When Mr. Weil made his appearance at the residence
of Mr. Wilton Fern, the door was opened for him
by a young negro of such superb proportions that the
caller could not help observing him with admiration.
He thought he had never seen a man more perfectly
formed. The face, though too dark to suggest
the least admixture of Caucasian blood, was well
featured. The lips were not thick nor was the nose
flat, as is the case with so many of the African race.
The voice, as the visitor heard it, was by no means
unpleasant. Mr. Weil could not imagine a better
model for an ebony statue than this butler, or footman,
or whatever position, perhaps both, he might
be engaged to fill.
"Yes, sir, Miss Millicent is in, and she is expecting
you," said the negro, in his pleasant and strong
tones. "Let me take your hat and stick. Now, sir,
this way."
Miss Fern came in a few moments to the parlor,
where Archie was left, and greeted him most cordially.
"There is a sitting-room on the next floor," she
said, "where we shall not be disturbed. I have
given Hannibal orders to admit no one, saying that
we shall want the evening entirely to ourselves."
"Hannibal?" repeated the visitor. "Is that the
name of the remarkable individual who received me
just now?"
"Yes," said Miss Fern, rather coldly. "Though I
do not know why you call him 'remarkable.'"
"He is so tall, so grand, so entirely overpowering,"
explained Mr. Weil. "One would think he
might be the son of an African king. I never
saw a black man that gave me such an impression of
force and power."
Millicent elevated her eyebrows a little, as if
annoyed at these expressions. She answered, still
frigidly, that she had noticed nothing unusual about
Hannibal. She did not believe she had looked
closely enough at his face to be able to identify him
in a court.
"He would make a fine character for a novel,"
said Mr. Weil, as they walked together up the broad
staircase. "I could almost write one myself, around
such a personality."
The young lady looked disgusted.
"A negro servant!" she exclaimed. "What kind
of a novel could you write with such a central
figure?"
"Perhaps I should not put him in the centre,"
laughed Archie, determined to win her good nature.
"Every story needs lights and shades. You can't
deny that he would cast a magnificent shadow."
The humor of this observation struck Miss Fern
and she joined mildly in her companion's mirth.
Then she remarked that the central figure of a novel—the
main thing in it—to her mind, should be a
being who could be given the attributes of beauty
and grace. The minor characters were of less
account, and would come into existence almost of
their own accord.
"And now, before we do anything more," she
said, "I want you to tell me about that excessively
handsome young man that I saw with you yesterday
in Madison Square."
Weil was delighted at this introduction of his
young friend. He began a most flattering account
of Shirley Roseleaf, describing him as a genuine
paragon among men, both in talent and goodness.
He drew heavily on his imagination as he proceeded,
feeling that he was "in for it," and might as well do
his best at once. And he could see the cheek of the
young listener taking on a new and more enticing
color as he went farther and farther into his subject.
"If I have to rearrange my novel—the one Mr.
Gouger rejected—I shall draw my hero after that
model," she cried, when he paused for breath. "I
never saw a man who came so near my ideal."
"But—you would have to alter your hero's character,
in that case?" he said. "I have read your
MSS., and your description does not tally with my
young friend at all."
Miss Fern reddened.
"You don't mean to claim, do you," she replied,
"that physical beauty and moral goodness always
go hand in hand?"
"They should," he answered, in a tone that was
meant to be impressive.
"Ah, that is another question! Do they? that is
all the novelist needs to know. Did you ever read
Ouida's 'Sigma?' There are the two sisters, one as
pure as can be, the other quite the opposite, and the
beauty belongs to the depraved one. I know Oscar
Wilde takes a different view in 'Dorian Grey,' but
he is wrong. I am sure that the worst man or woman
in the world—reckoning by what are called the
'amiable vices'—might be the most lovely to look
upon, the most delightful to associate with. Eve
found the serpent attractive, remember."
Where did she learn all these things? Weil looked
at her with increasing astonishment. "Amiable
vices." He liked the appellation.
"Perhaps you are right," he assented, as if slowly
convinced. "If you wish to be acquainted with
Mr. Roseleaf, I will bring him here with pleasure.
My only fear is that he will not interest you. He
seems almost too perfect for earth. Think of a
young man who knows nothing of women, who says
he has no idea what it is to be in love, who does not
understand why the ladies who pass down Fifth
Avenue turn their heads to look at him! He, like
yourself, is a novelist, but his characters are beautiful
images that lack life. He carves marble figures
and attempts to palm them off as flesh and blood.
He really thinks they are, because he has never
known the difference. If you could take him, Miss
Fern, and teach him what love really is—"
The young lady blushed more than before.
"I—" she stammered.
"In a strictly literary way," he explained. "But,"
he added, thinking he was getting upon the edge of
a quicksand, "we must not forget the object of my
visit."
He took the parcel containing her MSS. that he
had obtained from Mr. Gouger, and began to untie
the string. Manlike he soon had it in a hard knot,
and Miss Millicent, coming to his rescue, her young
hands touched his and made his heart beat faster.
"There," she said, when the knot had given way
to their joint endeavors. "It is all right, now. But,
before we begin on this, tell me a little more about
Mr. Roseleaf. What has he written? Where was it
published? I will send to-morrow morning and buy
a copy."
Her enthusiasm was agreeable under the circumstances,
but the truth had to be explained to her.
"What he has written I will let you see, one of
these days," he replied. "As for publishing, he ran
upon the same rock that you did—that of Mr.
Lawrence Gouger."
The beautiful eyes opened wider.
"So he rejected his work, too! And yet you say
that it was well done?"
"Exquisitely. Shirley's lines are as symmetrical as
his face and figure. His people are dead, that is all
the trouble. Gouger scented the difficulty under
which he labors, in a moment. 'Go and fall in love!'
he said to him, 'and you will write a story at which
the world will marvel!'"
Miss Fern arranged one of her locks of Titian red
that had fallen down.
"And hasn't he taken the advice?" she inquired,
in a low voice.
"Not yet," smiled the other. "He says, like a
very child, that 'he cannot find any one to love.' I
walked up the avenue with him to-day, and afterwards
rode in the Park. There were hundreds of
the prettiest creatures, all looking their eyes out at
him. And he hadn't the courage to return one
glance, not one. Ah, Miss Fern, it will be genuine
love with Shirley Roseleaf, if any. The imitations
one finds in the fashionable world will never answer
for him."
The young lady breathed a gentle sigh, as her
thoughts dwelt on the handsome figure she had seen
in front of the Hoffman House.
"You may bring him here—yes, I should be glad
to have you," she said, slowly. "But I must ask
one favor; do not tell him what I said so thoughtlessly
about his being my ideal. Let me talk with
him on fair terms. It may be, as you suggest, that
we shall be of advantage to each other. When can
you arrange it?"
"Almost any day," smiled Weil. "I will let you
know, by mail or otherwise. And now, this story
of yours," he added, thinking it a shrewd plan to
divert her attention from the other matter while it
was still warm in her mind. "Though I have read
it through, and think I understand it fairly well, I
am all the more anxious to hear it from your lips.
You will put into the text new meanings, I have no
doubt, that have escaped my observation."
Miss Fern flushed pleasantly and inquired with a
show of anxiety whether Mr. Weil had found its
construction as bad as his friend, Mr. Gouger, had
intimated.
"To be perfectly honest, it might be improved,"
he replied. "But the germ is there, Miss Fern—that
necessary thing for a good novel—an interest
that will hold the reader in spite of himself. I
disagree with Lawrence in his essential point. I am
sure that a good writer of English with a taste for
fiction could make all the necessary alterations without
in the least detracting from the value of the
story. For instance, I believe if Mr. Roseleaf would
take hold of it I could guarantee to get you a publisher
this winter."
"And do you think he would?" she cried.
"I think so."
The authoress was so delighted with this announcement
that she conquered the slight wound to her
pride. It would be herself still who had drawn the
picture, who had put the coloring into it; all that
the other would have to do might be described as
varnishing. She took up the first sheet of her writing,
and turned up an oil lamp that stood upon the
table at her elbow, the better to see the lines.
"Are you ready?" she asked.
"Quite ready," smiled Mr. Weil.
In a voice that trembled a little, and yet not unpleasantly
to the listener, Miss Fern began to read
her manuscript. The opening chapter introduced
the heroine and two gentlemen, either one of whom
might be the hero. As the book is now so well known
it is needless to transfer its features to these pages.
Presently the authoress paused and seemed to
wait for her guest's criticism.
"That is one chapter," she said.
"Yes. I remember. And the second one is where
Algernon begins to disclose a very little of his true
nature. Shall we not have that now?"
"As you like. I thought perhaps you would give
me advice as we proceeded, some fault-finding here
and there, a suggestion of alterations."
He shook his head affably.
"Not yet," he answered. "Up to this point I see
nothing that requires condemnation."
"Nor praise, perhaps?" she said, in a low tone.
"That might be true, also," he replied. "The
first chapter of a novel is only the laying of the cloth
and the placing of a few dishes. The viands that
form the meal are still in the kitchen."
She smiled at the simile.
"But even the laying of the cloth is important,"
she said.
"Your cloth is laid most admirably," he answered.
"And now we will have the castor, which in this
case, I believe, contains a certain quantity of mustard
and red pepper."
At this she laughed the more, and glanced through
a few of the sheets in her hands before she spoke
again.
"Did you form any opinion about—about me—from
this story?" she asked, constrainedly. "Did
you, in brief, think it had taken a bold girl to write
it?"
He hesitated a moment.
"Yes," he said, at last. "A bold girl, a daring
girl, a brave girl. Not one, however, whose own conduct
would necessarily be like that of the woman
she has delineated."
She was so pleased that she put down the MSS.
and leaned toward him with both hands clasped together.
"You are very, very kind," she said, impressively.
"No, merely truthful," he replied. "With your
permission I want to retain that last quality in all
my conversations with you. When you ask me a
question I wish to be perfectly free to answer according
to my honest convictions."
"It is what I especially desire," she said, brightening.
"No one able to judge has heard anything
of this story except your friend, Mr. Gouger. I
know it is bold, sometimes I think it is brazen. I
can conceive that there are excellent people who
would say it never should have been written. To my
mind, the moral I have drawn more than justifies
the plainness of my speech. You can tell better
than I where I have overstepped the proper bounds,
if there be such places. You are, of course, a man
of the world—"
The protesting expression on the face of her companion
arrested her at this point.
"That depends on what you mean by 'a man of
the world?'"
"It is a common expression."
"And has many definitions. Before I plead guilty
to it, I want to know just how much you intend by
it."
Miss Fern put down the page she had taken up
and a puzzled look crossed her pretty face.
"You make it hard for me to explain myself," she
said. "I suppose I meant—"
"Now, be as honest as you asked me to be," he
interrupted.
"Well, then, I suppose you are a man like—like
other men."
"But there are many kinds of other men."
The young lady tried several times to make herself
clearer, and then asked, with a very pathetic
pout, that she might be permitted to proceed with
her reading, as the hour was growing later. It was
not a very important point, any way, she said.
"I cannot entirely agree with you," replied Archie.
"If you are to be a writer of fiction, you should not
consider any time wasted which informs you in reference
to your fellow creatures. It is from them
that you must draw your inspiration; it is their
figures you must put, correctly or incorrectly, on
your canvas. Don't understand me as dictating to
you, my dear Miss Fern. I only wish, as long as you
have referred to me, to know of what I am accused."
To this Miss Fern answered, with many pauses,
that she had not intended to accuse her visitor of
anything. And once more—with evident distress—she
begged to be permitted to drop the matter and
return to her reading.
"Very well," he assented, thinking he had annoyed
her as much as was advisable for the present. "As
they say in parliamentary bodies, we will lay the
question on the table, from which it can be taken at
some more fitting time. I am as anxious as you can
be to get into Chapter II."
She read this chapter to the end, and paused a
few seconds to see if he had any comments to make,
but he shook his head without breaking silence, and
she went on with the story. He pursued the same
plan till the end of the fifth chapter.
"It is interesting, exciting and true," he remarked,
referring to the closing scene. "And I cannot help
feeling arise in my brain the question that Mr.
Gouger put when he read it: How could a young,
innocent girl like you depict that situation with such
absolute fidelity."
He had come to the point with a vengeance. But
to Miss Fern his manner was far more agreeable
than if he had approached it by stealth, or in an
insinuating way. She had anticipated something of
the sort and had tried to prepare herself to meet it.
"Does not nature teach us some things?" she
asked, speaking straightforwardly, though her color
heightened in spite of her efforts. "Given a certain
condition, an intelligent mind can prophesy results."
He shook his head in mild disagreement with
her.
"Gouger is an expert, and he denies this, as a regular
rule, at least. You should have heard him
argue it with Roseleaf. 'Either throw yourself into
a love affair,' he said, 'or never try to depict one.'
Excuse me, Miss Fern, you bade me be frank—"
She assented, with a grave nod of her shapely
head.
"You may have been in love—I do not ask you
whether you have or not—but you cannot have
known personally of the sort of love that you have
depicted in these pages. I call it little less than
miraculous that you should draw the scene so accurately."
She colored again, this time partly with pleasure,
for she was very susceptible to compliments.
"Perhaps your statement may explain to you,"
she said, pointedly, "what I meant a few minutes
ago by calling you 'a man of the world.' You
recognize at a glance what I had to construct from
my imagination."
Archie Weil's face changed as he realized how
deftly he had been caught. He had meant to pretend
to this girl that he was more than usually ignorant
of the nether side of life.
"Don't think too badly of me because I happen to
know what is clear to every man," he said, impressively.
"To every one?" she answered. "To your friend,
Mr. Roseleaf?"
"Ah! He is an exception to all rules. And yet,
Gouger says he can never write a successful book
till he is more conversant with life than he is at
present."
She looked troubled.
"With life?" she echoed. "With sin, do you
mean?"
"With the ordinary things that men know, and
that most of them at some time experience."
Her bright eyes were temporarily clouded.
"What a pity!" she exclaimed.
"Yes," he said, for it was his humor to agree with
her. "It is a pity."
There was a pause of a minute, and then she asked
if she had read enough for one evening. He answered
that as it was now past ten o'clock it would
not be easy to get much farther and that he would
come again whenever she chose to set the time.
"You do not say much about my work," she said,
anxiously, as he prepared to go.
"Silence is approval," he responded. "I can talk
it over with you better when you have reached the
end. I have things to say, and I shall not hesitate to
say them then."
"When is it most convenient to you to come?"
she inquired.
"Any time," he answered. "I don't do much that
is really useful. But wait till you see Shirley. He
will atone for the shortcomings you find in me."
She repeated the word "Shirley," as if to test its
sound.
"You are your father's only child, are you not?"
he asked, thoughtfully.
"No. I have a sister, Daisy, a little younger than
I."
"And has she a literary turn, also?"
"Not in the least."
Archie arose, and Miss Millicent accompanied him
to the front door. The tall negro came to open the
portal, but Miss Fern told him, with the same quality
of dislike in her tone which Weil had noticed before,
that he need not wait.
"He is really a magnificent piece of humanity,"
said Archie, when the man had disappeared. "I
never saw anything quite like him."
"You admire negroes, then?" said the young lady,
almost impolitely.
"I like representatives of every race," he answered,
as if not noticing her. "There are interesting specimens
in all. I number among my acquaintances
several Chinamen, a Moor, a Mexican, Jews, Portuguese
and Russians innumerable. If that fellow
was not in your employ I would engage him to-morrow,
merely as a study."
Miss Fern took the hand he held out to her and
set the next meeting for Saturday evening. Then
she said:
"If you want Hannibal, perhaps papa would
oblige you. I certainly would do all I could to persuade
him."