenity, but a
deliverance from it; that his handling of facts appears prosaic or
unemotional may easily arise from the reader’s own want of association
with the facts that are handled.
In all these cases of a new or unfamiliar style (as in painting or
music) the interpretations do not yield themselves till the new point
of view has been seized. Whitman has often been accused of want of
humour—and it is notorious that nothing is more elusive and variable as
between people and people—English, Scotch, French, German,
American—than just this sense of humour. But no one who knows “Leaves
of Grass” well can fail to detect the fund of quiet humour constantly
flowing there beneath the surface. It has been said, No one with any
sense of the comic could have written the lines:—
“Now I absorb immortality and peace,
I admire death, and test propositions.”
But does it follow that because a minor poet might fear to use such an
expression, lest it should excite a smile, Whitman would also have been
afraid, and have refused it, even though the expression exactly conveyed
his meaning? And again, a phrase like “test propositions” may well
appear comic at Oxford or Cambridge, and yet perfectly serene and
sensible on an American prairie. These things are a little difficult to
locate.
All the same it must be said that the poet does, in this way and at
times, put a considerable strain upon his admirers! as when he writes:—
“O setting sun! though the time has come,
I still warble under you, if none else does, unmitigated adoration,”
or again—
“I will report all heroism from an American point of view.”
And there are affectations—or rather I think I should say, cases in
which he has of set purpose adopted forms and attitudes not perfectly
natural and spontaneous. For the most part his work is marvellously
spontaneous, and, in its prophetic way, deriving at once from
instinctive and subconscious regions; but there is no doubt (he says so
himself) that in parts he “set himself” very deliberately to do certain
things. And it is in these parts that I think he is least successful.
Thus he set himself to vaunt and magnify “these States” in season and
out of season (a good purpose in moderation, but rather overdone); to
ignore all stock-poetic and classic forms and allusions whatever (a
practice which cripples him at times), even to the extent of proscribing
May and June in favour of Fifth-month and Sixth-month; and to coin and
introduce if possible various hybrid and denationalised words, like
Camerado, Santa Spirita, I exposé, and so forth (a matter in which he
has often been anything but successful). These set efforts, which also
appear sometimes in the construction of his poems, detract at such
times from the winging singing quality of his work, and give a sense as
of chains dragged along the ground.
Of these weaknesses and deficiencies, however, I must say that in the
long-run they do not seem to me to bulk very largely. Though they may do
so at first, and may seem serious, yet it is surprising how with
continued reading they wane and lose their importance in the general
splendour and adequacy of expression. And personally—with regard to the
many quaint and outlandish things in Whitman—though they may cause a
ripple in the mind, I find that they do not for me spoil the general
effect, any more than for one sailing into New York harbour the splendid
vista of shipping and shores is spoiled by the sight of a bottle or
other such object borne on the blue and sunlit tide.
And when on the other hand one regards the extraordinary and admitted
felicity and perfection of a vast number of his phrases, the
absoluteness of the rendering and expression of some of the most
difficult and subtle things, one sees that these quaintnesses, whatever
may be their cause, certainly do not arise from lack of literary
ability. The man who could write “the large unconscious scenery of my
land with its lakes and forests,” or “the gentle soft-born measureless
light,” or “dark mother always gliding near with soft feet,” or “the
yellow gold of the gorgeous, indolent, sinking sun, burning, expanding
the air,” was without doubt a master of expression. And I may conclude
this paper with the words of Addington Symonds (“A Study of Walt
Whitman,” p. 150): “The countless clear and perfect phrases he invented,
to match most delicate and evanescent moods of sensibility, to picture
exquisite and broad effects of natural beauty, to call up poignant or
elusive feelings, attest to his artistic faculty of using language as a
vehicle for thought. They are hung, like golden medals of consummate
workmanship and incised form, in rich clusters over every poem he
produced. And, what he aimed at above all, these phrases are redolent of
the very spirit of the emotions they suggest, communicate the breadth
and largeness of the natural things they indicate, embody the essence of
realities in living words which palpitate and burn for ever.”